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Cognitive Pshy.
Cognitive Pshy.
1, 1982
INTRODUCTION
The creation of written text seems to place unusually heavy demands on the
performer; much more so, for instance, than its counterpart, decoding written
text. Thus, too, there is some evidence that, in terms of equivalent levels of
complexity, writing is typically less sophisticated than output in other high
school subjects (Biggs and Collis, 1982; Collis and Biggs, 1979).
These demands refer particularly to the load upon working memory. The
writer has to think of and integrate several features simultaneously: hand-
writing, spelling, punctuation, word choice, syntax, intentions, organization,
clarity, reader perspective, to name only a few. For the beginning writer, who
has yet to automate many of these skills, such a task may appear overwhelming
and aversive. While it may be that the skilled writer uses writing as 'an oppor-
tunity to confront the state of his own thoughts' (Smith, 1975, p.192), such a
confrontation in the case of the unskilled writer is likely to be misleading, not to
say humiliating.
In short, the structure and quality of the written product depends upon the
integration of the many processes involved in planning, composition, and
transcription . Very few of these processes receive any specific attention in
school; and it is only recently that they have become the focus of psychological
research. In this paper, we discuss a model for analysing written products of
high school students. This analysis enables us to address two major areas of
concern: (a) the course of development of writing skills; and (b) the evaluation
of writing quality.
PROCESS AND PRODUCT IN CREATIVE WRITING
In the analysis to follow, we shall be limiting ourselves entirely to creative
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This example uses form as the integrating structure. The first four
paragraphs, like a litany, end with a negative 'but you have to be careful' with a
surprise departure in the last paragraph ('it is still the best place to be'). This
writer has moved away from a recital of his own concrete experiences, and is
using a complete global scheme to make an entertaining point.
Metaphoric Writing (Extended Abstract)
While integrated writing may be beyond the particular experiences of the
writer, it is still context-bound: there are few metaphoric or universal under-
tones. It is precisely those undertones that characterize metaphoric writing
proper.
Signs of spring
It was in the spaces of a thick green bush that was kissed by the vibrant rays of the
sun. In the clearing a young couple sat beside a blue glassy stream, that laughed and
bubbled over the mossy pebbles.
The young man, thin and tanned, smiled warmly and picked a small flower and
placed it in the girl's long brown hair. She laughed contentedly - but neither spoke a
word. I looked deep at their relationship - and the disasters of the world flashed past
me in one quick second. Then suddenly I realised, all the money in the world, all the
wars, battles and strife could not affect or change someone as much as love.
The couple still sat silently - but their silence was deafening. It screamed out to the
world - scratched, tore and pounded at all the hearts that would listen. Listen?
Have you ever heard love, have you ever stopped to listen? How many of you have
ever sat silently like this couple and listened to the love that surrounds you? Maybe
some of you, or maybe you just can't hear, because you live in your world of pollu-
tion, over-population and drugs.
Look deep-do you see the couple in the clearing? They are richer and happier than
all of you. They are uninhibited and touched by love.
I walked away slowly, looking at the fresh flowers, listening to the young birds. It
was spring, I could tell. It wrapped itself around me and showed me love-nothing
is more beautiful than the signs of spring. (Year 9)
This carefully constructed essay nicely illustrates the carryovers of meaning
in this level of writing. The writer uses the formal properties of written
language (e.g. sentence structure and length, punctuation) in conjunction with
vivid imagery and a simple story, to create a tremendous, even excessive, emo-
tional impact on the reader; there is a 'change of state' between medium and
message. That message is a universal one: the particular lovers in the dearing
are obviously not what the story is about. She draws upon her concrete ex-
periences but, unlike writers at earlier levels, she does so in order to introduce
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hypothetical or abstract references. This imaginative quality is reflected not
only in the total construction, but also in the parts of the composition and in the
way they are linked together. For example, the thought that 'spring showed me
the beauty of love' is revealed in a movement from the concrete (the couple in
the clearing, the fresh flowers) to the abstract ('spring wrapped itself around
me'). This layered structure of meanings requires both writer and reader to ac-
cept that there is no definitive closure: questions are raised and held open for
the reader to consider and emote to.
Reliability of SOLO Ratings
Two separate sets of ratings were carried out by two raters working in-
dependently. In one sample (the first) the correlation between raters was 0.79
(N = 63); and in the second, 0.83 (N = 51). These figures, for essay-type
ratings, are satisfactorily high (cf. Diederich, 1974).
A further breakdown on the first sample showed that 45 per cent of the
ratings agreed exactly, 44 per cent differed by only half a level, 10 per cent by
one SOLO level and 2 per cent (1 essay) by more than one SOLO level.
On the second sample, 58 per cent of the ratings agreed exactly, 36 per cent
differed by half a SOLO level, and 6 per cent by one or more levels.
An experienced English teacher was asked to mark 100 essays for quality,
using the criteria he normally used: originality, length, relevance, transcription
skills, handwriting, spelling etc., and vulgarity (negative). It will be seen that
some of these are SOLO components of response structure. This rating cor-
related 0.75 with SOLO level, which is high, although not as high as inter-rater
reliability of SOLO level.
IMPLICATIONS
The Psychology of Writing
There are two aspects to this question. First, there are implications for the
psychology of writing itself: what the processes are, their demands on working
memory, and so on. As a product analysis, SOLO does not address this ques-
tion directly, in the way that, for instance, the work of Scardamalia, Bereiter,
Bracewell, and others working through OISE in Toronto does. Secondly,
SOLO analysis is useful in enabling questions to be asked about the quality of
the output, in comparison with other outputs and to presumed developmental
stage.
If a ceiling is placed upon SOLO levels of responding by a student's stage of
cognitive development, why is it that students of the same stage of development
continually give lower levels of response to creative writing than to
mathematics or science tasks? Is it simply a matter that pupils are given sur-
prisingly little practice in creative writing? For example, Annells et al. (1975)
found that by Year 10 a pupil submitted an average of only 2.8 pages per day of
writing, of which only 35 per cent was continuous (the rest being short-answer
responses, problems, etc.) and only 4 per cent was creative writing. Given
much more practice, in and out of school, we would expect writers to reach the
same level as that attained in other skills.
A more elaborate hypothesis is that stage development is partly or wholly a
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Educational Implications
Educational implications fall into two main categories: teaching and evalua-
tion. SOLO is a tool that facilitates description; it is not a theory. SOLO
analysis does not therefore define the components of a task, such as writing;
this must come from a content analysis of the task. Once the components have
been isolated, however, SOLO can be used to determine their level of
organization, and hopefully to suggest where intervention or remediation
might most fruitfully be focused.
A teacher of writing should therefore know what the components of writing
are, and be able to point out to students when those components are missing,
are inadequate, or are poorly integrated. By applying the SOLO taxonomy to
the best, worst, and most typical essays, he can begin to form an explicit idea of
the kinds of components students at this level can manage in their writing, and
the levels of performance he might reasonably expect. It is also- possible to
discover what components are present in a particular student's writing. Such
evaluation may be formative or summative; SOLO analysis lends itself par-
ticularly to formative evaluation so that a student may know more clearly
where his main strengths and weaknesses are. More generally, SOLO becomes
a useful organizing framework in which the components of good writing may
be outlined to students.
As summative evaluation, SOLO is helpful, but it indexes only one aspect of
quality; the structure of a piece of writing. The evaluation of the content is a
totally different matter. It is possible, for example, to find quite large
differences in what might be regarded as 'quality' within the same level.
Perhaps, in the end, good writing becomes a matter of joining the writer's in-
tentions with the reader's response. It is reasonable to suggest that technology,
craftsmanship, and structural complexity will be essential materials for con-
structing a reliable bridge across that gap. The aesthetic appeal of the final pro-
duct remains a separate question.
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AUTHORS
John B. Biggs is a Professor of Education at the University of Newcastle, New South
Wales, and Kevin F. Collis is a Professor of Education at the University of Tasmania.
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
The writers are indebted to the Education Research and Development Committee and
to the Australian Research Grants Committee for financial support; to John Kirby for
obtaining some of the protocols and discussing interpretations of them; and to
Margaret Bowers, John Exton, and Helen Foster for research assistance.
This article is based on a paper presented at the Australian Psychological Society
Annual Conference, Toowoomba, Queensland, August 1980.