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Correct the mistakes:

-I complete my diploma in web design last year.

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-The degree course begin in January every year.

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-I worked for a hospital for four year.

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-To qualify I must get a high grade in my English exam.

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-I had a part time job on the evening.

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-My love for caring about health was originated from my early years.
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-I spent one year as an intern for big health institution.

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-I worked in 2017 for a college.

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 2. Rewrite and correct the mistakes you find

Vianne Hurley Hotel Management Graduate

Profile I am highly motivated with a freindly personality. I

recently graduated in Hotel Management and am looking for a position
in which I can work with the public.
I was first attrracted to the hotel industry following a work experience
placement in the Landmark Hotel during my forth year of secondary
school. I then enroll in the Liverpool College of Hotel Management,
where I was trained in in all areas of a hotel. My course included six
mouths in the Mandarin Hotel, Singapore. There, I develop new skills
and tecniques in many departments of the hotel.
I love work with people, and in my spare time I am involved with the
charity Senior Concern, where I organise social activities.
I have now completed my studies and will available for employment in
the hotel industry from September.
 3. Identify the section of The Structure of a profile:
PERSONAL SKILL,
BRIEF DESCRIPTION,
WHY I CHOSE YOUR COLLEGE,
ACHIEVEMENTS,
HOBBIES AND INTEREST

a. Annabel Suarez Course: Social Work

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I am a responsible and hardworking student with an ambition to work in
the community with disadvantaged people. My top subjects at school -
Psychology, English and Maths - have prepared me for a degree
course in Social Work. My goal is to become a qualified social worker.
_________________________
In the first year of my Psychology course at school, I obtained top
marks for the 'Psychology of human relationships' unit. In the last three
school holidays, I have worked with a local charity, Operation
Crossroads, which provides help with drug addiction for young people.
Although most of my work was in the office, I was able to spend time
talking to social workers, who explained what the job involves.
_________________________
I am a good communicator who gets on well with people from all social
and cultural backgrounds. My test results show that I am very
hardworking.
_________________________
I enjoy a range of activities, but my passion is music. I play the guitar in
a band and have sung solo at more than 20 events.
_________________________
When I visited your campus in October, Dr Taylor kindly spent one
hour talking about the course. I found that it fits my interests perfectly.
 b. Rajiv Kumar: Sales Executive
KEY WORDS FOR THE POSITION,
BRIEF DESCRIPTION,
PERSONAL CHARACTERISTICS,
HOBBIES AND INTERESTS.

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I am a Sales Executive with three years' experience in the publishing
industry in two companies: PanAmerica and Oxford. Here are just
three of my achievements to date:
1 Increased sales by 12% in my first year; 2 Coordinated the local
launch of a new series ‘Cakes and Bread’; 3 Signed up a new
bookshop in Austria.
_________________________
I love interacting with customers and helping to meet their needs. I
have a passion for education and every year I attend sales courses.
These have been on sales strategies, the art of book display and
customer support.
_________________________
Outside work, I enjoy reading German literature, and I play for the local
football team.

4. Using the above profiles as models’ structure and write YOUR personal
profile.