1.

Macro virus population diversity had gone from 1 to over 800 between 1999 to
2001. (Alameen and Levis 8)
1. Revision 1: The diversity of the macro virus population had gone from 1 to over
800 between 1999 to 2001.
2. Revision 2: The diversity of macro viruses had gone from 1 to over 800 between
1999 to 2001.
3. Revision 3: Types of macro viruses increased from 1 to over 800 between 1999 to
2001.
2. In 1997, the U.S. Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) announced new
national ambient ground-level ozone air-quality standards.
1. Revision 1: In 1997, the U.S. Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) announced
new standards for national ambient ground-level ozone air quality.
2. Revision 2: In 1997, the U.S. Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) announced
new standards for ambient ozone.
3. A hazardous materials dispersion monitor system should be installed.
1. Revision 1: A system for monitoring hazardous materials dispersion should be
installed.
2. Revision 2: We need to install a system for monitoring the dispersion of hazardous
materials.
4. Your job will involve fault analysis systems troubleshooting handbook preparation.
1. Revision 1: Your job will be to prepare a troubleshooting handbook in which faulty
systems can be analysed.

Alameen, Ghinwa, and John M. Levis. “Connected Speech.” The Handbook of English Pronunciation, edited
by Martin Reed and John M. Levis, Wiley-Blackwell, 2015, p. 530.