**Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of

technology. In what ways has technology affected types of relationships people

make? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent times, the advance in technology has been having numerous impacts on
means of communicationchưa hợp lí phải là ways of communication among
citizens. From my viewpoint, while there exist certains changes aresai ngữ pháp
for betterment, several negative alterations still emerge.

On the one hand, technology has, undoubtedly, positively affected our

communication and the way we make relationships and maintain it. First and
foremostcó 1 ý thì không cần cụm này, it becomes straightforward to make
friends from all around the world thanks to technology. Irrespective of
geographical barriers, the Internet and certain applications namely Facebook,
Snapchat and Instagram provide us a chance to connect and communicate with
people from another country or just from a different part of our countrylặp từ
country, which is far more convenient and uncomplicatedchỉ cần convenient là
đủ compared to the past when we spent almost a week trying to have a simple
conversation with faraway relatives.

On the other hand, there are still various failings in the shift in the
meansmethod/ways of interaction. Technology has been shielding us from real-
life friendships and relationships relationships hoặc friendships. The Internet
creates a virtual world which makes citizens get addicted and introvert. They prefer
to make relationships with online friends, which are possibly short-lastring, lack of
bondings and sense of true friendship. Moreover, that phenomenon even leads to
an issue there are many fewer gatherings nowadays when compared to the past,
humankind prefers to turn inward and be negatively immersed in virtualily.

In conclusion, I believe that the development of technology has generated both

strengths and weaknesses in terms of how we contact and communicate1 từ là
đủ with each other. Hence, we should be aware of making use of technology
properly with a view to bettering our relations in the real world.

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Từ vựng chưa phong phú, lặp từ, chưa dùng nhiều từ đồng nghĩa liên quan đến chủ
đề, đặc biệt là từ technology.

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