BRAINSTORMING

They always
They won’t let
blame you
you out

What are the

disadvantages of
being the younger
child?

You have to
You do the
help with the
errands
housework

Outline

TS: Being the younger child have a lot of disadvantages. When you are the younger child, you have
very much disadvantages that your other brothers.

SS1: If something breaks at home, the first person to blame will always be the younger brother.

SS2: When something is missing at home, the mother will always tell the youngest child to go
shopping.

SS3: When a friend invites you to a meeting or to play, they do not let you go out.

CS: When you are the younger brother you have many more disadvantages that your other brothers.
Draft

What are the disadvantages of being the younger child?

Being the younger child have a lot of disadvantages. When you are the

younger child, you have very much disadvantages that your other brothers. First,

when something is missing at home, the mother will always tell the youngest child to

go shopping. Also, if something breaks at home, the first person to blame will

always be the younger brother. On top of that, when a friend invites you to a

meeting or to play, they do not let you go out. For all of this, when you are the

younger brother you have many more disadvantages that your other brothers.

Final Draft
What are the disadvantages of being the younger child?

Being the younger child have a lot of disadvantages. When you are the

younger child, you have very many disadvantages that your other brothers. First,

when something is missing, the mother will always tell the youngest child to go

shopping. Also, if something breaks at home the first person to blame will always be

the younger brother. On top of that, when a friend invites you to a meeting or to

play, they do not let you go out. For example, even if both brothers ask to go out,

they will rather let the older one to go but the younger one no. In conclusion, when

you are the younger brother you have many more disadvantages that your other

brothers.
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