The murder of one of the three brothers

Writing plan
Characters: Peter, Ronald, Steven, Parents, Katia Wesley Peters’ best friend
science teacher, the police
Topic: find out who kill Peter
Settings: the house, the garden, the school
Main ideas:
 Peter died he was an innocent and kind kid
 Family broken and depressed
 Tried to found the murdered
 Found out the murder he goes to jail
Plot:
Rising action: his father became alcoholic he hits and kills his wife Ronald
takes him out of the house Steven tried to kill himself and they think Katia is
the murder so they knock her out.
Climax: They discovered that the science teacher killed Peter and the art
teacher tries to scape but Ronald stops him with a shot in the leg.
Falling action: The police arrest the science teacher and the director because
they both did the same, they sold organs to pay their debts and Ronald and
Peter move out of town, they go to live with their aunt
 The murder of one of the three brothers

It was 6 p.m. when Peter Dickinson tragically died with a big hole in his chest.
He was found in the sewers of his town by his two older brothers Ronald and
Steven Dickinson, two teenagers who did the work that the police patrol did
not could do. ¨Peter Dickinson was found dead on July 20, 1981, ¨his case of
very unusual death with other cases that I have had, but I promise to
investigate and resolve what was the true cause¨ said the autopsy manager.
The family had just returned home. Three days passed, they invited most of
the townspeople to the funeral to honor Peter. The whole town knew that he
was a quiet, kind, innocent child, a good friend, a good student. At school, his
friends gave him flowers, photos, and beautiful phrases in his locker. The idea
was from her best friend Katia Wesley, with who he had a great bond.

A year passed, his father had become alcoholic, and sometimes he took drugs
of course, this had consequences because he beat and mistreated his mother,
Ronald the oldest of the brothers he tried to stop his father who was carrying a
gun, about to shoot his mother but his effort was not enough, his mother
suffered multiple shots from his father, she fell to the ground, her blood spread
all over the floor, Steven from the staircase had to precede all this, he was,
paralyzed, Ronald fell to the ground when he saw his mother, out of rage he
got up with tears in his eyes he threw his father's gun to the floor with a slap,
and he threw it on the sofa and hit and hit him, he stopped and picked up the
gun from the floor, and he placed it on his father's head, threatened him with
death if he did not leave the house, his father got up from the chair grabbed
the bottle of rum that was on a table and staggered away almost about to fall,
Ronald shot the door he turned and shouted as loudly as he could, he fell on
his knees and This pain was beginning to consume him but, he was always
characterized by having a, strong mind he sharpened his gaze and decided to
act on this fact he was also very intelligent he knew that if he, called the
police, they would arrest him since that was his weapon that he had gotten for
his hunting classes.
Good, but you are wondering what happened to Steven, after seeing his
mother bleeding on the floor, he ran to his room where he escaped through the
window, he was very good at physical education, therefore, it made it easy for
him to jump from his window to the small balcony of his parents' room and
from there he made a big jump to the garden he fell in a elegant way giving a
short pirouette, he looked back at the house with fear he turned around and ran
to the exit of the town at this time no one was going in or out of town, he
stopped running he had not even realized how much he had run, he looked to
the sides and desperate and a little overwhelmed, he began to cry because he
knew he was alone, after all, the only thing he had left was his brother Ronald,
he had lost his little brother Peter, his mother, and his father, who was no
longer for him his father, he threw himself in the middle of the road, still
crying waiting for some truck or car to crush him once and for all to end with
this horrible nightmare.

On the other hand, Ronald was burying his mother's body in his garden,
grateful that no neighbor, has a view of his garden that made him feel calmer,
after finishing there, he went home again to finish, the work he was so
miserable about what was happening that he forgot about Steve, he grabbed
the rag picker and a pair of gloves and began to clean the floor, the blood that
had been spilled, was a lot, and the smell was terrible, he took Clorox and a lot
of disinfectants with aromas that were in the house after finishing, he bent
down and smelled the floor effectively no longer smelled of blood, he threw
the rag picker in the trash with the gloves that had blood , then he fixed the
rest of the things that were not in their place, and finally he grabbed the gun
that was on the table he looked at it, he knew that could not get rid of it
because his instincts told him that he would need it later, he went up to his
room and kept it in his closet in a drawer under his clothes, he looked in the
mirror and saw that he was covered in blood, he took off the clothes that he
also put in the trash and went to bathe. After the bath, Ronald felt very tired,
so he did not go to check if his brother was at home he, changed, and
immediately he lay in bed, he fell asleep, however, Steven was not lucky
enough no truck or anything that could run over him pass through the road, he
stayed on the ground for an hour it was cold so he decided to return, but not to
his house since after everything that had happened that night he could not
return there so, he decided to stay at a friend's house but, he had not said it
was because his father just killed his mother but used as an excuse that he
wanted to spend time with his him, his friend agreed.

The next day Ronald woke up still confused about yesterday, but this time he
lacked the presence of his brother, he quickly left the room to look for him in
the house he was desperate, he sat down and breathed deeply several feces
decided that he was going to eat something and then he would look for his
brother, he was sure he was fine because Ronald considered Steven to be a
brave and cunning boy. He served himself a cereal with milk while he ate, he
thought about everything that had happened and an idea came to him, they
never found the murderer of his brother Peter every time he thinks about the
murderer gives him impotence and anger because all this was his fault ¨ If he
hadn't killed my brother this would never have happened ¨ Ronald said
looking towards the plate, he promised himself that he would find the
murderer but for that he needed his brother, after eating he went looking for
Steven he went to where his friends lived to ask about him until one of them
told him that he was at Marcus's house, they had already spoken by message,
when he rang, the one who opened the door was Steven they looked into each
other's eyes and hugged each other like never before "I thought you had died"
Steven told him to Ronald "I'm fine but please come home I have to tell you
something" Ronald replied, Steven said goodbye to his friend and went home
with his brother, Steven was afraid to go in but Ronald grabbed him by the
hand and they went in together ¨everything is going to be fine Steven¨ ¨ I
hope so Ronald¨ Steven would not stop looking at the floor where his mother
had died he wanted to vomit, he went up to his room where, he changed and
came down with his brother again, and Ronald said, ¨Steve I have an idea I'm
tired We do not deserve all this, so we will finish something that the police
could not ..... we will catch Peter's murderer ¨ Steven agreed to the idea he
also wanted to finish with the culprit of all this, the brothers began to ask at to
every house in the town, the last time they had seen Peter but most always had
the same answer seen the last time on Friday playing with his friends, Finally
they went to the house of a neighbor who had a view of the football field
where Peter always played on Fridays they asked him the names of the friends
that Peter played with, after that they returned home it was a long and
exhausting day they drink a glass of milk with cookies and fell asleep on the
sofa, the next day they went to where the friends with who Peter played on
Fridays, some told them that they saw Peter leave early, others had not even
realized that Peter had left but one of them was the closest to Peter he had said
that Peter had to leave early because he had to meet Katia to help her with a
task and from there he did not see him again, immediately that the boy
confessed this information Ronald and Peter looked at each other thinking that
Katia could have been Peter's murderer, they returned home to devise a plan,
Ronald told Steven that he still had the weapon with which his father had
killed His mother, Steven, refused to let him carry the gun since they weren't
100 percent sure it was Katia but Ronald insisted on taking it in case
something got out of control. It was 5:pm they were right in front of Katia's
house, they rang the bell, Katia's mother opened the door informed her that
they needed to speak with Katia, and they needed her to arrive at their house
in half an hour.

After informing Katia's mother, they returned to the house quickly to prepare
everything when she entered the house, Steven will be behind the door
everything will be dark when Katia is inside Steven will come out behind the
door with a baseball bat, He will hit Katia on the head not killing her but
leaving her unconscious for a short time, Ronald will drag her to the garage
where he will tie her to a chair and, the questions will begin, everything went
according to plan Katia was tied to the chair with a lamp in front of her, about
to wake up, she had a big blow on her head, Katia woke up in a lens way,
shaking her eyes at the annoying light that she had in front of her, she began to
look everywhere without understanding anything she saw a rather strange
shadow, she yelled "please don't hurt me" that strange shadow answered her,
"tell me, Katia, you killed Peter Dickinson." Katia immediately denied him,
the strange figure showed his face and immediately Katia recognized him and
said “Ronald what's going on" Ronald showed her the gun, Katia was scared,
Ronald assumed that he would not hesitate to use it if she did not cooperate
Ronald asked her again if she had been Peter's murderer, she denied
immediately then another strange figure who was in a corner not visible
because of the darkness, asked Katia why should they, believe her? Katia said
that she appreciated Peter a lot and that sometimes she felt that she wanted
something more than friendship she also assumed, reached a point of
depression when Peter died that sometimes she did not eat because she missed
him a lot, ¨ but if it was not you Katia who was it? or do he told you
something¨ Steven asked, Katia, said that she did not even say goodbye to
Him since when they were having dinner Katia had gotten up to the bathroom
and when she gets out, he was gone, Katia was about to leave a tear, Steven
could see in Katia's eyes that she was telling the truth, Ronald proposed to
Katia that she joined with them to find the murderer and she immediately
agreed? Ronald and Peter apologized to Katia for what had happened, Katia
gave them something that they had already assimilated as lost Peter's cell
phone, Katia had kept it to have a memory of him, but the cell phone had a
password, Steven looked for a YouTube tutorial on how to unlock a cell
phone, and he managed to unlock it, and it was 9:pm they decided to check it
tomorrow, they said goodbye to Katia sorry for what happened.

Katia had arrived at the Dickinson’s' house early to see if they could find
something on Peter's cell phone, they entered messages and the last time Peter
spoke with someone was his science teacher, they entered the chat they had a
strange conversation in which they said that They had to see each other just at
8:00 pm on July 19 of last year, this seemed quite strange to them because this
supposed meeting was for the teacher to explain a topic to Peter that he had
not understood and then the next day Peter had died with A hole in his chest
had ripped out his heart. The autopsy manager kept his word by saying that he
would find out the cause, Peter was poisoned, with chemical products that
burned his throat to death, and then with certain torture tools, they ripped out
his heart.

They were sure that the murderer was the science teacher, Katia also said that
during the week of Peter murder, the teacher was acting strangely, well
outside of that, they devised another plan the next week is back to class since
they were on vacation, the first day of school the teachers always stay up later
because they have a meeting with the principal, there is the moment when
Steven will enter the teacher's office, and Katia will stay as a guard just
outside the meeting room if the teacher leaves Katia will notify Steven by
radio, Ronald will be right outside the police station, once Steven finds
something he will communicate to Katia and Katia will tell Ronald. The day
came the classes passed extremely slow, the time came all the students had
already gone including Ronald, Katia and Steven hide, in the bathroom while
everything started, once the meeting started Steven ran to the office of the
science teacher while Katia went to hide on the stairs with the sight of the
meeting, Steven was already in the office if he could see something out of the
unusual he began to open all the drawers of the teachers' desk to see if he
could found something, but bad luck nothing strange or Guilty was in that
place, just about to leave he got a strong hunch and a picture that the teacher
had hanging in his office strongly attracted his attention, he approached and
gently removed the picture, to later find a cold safe, As soon as Steven saw
that, he went quickly to the teacher's desk where he had a strange type of key,
Steven grabbed them and ran to where the safe was, he fitted the keys and the
box opened, when Steve saw what was inside he knew that he was going to be
traumatized for life, there were bags of blood with two human hearts, Steve
closed the safe assimilating what he just saw, he remembered that a week ago
the art teacher had disappeared, perhaps he had also killed him, he left
everything where it was so no one would suspect that he was there, he ran to
Katia because it was so much what he just saw that he was not able to say it on
the radio, he told Katia everything he saw, and Katia told Ronald, he told the
police what Katia told him they decided that they were going to do they a
search of lockers and offices, the meeting was about to end when the sirens
began to sound, all the confused teachers came out to see what was happening,
the police told the director that they were going to do a review, the police
entered without caring about the director's response, some policemen went to
check the lockers and two others went to the teacher's office where they
checked everything and finally the picture that they already knew what was
behind it, the science teacher was stiff and
When the police saw that there was a safe behind the painting they asked the
teacher to open it, he refused and ran away, he reached the exit, but there was
Ronald with a gun in his hand, he had very good aim since he practiced
hunting, he shot him right where he wanted his right leg, the teacher
immediately fell screaming because the pain, three policemen ran towards
him, they grabbed him by the arms and spit him, another policeman
approached Ronald asking for the weapon since he was a minor, the
policemen dragged the science teacher back to his office where Steve and
Katia were, Steven already knew where he kept the key so he gave it to the
policeman, the teacher gazed at Steven and Steven returned his look, they
opened the safe ¨ it was True what the boy had said ¨ said one of them ¨ well
from now on we will take care of this guy’s thanks for everything ¨ said
another of them and gave them 150 dollars, well it turned out that the director
also knew of all this since he worked with the science teacher, they were
something like colleagues, but you may be wondering what they did with that
heart and blood they sold them to pay their debts and yea the teacher killed my
brother with some chemicals that he had it was a trap, the two of them went to
prison, having to spend more than 20 years there.

Steven and Ronald went to live with their aunt in another town. No one found
out what had happened the night his mother died, his father left town, no one
ever saw him again, Steven and Ronald became the most inseparable in the
world.