The script breaks down a scene displaying phantasmagoria.

It then goes into history with the

French Revolution. In addition to its ties to the Romanticism era and the iconic writers of that
time period.

You have a really great introduction. It really sets up the scene for your podcast

You have a consistent tone throughout your script. It certainly gives the feel of a gothic, spooky
podcast. At least I am hoping that is what you were aiming for! It’s broken up into nice chunks. I
am very curious to see how you plan on transitioning amongst them. Is it music between each
one? Are you going to transition in/out of each part?

Everything felt very natural reading it source wise.

“This is no magic lantern show, this is reality.

This is Phantasmagoria.”

These are both my favorite lines and the lines that felt like a podcast. It was so intriguing and it
caught my attention. The significance of it being a podcast worthy line was that you hear “This is
…..” to begin most podcasts.

The ending kinda summed it up in one short and sweet sentence.

As for the tone, I said it when I reviewed it that it felt very gothic and dark. It discussed a lot of
darker eras in literature and history because of its background.