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Narrative Feedback Guidelines

This peer feedback form evaluates a writing sample's organization. It contains questions about whether the paragraph has a clear topic sentence that introduces characters and events, sets the scene with details of time and place, logically sequences events, concludes in a way that provides closure, uses transitional words and phrases to show passage of time, and develops ideas with sensory and emotional details. Space is provided to give feedback on the writing's strongest point, something that is done well, minor mistakes, and a suggestion.

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Narrative Feedback Guidelines

This peer feedback form evaluates a writing sample's organization. It contains questions about whether the paragraph has a clear topic sentence that introduces characters and events, sets the scene with details of time and place, logically sequences events, concludes in a way that provides closure, uses transitional words and phrases to show passage of time, and develops ideas with sensory and emotional details. Space is provided to give feedback on the writing's strongest point, something that is done well, minor mistakes, and a suggestion.

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Peer Feedback Form Writing number: _______________

Writing Genre: Writing Trait:

Narrative Organization

Yes No
1. Topic sentence
 Does the paragraph have a topic sentence?
 Does the topic sentence mention the main character(s) of the story?
 Does the topic sentence give background information of the story?
 Does the topic sentence tell the main event of the story?
2. Setting the scene
 Does the beginning set up the situation for the story (time, place)?

3. Order of Events
 Are the events sequenced logically so that the story is organized and easy
to follow?

4. Conclusion that connects


 Does the paragraph have an ending that connects to the heart of the story
and provides readers with a sense of closure?
5. Timely Transitions
 Does the paragraph use time transitional words, phrases and clauses such
as meanwhile, at the same time, early in the morning… to show the passage
of time?
6. Ideas development
 Are there sensory and/or emotional details in the story?
 Does the paragraph use appropriate verb tenses?

The strongest point of your paragraph is ………………………………………………………………………………………………


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I like how you


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I see these minor mistakes in your paragraph:


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One suggestion for your paragraph would be:


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Feedback Giver: …………………………………………………………………………..

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