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68 Amendments For Rayvee
68 Amendments For Rayvee
0:33 please don’t use that picture of me – on the introduction music (for all podcast
episodes), please use this image
https://www.dropbox.com/s/pqac7h4tk4e84uu/Podcast%20Final%20Blue.jpg?dl=0
And put the episode number and title next or under it, so:
Episode #68
Changing Terms and Conditions following a TUPE Transfer
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0:52 can you have a blank computer screen (saying Real Estate doesn’t really fit)
Tried, but it’s a build-in prop, can’t be changed. Put something different but doesn’t match.
If it’s mandatory to change, I will change the entire scene.
1:31 please add a question mark ? after TUPE in the text bubble, to turn it into a question
1:52 caselaw (not Case Law) – one word and lower case
2:50 Change ‘Terms and Conditions’ to ‘Improvements to Terms & Conditions are okay’
3:46 change all the text to: EAT said not valid
(and for future information, it’s Employment Appeal Tribunal, not Employment Appeals
Tribunal – i.e. no ‘s’ after Appeal)
5:04 please change lower text to: Regulations don’t prevent benefitting from
improvements
5:28 please don’t use that photo of me; and use this image of my books:-
https://www.dropbox.com/s/7o74z8jbk9q7nex/_Covers%201-8%20v2.png?dl=0
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5:54 change all the text on this page to: No ability to harmonise
6:20 insert comma after first word, so: Economic, technical or…
7:34 replace To be Measured or Determined with: Nobody knows what that means
7:38 add ‘Probably best’, so: Probably best to stay away from this mechanism altogether
7:41 – 7:46 – can you cut this bit about reviewing the episode (video and audio) out
entirely?
7:52 add ‘generally not possible’ after the existing text, in a different colour
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8:17 a clear… (not A clear…)
8:54 put a big cross through TUPE transfer (to show nothing to do with a TUPE transfer)
9:28 there’s a funny white square in the speech bubble – please fix
10:56 remove ‘a’ (in nice, simple…) and straightforward (not straight forward – it’s one
word)
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11:36 please don’t use that image – please use this one…
https://www.dropbox.com/s/qwm1c08le5jvva8/2020%201.jpg?dl=0
and then leave that image up there until the end of the video (ie remove the image at
11:42)