Offshore Business 2
COMMUNICATION FILE
ORAL PRESENTATIONS
1. Read the quote below. Do you agree with the author? Why / Why
not?
“The human brain starts working the moment you are born and never stops
until you stand up to speak in public.” (Sit George Jessel, American actor)
2. Take the following quiz to find out the current level of your
presentation skills. Choose one answer (A, B or C) for each number.
The teacher will indicate the scoring procedure and the interpretation
of your score.
Thave limited or no experience of presenting
Ihave some experience of presenting
Ihave a wide experience of presenting in a variety of situations
Tusually feel nervous before and during presentations
I sometimes feel a little nervous when presenting but control my
nerves
[am usually relaxed about the idea of presenting; | only feel nervous
in certain situations such as big occasions or large audiences
Tthink preparation is important but am not sure of the best method
to prepare
I know preparation is important but sometimes do not prepare
always prepare and rehearse presentations
Tinclude many details to make sure I don’t miss anything important
I choose the key points I want to make and use specific evidence to
support the facts
[only use information that supports my key message and put details
in supporting documents
T put my presentation together in the order in which important ideas
come to me
structure my presentation in an orderly sequence with one thing
following after another
I structure my presentation in a logical way using clear transitions
that make it easy for the audience to follow
Tuse visual aids as a prompt in case I forget what I want to say
T sometimes use visual aids to act as a reminder of what comes next
Tonly use visual aids to help the audience understand a key point or
to make my presentation more engaging
T don’t know what rhetorical techniques are
I've heard of rhetorical techniques but never tried to use one
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T'm not sure how to stand or what to do with my arms
know posture is important and make some gestures when I present
move and stand well using appropriate gestures for emphasis
Thave a quiet, soft or monotonous voice
1am trying to improve voice volume, pitch and pace
Tecan vary the way I use my voice to add emphasis and engage the
audience
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Tm afraid the audience will ask something I can’t answer
I prepare for questions and can manage them effectively
Lam comfortable with questions and can handle interruptions and
challenges easily
“Adapted from www speak fist.com
3. Expand the mind map below adding three elements from the box to
each circle. An example is given.
amount details Key points Tapport
audience enthusiasm objective repetition
close evidence opening setting
confidence eye contact pace transitions
sontrast format pitch tipling
design gestures posture volume
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4, Divide into four small groups corresponding to four of the circles in
the previous mind map. Read the assigned role card and prepare a
mini-presentation for your colleagues to pass them information about
your topic. Then one member of each group gives the presentation in
front of the class in no more than two minutes. The other members
take notes and evaluate each speaker following the checklist below.
ORAL PRESENTATION CHECKLIST
Item Yes | No
1. Did the presentation have a clear purpose?
2. Was the presentation adjusted to the audience?
3. Did the presentation last within the time limit?
4, Were there some obvious key points?
5. Were they explained or supported with sufficient
evidence?
6. Did the presentation have a strong opening?
7. Did the presenter indicate transitions between points?
8. Did the presentation have a strong close?
9. Were there any visual aids?
10. If Yes, were they used effectively?
11. Were there any rhetorical techniques?
12. If Yes, were they used effectively?
13. Did the presenter project their voice well?
14, Did the presenter change pace?
15. Did the presenter change pitch?
16. Did the presenter have a good posture?
17. Did the presenter use gestures effectively?
18, Did the presenter keep eye contact with the audience?
19. Was the presenter confident?
20. Was the presenter enthusiastic?
24. Did the presenter build rapport with the audience?
5. Listen to an extract about the top ten presentation mistakes and
complete the list. According to the speaker, what can you do to avoid
these mistakes?
(listening material from hitp:/aww youtube. com/vatch?v=LgLNCn9g¥54)24 Business English Practice and Progress
Mistake #1 Mistake #6
Mistake #2 Mistake #7
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Mistake #5 Mistake #10
STRUCTURE
6. Listen to the beginning of a presentation and write down the
elements that make up a classical opening. Then prepare an opening
of your own based on the same pattern.
(istening material from htip:/imw.ted.comfalksikevin_allocca_why_videos_go_viral.htm!)
1.
2,
3
4
5,
7. Listen to the openings of five different presentations. What
techniques (‘hooks’) do they use to capture the audience's attention
from the start?
(listening material from hitp:/mw ted.comfalks)
Opening 1
Opening 2
Opening 3
Opening 4
Opening 5
8, Revise and improve your opening from 6 using one of the above
techniques.
9. Fill in the blanks with the verbs in italics to find several ways of
giving an outline at the beginning of a presentation. Combining the
phrases with the same number from all groups (e.g. A1+B1+C1), will
/e you a complete sentence (ie. I'm going to ... so I'll start by ... and
then P'll..).Offshore Business 25
I'm going to.
A.report show take talk tell
to you about the growing income inequality in the US.
on the study we conducted in 4,000 companies worldwide.
you about the bad side of the technologies we love so much...
you that civic apathy doesn't actually exist
a look at the invisible information flows in social media.
ween
.80 I'l start by..
B. bringing filling giving making outlining
a few observations about the political set of causes,
you up-to-date on the latest findings about leadership.
the unintended consequences of technological openness.
you in on the background to the community project we did.
you an overview of how filters work
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and then I'l
€. discuss highlight make put talk
the economic changes that led to the rise of the super-rich.
in more depth the implications of our observations.
the situation into perspective.
some recommendations about community engagement.
you through my theory of the algorithmic editing of the Web.
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10. Match the signposts to their functions.
1. to conclude a. to change the topic
2. to elaborate on bb, to do a deeper analysis
3. to go back ¢. to finish the talk
4, to move on d. to give a wider perspective
5. to look into e. to give only the basics
6. to recap f. to make the next point
7. to sum up g. to refer to an earlier point
8. to turn to hh, to repeat the main points
1[2|3|/4|s|e|7
11. Complete the following sentences with signposts from above.
1. Having said that, | would now like to the next point.
2. Let's just alittle to what | was saying earlier.26 Business English Practice and Progress
3. ssusiumennnunnse, ladies and gentlemen, this is a unique opportunity.
Thank you.
4, Now that | have given you the side effects of this phenomenon, I would
TKE .sisseaneneannn the most important of them — poverty — from a global
viewpoint.
5, So this is the background to the study. Let's now what
we found, in more detail
6, Before WE vismnsnnuennn @ Wholly different issue, | would be pleased
to answer any questions at this point.
7. .», what We need to bring the company out of the dead is
time, effort, and money. As for will | think every one of us is wiling to try
B, cassiseatsneanin, Ve 0 far shown you the company history, their mission
statement, and their values, Let’s now talk about their CSR activities.
12. Listen to the closes of five different presentations and number the
techniques in the order you hear them. Which is the most effective?
(listening material from ht:/ww. ted. comfalks)
calll to action dramatic summary emotional message
loop quote
13, Prepare a strong close to go with the opening you revised in 8.
Then present them both in front of your colleagues.
VISUAL AIDS AND BODY LANGUAGE
14, Watch a short video about the use of PowerPoint in presentations.
Identify eight common mistakes people make.
(video material from htfpy/www. youtube. com/watch.
sicO2EXtH150)
15. What other mistakes can you add to the list? What should you do
to avoid ‘Death by PowerPoint’?
16. Look at the photos and say what each speaker is doing wrong.Offshore Business 2728 Business English Practice and Progress
17. Watch a short video about hand gestures in presentations. What
gestures should you avoid and why? How can you achieve that?
(video material from hitp:/vww youtube, com/watch?v=000QQ0QdhH8)
VOICE AND RHETORICAL TECHNIQUES
18. Practise saying the following sentence, each time stressing the
underlined word. How does the meaning of the sentence change?
| will show you how to make an immediate impact on your audience.
| will show you how to make an immediate impact on your audience.
will show you how to make an immediate impact on your audience.
| will show you how to make an immediate impact on your audience.
| will show you how to make an immediate impact on your audience.
| will show you how to make an immediate impact on your audience.
will show you how to make an immediate impact on your audience.
| will show you how to make an immediate impact on your audience.
9. Iwill show you how to make an immediate impact on your audience,
10. 1 will show you how to make an immediate impact on your audience.
PNORRONA
19. Follow the model to rewrite these sentences in a more emphatic
way. Pay attention to tenses.
MODEL,
I'm going to tell you why Apple is different from other computer companies.
‘> What I'm going to do is tell you why Apple is different from other
computer companies.
1. show you how to make profit in times of crisis.
2. I'll be making a case for stricter regulations.
3. I'd like to approach this issue from another angle.
4. I'd like you to ask yourselves a simple question
5. I'm saying we need specialists.
20. Practise saying the sentences you rewrote in 18 stressing key
words and pausing after them.
21. Look at a presentation extract based on the pattern Statement +
Rhetorical Question + Answer, in which a key word is repeated for
effectiveness. Use the same technique to complete the other frames.
MODEL
Twould like you to consider the future of higher
Statement
education
Rhetorical question _| What are the prospects?
The prospects are excellent, but only for the right
Answer kind of student.Offshore Business 29
1.
5 The truth is cheap imitations of our product are
statement
flooding the market
Rhetorical question | So what's the solution?
‘Answer
2.
The obvious disadvantage of studying abroad is the
Statement high tuition cost
Rhetorical question | But what is the main .....0..2
Answer
3.
Statement Let's have a look at our competitors.
Rhetorical question 2
‘Answer
4.
Statement
Rhetorical question 2
Answer
22. Complete the following quotes based on dramatic contrast or
tripling techniques.
4. “One small step for man, one
(Neil Armstrong, American astronaut)
2. "Ask not what your country can do for you — ask
" (John F. Kennedy, US President)
3. "The difficult: that which can be done immediately. The impossible: that
" (George Santayana, Spanish philosopher and writer)
4, "One machine can do the work of fifty ordinary men. No machine
. (Elbert Hubbard, American writer and philosopher)
‘Microsoft isn't evil, they just
" (Linus Torvalds, Finnish software engineer)
6" a A " (Julius Caesar, Roman general/ statesman)
7, *By three methods we may leam wisdom: First, by reflection, which is
; second, by imitation, which is and third by
experience, which is ” (Confucius, Chinese philosopher)30 Business English Practice and Progress
8, “There are three rads tO TUM: wansssseniey semssemsene ANE
The most pleasant is With... . the quickest is with
but the surest is with (Georges Pompidou, French politician)
9. "There are no secrets to success. It is the result of .
and " (Colin Powell, former US Secretary of State)
10. "The Internet is so 80 and that for some
people it is a complete substitute to life.” (Andrew Brown, British writer)
23. Listen to four extracts from a presentation about social inequality
and identify the rhetorical techniques used by the speaker. Also note
what words she stresses or repeats.
(listening material from
htip:viwwrw tod. convtalks/chrystia_freeland_the_rise_of the_new_global_super_rich.htm))
Extract 1
Extract 2
Extract 3
Extract 4
24, Watch a short video about Steve Jobs’ presentation style and take
note of the speaker's recommendations.
(video material from hitp:/ivwy. youtube. com/watch?v=2-ntLGOyHw4)
25. Prepare an effective five-minute presentation of an interesting and
relevant topic and deliver it in front of your colleagues. Make a
dazzling presentation!