As you just saw in our class, using praise is easy, but data will paint a better image of what

we are trying
to sell. Using words such as ​number one brand, best brand in the market, the fastest, the greatest​ might
mean nothing to your client. Your task is to change the following statements in such a what that the
facts stand out. Since this is only practice, you may include additional “facts” thought by you. Also, why
not commenting what is wrong with these statements? Let us know what you think, share your ideas
with others in the comments section.

1.
Our CRM has completely changed the way our users work. It is an amazing solution that gives you
everything you need with fantastic results. Your customer satisfaction will go through the roof! Most of
our users recommend it and see results very fast.

2.

This supply chain solution is the best in the market. We are very proud to offer you our latest
development. We know you will love it! We have received many awards in Europe and North America.
Our software will make your process more efficient and faster with less down-time.

3.
Our eLearning courses offer everything you need. We have so many different titles that are very
successful among users. With our exceptional training solutions, you will reach a large number of
people. Our contents were created by top tier experts from prestigious universities to deliver great
quality knowledge.