Business Communication BY Nasir Ullah Khan

Academic Writing Worksheet

Instructions: Apply 5 ways of smart writing and 7 Cs of communication on the following
text. Watch the tutorial first to grasp the subject knowledge of the content and apply it on
the text positively.
Write the corrected text below this email.

Subject: Employ a freelancer

Dear Mr. Zia (HR Manager)
Hope you are doing well!
My name is Hadia Afzal and I have been appointed and therefore, working at Visual Designing
Company on the position of senior manager. Actually, Now-a-days our company is looking for a
tech/computer whiz to hire who can serve with their skills as a freelancer. Basically our company
is at the brink of making different projects visible for their clients and consumers. He must be
aware of the fact that we urge to improve the already week image of the company in accordance
with restructuring the idol systems.
Despite of the fact that there are a lot of skilled people working in the organization who are
working day in and day out to uplift the image of the organization but the reality is we still are
looking forward for someone meeting the above mentioned skill-set and credentials.
Your company’s services have been published in the newspaper publicly and I have gone
through the advertisement in a newspaper about your company’s services so this email is being
written to you. That particular person should be creative, know about visual image developing,
logo design, web design, and content development and also have an art to present to clients.
Kindly refer some freelancers to our company so that we can schedule an interview with them
and further guide them about our company policies.
I shall be highly thankful for your cooperation.
Thanking you!
With best regards,
Hadia Afzal (Senior Manager)
Business Communication BY Nasir Ullah Khan

Subject: Require a tech freelancer for our company.

Dear Mr. Zia,
I hope that you are well.
My name is Hadia Afzal. I am currently working as a senior manager at Visual Designing. I am
writing this because we are looking to hire a tech freelancer having skills in visual image
development, logo design, web design, and content development.
Nowadays our company is not doing so well and we need a person who by his creative skills can
uplift and restructure the existing system and make projects visible for our clients and
consumers.
We have seen your advertisement in the newspaper and gone through your offered services and
thought that your company will be the right fit for us.
If you please, refer some freelancers to our company so that we can schedule an interview with
them and further guide them about our company policies.
Thanking you.
With best regards,
Hadia Afzal