Essay nr 1 (first I want to say im sorry, I did the first essay
while I was at the mountains and I didn’t have the structure with me, I only knew the main idea, sorry, really sorry, I can redo it)
Essay 2 Outline (traffic problems)
P1: traffic jams-a big problem for society
-it has an effect on our everyday life
P2: Statement: build more bike lanes
Explain: -healthy impact on life
-people travel more -the situation can become worse if not done correctly
P3: Statement: banning cars can help reduce traffic
Explain: banning cars isn’t the right solution-nobody will be
able to adapt to this
P4: Statement: having wider roads and using public transport
Explain: -cars will have more space
-adults will get to work on time -traffic will reduce P5: Conclusion: -we need to take traffic seriously- it is a major problem to society
Essay 3 Outline (teenagers and technology today)
P1: - technology-it’s everywhere
-why is it attracting kids?
P2: Statement: MP3-apeals to teenagers
Explain: -has a lot of storage -phones developed overtime -mp3s aren’t used anymore
P3: Statement: mobiles are the most used
-comes with many helpful services -offers education/ quality time with friends -teens lose control with it, if not used with right purposes-- addiction
P4: Statement: Laptops
Explain: -can easily access sites and apps (Netflix, Instagram, zoom,etc) -good for school -usually more useful to adults -creates a bad position and our backs/necks start hurting
Conclusion: Teens prefer phones, for education and