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    This document discusses factors that contribute to happiness. It argues that while money is important and enables people to pay for necessities, it is not the only or most important factor for happiness. Other factors like having a career that helps others, spending time with family and friends, and living simply can also promote happiness. People can live happily even without much money if their basic needs are met and they find purpose and fulfillment in their lives through other means.

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    This document discusses factors that contribute to happiness. It argues that while money is important and enables people to pay for necessities, it is not the only or most important factor for happiness. Other factors like having a career that helps others, spending time with family and friends, and living simply can also promote happiness. People can live happily even without much money if their basic needs are met and they find purpose and fulfillment in their lives through other means.

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    Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
    Do you think people can be happy without much money? what other factors contribute towards
    happiness?
    #people #money #factors #happiness

    Nowadays, money is vital in all kinds of emergencies. However, a few public considered that
    happiness cannot be found without money. In my opinion, I think that, people can be happy with
    some money in life and there are some more factors those contributing towards happiness.

    Firstly, I think that people can enjoy the life with a low amount of payment. In other words, low
    salary, but enough for paying such eating, travelling, health insurance as well as rent is enough to
    be happy with a short payment. For instance, my neighbour Faruk earns only two thousand dollars
    per month, but he can save fifty dollars after paying every spending ways. Besides, people can live
    happier with a short amount of salary by paying some essential ways of life.

    On the other hand, there are a lot of ways to get the happiness rather than paying. Therefore,
    helping other is more valuable. Furthermore, government doctors in villages cannot earn a lot,
    even if, they are helping the poor people with the helping hands.For example, my relative Dr. Habib,
    who is a government doctor lives in a small village with a short budget of the bill, moreover, he
    cannot save anything, but to help the poors with the health service. Also, people can enjoy the
    career with a shortage budget of salary while they are helping others.

    In conclusion, the bill is a way that helps to be happy. Although, I personally think that people can
    be happy without a lot of bills, because people can be happy with paying some career issues and
    helping others is another way to be happy.

    Submitted by mdtanviralam66 on Fri Jan 03 2020

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