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First, fast food it is detrimental to children’s health.
For instance, fast food is often packed with fat,
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In addition, schools should stop serving fast food
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because it is very expensive. It is a well-known fact
that fresh food from a supermarket is significantly
cheaper than pre-made fast food.
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To conclude, for reasons presented above, I
believe it is vital that schools stop serving fast food
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to their students.
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I agree that children should be banned from eating
fast food at school for two important reasons. First,
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Introduction instance, fast food is often packed with fat, sugar, salt,
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and preservatives, which makes them extremely
unhealthy for children. In addition, schools should stop
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significantly cheaper than pre-made fast food. To
conclude, for reasons presented above, I believe it is
vital that schools stop serving fast food to their
students.
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Argument
Question 2
A university plans to
develop a new research
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center in your country.
introduction Some people want a
center for business
research, while others
want a center for
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research in agriculture
(farming). Which of these
two kinds of research
centers would you
recommend, and why?
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While both proposals would be beneficial to my
country, I recommend investing in a business research
center for the following reasons. First and foremost,
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introduction economic turndown, investing in a business research
would likely provide more solutions to these economic
problems than an agricultural research center.
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Furthermore, businesses tend to create more jobs
than agriculture. As unemployment is currently high,
creating jobs is a top priority. Given these points, I
believe investing in a business research center would
yield the most positive results for my country.
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While both proposals would be beneficial to my
country, I recommend investing in a business
research center for the following reasons.
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First and foremost, since my country in currently
suffering from an economic turndown, investing in
a business research center would likely provide
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Introduction more solutions to these economic problems than
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While both proposals would be beneficial to my
country, I recommend investing in a business research
center for the following reasons. First and foremost,
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introduction economic turndown, investing in a business research
centre would likely provide more solutions to these
economic problems than an agricultural research
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center. Furthermore, businesses tend to create more
jobs than agriculture. As unemployment is currently
high, creating jobs is a top priority. Given these points,
I believe investing in a business research center would
yield the most positive results for my country.
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