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INTRODUCTION TO MASS COMMUNICATION
Course Introduction 3
Block Introduction 4
UNIT 1
The Concept of Communication 5
UNIT 2
Mass Media and Communication 16
UNIT 3
Characteristics of Different Mass Media 26
UNIT 4
Writing for Mass Media 42
INTRODUCTION TO THE COURSE: MEDIA
AND COMMUNICATION SKILLS
My dear Students,
We welcome you to this course on MEDIA AND COMMUNICATION SKILLS.
Through this course we propose to introduce you to the various channels of mass
media such as the newspaper, magazine, radio, television and, last but not the least,
the internet. The internet today, with things like blogs, message boards, podcasts,
video sharing, etc., has given the ordinary man and woman more power than s/he
ever enjoyed in the past and, which until recent times, was availed only by the mass
media producers.
New technologies have transformed the world of media. They have shattered the
social boundaries of the world. People now live in close proximity because of the
new inventions in technology.
It is the media that creates the experience of global shared time by informing people
about all events taking place around the world. Mass communication allows people
to be in touch with people in far flung places across the globe. Newspapers, Radio,
TV, Internet, Mobile phones are used to connect people everywhere. These also
influence people to understand their social identities and their cultures in relation
to others around the globe.
For the purpose of this course it is enough that we talk about the tremendous
explosion that has taken place in the domain of technology and discuss how we can
make optimum use of it for the betterment of our planet.
With these words I welcome you again to this course and wish you all the best.
Introduction to Mass
Communication INTRODUCTION TO BLOCK 1
(INTRODUCTION TO MASS
COMMUNICATION)
This block proposes to survey the various mass media such as print (newspapers
and magazines), radio, television and the Internet. Here you would get a glimpse of
their history. This will help you appreciate them in their proper perspectives. You
would discover the peculiar strengths and weaknesses of each medium. This will
help you observe the various media in use more critically and thus learn from them
for your own use. Finally, we also offer a few suggestions or techniques for the
development of your script or media text.
Unit 2, Mass Media and Communication, speaks about the various types of Mass
Media like journalism, broadcast and telecast media, films, internet, publishing
and mobile phones. We talk about the impact and dangers of these mass media.
Unit 4 is entitled Writing for Mass Media and gives you a bird’s eye view of various
strategies and rules about how to write for the different mediums of Mass
Communication.
The idea of communication may be very simple but it leads to immensely interesting
and sophisticated ramifications. Read the units but give yourself time to ruminate.
Have you observed a cow chewing cud? Do likewise. Think over the matter you
read, examine it in the light of your own observations in the media and, if possible,
discuss it with a friend at the study center. Hope you will enjoy the process.
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UNIT I THE CONCEPT OF Communication
COMMUNICATION
Structure
1.0 Objectives
1.1 Introduction
1.2 Communication and its Functions
1.2.1 Communication
1.2.2 Functions of Communication
1.3 Elements of Communication
1.3.1 The Message
1.3.2 The Communicator
1.3.3 Transmission Medium
1.3.4 The Receiver
1.3.5 Feedback
1.4 Kinds of Communication
1.4.1 Intrapersonal Communication
1.4.2 Interpersonal Communication
1.4.3 Group Communication
1.4.4 Mass Communication
1.5 The Seven C’s of Communication
1.5.1 Content
1.5.2 Context
1.5.3 Channels
1.5.4 Clarity
1.5.5 Composition
1.5.6 Contrast
1.5.7 Consistency
1.6 Let Us Sum Up
1.7 Answers to Check Your Progress
1.0 OBJECTIVES
Through this Unit we aim to introduce you to the fundamentals of communication
and its processes. The study of the different aspects of communication will help
you to understand the dynamics of the communication process and the importance
of communication in our daily life. After studying this unit you should be able to:
• Define communication and its meaning
• Explain its importance
• Define the communication process
• Identify essential elements of communication and the role that each of these
elements plays in the communication process
• Discuss the seven C’s of communication.
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Communication 1.1 INTRODUCTION
As you know, communication is very essential for the survival of human beings and
it has a very important place in our life. In fact, it regulates and shapes all human
behaviors. Man’s need for communication is as strong and as basic as his need to
drink, eat, and sleep. Moreover, in a country like ours, communication plays a vital
role in creating people’s awareness about policies and programmes of development.
It helps in motivating them to be active partners in the nation-building endeavor.
Therefore, it is important to have a clear understanding of the concepts of
communication. What is communication? How does it work? Why is it important
to us? What are the elements in the communication process and how do they transmit
and set the communication process in motion? Last but not the least, what are the
different types of communication and what are the seven C’s of communication?
Keeping these questions in mind will not only help you to understand the meaning
and process of communication but will also help you to identify tools for effective
communication.
Communication happens at many levels, in many different ways for most human
beings, as well as for certain machines. Most studies dedicate a portion of attention
for communication, so when you talk about communication it is very important to
be sure about what are the aspects of communication. Definitions of communication
range widely, some recognizing that animals can communicate with each other as
well as human beings, and some are narrower, including human beings within the
parameters of human interaction. Communication is, therefore, a process of sharing
or exchanging of ideas, information, knowledge, attitude or feeling among two or
more persons through certain signs and symbols.
For a society to exist, certain communication needs must be met. These needs have
existed since early times. Primitive tribes had sentinels who scanned the environment
and reported dangers. Councils of elders interpreted facts and made decisions. Tribal
meetings were used to transmit these decisions to the rest of the group. Other
members of the tribe may have been story-tellers and jesters who functioned to
entertain the group. As society became larger and more complex, these jobs were
taken over by the mass media and this change was an important one. Sometimes,
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dysfunctions were also performed by the mass media. Dysfunctions are the The Concept of
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consequences that are undesirable from the point of view of the welfare of society.
Information
Information as a concept bears a diversity of meanings, from everyday usage to
technical settings. Generally speaking, the concept of information is closely related
to imparting instruction, knowledge, meaning, mental stimulus, pattern, perception,
and representation.
Persuasion
Persuasion is a form of social influence. It is the process of guiding people towards
the adoption of an idea, attitude, or action by rational and symbolic (though not
always logical) means. It is the strategy of problem-solving relying on “appeals”
rather than strength. Manipulation is taking persuasion to an extreme, where one
person or group benefits at the cost of the other. Aristotle said that one of the most
important functions of communication is to persuade the other party. Why is it so?
Because persuasion helps in reaching decisions or consensus on public policy so
that it is possible to control and govern. But it is possible that one may resort to
persuasion with an ulterior motive. The receiver must be careful about the source
of such persuasion.
Instruction
An instruction is a form of communicated information that is both command and
explanation for how an action, behavior, method, or task is to be begun, completed,
conducted, or executed. One of the major functions of communication is to instruct,
educate and socialize the members of the society. All these functions start early in
life, at home or in school and continue till one completes the full cycle of life.
Communication provides a fund of knowledge, expertise and skills that enable people
to operate as effective members of society. It also creates awareness, gives direction
and opportunity to people so that they actively participate in public life.
Entertainment
Entertainment is an activity designed to give pleasure or relaxation to an audience.
The audience may participate in the entertainment passively as in watching opera
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monotony of routine and divert their attention from the troubles and tensions of
daily life. The diversion should not be taken as a negative element. Such diversion
has a positive role in our life: it revitalizes our personality and even educates us.
You must have watched some Charlie Chaplin or Laurel and Hardy movies. They
entertain and at the same time comment on life. We can learn a lot about life from
these comedies. Communication provides boundless entertainment to people through
pictures, films, music, drama, dance, art, literature, comedy, sports, games etc.
Cultural Promotion
Communication is a major source for cultural preservation and promotion. It helps
individuals to pursue and satisfy their creative urge. Communication provides
opportunity for culture to be preserved and promoted. It stimulates individuals to
pursue and fulfill their creative urges.
Integration
Communication is a great source for disseminating knowledge and information,
which further helps in social integration. Communication is a great integrating tool.
Through a fund of knowledge or information, individuals, groups or cultures come
to know one another, understand and appreciate each other’s ways of life and thereby
develop tolerance towards one another.
A message can be transferred through spoken and written mediums, such as radio
programmes, films, paintings, posters, photographs etc. However, a message is not
only transferred information, but also involves the emotions that give the words
meaning. Words alone do not establish the full meaning of the message. Non verbal
communications may give clues that the receiver can use to interpret verbal messages.
This is the process of transmitting the information you want to communicate into a
form that can be sent and correctly decoded at the other end. Your success in encoding
depends partly on your ability to convey information clearly and simply, but also on
your ability to anticipate and eliminate sources of confusion (for example, cultural
issues, mistaken assumptions and missing information). A key part of this is to
know your audience. Failure to understand whom you are communicating with,
will result in delivering messages that are misunderstood. For example, an illiterate
can not understand a written message but can comprehend it well if explained.
In fact, communication is successful only when both the sender and the receiver
understand the same information as a result of the communication. By successfully
getting your message across, you convey your thoughts and ideas effectively. When
not successful, the thoughts and ideas that you send do not necessarily reflect your
own, causing a communication breakdown and creating roadblocks that stand in
the way of your goals – both personal and professional.
The receiver is the element in the communication process that interprets the meaning
of the message. Only when the receiver has understood the message, can true
communication take place. The receiver also goes through an internal set of processes
related to incoming messages. Upon obtaining the message, the receiver decodes it
through assimilation and interpretation. The receiving process is made up of the
following steps: receive, decode, filter, and interpret. Receiving takes place when
the receiver first perceives the message, either by sight or hearing. During this
process, the receiver filters the information through his/her own psychological
barriers such as existing knowledge, attitude, beliefs, biases and perceptions. These
barriers affect how well the message is understood, accepted and decoded. To decode
a message effectively, the sender and receiver must be communicating in the same
language. Language, in this sense, is not limited to formal language types (i.e.,
English, Spanish, etc.), but also includes the influences of technical knowledge,
field of experience and critical items called Operational definitions. The words in
the message must mean the same thing to the receiver and sender or there will be
miscommunication. Also there are other interruptions that can creep in at any point
of the communication process and make it ineffective. Environment is one major
cause that interferes with message receptions: like noises from the roadside, constant
chattering of individuals outside the communication act, blaring loudspeaker, faulty
transmission, etc. Noise can occur in other forms also, poor handwriting, heavy
accent or soft speech, communication in a poorly lit room etc. In fact, these are
barriers to effective communication. For smooth and effective communication, it is
necessary to eliminate or reduce noise as far as possible.
1.3.5 Feedback
Perhaps the greatest cause of ineffective communication is failure of the sender to
request feedback from the receiver. Feedback is the element of communication
which confirms that the message has been received and understood. It completes
the sender’s process by verifying that the meaning has not changed. In most written
forms of communication, some reply is required. It may range from specific action
to a simple receipt. Oral communication via electronic means usually requires only
a verbal repeat of the message followed by “roger”, “understand”, or “aye-aye”. In
face-to-face oral communications, feedback can be more complex. One way to get
feedback from face-to-face communication is to solicit questions from your receiver,
or each person to whom your message applies.
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Check Your Progress 2 Communication
Note: a) Space given below the question is for writing your answer.
b) Check your answer with the one given at the end of this unit.
i) What steps does a communicator follow to transmit information?
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The term ‘mass’ denotes great volume, range or extent (of people or production)
and reception of messages. It suggests that the recipients of media products constitute
a vast sea of passive, undifferentiated individuals. This is an image associated with
some earlier critiques of ‘mass culture’ and mass society which generally assumed
that the development of mass communication has had a largely negative impact on
modern social life, creating a kind of bland and homogeneous culture which
entertains individuals without challenging them. However, with the advancement
in Media Technology, people are no longer receiving gratification without
questioning the grounds on which it is based. Instead, people are engaging themselves
more with media products such as computers, cell phones and internet. These have
gradually become vital tools for communication in a society today.
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Check Your Progress 3 Communication
Note: a) Space given below the question is for writing your answer.
b) Check your answer with the one given at the end of this unit.
1) Write two impacts of each of the following type of communication:
Intrapersonal : a) .....................................................................................
b) .....................................................................................
Interpersonal : a) .....................................................................................
b) .....................................................................................
Group : a) .....................................................................................
b) .....................................................................................
Mass : a) .....................................................................................
b) .....................................................................................
1.5.1 Content
This is the best possible measure of communication effectiveness. What do you
want your audience to walk away with and remember? Once you have defined your
prime question, set out to answer it. What information is required? Do you have the
answer already, or do you need to search it out? The content determines the audience.
Hence, the message must have the meaning for the receiver and it must be compatible
with his/her value system.
1.5.2 Context
The context must be clear and should not contradict the message. It must provide
for participation and play back what’s going on. Do you understand the situation?
Is there a dead elephant in the middle of the room that you are not aware of? Ask
good questions. You’ll need a clear goal before you begin to design any
communication.
1.5.3 Channels
Only the established channels of communication should be used — channels that
the receiver uses and respects—creating new ones is difficult. Different
channels have different effects and serve effectively in different stages of the diffusion
process.
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1.5.4 Clarity
This is one of the hardest parts of the process and most often neglected. People’s
attention will quickly drift — they expect you to get to the point. Learn to edit. The
message must be put in simple terms. Words must mean the same thing to the
receiver as they do to the sender. Complex issues must be compressed into theme
slogans that have simplicity and clarity. The farther a message has to travel, the
simpler it should be.
1.5.5 Composition
Now it’s time to design the way you will tell your story. Think in terms of both
written and visual composition. When writing, who are your main characters? How
will you set up the scene? What are the goals and conflicts that will develop? How
will the story reach a resolution? In visual terms, where will the reader begin? How
will you lead the eye around the page? In all your compositional thinking, how will
you engage your audience? How will you keep them engaged? Writing down, forces
you to think it through. Communication must break down into basic “building blocks”
of content. Formulate the information into clusters and groups. What patterns
emerge? How can you make the information more modular? Given your goal, what
is the most fundamental unit of information? You can use index cards to break
down information into modules.
1.5.6 Contrast
What are the differences that matter? Use contrast to highlight them: Big vs. little;
rough vs. smooth; black vs. white. When making any point, ask, “in comparison
with what?” Contrast is a trigger to the brain that says “pay attention!”
1.5.7 Consistency
Unless you are highlighting differences, keep things like color, fonts, spacing and
type sizes consistent to avoid distracting people. Research shows that any extraneous
information will detract from people’s ability to assimilate and learn. Communication
is an unending process. It requires repetition to achieve penetration. The story must
be consistent.
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questions and good listening; and ends in constructing a presentation, document,
system or user experience.
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Introduction to Mass
Communication UNIT 2 MASS MEDIA AND
COMMUNICATION
Structure
2.0 Objectives
2.1 Introduction
2.2 Types of Mass Media
2.2.1 Journalism
2.2.2 Broadcasting and Telecasting
2.2.3 Internet
2.2.4 Publishing
2.2.5 Mobile
2.3 Impact and Dangers of Mass Media
2.4 Impact of Journalism
2.5 Impact of Radio and Television
2.6 Impact of Films
2.7 Impact of Internet
2.8 Let Us Sum Up
2.9 Answers to Check Your Progress
2.0 OBJECTIVES
Through this Unit our aim is to introduce you to the various mediums of mass
communication and discuss their impact on our lives. We shall take up all these
Medias in details.
We have touched briefly on the concept of mass communication in the earlier Unit
of this Block. After going through this Unit, you would have a fair idea of the
impact of mass media in the Indian context. By the end of this Unit you will be able
to:
• Outline the development of journalism in India from a mission to an industry
and explain its present impact on people
• Describe the reach of radio and its impact on the masses
• Explain the role of films as a mirror of social realities and its effects on society
• Describe the role of TV among the Indian elite and masses and
• Describe the new technologies like the internet and identify its relevance to
the Indian media scene
2.1 INTRODUCTION
Reaching out to thousands and millions of people is accomplished through a mass
media like television or newspapers. Mass communication can be defined as the
process of using mass media to send messages to large audiences for the purpose of
informing, entertaining or persuading. In many respects the process of mass
communication and other communication are same. Some one conceives a message,
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such as language .Then it is transmitted. Another person receives the message, Mass Media and
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decodes it and internalizes it. In other respects mass communication is distinctive.
Crafting an effective message for thousands of people of diverse backgrounds and
interest requires different skills than chatting with a friend across the table. Encoding
the message is more complex because a device is always used, for example a camera
or recorder.
We shall first take up the print media because that happens to be the original type of
mass media in India. We shall then give an account of radio, film and TV as media
of mass communication in India, their spread, reach, people’s access to these media
and their impact on the society. New technologies made their entry during 1970s
and 1980s. They are video, cable and satellite TV. We shall discuss the effect these
new channels of mass communication have on the people.
Mass media can be used for various purposes. For instance, it can help both for
business and social concerns. This can include advertising, marketing, propaganda,
public relations and political communication. It can also be used for enrichment,
education and entertainment, through performances of acting, music and sports, as
well as for public service announcements
The concept of mass media is complicated in some internet media as now individuals
have a means of potential exposure on a scale comparable to what was previously
restricted to select group of mass media producers. These internet media can include
television, personal web pages, podcasts and blogs. The communication audience
has been viewed by some commentators as forming a mass society with special
characteristics, notably atomization or lack of social connections, which render it
especially susceptible to the influence of modern mass-media techniques such as
advertising and propaganda. The term “MSM” or “mainstream media” has been
widely used in the blogosphere in discussion of the mass media and media bias.
2.2.1 Journalism
Journalism is a discipline of collecting, analyzing, verifying and presenting
information regarding current events, trends, issues and people. Those who practice
journalism are known as journalists.
The development and widespread use of printed text in Europe in the 1500s produced
a brand new form of communication. For the first time, a single message could be
duplicated with little error and distributed to thousands of people. First used to
propagate religious texts and arguments, this “mass” approach to communication
quickly caught on and was soon being used to distribute news, entertainment and
government regulations.
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(attributed to Phil Graham), because journalists often record important events,
producing news articles on short deadlines. While under pressure to be first with
their stories, news media organizations usually edit and proof read their reports
prior to publication, adhering to each organization’s standards of accuracy, quality
and style. Many news organizations claim proud traditions of holding government
officials and institutions accountable to the public, while media critics have raised
questions about holding the press itself accountable.
Television and radio programs are distributed through radio broadcasting over
frequency bands that are highly regulated by the Communications Commission.
Such a regulation includes determination of the width of the bands, range, licensing,
types of receivers and transmitters used and acceptable content.
Cable programs are often broadcast simultaneously with radio and television
programs, but have a more limited audience. By coding signals and having decoding
equipment in homes, cable also enables subscription-based channels and pay-per-
view services.
When broadcasting is done via the Internet the term webcasting is often used. In
2004 a new phenomenon occurred when a number of technologies combined to
produce podcasting. Podcasting is an asynchronous broadcast/ narrowcast medium,
with one of the main proponents being Adam Curry and his associates’ the Podshow.
2.2.3 Internet
The Internet (also known simply as “the Net” or “the Web”) can be briefly understood
as “a network of networks”. Specifically, it is the worldwide, publicly accessible
network of interconnected computer networks that transmit data by packet switching
using the standard Internet Protocol (IP). It consists of millions of smaller domestic,
academic, business and governmental networks, which together carry various
information and services, such as electronic mail, online chat, file transfer and the
interlinked Web pages and other documents of the World Wide Web
Contrary to some common usage, the Internet and the World Wide Web are not
synonymous. The Internet is a collection of interconnected computer networks,
linked by copper wires, fiber-optic cables, wireless connections etc. The Web is a
collection of interconnected documents, linked by hyperlinks and URLs. The World
Wide Web is accessible via the Internet, along with many other services including
e-mail, file sharing and others.
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2.2.4 Publishing Mass Media and
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Publishing is the industry concerned with the production of literature or information
– the activity of making information available for public view. In some cases, authors
may be their own publishers.
Traditionally, the term refers to the distribution of printed works such as books and
newspapers. With the advent of digital information systems and the Internet, the
scope of publishing has expanded to include websites, blogs and the like.
Publication is also important as a legal concept; (1) as the process of giving formal
notice to the world of a significant intention, for example, to marry or enter
bankruptcy and (2) as the essential precondition of being able to claim defamation,
that is, the alleged libel must have been published.
2.2.5 Mobile
Mobile phones were introduced in Japan in 1997 but became a mass media only in
1998 when the first downloadable ringing tones were introduced in Finland. Soon
most forms of media content were introduced on mobile phones.The mobile media
content includes over 8 billion dollars worth of mobile music (ringing tones, ring
back tones, true tones, MP3 files, karaoke, music videos, music streaming services,
etc); over 5 billion dollars worth of mobile gaming and various news, entertainment
and advertising services. In Japan mobile phone books are so popular that five of
the ten best-selling printed books were originally released as mobile phone books.
Similar to the internet, mobile is also an interactive media, but has a far wider
reach. Like email on the internet, the top application on mobile is also a personal
messaging service, and SMS text messaging is used by over 2.4 billion people.
Practically all internet services and applications exist or have similar cousins on
mobile, from search to multiplayer games to virtual worlds to blogs. Mobile has
several unique benefits which many mobile media pundits claim, make mobile a
more powerful media than either TV or the internet, starting with mobile being
permanently carried and always connected. Mobile has the best audience accuracy
and is the only mass media with a built-in payment channel available to every user
without any credit cards or PayPal accounts or even an age limit. With the inclusion
of various aps like Whatsapp or Wechat the mobile is perhaps the most popular
medium of mass communication.
“The effects of communication are many and diverse. They may be short- range or
long run. They may be manifest or latent. They may be strong or weak. They may
derive from any number of aspects of the communication content. They may be
considered as psychological or political or economic or sociological. They may
operate upon opinions, values, information levels, skills, taste, or over behaviour.”
The growth of mass communication has made it possible for us to get far more
information today than any time before. Information is indispensable in a complex,
advanced society. We are an information-hungry society; we need an ever-increasing
amount of facts in order to maintain and enhance our standard of living. We have
often been told that information is power. The question is, what do we have to do to
ensure that the information we receive from the mass media will serve our needs,
not the purpose of someone else?
We shall now discuss the situation of mass media in India and describe the possible
impact of each one of these media- print journalism, radio, film, TV, video, cable
and satellite TV. India, towards the end of the 20th century, still largely remained an
oral society. We spent more time communicating interpersonally rather than through
the channels of mass communication. The situation in the West was different. There,
an average person daily spends at least six hours “consuming” mass media products,
mainly TV, radio, film and newspapers.
However, the situation has changed drastically now. The developments on the mass
media scene in India which we have described above are having an intense impact
on the society. The behaviour, thinking, and expectations of people everywhere
have been altered and will be molded even more extensively as the full influence of
the information flood is felt. It is claimed that this proliferation of information and
the swiftness of its distribution would certainly improve the human condition.
However, along with the positive values it fosters, the communication explosion
has created areas of danger that must be recognized and controlled.
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Manipulation: Perversion of truth by electronic trickery is a major concern today
.Clever users of electronic devices can alter the meaning of recorded visual and
audio material, making it appear to be what it really isn’t.
Privacy: There have been innumerable complaints about the invasion of privacy.
The whole question of co-relating the right to privacy with public interest has become
a big problem for policy planners and social scientists alike.
Isolation: While the communication revolution has the power to draw the global
community closer together, simultaneously, it also isolates individuals and small
groups, Instead of mingling with crowds at movie theaters, couples and families
stay home to watch television and video on their TV screens. Both adults and children
sit for hours, aware only of what appears on the small screen. Often they seem
visually drugged, almost bewitched. A growing number of workers do their jobs at
home, linked to their offices by personal computer. This isolation from comrades,
this loss of the group dynamics, has forced some intense media users to seek
psychiatric help. The negative influence of such aloneness of a large number of
people has still not become a big problem in our country, but we are definitely
heading there. This can be seen across cities where groups of people are sitting
together, yet are busy with their laptops or mobile phones rather than interacting
with each other.
The impact of the press can be judged only in the perspectives of current
developments and pace of change in the country. Despite its predominantly urban
and middle class moorings, the press has done a reasonably good job in highlighting
the issues of poverty, corruption and unemployment, and has given the ruling class
a sense of guilt. The power of the press is also seen to be mainly responsible for the
major political developments in India. The capacity of the Indian press to generate
a healthy debate on public issues has been only partially realized. But with increasing
literacy, it holds infinite possibilities in the future.
Barring a few instances of blatantly biased reporting, the Indian press has, by and
large, shown a high degree of social responsibility.. However, we must add that
with increasing competition, the press is increasingly being used as the battleground
for political and corporate warfare. This has inevitably led to an invasion of privacy,
smearing of reputations and even practicing of deception.
Television is one of the greatest inventions of man. It has an edge over other forms
of mass media like radio and newspapers. It is multi-media system predominated
by the visual medium. There is an urgent need for mass education and it has been
accepted that communication media are needed for accelerating social change, for
creating awareness and for inculcating scientific temper among the masses. TV has
the power to instill desired attitudes (necessary for national development) among
the masses. It has greater influence than any other medium on the perception,
emotions and the outlook of the masses.
TV can transport the viewers to the actual scene of action to see things as they
happen. But many have also come to hold TV responsible for inciting violence
corrupting the young and creating a make belief world of illusion to keep us away
from the realities of life. But if TV can distract and distort, it can also instruct and
inspire. As an instant medium, TV is ideal for news presentation. TV news gives
the audience a sense of excitement and involvement that cannot be matched by any
other medium.
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2.6 IMPACT OF FILMS Communication
In India, with its cultural and linguistic diversities and the problems of illiteracy,
films are the most powerful medium of mass communication. With its universal
language, films can, to a considerable extent, cut across cultural and linguistic
barriers.
Films carry not only information but they can even create a yearning for change and
modernization. By dexterously employing the mechanical tricks of photography
and camera angles, by exploiting the ingenious use of close-ups, by building up of
suspense and illusion, and by weaving human elements and story in appropriate
sequences, films can create social awareness and even arouse strong emotions.
Films can inform, inspire and express feelings and emotions most dramatically
with lasting impact.
A film calls for creative collaboration between the filmmaker and other performing
and visual artists. Films fired the imagination of people by the closing years of the
nineteenth century. By the twenties, films came to be recognised as an art from, a
distinct mode of creative expression. They also earned universal acclaim as a versatile
means of communication. Films came to be produced on all subjects of human
interest and include, feature films, documentaries and newsreels.
The Indian film industry remains a paradox in many ways; India has entered the
21st century with the largest number of illiterates in the world. Therefore, there is an
urgent need to have proper communication among these illiterate people. Films in
many ways meet this need. Because the only meaningful access to audio-visual
entertainment for the poor people is films, which are extremely popular among the
masses. And the Indian film industry continues to be the world’s largest producer of
films, releasing on an average 750 films every year in 16 languages.
Indian films followed the Hollywood model right from the start with heavy emphasis
on entertainment. But individual filmmakers broke away from the mainstream, and
made socially purposeful films, even in the thirties.
The internet is so popular nowadays that almost everyone uses it. It is accessible by
almost any person who tries to connect to one of its central, main networks. Moreover,
it can be accessed by users of any age and condition. But what are the positive and
negative aspects of the internet? The Internet has some great positive effects. For
instance, Internet search engines are the best information retrieval systems available.
They bring any kind of information for internet users, from local restaurants to
international news. The Internet also provides some of the most effective means of
communication among people, including online emailing and instant messaging.
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For instance, hurricane, storms and accidents can be tracked through the internet.
The internet has allowed the interchange of ideas and materials among scientists,
university professors, and students, in addition to providing servers, resource centers
and online tools for their research and scholarly activities. Moreover, millions of
books, journals and other material are available through the internet because of the
digitization of public domain material from libraries. This action enables people to
learn all sorts of new things.
However, the internet can also have certain negative effects. For instance illegal or
inappropriate materials can be found on the internet. One can also illegally download
music or other copyrighted material for free. This action has had a negative impact
on the music industry and has led to several lawsuits. The addiction to online social
networks can disturb a person’s way of living and professional activity. Some
criminals use the internet for spreading computer viruses or even intercepting credit
card or bank details for wrong purposes.
You will be reading more about the internet and all the new technologies available
to us these days in Block 4 of this course.
To conclude we can say that the bulk of the print, electronic, and film media does
not consciously try to shape society, although a small minority of them vigorously
and openly pleads causes dear to them. The media as a whole are concerned with
reporting and interpreting society’s conduct (information and education angles); by
presenting material that pleases audiences and earns profit (entertainment angle);
and with marketing goods and services through advertising to make a profit for
themselves (commercial angle).
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Communication UNIT 3 CHARACTERISTICS OF DIFFERENT
MASS MEDIA
Structure
3.0 Objectives
3.1 Introduction
3.2 Print Media: Genesis and Characteristics
3.3 New Trends in Print Media
3.3.1 Commercialization
3.3.2 New Printing Technologies
3.3.3 Need for Content Revolution
3.3.4 Professional Suffocation
3.4 Electronic Media
3.5 Characteristics of Radio
3.6 Television: Genesis and Characteristics
3.6.1 Characteristics of Television
3.7 Characteristics of Film
3.8 Internet or Cyber Media
3.8.1 Blogs (Web Logs)
3.8.2 World Wide Web
3.9 Let Us Sum Up
3.10 Answers to Check Your Progress
3.0 OBJECTIVES
Through this Unit our aim is to tell you in details about the genesis and major
characteristics of the four major media of Mass communication i.e. print, radio, TV
Films. We also aim to very briefly touch upon internet or cyber media. This will be
taken up in greater detail in Block 4 of this course.
By the end of this unit you should be able to:
• describe the current status of the print media in India
• become more sensitive as a listener of radio, as a viewer of TV, and of film in
a cinema theatre
• describe the unique process of communication of radio, TV and film and
• identify the unique psychology of reception of the audiences of radio, TV and
film.
3.1 INTRODUCTION
You would recall that among the various functions of mass media, the four primary
ones are (1) to inform (2) to entertain (3) to educate, and (4) to promote culture,
goods and ideas. These functions overlap at times. Each medium tends to emphasize
one of these more than the others. The print media tends to emphasize information
whereas the focus of broadcast and film media is on entertainment. Advertising is
the most blatant form of persuasion, but much of the persuasion in mass media is
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furnishing a record of events and by noting changes in the social structure.
The principal technological advances which have accounted for this growth in the
domain of the print media are computerization and automation in typesetting, image
manipulation of word processing, multi-colour scanning, processing and offset
printing. Some other sophisticated printing technologies have followed in quick
succession.
By 1989, India had become one of the ten largest publishers of newspapers and the
third biggest producer of books in English. In terms of numbers, our country produced
27,054 newspapers of, which 2,538 were dailies, 144 tri/bi-weeklies, 8,353 weeklies
and 16,019 other periodicals which included fortnightlies, monthlies, etc.
Today, newspapers are published from all the States and union Territories. Uttar
Pradesh claims the top position with 3,711 newspapers, followed by Delhi (3,565),
Maharashtra (3,137) and West Bengal (2,684). Others in descending order are
Rajasthan (1,735), Tamil Nadu (1,551), Madhya Pradesh (1,534), Andhra Pradesh
(1,399), Karnataka (1,381), Kerala (1,291) and Bihar (1,190).
True to the linguistic diversity of our country, newspapers are brought out in 93
languages and dialects, including some foreign languages. Among the 16 principal
languages. Hindi claims the largest number (20,589), followed by English (7,596),
Bengali (2,741), Urdu (2,906), Marathi (2,943), Tamil (2,119), Gujarati (2,215),
Kannada (1,816), Telugu (1289), and Malayalam (1,505).
The English newspapers enjoyed hegemony in the British period but after the
declaration of Hindi as the national language after independence, the ascendancy
of English was lost. The Hindi newspapers surpassed both in terms of number and
circulation. The other language newspapers also recorded significant progress. The
phenomenon is called a silent revolution in Indian journalism.
One of the chief characteristics of print media is that they offer extensive news
coverage and in-depth treatment of themes. They provide a larger variety of coverage,
through different kinds of writings, than any other media in India. There are plenty
of backgrounders, field based interviews, spot inquiries and feedback interviews,
and incisive comments. Besides special articles, syndicated reports, and features,
there are special sections for sports and business. Then there are review columns
for books, films, media, and art. For those seeking light reading material, there is a
great variety of humour, fun, comics, and satire. The main weakness of the print
media is that they can be read only by the literates and their number is still small in
our country. Secondly, 93 percent of the newspapers are concentrated in urban areas.
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a large number of our people from purchasing them.
The electronic media, especially TV, are dominating in the United States and other
Western countries by providing instantaneous news and entertainment. In India,
however, the print media still enjoys greater credibility and social respectability
than any other media. The reasons are obvious.
The print media have an added advantage and convenience in using them. People
can read newspapers and magazines wherever and whenever it is convenient for
them “ at home, in transit, in office or back at home in the evening. That is not
possible in the case of electronic media, for they are time scheduled. If one fails to
see a programme on TV at a given time, one misses it forever unless the programme
is recorded. The old issues of printed media can be easily preserved in the libraries.
The actual number of repeated readers of the magazines and periodicals is more for
they change hands at the magazine parlours as also among the subscribers. In our
country, interestingly, even the old issues of newspapers and magazines are saleable
at a discounted price.
3.3.1 Commercialization
The national newspapers, during the British period, functioned primarily with a
missionary zeal and acted as the voice of the freedom fighters and stimulated the
movement through advocacy journalism. They underwent a significant change after
Independence. Having successfully helped the nation to win freedom, the missionary
zeal of the newspapers evaporated. Journalism in India, like elsewhere, had already
become a publishing industry. The cost of production and distribution was increasing
fast in India; so were the wages of journalists and others engaged in newspaper
production. The competition too was growing. Although the two Press Commissions
stressed “public utility service” as the main attribute of a good press, they did not
completely sidetrack the financial aspect because without financial viability freedom
is not possible. The theory of de-linking of the press from business houses engaged
in other industries, was not accepted by the newspaper magnates.
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The copies of newspapers, you read at home, are now elegantly printed, bearing Characteristics of Different
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creative typographical and layout designs. In fact printing today has become a graphic
art. Whether you are browsing through The Times of India, Saptahik Hindustan,
India Today, Swagar or Nai Duniya it is a pleasing exercise to the eyes.
The newspapers at the stalls today are nearly as tantalizing as the glittering magazines.
There are elegantly produced morning papers accompanied by colourful supplements
on fixed days, especially on Saturdays and Sundays. The seductive tabloids called
the ‘eveningers’, both in English and Indian languages, have flooded the metropolitan
towns. The lure of their catchy titles and big size pictures, along with the ever-
present sparkling magazines, has so far enabled the print media to hold well in
competition with the electronic media.
Till the close of the 19th century, the stage provided a form for mass contact. The
stage was (and is) a live medium, with live performers, with speakers and actors
confronting live audiences. There was an instant feedback in the case of stage
communication because of the continuous interaction between the performers and
their audiences. But the size of audience was small, at best, a few thousand people.
In 1896 came films, in which the performance was caught by camera and preserved
on celluloid. It could be shown again and again, without any variation (which is not
possible in the stage medium), to different audiences. So, films could reach vast
masses. Till 1927, it was the era of the silent film. In 1927, sound was added to the
film and we got talking films or talkies. In India, the first talkie was released in
1931.
The 1920s witnessed the coming of radio broadcasting in many countries, including
India. Just as lack of ears was a limitation and a challenge for the silent film, lack of
eyes was a limitation and a challenge for the radio. But both film and radio converted
the challenge into an opportunity. That was accomplished through creative
imagination of talented men.
In the 1930s, the television made its bow in the west. Its true development took
place after the Second World War. In India, the new glamour medium came in
1959. Today, TV pervades the life of people in most nations. It has become a very
powerful medium of information, education and entertainment. Like films and the
radio, TV has its unique process of communication and psychology of reception.
All the three media (like the stage medium) have their relevance and utility.
Radio and TV are called electronic media because they are electronically operated.
Today, they are the supreme media of mass communication, leaving the other media
far behind. No other medium can reach hundreds of thousands of people with such
speed as the broadcast media of radio and TV can.
a) A Medium of Sound
It is an exclusive medium of sound. It is an aural or auditory medium, a medium
of the ear. There are three elements of a radio broadcast. They are the spoken
word, music and sound effects. They are all sounds carried on the air waves to
the listener. To be acceptable, all these sounds must be pleasant and expressive
for the ears of the listener. They must be artistically integrated or mixed to
provoke the imagination of the listener.
b) A Medium of Voice
Radio is a medium of the voice. The performer can use only his voice in a
broadcast. The producer mixes his voice with music and sound effects. But it
does not mean that a broadcaster, say, an actor, has only to learn a few tricks of
the voice. An actor, using only vocal tricks, would soon start sounding fake or
untruthful to the listener. A radio listener has a highly developed ear or sound
sense. It has been correctly said that an actor or any other performer must
broadcast with his mind. An actor, for radio, must express all the emotions
through his voice alone — the torture of the soul, the pleasure, the laughter
and so on. He is not wearing any costume or make-up; there is no scenery or
properties. Neither he nor his co-actors are seen by the listener. So he must
imaginatively give cues or intimations only through his voice. This he will be
able to do only if he mentally gets under the skin of his character and dialogues
or speeches.
c) An Intimate Medium
Radio is an intimate medium. The broadcaster must imagine that the listeners
are sitting by his side, shoulder to shoulder. To the listeners, it sounds as if the
broadcaster is speaking from within the sound box, the radio set or the transistor
as if the broadcaster and the listeners are made for each other, as if the
broadcaster is broadcasting for each listener individually.
Because the radio is an intimate medium, the best subjects for radio broadcasts
are those which intimately concern the listeners like the personal, the private
and family problems, family relations; the working of the soul, the innermost
feelings and intimate subjects are especially relevant to good radio drama. An
intimate style or acting is especially relevant to the radio. Words, which are
supreme or sovereign for the radio, too, must evoke intimate images on the
stage of the imagination of the listener. Silence or absence of words on the
radio is fatal. It is like an empty stage. Like the words, the manner of expressing
or articulating the words must also be intimate.
So, the rule of the oil industry applies here: if you cannot drill in the first two
minutes, stop boring. So, the text of the broadcast, a talk, a discussion, a
documentary, a feature, a document-feature, a document-drama, etc. must get
into the subject informally, intimately and interestingly right at the start.
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Radio is a mobile medium. You can have it at home, take it to a picnic resort,
listen to it while driving, and have it on land or in the sea, in public or in
private. So, it is a most convenient medium for anybody. It can accompany
you and entertain you anywhere.
It does not respect unities of time, place and action as prescribed by Aristotle,
more than two thousand years ago, for dramatic communication. Stage drama
may, even now, respect these unities because of the obvious limitations of the
stage medium. But radio drama, which is drama of the mind, may hop from
any period or place to any other period or place.
The BBC, on 2 November 1936, initiated the first regular television service in the
world. In May 1937, the BBC televised the Coronation. A couple of month’s later
television cameras went to Wimbledon for the first time. The World War II resulted
in six years interruption and TV broadcasting was resumed only in 1946. The United
States launched the World’s first regular colour broadcasts in 1953. By 1955, the
“Eurovision networks” were established linking the West European nations.
The General Conference of UNESCO, which was hosted by India in New Delhi in
1956, made a provision of $20,000 to setup a pilot project to study the use of TV as
a medium of education, rural uplift and community development. Television was
introduced in India in 1959.
‘Krishi Darshan’ for rural viewers was inaugurated on January 26, 1967, by the
then Prime Minister, Mrs. Indira Gandhi. It was telecast on Wednesdays and Fridays
for 20 minutes each day, and served 80 villages around Delhi provided with
community sets. This pilot project was initiated by the Department of Atomic Energy,
in collaboration with the Ministry of Information and Broadcasting, All India Radio,
the Indian Agricultural Research Institute and the Delhi Administration. From July
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broadcast on Mondays.
Cable Television: With the sudden and spectacular growth of satellite and cable
television network since 1991, the most dramatic revolution on the TV screen got
underway, when India ended decades of isolation from the rest of the world. Cable
Television promised multiple channels and multiple choices for the viewer. Its
introduction had profound effects on the broadcasting situation. Liberalization of
airwaves has resulted in a proliferation of satellite channels in India.
a) An Audio-Visual Medium
TV is an audio-visual but predominantly visual, proportionately much more
visual than audio. A TV broadcast is conceived and produced and received in
audio-visual terms. A TV broadcast directly affects two senses simultaneously,
those of hearing and seeing. It is more effective than the radio broadcast. Radio
is a uni-sense medium, affecting only one sense,i.e. hearing. TV broadcasts
can have greater effect or influence on the receiver of the broadcast, called the
viewer. The potential of TV to have greater effect or impact is because,
according to psychologists, the eye absorbs much more than the ear in the
same time. The eyes also retain the seen image much longer than the ears can.
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TV is a glamour medium. You can watch glittering personalities and events,
international conferences, sports meets and festivals, fashion shows and
banquets, travel shows and interviews with world leaders, bold and beautiful
personalities as well as rich and famous people. The great convenience of
watching all this, sitting at home, adds to its glamour. Because of its glamour,
TV has also been called the magic box. All sorts of people all sorts of times,
almost magically, seem to be appearing on the screen from within the box. It
has also been called a toy, a toy with which adults get fascinated, like the
child’s toy which fascinates the child. Incidentally, some critics have also called
it an idiot box. Very few can resist the glamour and magic of T.V. It has a habit
of attracting people to the point of addiction. Tele-addiction, in fact, has become
the greatest addiction of our times, for most people.
f) A Democratizing Medium
It is a democratizing medium. It is available to all people. Since it is a medium
of mass communication, it has to deal with the problems of all sections of the
society and democratize information and informal education, reaching out to
one and all to democratize literature by discussing it in broadcasts or by
telecasting its dramatic version. Even those who have not read literature or are
illiterate or semi-literate come to know of it. Since TV, a mass medium, has to
cater to all sections of the society, it is not uniformly very artistic. Highly
artistic things might go over the heads of the common viewer. As against TV,
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Only those people go to the theatres that are ready to pay for the show. Theatres
like Broadway have select audiences who are ready to pay for artistic
productions as against commercial productions which can not choose their
viewers. And TV does not charge ticket money for entry into shows. So, most
TV programmes are for the common people.
g) A Medium of Immediacy
TV is a medium of immediacy. It captures the events even as they are happening
much before the newspaper comes out with information on events next morning.
Yesterday’s news is no news on TV. It will make TV look outdated. TV is a
super reporter. In audio-visual terms, it reports the events “here and now”.
Remember how the CNN or BBC report minute-by-minute Presidential election
results or the Olympics or even wars and insurgencies.
h) Advertiser’s Influence
TV is the great salesman of modern times. The businessman sells his products
through TV. This medium is much more effective for him to reach out to a vast
number of potential and actual customers than the newspaper hoardings. TV
advertisements or programmes sponsored by business persons can reach tens
of millions of people. No newspaper can ever dream of reaching out to such
large numbers.
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a) A Mass Medium
Film is a medium of mass communication. Millions of cine-goers watch the
movie in a country. The same movie may be seen by a very large number of
people in several countries (like Richard Attenborough’s Gandhi). Although
in a cinema hall only a few hundred people can watch a film at one time, it can
be shown in many cities, towns and villages at the same time. Any number of
copies can be made of the film for screening. Today, a film can also be
transferred from the celluloid to the CD. The CD can be played at home through
the CD player or DVD. The cable operators can transmit the film on to the TV
sets of a large number of their customers at the same time. So, a film can reach
out to a very large number of people.
b) Mechanically Reproducible
Film is a mechanically reproducible medium. So it can be preserved. It can be
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describes the political social, economic and cultural scene of a country. It
describes the customs, fashions and attitudes of people at a particular time. It
also throws light on the style of acting, music, dance, and direction, etc. of the
times.
Films can be watched and understood even by illiterate people. They may not
have the fortune to go to books for information to enrich their personalities.
But they can understand and entertain themselves with films.
c) A Collaborative Medium
Film is a collaborative medium. So many people collaborate to make the film
and to send it out to the people. The producer, director, writer, actor, art director,
music director, dance director, fight director, light-man, costume-man, make-
up man, scene designer, sound man, cameraman, clapper boy etc. work together
to make a film. After a film has been made, the financer, the distributor, the
exhibitor, and others work together, to make it available to the common people.
No other medium depends so much on so many people.
The director, with his artistic and technical skill, can make a good film out of
a bad script. A bad director, similarly, can kill a good script. A good director
can, by using several devices like different camera angles, editing, re-recording,
reprocessing in the laboratory, make an average performance look great on
the screen. In the cinema, camera is very important, next only to the director.
But it is the director who ultimately gives orders to the camera too.
d) An Art Medium
Film, today, has become an art medium. It was during the last couple of decades
that cinema has come to be considered as an art form. In the beginning it was
considered a medium only of cheap entertainment, even of escaping from the
harsh realties of life into the world of fantasy and dream for two to three
hours. In our times, intellectuals and serious thinkers have associated
themselves with cinema. Today, cinema is considered the seventh art like the
earlier arts of painting, sculpture, architecture, drama, poetry and music. In
fact the famous film maker Satyajit Ray made a passionate plea to introduce
cinema as an art discipline at the universities. It should be studied by serious
scholars and developed further. It should not be treated as a sub-culture and
only as an entertainment medium. That is how it was treated in the earlier
years in India and elsewhere.
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The conditions under which a film is screened and is received by the cinegoers
in a cinema house, demand concentration of different sections of society, sitting
together in the same hall and constituting the audience. All these people tend
to be unified, so to speak. Everybody’s motive is the same, to watch the film.
The images, the words, the music, the sound effects are skillfully integrated.
For the audience, the integrated whole or the film becomes a total experience.
This demands great concentration from the audience. Sitting in the dark silence
of the hall, the audience is mysteriously affected by how the story and scenes
are presented. In a very indirect way, the director communicates his or the
camera’s point of view.
Through keyword-driven Internet research using search engines like Yahoo! and
Google, millions of people worldwide have easy, instant access to a vast and diverse
amount of online information. Compared to encyclopedias and traditional libraries,
the World Wide Web has enabled a sudden and extreme decentralization of
information and data.
Using the Web is also easier than ever before for individuals and organisations to
publish ideas and information to an extremely large audience. Anyone can find
ways to publish a web page or build a website for very little initial cost. Publishing
and maintaining large, professional websites full of attractive, diverse and up-to-
date information is still a difficult and expensive proposition, however.
Advertising on popular web pages can be lucrative, and e-commerce or the sale of
products and services directly via the Web continues to grow.
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Communication UNIT 4 WRITING FOR MASS MEDIA
Structure
4.0 Objectives
4.1 Introduction
4.2 Writing for Print
4.2.1 The Inverted Pyramid
4.2.2 The Lead Paragraph
4.2.3 Developing the Story
4.3 Writing for Broadcast
4.4 Writing for Television
4.5 Writing for the Web
4.6 Let Us Sum Up
4.7 Answers to Check Your Progress
4.0 OBJECTIVES
Our aim through this Unit is to familiarize you with the basic rules for writing for
the various media. Our aim will also be to show you how writing for one particular
medium differs from writing for another media. After reading this unit, you should
be able to:
• discuss how drafting news for radio differs from drafting news for a newspaper,
• distinguish between the news in the print media (newspapers) and television
news, and
• discuss the techniques of television news reporting as well as know the rules
for writing for the web.
4.1 INTRODUCTION
This chapter attempts to introduce you to the concept of “style” and what it means
to those who work in the mass media. Conforming to the rules and conventions of
the medium in which you are working is the mark of a true professional. Strict
adherence to the details of style shows that you care about what you write. Writing
for the mass media differs from other forms of writing in several aspects:
Subject matter: Writers for the mass media must take on a wide variety of subjects,
including news stories, feature stories, advertisements, letters, editorials and so on.
Purpose: Writing for the mass media has three major purposes: to inform, to entertain
and to persuade.
Audience: Mass media writing is often directed to a wide audience and this fact
dictates not only the subject matter but the way in which something is written.
Circumstances of writing: Writing for the mass media often takes place in the
presence of others who are doing the same thing. The writing is frequently done
under the pressures of deadlines and many times several people will have a hand in
writing and editing a particular item for the mass media.
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4.2 WRITING FOR PRINT
Writers for the mass media always work at two tasks: gathering information and
putting that information into an acceptable form. Having the proper information –
all the relevant facts of a story, the proper identification for the people involved, the
time and the dates, accurate direct quotations, etc. – is vital to the writing process,
but it is only the beginning. There comes a time when the information gathering
must cease and the writing must begin.
The ability to write well requires that the writer has a thorough knowledge and
understanding of the subject about which he or she is writing. In addition, the writer
must understand the basic structure of the news story and the conventions or customs
of news writing in order to complete the process.
Many forms of writing – or writing structures – populate the print media, but the
most common are the news story and the feature story. These forms are found in
newspapers, magazines, newsletters and many other publications. Mastering these
two forms will give the person beginning to write for the mass media, a good
foundation on which to build on, while learning to write in other forms and for
other media.
The most common structure for writing news stories is called the inverted pyramid.
The daily newspaper contains many stories. Most of the stories must be written so
that readers can get more information in less time. The inverted pyramid structure
concentrates on the most interesting and important information at the top of the
story so that readers can get the information they need or want and then go on to
another story if they choose. Headlines and leads should be written to describe
what the story contains as succinctly and as interestingly as possible.
If the lead paragraph is the most important part of the news story, the second
paragraph is the second most important part of the story. In some ways, it is almost
as important as the lead but for different reasons. A lead paragraph cannot contain
all of the information in a news story. If it is written well, it will inform the reader
but it will also raise certain questions in the reader’s mind about the story. The real
strength of your story will come from the details that back up the promise of the
lead. This is the background material, the examples and quotes, the things you have
observed, the explanations and definitions and the sense of history. These parts
lend meaning and significance to the event or person you are writing about.
Information not explanation: Broadcasters look for stories that do not need a lot
of explanation in order for listeners or viewers to understand them. They prefer
stories that are simple and can be told in a straightforward manner. In some larger
markets, radio reporters are being told to reduce their story lengths to ten seconds
and actualities to five seconds. That amount of time is not enough to explain a
complex story in detail. It is enough time to give the listener a few pertinent facts.
Of course, some stories are complex and important and explanation cannot be
avoided. These are the ones the broadcaster must wrestle with and it takes practice
and talent to condense these stories to their essence.
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The news on the radio moves fast without the facility of recall which is possible, in
the case of newspapers. Therefore, whatever is written must be clear, precise and to
the point. Sentences should be short and direct without sub clauses. Brevity is
essential as a minute of broadcast time can take about 100 words, thus giving an
editor the choice of about 1000 to 1100 words (in a 10-minute news bulletin) to
cover world, national and regional news. There is a great constraint of space in
radio, hence broadcast news must be big and important and should be put in crisp
and easily understood language. Ceremonial items or didactic speeches distract the
attention of the listener who can always switch off or change over to some other
programme.
There should be no need for a dictionary while listening to a radio bulletin. It should
be in words which are common in everyday speech. For example, “The work has
started” and not “the work has commenced”. “The play has ended” and not
“terminated”. We should acquaint ourselves with the elements of quality radio scripts.
Their success rests entirely on the right combination of words and sounds in the
narration/commentary. The shorter your sentences and crisper your narration, the
greater will be the commentary’s impact. While padding has to be avoided at all
costs, repetition of the main points is permitted and may even be necessary. This
you can do towards the end of the programme in the form of a summary. This is to
ensure that all the points that you want your listeners to remember are, in fact,
briefly expressed again.
Be Completely Natural
You read aloud your narration/script/commentary as you write, if it is not off- the-
cuff broadcast, e.g., running commentary. If it sounds natural, as if you were talking,
you are on the right line. If on the other hand, it sounds like formal written language,
you will immediately know you are off-the-track. Get your friends and well-wishers
to help you with their reactions. This tried and tested method will provide an immense
help to you in improving your performance. The broadcaster’s language is indeed
easy to understand because only the simplest possible terms are used. It is important
to remember that the language be intelligible to the majority of the listeners. You
must know that one picturesque phrase will do more to arouse the listener’s interest
than a bunch of literary and idiomatic expressions.
a) Piece to Camera
Of all the skills needed for television news reporting, the piece to camera is
amongst the most frequently used. The piece to camera, which is essentially
in-vision, is recorded on location. It has three advantages: it immediately
establishes the reporter’s presence on the spot, it is extremely simple to execute
and it is fast enough to be considered a kind of contingency sample. These
stand-ups are written on the scene, without the benefit of typewriters or the
other conveniences of the newsroom. Since the reporter looks straight into the
camera, the lines have to be memorized. Sometimes, the reporters read from a
note-book or a clip-board after ensuring the opening paragraph. Most stand-
ups are short – 10 to 20 seconds. On some occasions they run longer, especially
in complex stories that require a lot of explaining, but do not offer many visuals.
A stand-up can also be used in the middle of a story to “bridge” two other
sections of the report. Bridges work especially well when the report
demonstrates something.
b) Studio Spots
While the piece to camera is an in-vision news presentation by the reporter
recorded on location, the studio spot is a news item read in the studio by
someone other than the programme’s main presenter, as additional information
to the visuals. Usually, it is a special correspondent or a reporter who is called
upon to draw together the elements of a news story with or without the aid of
videotape or illustration.
Because television news is a team effort involving many persons, the chances
of human error are great in a studio set-up, particularly as an ‘on-air’ situation.
There are some simple rules that the on-camera studio reporter/ correspondent
should follow. These are
i) Maintain self-control. Expect problems and be prepared to cope with
them;
ii) Always prepare file copy. If film or video tape fails to come up, have the
file copy close at hand, to carry on the show;
iii) Be familiar with studio cue-signals.
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Introduction to Mass
Communication Check Your Progress 2
Note: a) Space given below the question is for writing your answer.
b) Check your answer with the one given at the end of this unit.
i) How is television more effective than other media of Mass
Communication?
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Is there something different about writing for the web or is it just writing as we have
always done it, but now for an electronic form? Unlike any other medium, the web
is so egalitarian that the rules or conventions of writing have not yet been established
or institutionalized. Consequently, we can make only a few observations about the
directions in which the web and its content seem to be heading. Writing for the web
does not demand much more than writing for any other medium demands. Some of
the rules to be followed could possibly be:
Sensitivity to the needs and expectations of the audience; Mastery by the writer of
the subject about which he or she is writing; the ability to meet deadlines, and
clarity of expression, and precision and efficiency in the use of the language
All of these demands are common to any form of writing, whether for a book,
newspaper or broadcast, and the web is no exception. Much of the writing that you
find on the Internet looks and reads exactly like the writing that you would find in
other media. In fact, many organizations use the web to display reports and other
materials that have originally appeared in some traditional form.
Still, there is a type of writing on the web that is almost peculiarly its own. That
type of writing has its base in a concept called hypertext. Prose writing is linear,
that is, you begin at the beginning and read through to the end. That’s the way the
writer intended to write and most readers follow that pattern. Hypertext is non-
linear. The text is broken into bits and structured so that a reader can begin at any
number of points and decide which sequence suits his or her purpose. Writing for a
hypertext structure has profound implications for a writer.
Another demand on writers using the hypertext structure is the ability to write
headlines, subheads and summaries. Writing headlines and subheads for the web is
far less restrictive than writing them for newspaper or magazines in terms of making
them fit into a certain space.
Web writers are likely to have many more options and fewer typographical rules
than the headlines writer for newspapers. But their abilities to summarize, whether
in headline, subhead or summary form, will be severely tested, just as they are in
traditional media. Summaries demand precise and concise use of the language.
They also demand that the writer understand the material being summarized so
well that he or she can do it accurately. Summarizing is a skill that is essential to the
web writer.
Another characteristic of the web is the integration of graphics and text. The best
websites are built around graphical elements because from a reader’s point of view,
websites are visual before they are textual. Graphics, then, are a vital part of web
production and people who are involved in this medium must be fluent in the use of
both graphics and text. With proper study and practice, anyone can become a better
writer. Writing is not simply an inherent talent that some people have and others do
not. There are steps that each of us can take to improve our writing. Writing is a
process. That is, the rules, techniques must be mixed in with the individual’s style,
thoughts and methods and with the subject and form of the writing. They all should
work together to produce writing that is good. Writing requires discipline. Most
people give up writing as soon as they can because it is such hard work. It is
physically, mentally and emotionally demanding. The person who commits to writing
must marshal all of his or her resources for the task. Writing is building. Good
writing doesn’t happen all at once. It is formed, word by word, sentence by sentence
and thought by thought. The writing process is often slow, tedious and frustrating.
But the product of this process of good writing is well worth the effort.
Finally, reading good writing is the next step. If you are interested in learning to
write well, in any form, you should read as much as possible— newspapers,
magazines, books, and anything else you can get your hands on. Then there is the
writing itself, one has to “sit down and write.” That is the only way to become a
good writer.
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Introduction to Mass
Communication 4.7 ANSWERS TO CHECK YOUR PROGRESS
Check Your Progress 1
i) Language for radio broadcasts should be simple and sentences should be short
and crisp.
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Media and Communication Skills
Indira Gandhi
National Open University
School of Humanities
Block
2
ADVERTISEMENTS
Block Introduction 3
UNIT 1
Types of Advertising 5
UNIT 2
Public Service Advertisements 19
UNIT 3
TV Ads and Story Boards 32
UNIT 4
Ethics in Advertising 46
INTRODUCTION TO BLOCK 2:
ADVERTISEMENTS
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Types of Advertising
UNIT 1 TYPES OF ADVERTISING
Structure
1.0 Objectives
1.1 Introduction
1.2 Advertising
1.2.1 What is an Advertisement?
1.2.2 Who Advertises?
1.2.3 The Best Medium
1.2.4 Types of Advertising
1.3 Headlines in Advertisements
1.4 Direct Mail Advertising
1.4.1 Leaflets and Letters
1.4.2 Folders and Brochures
1.5 Idea Advertisements or PSAs
1.6 Let Us Sum Up
1.7 Answers to Check Your Progress
1.0 OBJECTIVES
In this unit we shall introduce you to a powerful mode of mass communication,
namely advertising. Here we shall be chiefly concerned with advertising as it appears
in the print media such as newspapers and magazines. We shall also give you a
chance to look at a number of advertisements as well as talk about direct mail
advertising.
After reading this unit, you will be able to judge the:
• objectives of advertising;
• types of advertising;
• social and economic significance of advertising;
• language used in advertising; and
• merits of direct mail advertising.
1.1 INTRODUCTION
If you are looking for a suitable small apartment in a big city like Delhi or Chennai,
what do you do first? Perhaps you go to your friends and colleagues for help, who
in turn ask around, talk to apartment owners and finally fix you up in a cozy corner.
But what do you do if this strategy doesn’t work? You may think of the advertisement
column in the daily newspaper. You look at various advertisements for houses
available on rent (the concerned column is entitled “Accommodation Available” or
“To-Let”); you make your choice and reach for the telephone or contact the advertiser
in other ways. With some good luck and the right kind of property owner, you do
find something to your satisfaction.
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Advertisements The help that the advertisement column provides is by no means confined to a
selection of houses; it also extends to other spheres of life--jobs, choice of a bride
or bridegroom, sale and purchase of property, business offers, consultancy, etc.
Depending upon your needs and requirements, you choose the appropriate item
and get in touch with the advertising party. Very often it works. It brings the advertiser
a potential customer, and it brings the customer the goods and services he requires.
You feel obliged to the whole business of advertising which, in this vast society
with its multiplicity of problems, comes to your rescue in your hour of need.
Advertisements may be short or long, clear or vague, in small or big boxes, spread
over half a page or a full page of the newspaper or the magazine. Why do so many
advertisements appear every day in newspapers? To whom are they addressed?
What colossal amounts of money are spent by advertisers as fees to get their items
published and why? These are important and interesting questions, and we shall
consider them in this unit.
1.2 ADVERTISING
Advertising is a powerful form of social and commercial communication through
any of the established mass media such as press, radio, television and film. It has
developed in modern times as a necessary accompaniment to commerce and industry
all over the world. In fact, it has become an industry in its own right. Consider the
large number of professional advertising agencies and the vast sums of money
involved in running them or utilizing their service.
Think of all the space advertisements occupy in the daily newspaper. Look at the
regularity, often irritating, with which advertisements appear on the TV screen.
You will begin to realize the magnitude of the advertising industry soon.
The product advertised may vary from matches and toothpaste to farm houses and
automobiles. The services may range from restaurants and laundries to foreign
tours. The ideas may be as simple as personal integrity and love-thy-neighbor themes,
or they may be issues that affect society at large, such as fire prevention, afforestation,
rehabilitation, of the old and disabled, traffic rules, drug abuse, crime control and
universalisation of elementary education. Whatever the product, service or idea
advertised, the advertisement seeks to point out its qualities so that it becomes
attractive to the group of consumers whom the advertiser wishes to influence.
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Types of Advertising
Check Your Progress 1
Note: a) Space given below the question is for writing your answer.
b) Check your answer with the one given at the end of this unit.
1) Define an advertisement, as you find it in print, in two or three sentences
of your own.
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Advertisements 1.2.3 The Best Medium
A number of advertising media are available, but it is difficult to say which one of
them is the single best medium for all advertisers. A medium may be good for one
advertiser but it may have its limitations for another.
Once again newspapers with their varied items of information and entertainment
come to mind. On account of their wide circulation, and the growing rate of literacy
among people, they are likely to reach the remotest corners of the country. Thus,
they seem to have the potential for acting as a good medium for most advertisers.
They have also the advantage of combining business with pleasure – advertisements
interspersed with news of what is going on in the world and the editor’s comments
and features of entertainment. An advertisement in a newspaper or a magazine
becomes part of the general reading matter. It is printed permanently. One can’t
ignore it. If one misses it in the morning, one may glance at it in the evening. And
lastly, depending upon the space the advertisement occupies, newspapers are by
and large the most economical medium for advertising and, therefore, are within
the easy reach of most advertisers.
Check Your Progress 2
Note: a) Space given below the question is for writing your answer.
b) Check your answer with the one given at the end of this unit.
1) State two reasons why newspapers can be the most suitable medium for
most advertisers.
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The other type of newspaper advertisement is the one which appears in bold letters
arranged in a box. It looks much more prominent than anything else on that page,
unless of course there are too many boxes of the same size. It also costs much more
than the routine 14 word small-type ad on the second page. There are some still
bigger than the box item and occupy half a page, even a full page, of the newspaper.
Let us now put advertisements in broad categories according to the messages they
convey. The following are a few categories:
i) Classified advertisements:
These are the ‘Want’ ads in newspapers. They are short statements set in very
small type. Some of them may be larger than others. They appear dull, but
they are the ones most sought after. When you complete your studies, you
would also want to look at them regularly in the daily paper. The message of
these advertisements is: Get in touch with me for what you want.
Letters
Like the leaflets, letters are also mailed or distributed to people by advertisers.
Carefully drafted and neatly printed, these letters are essentially informative in
nature. Their tone is polite and persuasive and the message is clearly and directly
presented.
Such letters are not mailed indiscriminately. The advertiser carefully chooses special
groups of recipients who may have a professional interest in the services offered.
Depending upon what is being offered, the language of some letters may be technical
or jargon-ridden while that of others may be similar to that of private communication.
Brochures
A brochure is a pamphlet or booklet which contains summarized or introductory
information about an institution and its programmes. The institution can be an
academic one like a college or university, or it can be a tourist organization which
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conducts individual or package tours in or outside the country, or it can be a Types of Advertising
consultancy office or any private or public undertaking. For instance, the Delhi
Development Authority (DDA) issues, from time to time, brochures about its
schemes of house-building and house allotment. So do all colleges, universities
and other academic and research organizations publicizing their work and
programmes.
The purpose of a brochure is to inform the people of the services organized by the
institution which prepares and releases it. In other words, it is advertising. But a
brochure is very different from a usual advertisement that appears in a newspaper
of a magazine. For one thing, it is far too big in size to be published in a newspaper;
for another, it is meant to be carefully studied, and may be more than once, for the
useful information it contains. A brochure is carefully prepared and clearly presented.
It is meant for wide circulation and large specialized readership. Its quality of
printing, which reflects the status and prestige of the institution, is usually of a high
order. It is difficult to come across an indifferently prepared brochure issued by a
prestigious organization.
A brochure is an advertisement in spirit though not in form. It advertises things and
ideas in the sense that it creates awareness among people by informing and educating
them, and also by inviting them to join the organization in carrying out its ideas and
programmes. A good brochure is an interesting piece of extended writing. Since a
brochure is like a very short book (booklet), it has a title, which is a substitute for a
headline in an advertisement. It may or may not contain pictures, but it must have
instructions at the end as to how the services offered can be utilized, the addresses
of officials to be contacted and their telephone numbers. By its very nature, a brochure
is a complete, though short, document on a given topic.
Advertisement 1
Are you forcing your child to smoke?
Every time you smoke, your loved ones are forced to breathe in the dangerous air
you breathe out.
Cigarette smoke contains over 100 deadly chemicals. These poisons slowly destroy
your family’s health, corroding the lungs, weakening the heart, and bringing on
heart attacks, paralytic strokes, and cancer of the throat, lungs, pancreas and bladder.
Stop smoking. After all, do you love cigarettes more than your family? Go for a
cancer check-up today, and follow it up once a year.
Indian Cancer Society
Early discovery, early recovery
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Advertisements (Times of India,21nd July, 2017.)
Advertisement 2
Don’t Waste Water
Save it
Here are some ways we can save water.
• Check your taps. : A slowly dripping water wastes
about 4 gallons of water a day.
• Close taps during shaving and brushing. : Use a mug instead.
• Sweep and mop floors. : Don’t wash the floors with
drinking water
• Hold back the hose. : Wash your car or scooter with a
sponge or a piece of cloth and a
bucket of soapy water.
• Wash vegetables and fruits in a bowl. : Avoid cleaning vegetables
under a running tap. It wastes
water unnecessarily.
• Public Hydrants. : Close the tap when it is not in
use.
Delhi Water Supply and Sewage Disposal Undertaking
(Times of India, 30 June, 2017.)
Advertisement 3
By the time you get to the fourth praragraph you’re hooked.
It begins as a lark. Someone, probably a friend, offers you an experience. It’s Smack.
You’re not too sure, but what the heck, you only live once. It’s pleasurable, you
discover, drowsy, dreamy. You do it again. But you’re not going to get hooked, you
resolve.
Of course you’re not getting hooked. You’re only getting to like it more and more.
Smack lulls you into a floating high. You may lose some friends, but so what?
You’ve now got a different gang. If college, work or games suffer, it’s okay, you’ll
get around to them.
You need more. The same pleasurable drowsiness needs more Smack. You’re listless.
Your mouth feels dry all the time. Your body feels warm all the time. You want
Smack all the time.
It’s too late . You crave for the stuff. If you can’t get it, your body gives way. You
vomit, shiver, sweat. There’s an excruciating pain in your bones. Your eyes and
your nose water all the time. It feels like a living death. You’re hooked, because it’s
time for a fix.
It’s like sliding quickly into quicksand. You sink deeper and deeper. Life is one fix
after the other. Somewhere along the line, you lost your parents, your family, your
friends. And what you thought was paradise, becomes a living hell. And the loneliness
hits you like a sledgehammer. It’s time for a fix.
You’re doing things you’d not even dreamt of doing earlier. Stealing money from
home, pawning valuables, borrowing. It’s that fix. You need it at any cost. Physically
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you’re a ghost of your former self. You have lost weight; your clothes hang on you. Types of Advertising
Your mind is screaming at you to have the will. But the voice gets fainter and
fainter…. It’s time for a fix.
Smack
It’s quicker than quicksand.
Stay away from drugs. It is never too late, to help yourself or to help someone
afflicted with Smack or any other drug addiction. Contact any of the de-addiction
centres for counseling and therapy. (Time of India, 16th June, 1017)
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Types of Advertising
UNIT 2 PUBLIC SERVICE
ADVERTISEMENTS
Structure
2.0 Objectives
2.1 Introduction
2.2 The Advertisement: Need and Function
2.2.1 Advertising Campaign
2.2.2 Advertising Classification
2.3 Public Service Announcements
2.3.1 What is PSA?
2.3.2 Difference between Commercial Advertisement and PSAs
2.3.3 Themes in PSA
2.3.4 Regular PSA
2.3.5 Current PSA
2.3.6 Public Service Announcements/Campaigns
2.3.7 Audience Research
2.4 Radio Advertisement vis-à-vis Press/TV Advertisements
2.5 Scripting the Advertisement
2.5.1 Target Audience
2.5.2 Creative Strategy
2.6 The Selling Approach
2.6.1 Appeal Strategy
2.6.2 Humour Strategy
2.6.3 Comparative Advertising as a Creative Strategy
2.6.4 Samples of Radio Advertisements
2.7 Let Us Sum Up
2.8 Answers to Check Your Progress
2.0 OBJECTIVES
After studying this unit, you will be able to:
• define advertisement and state its need and function;
• explain the two types of advertisements: commercial and public service;
• describe the different social themes taken up for public service campaigns;
• state the differences between radio and press/TV advertisements; and
• script a radio advertisement.
2.1 INTRODUCTION
In the previous unit we spoke about advertising with special reference to print
advertising. Here we are going to take up Public Service Advertisement—mainly
for radio.
Radio has a significant role to play in the shaping of our society. This is especially
true of our country where more than 95% of the population listens to the radio. Till
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Advertisements a few decades back, radio was primarily used as a medium for mass entertainment
and for broadcast of news and features. But today it is being increasingly used in
the service of the public to communicate important messages, announcements and
information. In this context, we shall discuss the effective use of radio for public
service announcements and commercial advertisements. You are well aware of the
strengths and limitations of radio as a medium of mass communication. We shall
also discuss the specific use of language in the preparation of the copy for radio
advertisement and announcements.
From the above definition, it is clear that advertising is not restricted to products
but encompasses services and ideas also. It is also evident that the two basic
functions of advertisement are (2) to inform and (2) to persuade. Thus advertising
leads to promotion of sales, change of attitude and arousal of awareness. Because
of its persuasiveness, advertising has to be specially concerned with the economic,
social ethical and moral issues of advertising.
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2) Institutional Advertising: Here advertising is towards selling ideas. There Public Service
Advertisements
are three forms of Institutional advertising:
a) Patronage Institutional Advertising which sells the ideas of patronizing
a producer or retailer other than specific product merits. For example
“Ford has a better idea” without mentioning the individual product (Car/
Truck/Bus) tells the listener the importance of the manufacturing firm
FORD, so that he or she patronises the firm.
b) Public Relations Institutional Advertising: Designed to improve a firm’s
image or reputation either through presentation of the firm’s point of
view in any labour dispute or through an elaboration of the benefits and
utilities for the public by the firm’s concern. Examples are the
advertisement releases given by major Public Sector and Private Sector
firms such as BHEL, OIL INDIA, Larsen and Toubro etc.
c) Public Service Advertising: This is a means of using advertising to
promote non-controversial causes in the interest of the public such as
road safety, cleaner environment, hygiene, family planning, child welfare
etc.
For example,
“THERE IS ONLY ONE INDIA. IT BELONGS TO ALL OF US. WE THE PEOPLE
MUST ACT FOR UNITY” (National Integration Campaign)
“SIGHT —— YOUR CHILD’S MOST PRECIOUS GIFT. PROTECT IT”.
(Eye Donation)
PSA by Government: Developing countries have the need for an informed citizenry.
PSAs are effective means of reaching the public with necessary information. Such
advertising is used to promote issues without any bias and partisan slant in the
interest of public good.
All India Radio has a special form to be filled in for “Lost Persons” announcement.
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This form has the following format: Public Service
Advertisements
Name of the person : Mahesh
Father’s Name : Sunderlal
Age : 10 years
Name of the place where he disappeared from : Kanpur
Dress worn : Blue shorts and checked
bushshirt
Identification Marks : A cut on the right cheek
Colour : Wheatish
Height : 4 feet
Places where he is likely to be found : Kanpur, Lucknow and Allahabad
Address for intimation : Sunderlal, House No. 32, Gali
No. 22, Station Area, Kanpur
The copy to be made for the announcement from the above form will run thus:
Shri Sunderlal informs that his son, Mahesh, aged 10 has been lost since April 23,
2018 from Kanpur. He is of wheatish complexion and is four feet tall, with a cut on
his right cheek. He had worn blue shorts and a checked bush shirt. If you have any
information about his whereabouts, please pass it to Shri Sunderlal at the following
address: (Address)
The following points are to be borne when preparing the announcement:
• Easy language — simple and direct sentences
• Precise and clear diction
• A certain degree of friendly appeal without being casual and informal
ii) Prepare a copy for a PSA on radio on a free eye clinic to be held on 24
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But radio, amongst all these, has got its own characteristics with its plus and minus
points, its limitations and scope. Even though radio suffers from its lack of visual
appeal, it has certain distinct advantages which gives it an edge over the other
media in relation to advertisement. Let us see the difference between radio
advertisement and press advertisement:
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Advertisements Radio Advertisement Press Advertisement
1) On the radio, time is precious. 1) Here, space is precious.
Advertisements are time-bound. Advertisements are space-bound.
2) Music and sound are used. 2) Cartoons and pictures are used.
3) Radio advertisements reach all 3) Press advertisements are only for
segments of people. the literates.
4) Audio medium 4) Visual medium.
5) Does not call for concentrated 5) To read the advertisement, you
attention to hear the advertisements. need concentration and time.
6) Advertisement announcements are 6) One can pick up the paper
fleeting advertisements any time and read
them.
Let us see the difference between Radio and TV advertisement:
Radio Advertisement TV Advertisement
1) Only an audio medium. 1) Both an audio and visual medium.
2) You can listen to it even outside 2) You have to sit before your TV
your room/home. Even when you set to follow the advertisement.
are moving,
3) Sound is important. 3) Visuals are important
4) Music and sound are used. 4) Here also sound and music are
used.
5) Jingles are specially made for radio 5) Jingles are used, though they are
advertisements. not very essential.
6) Time factor is significant. 6) Time factor is equally significant.
7) This is an inexpensive set. 7) TV is an expensive item.
8) Production is less expensive. 8) Production is very expensive.
Thus the communication objectives are a two way process and the advertiser (sender)
has to meet the objectives and felt needs of the audience (receiver).
Any strategy for advertising a product or an idea has to have (2) Appeal strategy,
(2) Humour strategy and (3) Comparison advertising.
The advertiser who prefers humour as a creative strategy should bear in mind the
following points:
1) Humorous messages attract attention.
2) They may detrimentally affect comprehension.
3) Humour increases persuasion.
4) Humour tends to enhance source credibility.
5) A humorous context may increase liking for the source and create a positive
mood.
6) To the extent that a humorous context functions as a positive reinforcer,
persuasive communication placed in such a context may be more effective.
One of the effective slogans with humour as its creative strategy is that of Limca,
which presents the conversation of a few collegians. One of them tries to give a
rational explanation as to why he drinks Limca —— because it contains isotonic
salts….He is intercepted by another who gulps Limca down saying “I drink Limca
because I like it” followed by laughter. Onida’s advertisement with the devil beating
the drums to the chant of “give us work”, suggesting that Onida TVs don’t require
after service care, is equally humourous and stays in the viewer’s mind.
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2.6.3 Comparative Advertising as a Creative Strategy Public Service
Advertisements
While in commercial advertisement, this strategy generates heated controversy in
respect of advertising ethics, in PSAs, this comparative strategy does enhance the
audience’s attention. In the family planning advertisements, the comparison between
a planned family household to the disadvantage of the latter is more effective than
a slogan that says “a small family is a happy one”. The slogan can be an effective
punch line, but its message gets credibility and authenticity through an institution
of comparison between the two types.
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Advertisements
Check Your Progress 3
Note: a) Space given below the question is for writing your answer.
b) Check your answer with the one given at the end of this unit.
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i) A detergent powder
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Check Your Progress 2 Public Service
Advertisements
i) Radio Ads: On radio, time is precious, music and sound are used;
announcements are fleeting.
iii) Press Ads: Space is precious; press ads are only for the literates; Visual medium.
For this you will have to let your creative juices flow.
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Advertisements
UNIT 3 TV ADS AND STORY BOARDS
Structure
3.0 Objectives
3.1 Introduction
3.2 The ‘Idiot Box’
3.3 Pictures and Words
3.3.1 Writing Pictures
3.3.2 Painting Words
3.3.3 Reinforcement and Counterpoint
3.4 Selling Line
3.4.1 Copywriting
3.4.2 Storyline
3.5 A TV Advertisement
3.6 Structuring a TV Advertisement
3.7 A Storyboard
3.8 Let Us Sum Up
3.9 Answers to Check Your Progress
3.0 OBJECTIVES
In this unit you will be introduced to the format of TV ads. We shall also analyse
what makes a TV advertisement tick and how it has become a distinctive genre. At
the end of this unit you should be able to:
• distinguish a TV ad from a film or print ad;
• visualize an ‘ad’; and
• provide the matching copy.
3.1 INTRODUCTION
Advertising (L. advertere; ad-to vertere-turn)-to turn one’s attention; inform, give
public announcement or commendation of; any device for obtaining public favour!
Advertising is an integral part of selling. Ever since man began to sell, he wanted
another to buy. He exhorted the buyer through gestures, signs and words. He extolled
the virtues of what he was selling and this in turn became the process of selling.
The need to manufacture (or procure), sell and consume, became a condition of the
human existence. With industrial growth and the organisation of the manufacturing
process, we have now moved into the era of consumerism. The effort is on to find
audience in order to sell products to mass clientele. The content of our lives is to a
large measure conditioned by media messages of what we ought to buy- from junk
foods to everlasting peace. Advertising has come to stay.
With over two billion people watching it everyday, television is unquestionably the
prime advertising vehicle of our times. It is the ultimate opinion maker, and it holds
captive an amazingly diverse and huge audience in previously unknown communion.
Within the charmed magic circle of this idiot box the essence of an insidious sales
message descends and perhaps settles.
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3.2 THE ‘IDIOT BOX’
Television has been derisively called the idiot box. It is also known as the tube, the
telly, simply ‘TV’ and by many other such names. Some of these names and
definitions have a pejorative connotation, some others—grudgingly admiring. But,
almost universally, we are still a bit overawed by the technology which brought
moving pictures into our houses for collective viewing. We still regard this box as
something of a visual oracle. Whether we are complaining or complacent at times,
we still do not turn off our sets. It is a habit hard to beat and we follow it like
zombies. Unthinking, automatic. The term ‘idiot box’ has stuck and it will perhaps
never come unstuck. We have come to regard the box as a thing that cannot lie; for
is not seeing believing? A twentieth century phenomenon which is essentially
technological in nature, television basically consists of electronic transmission of
picture (and sound) from one place to another.
This can be done in a variety of ways like:
• Broadcast mode transmission
• Cable TV
• Closed Circuit TV (CCTV)
• Facsimile transmission (FAX)
• Satellite transmission
• Optical Fibre transmission, etc.
Broadcast TV (which may include one or several of the above modes in combination
before, or in conjunction with, final wireless transmission) is now mostly known
by the generic term TV. It has grown rapidly into a prime communication medium
in just over half a century, creating its own grammar and identity in the wake of its
phenomenal growth. In some countries, TV is controlled by the government, while
in others, it has been given to private organizations. But, all in all, TV has become
a major medium of mass communication all over the world. From its earliest days
it has attracted commercial messages (ads.). Actually, the roots of these messages
go back to the days before television. In USA, commercial radio was the natural
outcome of the growth of stations in the early 1920s. President Herbert Hoover
stated that he could not envision the corruption of this new medium by commercial
appeals, but sales promotion through radio began for the first time in USA in 1921.
The returns funded the then burgeoning industry. When TV became a national system
of communication in the US in the 1930s, it simply borrowed the concept from
radio. This was reinforced in part by the fact that advertising through film clips was
an accepted and well-known practice by that time. These clips would be shown in
movie theaters and were also used in field situations during World War-II, as
messages for enlisting in the army.
The advertising-television nexus had begun. It was soon realized that film clips
meant for movie halls were not particularly well suited to the new medium, the
idiot box. It required a different selling line.
With moving pictures, a whole new sensory experience unfolded for man. With the
concept and refinement in editing, largely due to the work of D.W. Griffith, a complex
psycho-physiological area of visual stimulation took shape. The work of Eisenstein
and Pudovkin explored this area further and helped delineate its basic parameters.
With the integration of sound and motion pictures, the so-called ‘talkies’ arrived. It
was natural that these concrete inputs (pictures and sounds) suggested independent
manipulation and rearrangement of the audio-visual structures. This created a cinema
language. And the biggest beneficiary was the ‘smallest’ film-the ad film.
3.4.1 Copywriting
Writing copy is arguably the most creative aspect of an ad film. Juggling with
words, making the perfect choice, using the perfect conjunctive, playing on meaning,
punning on words, using double entendres which fall just short of being risqué—
this is the stock in trade of the copywriter. He is, typically, never without his thesaurus
and is armed with a dozen reference tomes and innumerable clippings of print ads
he would have wanted to write. Actually, the copywriter is a creating writer who
has perfected the technique and craft of writing successful copy through endless
years of routine hard work. His is a two-fold brief—to hawk his wares in the most
comprehensible, distinct and lucid manner, and to create a dramatization of ideas
through a fresh insight, a haunting image or a daringly different symbol. This has to
be done in rarely more than three or four short sentences and almost entirely through
inner play of words. This a daunting task indeed and it is often impossible to blend
the two briefs in a harmonious manner. The copywriter who is satisfied with his
own work is rarely popular with the client. Also vice-versa—such are the vagaries
of the market-place.
Let us try to identify some of the literary devices most frequently used in copywriting.
All examples are taken from existing print ads.
Alliteration: Is a universal favourite of copywriters. In their quest for catchy
alliterations, unorthodox coinages or conjunctions are often used.
Example: Tingling, tangier taste!; Better buy Binatone.
Rhyme: Another favourite. Goes well with pithy messages.
Rhymed copy set to music is called a jingle.
Example: Stayfree…that’s the way you ought to be!
Assertion: Usually with direct address mode.
Example: In every party that I host, the chief guest is Amul Cheese.
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Advertisements Endorsement: By a personality; direct mode of address.
Example: ‘I have just one complexion. And so, no ordinary soap will do. I trust
only ‘Lux’.
Punning: Quite popular with copywriters. Requires careful handling.
Example: Now, another addition to the hit list. Fine Things-the latest bestseller!
Circumlocution- just to be different.
Example: We don’t have to say anything. Products with an identity need no headlines!
3.4.2 Storyline
A copy is only a part of a storyline, much like the skeletal structure of a body. The
body of an ad is its storyline. It is where the ad is conceptulised and capsuled. In a
film or TV ad, in particular, a storyline may consist of little or no copy and yet be a
complete communication. A storyline is a setting. An evocation. It is what the French
call a misen scene-a mounting. It is within this mounting that we must embroider
our words and pictures, our sounds and random utterances. How does one make a
storyline?
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The basic information, besides the product name and target market, is the strongest
selling point which makes it distinct from other such products. This is called the
Unique Selling Proposition (USP). This may be in the form of a lower price, better
attributes or, a new feature. This is where a storyline begins. One may not start with
a USP in the linear structuring of a storyline.As a matter of fact, it is usually saved
for the last as a punch line, yet its influence on the storyline is seminal. This quality
suggests a variety of settings or moods which are consistent with the cultural values
of the target market. A language gets suggested and a plot develops. The storyline
is basically a graphic description of an ad incorporating copy.
3.5 A TV ADVERTISEMENT
What is a TV ad? How is it different from a film ad? An ad created for cinema hall
audiences (theatre release) is sometimes aired on TV. Does it become a TV ad? Can
it be called a TV version? Let us try and answer these questions.
These are fundamental questions that have been carefully researched over the years.
The answers are by no means standardized or universally applicable. For the most
part, client or agency preferences, budget constraints and the success of earlier
campaigns play a major role in the airing of theatre release ads over TV. Some
salient features are, however, noteworthy; and these have dictated the structuring
of TV ads in the recent past.
This literate group is able to respond better to incidental triggers than direct cues. If
the film is slick and competent it should at the same time guard against being
spectacular. Surfeit of special effects and gimmickery are usually relegated to the
realm of science fiction by the target market. Our suggestion is a refined, aristocratic,
slightly understated film.
The USP has been given as a “coffee with a higher aroma. “The word “aroma” is
stronger in specific association of ideas, unlike the word “flavor”. Since the USP is
non-visual, associative ideas can be used as trigger cues. Again aroma is a word
with typical masculine orientation. This gives us the referential aspects of the film.
Colour scheme of the wrapper and lid tend to suggest visual aristocracy. This is
also in tune with the pricing. A few observations:
1) Higher Aroma is strong USP in the case of any coffee. The reinforcement
would be complete if the coffee is called Aroma.
2) Incorporating certain incidental visual cues on the label would create positive
synergy. Examples:
a) The acronym TM (Trademark) just after the brand name
b) Computer classification stripes
c) Prominent display of the word Instant
d) An airtight lid (which requires pressing before unscrewing).
Let us now work on alternative storylines incorporating copy. Please note the way
music is used. Atmosphere sound effects also play an important role. Also note the
variations in copy. The following five storylines broadly represent different genres
of TV ads. Note the use of close-ups and attention to detail. Each storyline is of 30
secs. duration.
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STORYLINE-1 One shot only – 30 secs. TV Ads and Story Boards
Exterior. Late afternoon. Portico of a very impressive house. The door is gleaming
mahagony and brass. A liveried footman (face is not seen) is standing on the steps
leading to the door. A luxury limousine glides into view. The sound of car doors
opening and closing and firm authoritative footsteps going up. The persons are not
seen. The door opens (opening sound). Camera glides past the car fender taking in,
in incidental detail, the gleam and high polish of the car—preferably light blue –
and ascends the steps in a fluid unbroken movement. Going into the house it
encounters impeccable taste in flooring, walls, objects fixtures etc. Also music.
Each visual cue encountered by the camera signifies taste. The music builds up.
Camera lazily pans. A beautiful male hand is in the process of moving across the
field of vision. Elegant shirt cuff and a cufflink are also seen. The hand moves
towards the background revealing a jar of coffee from which he has just withdrawn
coffee in a spoon and put into a cup. A liveried hand enters the top of the frame with
a silver coffee pot. Pours steaming water. Music goes lower and on the sound of the
pouring water a voiceover:
STORYLINE -2
Exterior. Late afternoon/early evening. The rolling lawns of a private estate. A horse
with a rider—handsome, not so young, and macho looking—comes into view. The
horse is paced at an easy canter-NOT galloping. The rider comes towards the camera
and dismounts. He hands the reins to a syce and joins a girl who, like him, is
dressed for outdoors. They link hands and go towards a table set in the shade of a
tree. Beautiful table linen, a food hamper, distinguished crockery etc. They settle
down to a repast. Not a word has been spoken. NO MUSIC. Only natural sound and
sound effects, occasional laughter.
The girl makes coffee for the man and for herself, handling everything with loving
care. Coffee jar is seen in closeup. The horse neighs in far distance, very low.
STORYLINE-3
Interior. Early evening. A table set alongside a French window of Highland Park
Hotel at Gulmarg-Kashmir. A panorama of hills and meadows is visible beyond.
Soft music playing—can be a jingle. Misty feeling indicates autumn.
A man and a woman-sitting at the table frame the panorama beyond. A waiter’s
hands are seen in the foreground (leading edge of the table) making coffee. He
pours out the water after taking coffee from the jar with a spoon. He asks –out of
vision-‘Milk ma’am?’ She nods slightly—looking up. The man looks up and says
‘No milk for me.’ The waiter adds milk to one cup and places the cups in front of
the two. Withdraws. The emphasis and play is on the vapour issuing from the cups.
The man inhales deeply. The girl smiles. Camera is shuttered down till the couple
appear in silhouette, at the same time getting the jar in the foreground in sharp
focus.
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Advertisements VOICEOVER—FOR THAT SPECIAL AROMA GOLD BLEND THE PREMIUM
COFFEE
STORYLINE-4
A well-known personality is weighing two jars in jeweller’s scales. One jar is GOLD
BLEND. The label of the other is averted. GOLD BLEND side is heavier. The man
is puzzled. He addresses the camera:
‘How could it happen? Well! It is not as if one is more by weight than volume. They
are both coffees and both are instant. Same weight too. But wait-aren’t these quality
scales?
Closeup of product slowly revolving. The final freeze comes when the product is
perfectly in head-on position.
VOICEOVER-2
ENTER THE WORLD OF AROMA GOLD BLEND
POSSIBLE MODEL CHOICES;
• Nawab of Pataudi Saif Ali Khan
• Kabir Bedi
• Sunil Gavaskar
• Amitabh Bachchan
STORYLINE -5
Several coffee jars are lined up together. The labels do not show the trade name. We
see drawings representing facial features. The bottle at the end has its label averted.
Each lid pops open in turn and the mouth on the label gets animated on voices (All
female)
Bottle 1-I am filter coffee
Bottle 2- I am south Indian coffee
Bottle 3-I am smooth
Bottle 3-I am creamier coffee
Bottle 5-I am select.
The sixth bottle swivels around. We see the product with the label representing the
tradename.
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TV Ads and Story Boards
Check Your Progress 2
Note: a) Space given below the question is for writing your answer.
b) Check your answer with the one given at the end of this unit.
1) Write a 30 sec. TV ad for Chery Blossom shoe polish based purely on
music and effects. No voice.
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2) Write a 30 sec. TV ad (endorsement) for Cherry Blossom shoe polish
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3) Write a 30 sec. TV ad for Cherry Blossom shoe polish without models.
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4) Write a 30 sec. TV ad for Cherry Blossom shoe polish using a jingle.
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3.7 A STORYBOARD
A complete storyboard for the promotion of handcrafted Indian jewellery exported
by H.H.E.C. to the Middle East under the Gold Export Scheme is to be shown on
Middle East TV. Time: 35 seconds.
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Advertisements Note: no overt representation of the female form or figure allowed due to religious
and cultural reasons.
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Scene 2: Interior. Lal Qila. Diwan-e-Khas. Long shot a regally dressed woman, TV Ads and Story Boards
fully veiled, sitting on the central platform. Camera tracks in –taking the splendor
of the setting. As the camera moves up close, the veil is drawn back a little revealing
the lower half of a face and a covered neck, primarily with elegant white lace-but
poised over it majestically an exquisite handcrafted necklace in meena, kundan
and inset with rubies. Slow dissolve to scene 3.
Sound: Music. Rabab continues. Strains of desert flute lending a faraway quality in
time with the camera tracking in.
Time: 7 seconds, dissolve over 2 seconds: total 9 seconds.
SCENE 3: Interior. Closeup. A beautiful feminine hand with delicate tapering fingers
is bare except for a glittering diamond ring. No nail paint, only neutral gloss. The
hand is in the process of closing a beautifully ornate book bound in red leather and
gold embossed margin line on the outside suggestive of Islamic calligraphy. No
text. The book is closed ceremonially, almost! Dissolve to scene 4.
Sound: Music continues. Female voiceover: Royal splendor
Time: 3 seconds, dissolve over 2 and half seconds: total 6 and half seconds.
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Advertisements SCENE 4: Interior. Taj
Mahal. Closeup. Marble
latticework on one of the
chamber walls. A female
face enters the frame from
right. The face is seen only
in fuzzy profile in a
silhouette. As camera
focuses on the face, its
outline,still in silhouette,is
seen sharply. As this
happens, a pencil beam of
light gets faded in to light
up only a small portion in
the region of the ear
showing a beautiful
earlobe and a handcrafted
earring dangling from it.
Slow dissolve to scene 5.
Sound: Change in the
tempo of music. Music
continues. Female
voiceover:
Traditional handcrafted
jewellery, specially
created.
Time: 8 seconds, dissolve over 2 and half seconds: total 10 and half seconds.
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SCENE 5:exterior. Moonlit night. Taj Mahal. A girl is walking away from the TV Ads and Story Boards
camera and towards the monument. Wearing a full robe she looks like an ethereal
presence gliding towards the monument. She starts from close to the camera when
the frame is filled with an ornate and elegant cummerbund which she is wearing.
On her way she walks through crisscrossing shafts of light all along her path. As
she recedes, the only visual cue that stands out besides the monument is her
shimmering and glittering cummerbund. To achieve this effect the cummerbund
will be strapped on a specially designed belt which carries numerous point sources
of light powered by a battery contained within the belt. These point sources will
light up the tones from behind.
S/I Assorted items of jewellery zoomed in from distance and out of frame. S/I
HHEC Logo. Fade out.
Sound: Music towards crescendo. VOICES: Brought to you directly from India by
HHCE.
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UNIT 4 ETHICS IN ADVERTISING
Structure
4.0 Objectives
4.1 Introduction
4.2 Broadcast Advertising
4.3 Outdoor Advertising
4.4 Advertising Ethics
4.4.1 Moral Principles
4.4.2 ASCI
4.4.3 Advertising Some Products
4.5 Some Model Advertisements
4.6 Let Us Sum Up
4.7 Answers to Check your Progress
4.8 Appendix:General Rules of Conduct in Advertising
4.0 OBJECTIVES
Our aim through this Unit is to introduce you to what is ethical as well as unethical
advertising. After reading this unit you will be able to differentiate between an
advertisement that is ethical and one which is not. You will also be able to get a
sound knowledge of broadcast as well as outdoor advertising. You will also be
qualified to judge what products should be advertised and what should preferably
not be advertised. We have also given examples of some advertisements which are
progressive and promote social causes.
4.1 INTRODUCTION
Advertising is a form of marketing communication used to persuade people to buy
a particular product or service. It is extremely important that whatever has been
advertised in the commercial is true. For this reason, organizations such as Federal
Trade Commission (FTC) are there to monitor the commercials on television and
radio. This ensures that the advertisers are not making any false claims to lure
consumers to buy their products.
What is ethics? Ethics means “Good Conduct” or “Conduct which is right in view
of the society and the time period”. By common consent, various modes of behavior
and conduct are viewed as “good” or “bad”. In other words, we can say that Ethics
are moral principles and values that govern the actions and decisions of an individual
group. Ethics is a choice between good and bad, between right and wrong. It is
governed by a set of principles of morality at a given time and at a given place and
in a given society. Advertising has ethical value. The mixing of art and facts in
advertising communication are subservient to ethical principles. In today’s
competitive and buyer’s market, advertisements have to be truthful and ethical. If
an advertisement is misleading, the credibility of the organization is lost. To view
the truth in advertisement, it has to be seen from a consumer’s point of view rather
than from a legal point. The advertising industry has been frequently criticized for
putting out misleading or exaggerated claims in respect of products, goods and
services.
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Mass media has the power to effect and manipulate society. For this reason, mass Ethics in Advertising
media should be used with a sense of responsibility and in accordance with judicial
restriction. This is also valid for advertising which gives messages to society and
tries to convince them. The message of an advertisement is no different from the
news or comments in a paper or a program on TV. The responsibility expected from
mass media should be in conformity with ethical values and within judicial limits.
The same responsibility is also expected from the advertisers. In the advertising
sector, the core values stem from personal, organizational and professional ethics.
The source of personal ethics is primarily an individuals’ conscience. Each advertiser
should determine the positive and negative effects of advertising messages for the
social structure and humanity in his own conscience. If an advertiser personally
determines his own ethical values and presents his own ethical codes, it is always
easier to determine organizational and professional ethical values.
A radio ad must be aired several times before it actually sinks into the minds of the
consumers. Thus the frequency of the ad is important. The target audience is also
important. Therefore, one must do a research on which type of audience listens to
which channels if they want the ads to be successful.
Television advertising is usually considered appropriate for advertising for the big
corporate sectors, though even small businesses can benefit from it. A strong audio
and video combination is a must for the success of the commercial. But it is also
important that the audio and video should function well without each other. For
example, if a person is not viewing the TV but just listening to it, s/he should get
the idea and vice versa. Most of the radio and television advertisements are paid
for, though there are some public service ads which can be aired for free. The
advertisers usually have to pay for the spot which lasts for 40 to 60 seconds.
These days radio and television ads are prepared by advertising agencies for their
clients. They understand the need of the client and make the commercial keeping
in mind the current state of affairs. Broadcast advertising has become a very essential
part of marketing in recent times. Companies allocate specific budget for radio and
television ads and make an estimate of how much revenue they can earn through
broadcast advertising. For example, marketing consultants are hired to determine
the return on investment for spending on radio and television ads. Sometimes the
marketing consultants of these businesses run sample ads to judge its popularity
among the viewers.
Internet or online advertising uses the Internet or the World Wide Web for the purpose
of attracting consumers to buy their product and services. Examples of such
advertising include ads on search engine result pages, rich media ads, banner ads,
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Advertisements social network advertising, and email marketing and so on. Online advertising has
its benefits, one of them being immediate publishing of the commercial along with
the availability of the commercial to a global audience. But along with the benefits
come some disadvantages too. These days, advertisers put distracting flashing
banners or send across email spam messages to people on a mass scale. This can
annoy the consumers and even real ads might get ignored in the process. Whatever
the mode of advertising, broadcast advertising is an inherent part of any advertising
campaign these days. Therefore, ethics in advertising is very important for it to be
successful.
Even though print and newspaper advertising takes up a huge part of an advertising
budget, outdoor advertising is unique in its own way. It is an extremely cost-effective
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method of advertising. All you need to do is to design a billboard and get it printed, Ethics in Advertising
as compared to television advertising where an entire 40 second commercial has to
be designed. If the outdoor advertisements are strategically placed, it can guarantee
substantial exposure for very little cost. That is why outdoor advertising is very
cost-effective.
Different industries make use of outdoor advertising in their own different way. For
example, eating joints and eateries on the highway make use of highway billboards
to draw the customer to have a bite and rest a little at their joint. McDonald’s and
Subway are excellent examples. The automobile and tourism industries make use
of billboards to advertise their products and tourism plans. These are also very
successful because of the fact that people on the highway are on the lookout for
such information.
Apart from the billboards, there are several other forms in which outdoor advertising
can take place. For example, beverage companies make use of sporting events and
arenas to showcase their products. For example, Coca Cola was one of the FIFA
World Cup sponsors. Other places where you can see outdoor advertising are
taxicabs, buses, railways subways and walls on which murals are painted. All these
forms of outdoor advertising are very popular and extremely cost effective.
Thus ethics in advertising means a set of well defined principles which govern the
ways of communication taking place between the seller and the buyer. Ethics is the
most important feature of the advertising industry. Though there are many benefits
of advertising, there are also some points which don’t match the ethical norms of
advertising.
An ethical advertisement is one which doesn’t lie, doesn’t make fake or false claims
and is in the limit of decency. Nowadays, ads are more exaggerated and a lot of
puffery is used. Puffery is a promotional statement or claim that expresses subjective
views rather than objective ones. Puffery puts up an exaggerated image of what is
being advertised. These views are not to be taken literally. Sometimes the advertisers
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Advertisements lack knowledge of ethical norms and principles. They just don’t understand and are
unable to decide what is correct and what is wrong.
The main interest for advertisers is to increase their sales, gain more and more
customers, and increase the demand for the product by presenting well-decorated
and colorful advertisements. They claim that their product is the best, having more
unique qualities than the competitors, along with being more cost effective, and
more beneficial. But many of these ads are found to be false, and unethical. They
only serve to mislead customers. The best examples of these types of advertisements
are the ones which show snacks for children. These advertisements use bright colors
and glossy pictures to make the product look attractive to the consumers who are
watching the advertisements on television and convince them to buy the product
without giving a second thought to the nutritional value of the food being shown.
Ethics also depends on what one believes. If the advertisers make the advertisements
on the belief that the customers will understand, think, and then act on their ads,
then this will lead to positive results and the advertisement may not be called
unethical. But at the same time, if advertisers believe that they can fool their
customers by showing impractical things, like “just clicking your fingers will make
your home or office fully furnished” or “just buying a lottery ticket will make you
a millionaire”, then this would be unethical advertising.
Social Responsibility: Advertisements should not give any message that promotes
discrimination, based upon race, nationality, religion, sex, age, social and economic
status or disability. Nor should they in any way undermine human dignity.
Advertisements should not play on fear, appear to condone or incite violence, nor
abuse the suffering of people. Ethical principles remind the advertisers of their
social responsibility and underline that they not only sell goods or services but also
protect the society. In the last few years, applications in digital media platform
have increased and most of these applications have started to disturb the consumers.
In this sense, some practice such as unwanted e-mails, including consumers’ name
in marketing lists have grown. These need to be strongly kept in check.
4.4.2 ASCI
In order to ensure ethics in advertising, in India we have the Advertising Standards
Council of India (ASCI), which has one major aim—to maintain and enhance the
public’s confidence in advertising. The ASCI sees to it that all advertisements
conform to certain basic principles, like honest representations. This implies that
the ads should convey a truthful and honest message to the consumers and even to
competitors. Advertisements should also remain within the bounds of generally
accepted standards of public decency and propriety and be non-offensive to the
public. Ads should not be used indiscriminately for the promotion of any products
which may be harmful to society or any individual. There should not be any
plagiarism in advertisements which means that the advertisements should be original
in their creativity and subject matter. According to the ASCI, advertisers are
encouraged to show ads which promote safe practices, eg. Wearing of helmets,
using seatbelts while driving, not using mobile phones while driving etc.
Another area that needs constant supervision these days is the educational sector.
Education has become a major commercial activity these days and educational
institutions spend huge amounts on advertising their educational programmes. These
need to be monitored carefully so that parents do not get cheated while choosing an
educational programme for their children.
Yet, another area that needs a lot of monitoring is food and beverages. Advertisements
can have a positive influence by encouraging a healthy well-balanced diet and good
eating habits while stressing on appropriate physical activity. Therefore, it is
imperative that only healthy foods should be advertised and not ones that contain
high quantities of fat, salt, sugar and other substances that may be harmful to the
health of the consumers.
Many advertisers wrongly feel that women and children have the power to convince
the buyers. Therefore, they use them in their advertisements indiscriminately. But
when advertisers use children in their ads, they should remember not to show them
unattended, doing their work on their own, like brushing teeth, playing with toys,
or infants holding their own milk bottles as everyone knows that no one will leave
their kids unattended while doing all these activities. So showing parents also
involved in all activities or things being advertised will be more logical. As for
women, they have been majorly exploited for advertising products that they have
nothing to do with. For example one often comes across advertisements for cars or
other unrelated things which have scantily clad women endorsing them. This is
gross violation of the female gender and should be checked.
Advertisements for social causes are ethical and are accepted by the people and
should be shown frequently in order to provide direction to the society towards
progressive change. Advertisers spend a lot of time trying to anticipate what their
audiences will want and how they’ll react. Many times their efforts bear fruit, but
sometimes the advertisements they come up with, turn out to be completely unethical
and in bad taste. Looking at all these points, advertisers should start taking
responsibility by self regulating their ads by:
• Designing self regulatory codes in their companies based on ethical norms,
truth, decency, and legal points.
• Keeping track of their advertising activities and removing advertisements which
don’t fulfill the codes.
• Informing the consumers about the self regulatory codes of their company.
• Paying attention to the complaints coming from consumers about their product
advertisements
• Maintaining transparency throughout the company and their systems.
If all the above points are implemented, it will result in making the company
answerable for all its activities and will reduce the chances of getting caught out by
the critics or any other regulatory body. This will help gain the confidence of the
customers, and make them trust the company and the product.
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Ethics in Advertising
Check Your Progress 4
Note: a) Space given below the question is for writing your answer.
b) Check your answer with the one given at the end of this unit.
1) What role does the ASCI play as far as Indian advertising is concerned?
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One such advertisement is for a popular soap brand. Every year, millions of children
in rural India under the age of 5 years, die due to infections like diarrhea and
pneumonia and from unhealthy living practices. This advertisement film is set in
Thesgora, an Indian village with one of the highest rates of diarrhea in India. The
ad starts with a man walking on his hands, followed by his son Muthu, and then
slowly accompanied by a big mob. He walks miles and finally reaches a temple to
thank the god and priests as his son has reached five years of age. It is significant to
note that none of his previous children lived to the age of 5 years. This advertisement
is of a brand of soap and promotes healthy hand washing habits. For some time
during the viewing one is not sure where it is heading. But once the ad film reaches
the end, the message is not only clear but the horrifying statistics of child deaths
jolts one out of ones comfort zone and sense of complacency.
Then there are a series of ad films which are promoting social causes in a big way.
They are breaking new grounds and leading to a great deal of progressive thinking.
An example could be taken from the ad films by Havells, a popular brand for
appliances. Their catch phrase of their advertisements is “Hawa Badlegi.” This
series of ads is a classical example of overcoming the boundaries and stereotypes
imposed by society. In one instance, a newlywed couple walks into the registrar’s
office in which the husband wishes to adopt the last name of his wife. In the second
instance, a baby girl is delivered to a Hindu-Muslim couple and the father explains
that the girl child can adopt any religion she wishes to when she grows up. In yet
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Advertisements another incidence, a domestic servant is asked to dine in with the rest of the family.
This series crosses the boundaries of gender, religion and class. It depicts that it is
time to move on from certain orthodox beliefs and make society a better place to
live in. Finally, a coffee maker advertisement by the same brand takes up the cause
of women empowerment. The advertisement shows a typical Indian setting where
the prospective groom’s family has come to “see” a girl. The boys’ overconfident
mother states with complete arrogance that they want an early marriage as her poor
son is tired of making coffee for himself—implying that they now need a bride to
do this job of coffee-making. The girl quickly hands him a coffee-making machine
and says cheekily that it would come in handy for him as clearly he has no need for
a “wife” since it is only coffee that he apparently wants. She goes on to say that she
is no household appliance!
Another ad by the same jewellery brand shows popular actress Deepika Padukone
buying jewellery while her mother is busy with household chores at home. When
she reaches home the mother is a little upset that Deepika has no time to spend with
her. However, Deepika Padukone hands her the box of jewellery which she had
actually bought as a gift for her mother. The advertisement very subtly reminds us
that the bustle and stress of daily life often sees many of us falling behind in our
duties towards our parents. Through this advertisement we are reminded of the
necessity of remembering and celebrating our parents.
There may still be some fairness-advertisements that equate success and happiness
with the skin tone of a woman but by and large Indian advertisements are really
coming of age and are addressing vital social issues. The Indian advertising industry
is talking business today. It has evolved from being a small-scale business to a full-
fledged industry. It has emerged as one of the major industries and has broadened
its horizons, be it the creative aspect, the capital employed or the number of personnel
involved. The Indian advertising Industry in very little time has carved a niche for
itself and placed itself on the global map. Indian advertising has every reason to
celebrate. Businesses are looking upto advertising as a tool to cash in on lucrative
business opportunities. Growth in business has led to a consecutive boom in the
advertising industry as well.
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BEGG-171
Media and Communication Skills
Indira Gandhi
National Open University
School of Humanities
Block
3
MEDIA WRITING
Block Introduction 3
UNIT 1
Script Writing for Radio and TV 5
UNIT 2
Writing for News 17
UNIT 3
Editorial Writing 27
UNIT 4
Editing for Print and Online Media 36
INTRODUCTION TO BLOCK 3: MEDIA
WRITING
Welcome to the third Block of this course on Media and Communication Skills.
This Block is entitled MEDIA WRITING and has four Units. In order to view
media intelligently, we need to develop ‘media literacy.’ We are literate in print and
so can read and judge the merits of what we are. Similarly we need to become
acquainted with the electronic media. Familiarity with media literacy may also be
useful if we ever need to take part in a media programme or arrange one.
In Unit 1, entitled Script Writing for Radio and TV we have focused on what
kind of language should preferably be used while scripting for the media.
Unit 2 entitled Writing for News takes up the process and principles involved in
news scripting for the broadcast media. Broadcast copy is written for the ears rather
than the eyes. Therefore, the writer must always be aware that the consumers of
broadcast news will be listening to what they write, rather than reading it.
Finally in Unit 4, entitled Editing for Print and Online Media we have taught you
how to edit material for print and online media.
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Script Writing for Radio
UNIT 1 SCRIPT WRITING FOR RADIO and TV
AND TV
Structure
1.0 Objectives
1.1 Introduction
1.2 Unscripted Programmes: Interviews, Discussions, Audience Participatory
Programmes
1.2.1 Preparing for Unscripted Programmes
1.2.2 Setting up a Panel
1.2.3 Some Questions and Answers
1.3 A World of Many Voices
1.4 Some Popular Formats in Television
1.5 The Grammar of Television: Shots and Transitions
1.5.1 Shot Sizes
1.5.2 Camera Movements
1.5.3 Transitions
1.6 Let Us Sum Up
1.7 Answers to Check Your Progress
1.0 OBJECTIVES
Out aim through this Unit is to help you to develop ‘media literacy’, by
• Understanding the various kinds of formats for media programmes,
• Understanding the process of preparation for an ‘unscripted’ programme,
• Illustrating the differences between ‘real’ speech and written language, using
actual examples,
• Becoming familiar with the basics of the language of television, and
• To change how one views a programme or listens to a programme, by
understanding these formats, processes and issues.
1.1 INTRODUCTION
Not all of us will become producers for the media. But all of us are viewers and
consumers of media programmes. If we know a little about how these programmes
are produced, it will help us to judge the merits of what we hear and see on the
media.
In this unit we will reflect on how careful preparation and imagination can raise the
quality of even a programme that is ‘unscripted’. We shall look in some detail at
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Media Writing how a panel discussion may be set up. We shall also illustrate how the natural,
spontaneous spoken language differs from written language. Finally, we shall
mention some of the formats of television porgrammes, and familiarize you with
the basic “grammar” of television – the elements of its “visual language”.
Throughout this unit, we invite you to watch television, or listen to the radio, to
understand and reflect on the points we make. Much of the work required for this
unit, therefore, is recreational. Happy viewing!
The second slogan points to the temporal nature of these media. When people are
watching a broadcast, they cannot stop and go back to refresh their memory. It is
therefore good practice to introduce the programme with a brief overview, present
the main points, and conclude with a recapitulation of the main points.
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Here the anchor asked herself: if I were going to take an interview next week, and
I was watching this programme, what would I be most interested in? The answer:
I’d love to know what kinds of questions I will be asked. Indeed, the books on
preparing for interviews encouraged candidates to think of and predict questions
they would be asked. So she decided to begin with the broad and general question:
“What are the kinds of questions you would ask a candidate?”
Notice that this is a general, broad question, which doesn’t relate to any particular
kind of preparation by the candidate. But the panelists’ answers indicated that the
questions would mostly be about the candidate’s background, and abilities. That is,
the answers related to intellectual preparation. This helped her to ask the next
question.
Her second question was: “Is the focus on a person’s knowledge, or the ability to
communicate?” Then she asked questions about self-confidence and nervousness:
“What if a candidate fumbles at an interview?” These questions all addressed the
area of mental preparation. Finally, she asked: “Do dress and appearance matter?
To what extent are you influenced by it?” This was a question about physical
preparation.
Notice that the anchor asked five questions during this twenty minute programme.
These five questions covered the three areas of preparation she had identified during
her research. Notice too that her questions rearranged the points she had noted
during her research, and that she did not use bookish words such as “intellectual
preparation, mental preparation, and physical preparation”.
Notice the parenthetical thoughts in the transcript below. The speaker explains who
he means by “we”. He adds the emphasize “believe me” to break the sequence of
three parallel phrases introduced by the words “half …. One-fourth …. One-fourth.”
“Looks are fairly important and we, all of us who deal in personnel recruitment,
believe that half the interview is over when you enter, one-fourth is what they talk
to you and believe me, the last one-fourth is again how you rise and get out.”
The speakers quoted below put the main word first in the sentence.
“Dress, I don’t think it is very important.”
“Ambition – ambition was a bad word till recently.”
And this speaker begins with a half-sentence. Moreover, this half sentence seems to
end with an extra word, “candidates”, which strictly belongs to the next sentence;
the first half-sentence would be fine if it ended with “looking for”. Such mix ups
and slight ungrammaticalities often occur in speech.
“Depends on which function you’re looking for in candidates. For example, if you
are looking for candidates for the marketing department, yes, it has a higher
weightage than if he has to be working in R & D for example”.
Words like “absolutely” occur more often in speech to emphasize a point. Again,
there is a frequent occurrence of words like “well”, “now”, and other such adverbs
which allow the speaker to take some time to think, as in this example.
“Well, one standard question is “where do you see yourself five years from now?’
Now, when I got this question first I said, ‘I’m looking at myself in your seat’. I got
the job.”
In short, speech has characteristics of spontaneity and thinking while we speak that
get reflected in hesitations, false starts, self-corrections, and sentences that do not
strictly ‘hang together’ grammatically. Because even the most proficient language
user does not speak English “like a book”, these errors and inadequacies are forgiven
in speech. So also many learners sound alright when they speak, but fare very poorly
when they have to write!
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Script Writing for Radio
Check Your Progress 3 and TV
Note: a) Space given below the question is for writing your answer.
b) Check your answer with the one given at the end of this unit.
i) Read the spoken discourse given below, about the importance of the
biodata, and identify the words and phrases and other aspects of language
that strike you as ‘spoken’ rather than ‘written’.
“You see the one thing one should always remember the bio-data reaches
before the person comes. So unless we do campus recruitment where also
we do ask them to fill up personal data forms the individuals must always
realize that the bio-data is going before he goes so the bio-data should be
able to carry as much about the person as it can. (Pause)
So while there are lots of bio-data we see where a lot of irrelevant
information is given which doesn’t impress at all –but a crisply presented
bio-data which tells everything the interviewer would like to know about,
is extremely important-format, the neatness, the details….”
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Now think of the picture of the talking head – or watch a news presenter sitting at
her or his desk as (s)he presents the news. How much of the person do you see? We
have suggested above that you see the face and head, and below that, the neck, up
to the chest. This picture size is called a ‘bust shot’, and it is standard size of the
image for television presenters.
Suppose you are watching a family drama. You see a clever villain planning and
plotting some mischief; you see from the expression on the actor’s face. To show
you this, the camera moves ‘closer’ to the actor, to give you a ‘close up’ shot of just
the face, with a little bit of the neck. The camera can move even closer and give you
an ‘extreme close up’ of just the persons’ eyes and forehead, for example, if the
moment is dramatic enough.
On the other hand, suppose you are watching a ‘walking interview’, where the
interviewer and the interviewee are touring a house, or walking in a garden. To
begin with, you need to know where these people are. So you might be looking at a
picture which shows you some of the background – the landscape or scene where
the interview is taking place – and the full height of the interviewer and interviewee.
This is called a ‘long shot’. It is the typical shot to begin a programme that is not set
in a studio. If much more of the scene and background is shown than the people, we
have a ‘very long shot’.
The other two shot sizes are the ‘knee shot’ (an image of a person up to the knee)
and the ‘mid shot’ (up to the waist).
In this way the television camera can look at only a part of the human body. It must
take care not to cut the picture at a joint of the body; as long as care is taken about
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this, the viewer will not have a feeling of seeing a cut-up body! The viewer’s mind Script Writing for Radio
and TV
will ‘fill in’ what his eye cannot see. But if the camera frames the picture in such a
way that the edge of the frame cuts the picture at one of the joints of the body – the
knee, the elbow, or the shoulder – then the picture will tend to make a person look
like an amputee.
We have described the ‘shot sizes’ in television in terms of the human body, and
this is the standard practice, perhaps because television is more about people than
anything else. But the terms we have introduced apply to all shots on television – of
places, of things, of events. So in a cricket match you can have an extreme long shot
of the entire stadium, or a close up of a ball passing next to the bat of the batsman,
to let you see whether he ‘nicked’ it.
By now you must have understood that the ‘size’ of a shot is the extent of the image
that is framed by the camera lens.
The camera can move not only sideward, but also up and down. Again, the camera
itself may be fixed in its position, but tilt its lens upwards to look at a man on a roof
about to jump: this is a ‘tilt up’. Or it may tilt its lens down to look at a borewell
hole on the ground: a ‘tilt down’. On the other hand, the camera may rise along
with a subject (‘elevate’), or move downwards on the vertical axis along with a
subject (‘depress’).
Finally, how does the camera go closer into a subject? It can move physically closer
(‘track in’), or it can use the zoom lens to zoom in. The zoom lens also allows the
camera to zoom out.
1.5.3 Transitions
A transition links the end of one shot and the beginning of another. It is comparable
to punctuation, and shows to what degree each shot or scene is related to the next.
The grammar of television is made up of shots, sequences and transitions. Shots are
like words, the basic building blocks of the visual language. The way they are
composed leads to sequences. The manner in which shots are put together into
sequences is the transition.
The cut is the simplest transition. One image is replaced by another. When you
watch the news, the image often cuts from one newsreader to the other or from a
newsreader to a news item on location.
An inexpert cut can be the most abrupt way of putting two images together. But
used appropriately, it has great visual impact, and quick cuts can give a very dramatic
impact. Alfred Hitchcock is reputed to have used the cut to great effect in the shower
scene from Psycho. It is also used in montages, as it can give a sense of movement
to images that are static.
The fade (out) means the image disappears gradually by fading away, often to a
black screen (“fade to black”). It signals an end to a statement, like the end of a
paragraph. An image can also gradually appear on the screen: This is a fade in.
The mix or dissolve is a fade out accompanied by a fade in. This is a very useful
transition technique to signal, for example, that a person is remembering something.
The scene of the present dissolves into the past. Again, you can mix from a
photograph of a person to the person himself. It can also be used instead of a zoom
to go to a small detail of a larger object: for example, an image of the Taj Mahal
may dissolve into an image of some intricate carving at its entrance arch.
There are other transitions called ‘wipes’ and ‘flips’ that are done electronically at
the editing stage.
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• The format of the media programmes can be scripted, as in the case of news Script Writing for Radio
and TV
presentations, or documentaries; or unscripted, like in interviews, group
discussions, or panel discussions; or partly scripted, like in a quiz show where
the quiz-master has prepared questions and their correct answers, while the
audience comes without a script.
• The extent of the image framed by the camera lens decides the ‘size’ of a shot.
• The picture on the TV screen must constantly show movement of some sort
otherwise it will be like a still image or photograph and cease to hold our
attention.
• The end of one scene on the TV screen and the beginning of another is called
transition. When the image disappears gradually from the screen it is called
‘fade out and, its gradual appearance is the ‘fade in’; ‘the mix’ or ‘dissolve’ is
a ‘fade out’ accompanied by a ‘fade in’.
The ‘long shot’ is the typical shot to begin a programe that is not set in a studio. It
shows you some of the background—the landscape or scene where the people are—
and their full height.
If much more of the scene and background is shown than the people, we have a
‘very long shot’.
The other two shot sizes are the ‘knee shot’ (an image of a person upto the knee)
and the ‘mid shot’ (upto the waist).
In a ‘bust shot’, you see the face and head, and below that, the neck, up to the chest.
This picture size is the standard size of the image for television presenters. To show
you the expression on the actor’s face, the camera moves ‘closer’, to give you a
‘close up’ shot: of just the face, with a little bit of the neck.
The camera can move even closer, and give you an ‘extreme close up’ of just the
person’s eyes and forehead.
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Script Writing for Radio
UNIT 2 WRITING FOR NEWS and TV
Structure
2.0 Objectives
2.1 Introduction
2.2 What is News?
2.2.1 Elements of News
2.2.2 Gathering of News
2.2.3 Sources of Information
2.3 Scripting for Broadcast
2.3.1 Selection of News
2.3.2 Characteristics of News Writing for Broadcast
2.3.3 Story Structure
2.3.4 More Writing Tips
2.4 Let Us Sum Up
2.5 Answers to Check Your Progress
2.0 OBJECTIVES
At the end of your study of this unit, you will be able to:
• State the meaning of the term “News” and describe its elements;
• Explain the process involved before scripting news for broadcast; and
• Describe the principles of and process involved in news scripting for the
broadcast media.
2.1 INTRODUCTION
The purpose of this unit is to help radio journalists to improve their skills as writers
and anchors for Radio broadcast. This unit is organized to include the following:
1) The fundamentals of radio broadcast writing.
2) The style of radio news writing.
3) News judgment.
4) Some features of a newsroom.
The public, in any society, gets most of its information on current affairs through
the various media of mass communication – such as the newspapers, magazines,
radio, television, internet, documentary films and occasionally even through motion
pictures. But the effectiveness of any single medium for the dissemination of
information is related to certain inherent characteristics of the medium. For example,
print medium can be effective only if people are literate. They should also have the
money to buy the dailies and magazines, which are priced high in a developing
country, like India. In the countries with high illiteracy rates and with low average
family incomes, the print medium has not served well as a means of mass
communication. In the case of television, the cost factor is prohibitively high for
the majority of the rural poor to buy a T.V. Unless rural community centres are
activated and galvanized to help the poor towards T.V. viewing, T.V. will remain
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Media Writing medium. First, with receiving sets in about 80% of Indian urban homes, radio and
television can reach a majority of the urban listeners. Secondly, because of the
existence of national network, radio and television cut across regional barriers.
Thirdly, in broadcasting news and in the coverage of special events, radio and
television have a distinct time advantage over the print media.
“News is anything that is timely and significant to readers in respect of their personal
affairs or their relation to society, and the best news is that which possesses the
greatest degree of this interest and significance for the greatest number.”
Some of the important news-on-air include All India Radio News, BBC News,
Internet Radio News, CNN News, Ham Radio News etc.
News should be:
a) accurate/authentic
b) of interest to the public
c) timely
d) significant in relation to matters of interest to the greatest number of people
and
e) unbiased in its account or events or affairs.
Further, the standard definition that only ‘man bites dog’ is news is obsolete and
inaccurate. With fairly good communication facilities in our country, news reporting
has gained considerable importance today.
Most of the definitions of “news” repeat that news is of interest to the public. The
interest, however, differs from person to person and place to place. The two important
things about news are its immediacy and authenticity.
Impact: Events that affect people’s lives are classified as news. The event itself
may involve only a few people, but the consequences may be wide-ranging. For
example, if the Parliament passes a bill to raise taxes or to suddenly go in for
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demonitisation, or if a researcher discovers a cure for a form of cancer; both are Writing for News
significant events that have a wide ranging impact. Hence these events are to be
classified as news.
Timeliness: Timeliness is a value common to almost all news stories. It refers to
the recency of an event. Without the elements of timeliness, most events cannot be
considered news. For example, a trial that occurred last year is not news; a trial that
is going on presently is news. 9/11 trial may be of interest, but is not news today;
but if a 26/11 criminals are tried today for their Mumbai attack, it makes news.
Prominence: Prominent people, sometimes even when they do trivial things, make
news. The actions and speeches of the Prime Minister of India are important to us
in India. But they will not be news in USA or U.K. When prominent people undergo,
a medical treatment, it is covered in great detail by the news media of India. People
are very interested in matters concerning even their health. Movie stars, famous
politicians, advocates of social causes, sports personalities all these people make
news simply because they are well known.
Proximity: Events that occur close to home are more likely to be news than the
same events that occur elsewhere. For example, a car accident killing two persons
that happens on a road in our town is more likely to be reported in the local news
media than the same kind of accident which occurs 1,000 miles away. We are
interested in the things that happen around us.
Conflict: When people disagree, when they fight, when they have arguments – that
is news. The demonetization announced by the government is a major issue debated
by all political parties. This was an important news item that had to present both
sides of the argument.
The bizarre or the unusual: A rare event is sometimes considered news: Like the
sighting of a new star or planet or a new form of bloodless surgery with the help of
laser technology or the birth of octuples.
Currency: Issues that have current interest often have news value, and events
surrounding those issues can sometimes be considered news. For example, a
conference on medical technology will be of interest to medical practitioners, but
not to journalists, unless the discussion topic was “The Morality of Abortion”. Then
the news value of the conference will change and there will be a number of journalists
covering it.
You must assess the news value of events – if you want to be a news writer on the
basis of the criteria given above.
Who: Who are the important people related to the news story? Is everyone included
so that the story can be accurately and adequately told? Is everyone properly
identified?
What: What is the major action or event of the story? What are the actions or
events of lesser importance?
When: When did the event occur? The ‘When element’ is rarely the best way to
begin a story because it is not often the most important piece of information, but it
should come early in the story and should be closely stated.
Where: Where did the event occur? The location or locations of the event or action
should be clearly written.
Why and How: If a story is about something bizarre or unusual, the writer should
offer some explanation, so that the questions the event raises in the listener’s or
reader’s mind are answered. The writer also needs to set the events or actions in a
story in the proper context. Reference should be made to previous events or action
if they help to explain things to the listener or reader.
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2.2.3 Sources of Information Writing for News
Before we begin gathering news, we should find out where the information in a
news story comes from.
A news reporter has three fundamental sources of information for a news story. (i)
People, (ii) records (any information that is written or stored), and (iii) personal
observation. In this section, we shall discuss these sources.
i) People: People provide most information in most news stories. A news reporter
is likely to spend most of his or her non-writing time talking to people either
personally or over the telephone. In fact, the more people the reporter talks to,
the better the story is likely to be, because of the variety of information and
views the reporter can obtain.
To make things easier, reporters have to develop the information sources from
among the people whom they contact regularly, that is, the reporters will have
to identify people who have information and are willing to talk to the reporter
about it. Reporters know that many people can provide them with information
and sometimes that information can come from totally unexpected sources.
For instance, most reporters who are assigned to a beat – (a term in journalism
meaning a place or topic a reporter must write regularly about) – learn that
personal secretaries, other than their bosses, are the best sources of information.
As reporters and sources deal with each other, they should develop a relationship
of mutual credibility and understanding. Reporters find out whom they can
trust among these sources, and the sources realize that the information they
give to reporters will be used wisely.
ii) Records: The second major source of information available to news reporters
is records or stored sources. This type of information includes books, reports,
articles, documents, and press releases.
iii) Personal Observation: The third major source of information for the reporter
is personal observation. Wherever possible, news reporters like to attend the
events they are writing about. They like to see for themselves and understand
what happens even though they rarely write from a first person point of view.
The personal observation is factual, authentic and accurate but care is to be
taken not to introduce subjective assessments or judgments to bear on news
reporting.
The broadcast journalist is first and foremost a journalist, and the first commitment
of a journalist is to accuracy or correctness. Everything that a broadcast journalist
does, must contribute to the telling of an accurate story. Even though the broadcast
journalist must observe some strict rules about how stories are written, these rules
must contribute to, not prevent an accurate account of an event.
The broadcast news story if relayed when the PM is making speech in the Parliament
will use present tense.
“The Prime minister says he is for the hiking of petrol prices.”
Another way of emphasizing the immediate is to omit the time element in the news
story and assume that everything happened today. As we can see in the example
above, the broadcast version has no time element since it would probably be heard
on the day the Prime Minister made that statement. Of course, news which does
occur on a day other than the day of the broadcast will have the time element.
Use word economy. Do not use ten words if you can effectively communicate with
five words.
The tight phrasing which is characteristic of broadcasting writing is one of its
chief assets and one of the most difficult things for a beginner to achieve. As time is
short, the broadcaster cannot waste words. Hence the news scripter must work
constantly to simplify and condense without losing out on significant and essential
detail. There are a number of techniques for achieving this:
a) Eliminate all but the most necessary adjectives and adverbs. Every news
writer should know that the stories are built on nouns and verbs— the strongest
words in the language.
b) Avoid using the passive. Instead of saying “a meeting was held under the
auspices of the Ministry of Human Resources Development”, it is better to
say “The Ministry of Human Resources development held a meeting at Vigyan
Bhagwan today.”
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length and type of sentences which print journalists need to make their copy
interesting. The news bulletins on radio and TV can give information to the
listeners in short, simple sentences which get registered in their minds at once.
One of the characteristics of good broadcast writing is its clarity. Listeners
and viewers cannot go back and re-hear news broadcast in the way they can
re-read a newspaper. This is like listening to dialogues on stage as against
reading a play from a printed book. The listeners respond to the news as it is
broadcast.Broadcast writers achieve clarity by using simple sentences and
familiar words, by avoiding the use of pronouns and repeating proper nouns if
necessary and by keeping the subject close to the verb in their sentences.
d) Don’t be repetitive because it wastes air-time. The lead should serve for what
is to follow.
e) Avoid clichés.
f) Only mention what is necessary.
g) When it comes to numbers, don’t say “193 men”, instead mention “about 200
men”.
h) Downplay unconfirmed facts and information.
i) Ensure clarity and flow.
j) Deadline. Another characteristic of broadcast writing is that it has to meet the
deadlines. Deadlines are far more important to the broadcast writer than to the
print journalist.
Broadcast journalists do not use the inverted pyramid story structure. In its place,
they use something known as dramatic unity. The dramatic unity structure has three
parts; climax, cause, and effect.
The climax of the story gives the listener the facts of the story in about the same
way the lead of a print news story does; it tells the listener what happened. The
cause portion of the story tells the cause-—why it happened, and the circumstances
surrounding the event. The last part of the story is related to the effect and gives the
listener the context of the story and possibly some insight about what the story will
mean for the future.
Broadcast journalists should think of their stories as completed circles rather than
inverted pyramids. While the pyramid may be cut without losing the essential facts,
the broadcast story, if written in the unified fashion, cannot be cut from the bottom
or anywhere else. It stands as a whole unit.
Broadcast news stories must gain the attention of the listeners from the beginning.
The first words in the story are extremely important. Getting the attention of the
listener is some times more important than summarizing the story or giving the
most important facts of the story.
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Check Your Progress 3
Note: a) Space given below the question is for writing your answer.
b) Check your answer with the one given at the end of this unit.
i) Take a lead story of a newspaper and compare it with radio broadcast of
the same.
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Avoid abbreviations, even on second reference: Only the most commonly known
abbreviation should be used in broadcast writing.
Avoid direct quotation, if possible: Unless a direct quote is essential to tell a story
accurately, a broadcast writer should not use it. Paraphrasing quotes is preferred.
Use as little punctuation as possible but enough to help the newscaster through the
copy. The excessive use of commas, dashes, and semicolons will not help the
newscaster.
Avoid extended description: Don’t say: “Former Principal Secretary to the Prime
Minister and Former Chairman of the Finance Commission, P.N.Haksar.”.
Avoid pronouns, and when you have to use them, make sure it is clear to whom
you are referring. Avoid writing sentences like the following: “The Prime Minister
and the Foreign Affairs Secretary met yesterday. They discussed his trip to Japan”
(whose trip?) such confusion should be avoided.
Structure
3.0 Objectives
3.1 Introduction
3.1.1 What is an Editorial?
3.1.2 Importance of an Editorial
3.2 Parallels of Editorials in other Media
3.2.1 Television Editorials
3.2.2 Radio Editorials
3.2.3 Internet Editorials
3.3 Writing an Editorial
3.3.1 Length of an Editorial
3.3.2 Language of an Editorial
3.3.3 Glossary
3.3.4 Steps to Writing Your Editorial
3.4 Types of Editorials
3.4.1 Staff Editorials vs. Front Page Editorials
3.4.2 Signed Vs Unsigned Editorials
3.4.3 Third Editorial or Entertainment Editorials
3.4.4 Critical Editorials
3.4.5 Persuasive Editorials
3.4.6 Interpretative Editorials
3.4.7 Advocacy Editorials
3.5 Structure of an Editorial
3.6 Let Us Sum Up
3.7 Answers to Check Your Progress
3.0 OBJECTIVES
After having read this unit you will be able to
• Read and analyze an editorial in a news paper;
• Identify the various types of editorials;
• Understand the different styles of editorial writing; and
• Write an editorial.
3.1 INTRODUCTION
Newspapers report the news. When newspaper reporters tell a story, it is only facts
and we readers can form our views. Journalists generally have to leave their opinions
out of their writing. They have always been told to be unbiased and not to take a
stance. Yet most newspapers do have opinions. This is a class of writing called
“editorials” found in your newspaper every day.
Where can you find them? Are they on the same page everyday? Who writes them?
Who is offering this opinion? Why do we need to write the editorials? This unit will
answer all these questions.
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Media Writing 3.1.1 What is an Editorial?
An editorial is an article that states the newspaper’s views on particular news, events
or an issue of concern. It is the official stance of the publication.
You can find them at the same place on the same page of the newspaper, everyday.
This page is called the editorial page and the place is the left hand column of the
page, from top to bottom.
ii) AIR, BBC, VOA or private FM channels, which of these channels do you
listen to?
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The private stations like Red FM, Big FM, Radio Mirchi and others have only
entertainment based programmes but many a times as a humor or pun an issue is
commented upon by the jockey. This is the nearest these stations can come to
editorializing.
It is surprising, that no views of the government or the AIR are broadcast as editorials.
Statements of ministers or government Public Relation Officers, on issues of
importance are aired from time to time and analysis of these, as a part of news
bulletin, is done sometimes. This is the nearest AIR gets to being a parallel of a
newspaper editorial.
1) Get the reader’s attention quickly by the first paragraph being written in
attractive language.
2) Write short paragraphs and vary the length of sentences for effect.
3) Write with strong verbs and adjectives.
4) Use transitional devices for continuity.
5) Avoid redundancies in an editorial.
6) Use of one word substitution is prominent in editorials
7) Use active verbs while writing an opinion
8) Use concrete nouns while writing a comment.
Special tips
1) Both direct and indirect speech can be used while writing an editorial.
2) Metaphors and similes or both to be used if required
3) A mixture of abstract and concrete expresses better while commenting.
4) Rhetoric can be used.
5) Direct affirmations and negations too can be written.
6) Use of exclamations is justified in persuasive writing.
7) Apostrophe and within quotes can be paraphrased.
8) Dangling modifiers are helpful in editorial writing.
9) Inadvertent comment can be written in loaded words.
10) Sequence of tenses can be past – present – future to create effect.
3.3.3 Glossary
Editorial : An article expressing opinion of the newspaper on certain
issues.
Masthead : The information printed on the first page on the top with
the name, ownership, logo, rate and date of the newspaper.
Op-ed page : Page opposite the editorial which contains nationally
syndicated columns and good writers pieces.
Editor : A person who decides what news will go in the paper and
where it will appear.
Editorial board : A seven member board headed by the publisher which
decides what issues the newspaper will offer an opinion
on.
Editorial policy : Policy of coverage of news and stances of the newspaper
decided by the editorial board.
Column : An opinion piece that expresses the writer’s own view and
carries his or her name and often a picture.
Syndicated column : Columns sent by associations which buy and sell stories,
features, etc.
Letters to editor : Letters of feedback or opinion on various issues by the
readers.
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a box.
Editorial writer : Any member of the editorial board who researches and
writes the editorials that represent the newspaper’s position
on most issues.
Connecting: Remember to brain storm before you write the first draft . The main
body should have clean accurate details and examples. Give strong examples at the
beginning and at the end. Show the opposing arguments and their weaknesses.
Offer a solution in the end.
Correcting: Getting it right – your editorial should be clear and forceful. Do not
preach. Be honest and accurate.
Sample of what could go into the five paragraph editorial:
i) A personal experience, a thesis statement
ii) Explanation of the other side of the issue
iii) Examples to support your view points
iv) Reasons for your view point
v) The last paragraph should restate your thesis statement and end on a positive
note.
Tips for writing Editorials
1) Don’t use the word I. Your life is not interesting. Your personal experiences
are tiresome. Using the first person also sounds preachy and righteous, which
alienates readers.
2) Avoid sarcasm. You aren’t very funny. Too much sarcasm comes off as
immature and can ruin your credibility.
3) The sky is not falling – do not exaggerate. It makes you sound too emotional
and irrational.
4) Challenge authority not personality. Attacking coaches or politicians simply
attract letters to editors but attacking their ideas, policies and actions is great
editorializing.
Front page editorials are opinions of the editor-in-chief or owner of the newspaper
in an editorial column format on the first page of the newspaper. These are written
only in great emergencies or on topics of supreme importance.
You have also learnt of the parallels television, radio and internet have of editorials
and how they differ from newspapers in content and style.
This unit also teaches you to write editorials in correct length, language and usage
akin to the policy of the organization.
In the second part of the unit you have seen the various types and styles of editorials.
By now it must be clear that editorials are written with different slants and objectives,
putting forth the views of the organization on a particular topic or event.
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We hope now you will not skip the editorial page and will read the editorials Editorial Writing
judiciously. Also you will be able to write editorials with a critics’ view point.
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UNIT 4 EDITING FOR PRINT AND ONLINE
MEDIA
Structure
4.0 Objectives
4.1 Introduction
4.1.1 What is Editing?
4.1.2 Why do We Need to Edit?
4.2 Editing for Different Areas
4.2.1 Television Editing
4.2.2 Radio Editing
4.2.3 Web Editing
4.2.4 Photo Editing
4.3 Sub-Editing or Copy Editing
4.3.1 Good vs Bad Editing
4.3.2 Barriers Removed by Editing
4.3.3 Role of a Sub-Editor
4.3.4 Qualities of a Sub-Editor
4.3.5 Duties of a Sub-Editor
4.4 How to Edit a Copy
4.5 Editor’s Tool Box
4.6 Let Us Sum Up
4.7 Answers to Check Your Progress
4.0 OBJECTIVES
Through this Unit our aim is to give you an idea of how the raw creative input by
reporters is converted into a finished well tailored output.
By the end of this Unit you should be able to:
• define news editing;
• describe the principles of editing;
• describe the functions of news editing;
• describe and discuss the problems encountered in news editing;
• describe the duties, responsibilities and qualities of a sub-editor ; and
• edit a Copy.
4.1 INTRODUCTION
In a newspaper, editing plays a pivotal role. A news item or a news story, as it is
called, is written by reporters who are on endless assignments and never have the
time. So they give a rough draft to the story. The sub-editor gives finesse to this
draft and polishes it to perfection. What you see as a reader in your newspaper is the
effort of the desk editors. The desk ensures that you can read your paper along with
the morning tea. This unit will give you an idea of how the raw creative input is
converted into a finished well tailored output.
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4.1.1 What is Editing? Editing for Print and
Online Media
News stories come in from various sources. If you pick up your newspaper and just
read the first page, you will find that it has stories which are credited to either
individuals or news agencies like PTI, UNI, AFP, UPI, TASS and many more, or to
the correspondent or reporter. These stories are tailored to the required shape and
size by using the right kind of symbols and expressions with news sense in mind.
And all this happens before they come to you. This process of checking stories for
grammatical errors, syntax or sentence structure and style, facts and figures clarifying
for easy understanding, and condensing for economy of space is editing.
It also means writing the headlines, paraphrasing the story as per the style book of
the organization, writing an attractive lead and allotting the story to a particular
page
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4.2 EDITING FOR DIFFERENT AREAS
Editing doesn’t mean deleting your words - it is actually a skilled exercise to align
your grammar correctly. And it also means giving the final shape to a programme
on radio, a television programme, an internet story or a picture for publishing and
telecasting. Editing print copy is not the same as editing a web copy. The text must
wrap correctly, the kerning and leading must be perfect, the style cannot be
compromised with and all this to manage two extra words of hanging text. The
television and radio editing means not only editing the script but also editing the
audio and visual components by using softwares specially created for this task.
Let’s take an insight into the editing processes for these media and photographs.
The most difficult, but most satisfying editing assignments are those in which you
must build a show from a great many takes. In this case, the edit is the major
production phase. This is especially true in EFP post production, when all takes are
shot with a single camera to be combined later.
On-Line and Off-Line: Off-line editing produces a work print, a preliminary and
usually lower-quality tape dubbed from the higher quality master. On-line editing
produces that master copy that is used on the air or for dubbing off copies. The
terms off- line and on-line don’t refer so much to the tape format used, but rather
the intent of the edited product.
The major advantage of off-line editing is that you can take time for reviewing the
unedited material and deciding where to cut, without tying up expensive equipment.
With burn-in dubs (those with a window featuring time code numbers “burned
into” the bottom of the frame), you can identify the exact spot where you’ll cut, and
note these decisions on an editing shot list. Later, you can proceed with the actual
editing.
Too many times, however, people start editing without having properly thought
about the editing sequence. This can sometimes help to save time, but more often
than not you will get lost in a maze of detail. In all but the most routine editing jobs,
you will need to do an editing outline, a list of the desired event sequences and the
necessary transitions
Are you a frequent internet user? Do you like reading the news on the web? Does it
attract your attention more than the hard copy newspaper? In any web content,
designing plays a very important role. The parts of almost any kind of a document
can be broken down into five main sections— Artwork, Titles, Body, Navigation,
and Credits. Not every document will contain all these parts or may contain only
some aspects of each. Let us try and understand each of these elements of web
design.
• Artwork: Even before reading the headlines, readers are often drawn to the
visuals on a page. Both the choice of images and their placement within a
document provide information about the document, the purpose, and its
organization.
• Titles: Typical headlines and titles are larger and more prominent than other
text. These visual cues signal the start of a book, a magazine, an article, or a
major division in a publication such as a chapter of a book or a sub-section of
a report.
• Body: Body copy is the main text found in the publications we read. It is the
text of the stories and articles. Body copy is not the headlines. Beyond the
actual words, the body of a document uses paragraph and character emphasis
and organizational elements to aid in the reading and comprehension of the
material.
• Navigation: Longer publications such as books, newsletters, and annual reports
need some way to help readers find specific information within the document.
From a table of contents to page numbers, sectional elements provide a means
of navigating through and finding specific portions of a document.
• Credits: Differnet types of publications have credits or other informational
elements that contain such items as the name of the advertiser, publisher, or
other entity, an address, a logo, copyright information, and other notices. The
number of parts and where it appears varies by publication type.
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Media Writing 4.2.4 Photo Editing
Pictures submitted for publication in the newspapers and magazines have to be
edited to fit into the layout of the page, and also the unnecessary portions cut off,
which the photographer might have added in the actual composition. The competent
photo editor’s job is to keep the essence of the subject intact. This reduction process,
keeping the essential parts of the photographs intact, is called cropping. Since the
photographers are emotionally involved in shooting their pictures, they might think
whatever they have added in a picture would be published. This aspect is left to the
judgment of the photo editor, when the final composition of the photograph for
publication is made.
It is the job of the photo editor to select the best photograph which tells the story on
its own. The photo editor edits it to suit the space in the page without destroying or
distorting the essence of the picture, and gives it a good display. It is not always to
the liking of the photographer, but the photo editor has to do his job. A good photo
editor always takes the photographers into confidence, holding frequent discussions
with them from the time the assignments are given to them till the final outcome of
the photograph on the photo editor’s desk. It is the photo editor’s duty to give the
photographers ideas about the picture possibilities. While the photographers are in
the dark room with the enlarger, he joins them in composing the picture on the easel
board, which saves a lot of time, and leaves no ill feeling with the photographers.
What most of the photographers hate is when the picture is trimmed and edited in
their absence.
Photo editing is one of the most powerful tools at the photographer’s disposal. In
classic photography, the term photo editing can refer to everything between
processing the film in chemicals and seeing the final print. In modern digital
photography most of the processing magic happens in the computer. This is good
news for people without a studio and darkroom. Before digital technology came
along, there was a limited amount that could be done using an enlarger with filters,
masks and other manual devices; but the era of film and smelly chemicals seems to
be drawing to a close. Nowadays we have computer software which we can use to
achieve far more—ranging from simple improvements to dramatic effects. Photo
editing techniques can be applied to all photos, whether taken by a digital camera
or scanned from the negative or print from a film camera. The software which is
used by most professional photographers is Adobe Photoshop. There are essentially
two versions - the professional one which is very costly and Photoshop Elements
which does most of the things an enthusiast could wish for at about one tenth the
price.
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4.3 SUB EDITING OR COPY EDITING Online Media
Copy editing is the editorial work that an editor does to make changes and
improvements to a story. This is for the print media. Let us see what it is.
The “5Cs” summerise the copy editor’s job:
a) clear
b) correct
c) concise
d) comprehensible
e) consistent.
These emphasize “make it say what it means and mean what it says”.
Copy refers to the written or typewritten text for publication. An editor who does
the task of refining the copy is called the copy editor or sub editor. He renders the
text to flow sensibly, fairly and accurately so that it poses no legal problems for the
publisher.
Copy editors are also responsible for selecting which news agency’s wire copy the
newspaper will use and for rewriting it to house style. Often, the copy editor is the
only person, other than the author, to read an entire text before publication.
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Media Writing Certain redundancies should also be avoided while editing. Many a times we describe
planes which are “totally destroyed” or a meeting where we “assemble together”.
Remember when we refer to something as having got destroyed it means complete
destruction. So the word totally is not required. Similarly, when you assemble, it
means coming together and the word assemble need not be written. Such needless
repetitions are called redundancies. Beware of these redundancies. Here is a list of
the most common redundancies seen in the newspapers. You may add your own to
the list:
• Absolutely necessary
• Advance planning
• Ask the question
• Assemble together
• Cancelled out
• Carbon copy
• Cooperate together
• Exactly identical
• Necessary requirements
• Postpone until later
• Temporarily suspended
• True facts
• Honest truth
• Fair and just
• Fall down
• Friend of mine
Clarify the story: As a sub-editor you will have to give clarity to the story by making
the story readable in writing style. Remove ambiguous words, and change sentence
patterns to remove fog index, which is the measure of abstraction and complexity
of words. Abbreviations, if less known should be elaborated and popular elaborations
can be abbreviated.
Verify the facts: Be 200% sure of the facts in the write up you are editing. Check
and cross check before finalizing the story.
Avoid sensationalizing the strong sentiments in the write up: Never play up or
exaggerate facts in a news story. It not only puts a doubt on the authenticity of the
write up but also reflects badly on the ethics and reputation of the organization.
Cut out on gender bias in the news item: The write up should neither be too anti-
women or anti-men. Also objectionable pictures of women and comments on them
should be avoided.
Remove leanings of class, caste, religion and creed from the story: Any write up
should not instigate negative feelings for any class, creed, caste or religion in society.
Also the story should not have obvious and apparent leanings to any of the above.
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Keep stories akin to the policies of the newspaper: While writing and editing a Editing for Print and
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news story the policies of the organization on various issues of importance should
be kept in mind.
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Media Writing In a sense, we do not need to read on but we all would. We would want to know
more about James Wilson, why he was soaking his feet in gasoline, where he was
performing this act, and so on. And, all this would be told in subsequent paragraphs,
in a logical order. This particular example is what is called a “teasing” intro, for it
arouses our curiosity and makes us read on.
Opening para: Conventionally, the news story has followed the “inverted pyramid”
structure. The most significant information is placed at the top, the story’s beginning
and other details follow in their order of importance. Thus the story tapers to smaller
and smaller details, until it disappears. It may begin with the five Ws and one H,
i.e., the who-what-why-when-where and how. Basically, a news story should answer
what, when and where. The answers should find place in the opening paragraph.
The three other questions – who, why and how – do not necessarily arise in all the
news copy. In case they do, the answers are accommodated in the subsequent
paragraphs. Each succeeding paragraph should add an essential detail without being
dependent in content or style on what follows.
The inverted pyramid style enables:
i) a news story to be self-contained, even if paragraphs are deleted at the bottom
due to space shortage [consequently, a coherent story is left at each point
where it could be cut];
ii) a hurried reader to skip over many stories in a short time by just reading the
opening paragraphs [those with greater interest could read a story completely];
iii) a sub-editor, to write the headline in the gist in the first few paragraphs; and
iv) a sub-editor to change the order of paras or insert new material, even after the
matter has been sent to the press for composing.
If the news is not in the opening paragraph, trace out where it is buried. Bring it to
the top, and also locate its supporting details. If there are two important news points
or angles that vie for the top spot, assess and evaluate which one is better and
catchier. This could call for rewriting the entire news item.
As a budding journalist and a future sub-editor you should be aware that there are
standards set by responsible news organizations for the guidance of their staff and
by news agencies for their members and clients. These are available as booklets
and are given to an employee when he or she joins.
Editors write stylebooks, copyeditors use them and reporters hate them. Probably
they curb the independence of writing and reporting. Style books work as authority
to usage but it cannot be a substitute for the hard work, acquired skills and natural
artistry of the writer.
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Dictionary and Thesaurus Editing for Print and
Online Media
These are the Bible for any sub-editor. Remember to keep a dictionary and a thesaurus
handy at all times. Good editors always keep a pocket sized dictionary and Roget’s
Thesaurus in their bags.
A dictionary explains the meanings and a thesaurus gives synonyms to all possible
listed words. They will help you greatly in sub-editing and re-writing. A thesaurus
will give you numerous alternatives both easy and difficult to choose from. It will
help you to write better.
Avoid the gratuitous use of “woman” as in “a woman doctor/a woman Army officer/
a woman scientist”. The person should simply be described as a doctor/Major/
scientist: the use of her full name and the ensuing text will make it clear that we are
talking about a woman.
Companies, groups and organisations etc are inanimate. They take “that” or “which”,
depending on the syntax, and not “who”. They take a singular verb. (But Sport uses
plural verbs for teams).
Add a Note when something is correct but looks as though it may not be. Reporters
can save news desk staff and production journalists (and themselves) much tedious
secondary researching by noting unusual spellings or apparent contradictions in
text.
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4.7 ANSWERS TO CHECK YOUR PROGRESS
Check Your Progress 1
i) Editing is required to give a final shape to the work ; to check for errors of
grammar, syntax and spellings.
Check Your Progress 2
i) A good editor beefs up descriptions, rearranges sequences, checks facts, corrects
the language etc. A bad editor just checks the copy for spelling mistakes.
ii) The qualities of a good sub-editor are that s/he needs to be calm, decisive, non
partisan, confident and a mature person who knows his/her target readership
and is knowledgeable.
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Media and Communication Skills
Indira Gandhi
National Open University
School of Humanities
Block
4
INTRODUCTION TO SOCIAL AND CYBER MEDIA
Block Introduction 3
UNIT 1
Types of Social Media 5
UNIT 2
The World Wide Web 18
UNIT 3
Internet and Impact on Journalism 28
UNIT 4
Impact of Social and Cyber Media 38
INTRODUCTION TO BLOCK 4 :
INTRODUCTION TO SOCIAL AND CYBER
MEDIA
Welcome to the last block of our course on Media and Communication Skills. This
Block is called Introduction to Social and Cyber Media and as the name implies –
we introduce you to the various social media that are so much a part of our lives
today. The pace of innovation in this line is so rapid that the slogan for information
technology is “If it works its obsolete”! This means that even as a product is being
perfected to be put in the market,an advanced version is already being developed.
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UNIT 1 TYPES OF SOCIAL MEDIA
Structure
1.0 Objectives
1.1 Introduction
1.2 Computer Network: Email, Internet, Intranets, Multimedia
1.2.1 Information Explosion, Control and Dissemination
1.2.2 Uses of Computer Networks
1.2.3 Words for The Web
1.2.4 Languages for The Computer
1.3 Multimedia
1.3.1 Uses of Multimedia
1.4 The Spread of Information in Corporates
1.5 Text Messages
1.6 Let Us Sum Up
1.7 Answers to Check Your Progress
1.0 OBJECTIVES
This unit will allow you to:
• Understand that computers provide rapid access to up-to-date information by
networking
• Find out what a computer network can do for organizations and for individuals
• Look at some of the ordinary words used by computer users, as well as less
well-known words connected with computing
• Begin thinking about information sharing in corporate communications, and
the use of sms or short messaging services
1.1 INTRODUCTION
The slogan in the information technology is “If it works, it’s obsolete”. Such is the
pace of innovation today that even as a product is being perfected and made available
to the market, the research and development wing of an organization is already
working to improve it!
You are familiar with the idea of a library as a place for storing knowledge. Books
are stored under a system by which you can find them easily by author, title or even
subject: the system allows you to identify and retrieve the information you need. It
has been pointed out that these are also the functions of a computer! It can store
information, and it has a system by which you can identify and retrieve the
information you need. And it can do this much faster than the process of printing
and publishing.
For example, the Books in Print database is the world’s largest list of books currently
available in the market. This database contains information pertaining to over 10
lakh books!
The USA has a database of Federal Research in Progress that provides access to
information about government-funded-projects in the physical sciences, engineering
and the life sciences.
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Personal e-mail has become a way of life in the 21st century. A newspaper
report from the New York Times News Service (Published in The Hindu on
May 30, 2007) says that the British Library, which has a collection of such
historic objects as the Gutenberg Bible, the Magna Carta and Shakespeare’s
First Folio, is collecting e-mail notes for a month. The projects is known as
Email Britain.
The Library wants “memorable or significant e-mail” messages that fall into
any one of these 10 categories:
Blunders, complaints, spam, humour, life-changing e-mails, news, love, and
romance, everyday e-mail, world around you, tales from abroad.
Here is an example of an email – company network (the person was later
fired!):
“To: All Users
Subject: The person who ate my muffin!!!
It would have been better if U asked for one of my muffins instead of just
taking it without permission.”
(A muffin is a small round cake or bun, often eaten with butter)
Here is an example of a complaint, a note sent to a restaurant:
“I really really ridiculously enjoy eating chicken and bacon sandwiches…
Unfortunately however, a Chicken and Bacon and Salad sandwich that I
purchased today … was not only an insult to man’s greatest edible
achievement, but also taints your own brand’s impeccable reputation for
excellence and customer satisfaction.”
And this is a description of a life-changing moment. [Note: The London Eye
is a giant wheel installed during the millennium celebrations (the year 2000).
A work “do” is an informal British way of referring to a party at work. You
will find this meaning listed in the dictionary under the entry for a do as a
noun.]”
Last night Dave surprised me and took me on the London Eye (I thought I
was going to his work do.) Anyway to cut a long story short… he asked me to
marry him – after lots of really girly behaviour of sobbing my heart-out I
nodded my head!”
From the user’s point of view, the Internet or the World Wide Web consists of a vast
world wide collection of documents, usually called pages. A web page may contain
links or pointers to other pages anywhere in the world. You can get this linked
page by clicking on the link, a hyperlink, which is usually underlined or in special
colour. Pages that are linked in this way form a hypertext. That is, they are not a
single text, but the pages can be put together by the user while reading, to from a
large text of the user’s choice.
You search the web or find your way through it (navigate the web) using a browser.
The browser has a button on which you click, which lets you return to a previous
page, save a page or print a page. To surf the Internet means to rapidly look through
its sites (just as one surfs the ocean, or rides its waves using a surfboard). To surf
the Internet, you need to be connected to it with a modem. You will also need a
browser, which is software that enables you to view the web pages. To go to a
particular website you need to type in its URL or web address. If you are not sure
of the address, or not sure on which site or sites you can find, you can browse the
page using menus links. You can scroll up or down the page (move the text up or
down on your screen) by using a button or mouse.
You can download programs and information from the Internet. Freeware is what
you don’t pay for; shareware can be tried for free for a certain period, and then has
to be paid for. You must be careful not to get a computer virus from the Internet.
You can buy anti-virus software to protect your system against viruses. Otherwise,
your computer might crash!
Activity
How many of the words in bold do you know? Try to learn the words that are
new to you, using a computer to do the activities of surfing, downloading etc.,
suggested by the words. (Visit an internet café if you don’t have a computer of
your own.)
Java allows highly interactive Web pages. Using Java you can design a web page
with which a user can play noughts and crosses, or chess. Or you can get an income
tax form, fill in items, and see the calculations made instantly. This is possible
because Java uses “applets” or small applications that your computer downloads
along with the Web page. For example, a game-playing program, written in Java, is
downloaded along with the Web page.
1.3 MULTIMEDIA
What is Multimedia?
Multimedia has been called “the rising star in the networking firmament”. It allows
audio and video to be digitized and transported electronically.
What is a digital signal? It is a signal that is not continuous (an analogue signal is a
continuous signal). Think of a light switch: it is either on or off. It is digital. But
some switches rotate continuously, to allow the light to grow gradually brighter or
dimmer. These are analogue switches. (The American spelling is analog.)
The difference between analogue video and digital video is the following. Analogue
video scans an image in horizontal lines. Digital video is a sequence of “pixels”,
that is, “picture elements”, or small “dots of information” in a rectangular grid.
Today the term “multimedia” is restricted to mean “two or more continuous media”,
that is, “media that have to be played during some well-defined time interval, usually
with some user interaction”. So this term is used for a computer that has audio and
video capability, and with which a user can interact.
Literally, however, multimedia is just two or more media. Even a simple book with
illustrations uses “multi media”! Books have had pictures in them, to decorate or to
illustrate the text, from earliest times. Then came a time when a book would be sold
along with a cassette which had the book read out – a “talking book”, as it were.
Can you think of some uses for talking books?
Children used to have grandparents or parents read out stores to them; now they
can use the cassette instead, looking at the pages of the book – the print and the
illustrations – as they listen. The read-out version of the book usually has a bell or
a small sound to indicate at what point the child should turn the page to the next
page.
Many people spend a lot of time driving to and from work. They find talking books
a useful way of catching up with their “reading” : a cassette plays in the car as they
drive. Or a CD (compact disc)!
And of course, talking books help the blind or the “visually challenged” to read.
The well-known writer Ved Mehta describes how he used to listen far into the night
to the great English and Russian classics in translation on gramophone records,
read out by the best actors of the day. Ved Mehta is probably one of the most well-
read people today!
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1.3.1 Uses of Multimedia
Who uses multimedia?
Companies use it to make presentations. Sales charts and other graphics can be
animated, given attractive music and voice over, and interwoven with video clips
showing actual product use, customer responses, or projections for the future; and
all this can be combined with the sales executive’s own voice or visual presence.
Institutions use it to give “visitors” a guided tour. Multimedia can create a “virtual
world”, which can take you on a tour of the institution. Many institutions now have
their “prospectus” on a CD which tells you what the institution stands for , lets you
see who its officials are and listen to them, show you the campus and the buildings,
and talks with the customers or students of the institution.
Advertisers use it sell their product. They can mix animation and real-life video,
fantasy and reality, using multimedia. Text can be animated, and so can pictures.
One advertisement has a car that winks at us with its headlight. One of the earliest
enduring images of Indian advertising was a little girl in a white frock for a popular
brand of soap powder. The girl twirls her dress, and as she does so, she turns into an
image on a packet of soap! You see these advertisements on television, of course,
but also on the internet.
Multimedia is used for learning languages! Learners’ Dictionaries for English (for
example) now come with CDs that “speak” a word you choose, in two accents:
British, or American.
People like you and me can send an animated greeting card through email for
birthdays, anniversaries and festivals, which will sing and dance at the user’s end.
These cards are created using multimedia. So multimedia is used for general social
interaction.
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Note: a) Space given below the question is for writing your answer.
b) Check your answer with the one given at the end of this unit.
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Be careful not to use these sms forms in formal writing, such as in your examinations,
formal letters, reports, and so on. There is nothing wrong in inventing such new
forms for a new medium of written communication. Writing systems have arisen in
response to the needs of communication on the one hand, and of the materials
available for writing on the other.
However, we must stress the need for you to choose the appropriate style of
communication for the appropriate occasion. Knowing the sms forms in addition to
ordinary English spelling maybe essential, but do not think of substituting text
messaging for educated written English!
Another example is libraries that are networked. If a book you need is not
available in your local library, the libraries can check the database of a
networked library, and may be able to get the book for you by inter-library
loan.
Information storage for industries like banking or air traffic control has to be
reliable and unified. A network makes sure that all organizations within an
industry have access to the same reliable information. Bankers can check the
day’s currency exchange rates. Air traffic controllers are linked the world over,
to keep track of the airplanes that fly to destinations all over the world.
Many people receive their telephone bills via the computer. They can arrange
with their bank for the bill to be paid electronically, by debiting their bank
account. On line shopping facilities allow you to purchase books and airplane
tickets on line. You can have flowers and gifts delivered in another city as a
gift, by placing an order on line, and pay for it on line as well!
Many people read newspapers on line while they are at work. E-mail or
electronic mail is now widely used by millions of people. These messages can
contain an audio or video clip in addition to text. It is now also possible to
choose a video to watch from a central service provider. Video servers are
programmed to accept user requests, locate the movie from the storage device
and play it in the output device, and bill the customer.
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Introduction to Social and
Cyber Media UNIT 2 THE WORLD WIDE WEB
Structure
2.0 Objectives
2.1 Introduction
2.2 The World Wide Web
2.3 The Web as a Medium
2.4 Creating Content for the Web
2.4.1 Elements of the Web
2.4.2 Building a Site Map
2.4.3 Writing in Screen-Sized Chunks
2.4.4 Hyperlinks and Pop-up Windows
2.5 Writing for Browsers
2.6 Let Us Sum Up
2.7 Answers to Check Your Progress
2.0 OBJECTIVES
This unit will allow you to:
• understand the Internet as a medium of communication,
• identify the main elements of the World Wide Web,
• understand how writing for the Web differs from writing for print media, and
• learn how to create simple content for the web.
2.1 INTRODUCTION
We now know how the computer can help us communicate with people around the
globe and those not as far away, and how networking has made a difference to the
case and speed of such communication in both professional and personal spheres.
In this Unit we will go on to talk about one aspect of computer networking –
increasingly important activity, as more and more people look to this medium as
their main source of information and entertainment. This unit introduces you to the
process and principles of writing for the Web.
The Internet, which was first developed in 1982, is a “mega” network of computer
networks spread across the world. Originally used mainly for information sharing
between research institutions, the Internet gradually became a popular medium for
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communication, first among universities, then spreading to the information The World Wide Web
technology corporate before hitting the general public in the mid-1990s. Since then
it has grown rapidly, and current estimates are that nearly 1.8 billion people use the
Internet for some form of communication and research (www.internetstats.com).
In India, perhaps similar to the rest of the world, more that 60 percent of users are
below the age of 30, and about 25 percent are below 21 (www.sify.com).
The World Wide Web is the part of the Internet that is visible to us – it provides the
‘face’ of this network and links the thousands of information sources contained on
the computers that form the network. It is organized sources contained on the
computers that form the network. It is organized in a way that can be accessed
easily by users. It provides the interface between the physical network of wires and
satellite and microwave links and servers and the information contained within,
and the user. Now, however, we tend to use the terms ‘Internet’, ‘Web’, ‘Net’ and
‘Cyberspace’ more or less interchangeably to mean the online space that we access
to find information, communicate with friends and colleagues, or be entertained
through multimedia content.
While we do not need to know much about the technical details that make the Web
possible, it does help to understand how information is organized in this medium,
so that as writers we can create material that best utilizes its capabilities.
Activity
Observe and discuss: What are the different kinds of ‘sites’ that one finds on
the Web? How is your reading experience different on the Web as compared to
other texts such as books, newspapers, or magazines? Which do you prefer and
why?
Readers can also move through a web text in different directions, accessing
information in “layers” of detail according to need and convenience. What does
this mean for a writer? It means that the structure of the writing must take into
account how a Web user approaches a piece of writing. If, like most media writers,
your intention is to keep the reader on your page, then the page must be written and
presented in a way that keeps the reader interested enough to not switch to another
site.
The writer must also consider the potential of the medium and make full use of it.
So while in a printed text, one can illustrate ideas or enhance them with pictures
and graphics, on the Web, you can use not only illustrative graphics, you can also
animate them. You can plug in video and sound, and link to other resources that
will help you explain your subject better.
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something on the computer screen, on the Web, can have at any moment several
windows open, engaging in a different kind of interaction in each. He or she could
be simultaneously reading the online version of a daily newspaper, searching for
information on a certain topic using a search engine like Google, listening to music
from a digital radio channel or from a CD, and chatting with a friend on an instant
messaging service, all while working on a document using the computer’s word
processor. The text on your web site competes with all these things for attention, all
of which are available on the same physical interface, all instantly accessible to the
user. Attention spans therefore, are considerably reduced. So the writer must be
able to package information into small, easily digestible units
Another major distinguishing feature of the Internet is its non-linearity. This means
that a text can be constructed in small units that do not necessarily flow in a sequential
order, and which may link to other short units in related but separate subject heads.
The same property which allows a user to go from text to image to sound, also
allows the user to go from an article on sports in India to a related piece on cricket,
to another on politics and funding in performance sports, or yet another on the
history of women’s cricket, all beginning with the same set of key words. This
movement can happen either because a search engine such as Google will throw up
a variety of related articles or because articles are linked to each other and to extended
bits of text (called hypertext). You may have noticed certain highlighted terms in a
Web document that show up as “links” when your cursor moves over them. Each of
these highlighted terms leads to an article that expands the term or explains it further
or leads to related information – these are hyperlinks.
Activity:
Go to a company web site or to a portal such as yahoo.com or rediff.com. Can
you identify the hyperlinks? Do you come across any hypertext that pops up
as your mouse goes over the words?
And what does this mean for the writer? It means that texts are not planned in
single long units, but as blocks of related sub-texts that can be linked in a variety of
ways depending on how people might wish to access the information in them. This
again means that writers generally create short pieces of text that can function as
independent units or can be linked together to form a longer unit.
Of course, there are spaces on the Web that allow for more lengthy, detailed
documents, and there are users who require these, but by and large, writing for the
Web must keep in mind the characteristics of the medium and the needs and usage
patterns of the majority of readers.
Activity
Look at the front page of a newspaper and the home page of the electronic
version of the same paper. How are the two ‘fronts’ organized? What are the
major differences in organization and in structure? Is the language any
different? How does the ‘look’ of the page differ and does this influence
readability in any way?
The web page of The Hindu, a daily newspaper, has a listing of the main sections on
the left and a panel with short introductions to the main stories, indicating that there
is more if readers want to read further. If you visit the site (www.thehindu.com) you
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will see that there is a ticker running below the main story much like the ones on The World Wide Web
television, giving the breaking news. Below the main story is a listing of other
major stories in the issue, readers can click on if interested.
8) Words that “pop up” as your cursor moves over text on the screen are
called __________.
A portal is a web page that leads to several other sites or information sources tied
together by a theme or common structure. The term portal signifies that these pages
are like ‘gateways’ to the collection of information. The portal of rediff.com, for
instance, does not have any introductory text, but simply links to other parts of the
site and to stories of the day.
It usually appears as a string of letter and numbers following the term http://www.in
the address box of your browser.
A hyperlink is a link to another page or a document related to the one you are
currently viewing. When you link on a highlighted term or an image, the browser
takes you to this other document, or other ‘location’ on the Web. Hyperlinks represent
a method of cross-referencing that allows you to easily access related content on
the Web.
Activity
Spend some time browsing the Web and see if you can identify these various
elements. Write down the urls of some web sites that you like to visit often.
Can you see how the home page differs from the “inside” pages of a site?
So when you create content for the Web, you must think not only of what information
is going into the document, but how it is to be organized and linked with other
information.
The first step in creating material for a web site is to build what is called a site map.
This is an outline of all the elements that will go into the site, sort of like a list of
chapters in a book.
The site map not only shows the listing of topics that will be included in the site,
but also the “levels” of access. In other words, the site map shows which will be
primary links direct from the home page, and which pages will be linked through
the secondary or inside pages, and so on. The main effort in creating content for the
web lies in this stage. Once the structure is clear and makes sense, then filling in the
details is done.
At this stage you must decide how you want to direct the user through your site, and
also how most people might ‘navigate’ or make their way through the site. Your
decision on how to build the site map may take into account the following –
• What information are most people likely to want?
• What information does the organization want people to have at first glance?
• What is needed to show people at first glance what this site is about?
• What kind of information can be put together?
• What level of detail is required in each part of the site?
Basically, writing for the web is like packaging information into small, related chunks
which fit with each other – people can then take the chunk they want and go into
more details if they wish. But each chunk should make sense in itself. This is why
it is important to have a good, logically organized site map that can direct the way
you write up the content. Ideally, each section should be no more than a screen in
length – this is about 250 to 300 words. If more detail is required, then encourage
the interested reader to go to one more level in the site rather than burdening all
readers with too much information. Suppose you were writing an article on career
options in the broad field of communications. If you were writing this article for the
education supplement of a newspaper, you would perhaps plan a 500 word article
that began with a general overview of what the study and practice of communications
is all about, and then lead into specializations and sub-specializations, and what
sorts of career opportunities exist in each of these, ending with a summary of future
directions in the field.
If you were to convert the same topic for use on a web site, you would first section
the whole article into meaningful units, and then write the units in a way that they
can make sense independently. This would mean a small amount of repetition in
terms of setting the context and providing a sense of linkage with the other links.
The introduction would necessarily have to include a mention of the other sections
so that they can be hyperlinked either directly through the text or listed as links on
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this:
When you expand this site map, the first section may read something like this, with
the terms in blue linking to inside pages
Careers in communications
Communications is a broad and diverse field of study and practice. It rages
from the study of interactions between two or more people in various settings,
to information and entertainment targeted at large groups. It includes
commercial applications such as advertising and public relations, as well
as public service or public interest applications like journalism and
communication for social change. It occurs over a variety of media, from
print to electronic (radio and television) to new technology (the Internet)….
Of course, there are sites that offer lengthy content under a single link, for instance
stories in online newspapers and magazines. These too tend to have short (one or
two line) descriptions on the home page of the publication, with word “more” at the
end for users to click on in case they wish to read further. These lengthier links
assume that only interested or dedicated readers would read on further and, therefore,
would not mind scrolling down the screen to read the whole article.
Activity
Take a long feature from a newspaper or magazine and see how you can rewrite
if for a web site by breaking it up into Sections. Then go to a web site and see
how a long piece of text has been cut into Screen-sized Segments. Try to
reconstruct the outline based on the structure of the units. Can you comment
on the logic of the structure and how it reflects a web user’s preferences?
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2.4.4 Hyperlinks and Pop-up Windows The World Wide Web
As you create content for a web site, you must keep in mind that it is not necessary
to elaborate into short notes that can appear as pop up windows or linked as hypertext.
This allows you to write spare, skeletal text that addresses the general reader who
can go to the next level or click on these hyperlinks if he or she requires more
detail.
What this means for you as a writer is that you have to think about your text at
different levels of complexity. At the first level is the most basic information. The
next level can elaborate on this basic information, or go into different aspects of the
topic, and different levels of detail can be accommodated through hyperlinks and
pop up boxes
Activity
Look through a reference book such as an illustrated encyclopedia or a user
manual. You will probably notice several boxed items and illustrations that
go with each chapter or block of text. How would you recreate this text for the
web? Which items would go into pop up windows or be packaged into
hypertext?
Make it scannable
The text should use key words so that someone who is quickly going through it will
be able to pick up on what the main theme or topic is. Think about how users might
search for this kind of information. What are the key words they are likely to search
by? Who is your article or web site aimed at and what are their key interests?
Because information on the Web co-exists with so much material, it is often difficult
to get people to stop and look at your material – unless it is clearly marked out by
common key words that most people interested in the topic would use. Another
device that makes text easily scannable is good sub-headings and bulleted lists.
Such highlighting pulls the eye toward the information and makes it instantly
understandable.
In summary, writing for the Web does not require any specific skills that are different
from any other form of writing. It takes good organizational skills, the ability to
structure information in a logical and efficient manner, and clarity of expression.
Perhaps there is more emphasis on structure and conciseness than in other media,
because of the nature of this medium.
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6) Non-linearity
7) Blocks; sub-texts
8) Hypertext
Check our Progress 2
1) Convergence, non-linearity and hypertextuality
2) Web browser
3) Web page or home page or landing page
4) Portal
5) Uniform resource locator
6) Hyperlinks
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Cyber Media UNIT 3 INTERNET AND IMPACT ON
JOURNALISM
Structure
3.0 Objectives
3.1 Introduction
3.2 A Brief History of the Internet
3.3 Journalists and the Internet
3.3.1 Advantages and Disadvantages
3.4 E-mail
3.5 Internet addresses or URLs (Universal Resource Locators)
3.6 Operating Systems, Web Browsers and Search Engines
3.7 Blogs
3.8 Let Us Sum Up
3.9 Answers to Check Your Progress
3.0 OBJECTIVES
This unit familiarizes you with the role of the Internet in writing and media.
After having read this unit you should be able to:
• Understand the niceties of the Internet
• Its role in the Media
• Blogging/ New Media/ Participatory Journalism
3.1 INTRODUCTION
Writing paper, pen, a dictionary, thesaurus and encyclopedia or an almanac are the
basic tools of a writer. The latest but most effective addition to this list is the Internet,
almost encompassing all other mentioned tools. It can be described as a worldwide
system of computers connected to one another, allowing the transfer of information
in seconds. Most people think the Internet and the World Wide Web (WWW) are
the same thing, but the Web is a subset of the Internet. And, like such systems as e-
mail, Usenet, FTP (file transfer protocol), the Web requires certain software for
Internet users or surfers or netizens (citizens who are net savvy) to access it.
It goes even further because by placing news online it means that people can leave
comments and start a discussion with other people about an article. Previously
people would have to write in to the editors or phone-in which was a lengthy process.
The Internet saves journalists’ time and news organisations money. Only a few
years ago, journalists found information only by visiting libraries. Many towns lack
good libraries with reference materials, so reporters had to travel to nearby cities or
settle for incomplete information. Even with the telephone, journalists had to make
many calls, leave messages and wait for return calls before finding the information
they needed. With the Internet, reporters can find diverse voices and up-to-date
information quickly, and at their fingertips. The Internet enables reporters to write
more stories and better stories.
The Internet also has some disadvantages. The users may have a hard time sifting
through the mountains of information on the Internet. And some of the information
may be questionable. Furthermore, journalists should not solely depend on online
sources as many important documents are not online. In spite of the drawbacks, the
Internet gives reporters new choices for finding information. They can use e-mail,
go directly to a Web site, browse the Internet, and explore a search engine, read
newspapers and magazines online or on ‘blogs’.
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3.4 E-MAIL
The advent of telephone service in the 19th century revolutionized newsgathering.
Electronic mail (e-mail) is doing the same thing in the 21st century. Reporters use e-
mail to contact hard-to-reach or reluctant sources. Even people who travel a lot
make time to check their e-mail. In fact e-mail is a way of keeping in touch with
sources, exchanging ideas with colleagues or communicating with readers or viewers.
There are several free e-mail sites such as gmail.com, aol.com, rediffmail.com,
hotmail.com, yahoo.com, etc. to feed the increasing demand of email service seekers
in the world. But the romance with emails has its pitfalls too.
Keep in mind what Eliot Spitzer, the former New York governor said on the subject:
“Never talk when you can nod. And never write when you can talk. My only
addendum is never put it in email.”
However, in this age of web, it is not possible to avoid email communication. Emails
have become an integral part of our daily life, whether we like it or not. Is it not
better to understand the niceties of this boon of technology?
Rule 1: MOST IMPORTANT - Replying
If a mail is sent to you by your supervisor, team lead manager or just a senior, you
have to reply to him. Examples of some simple replies are:
1) “Thanks got it”.
2) “OK”
Even in the case when people who are reporting to you send you an email a prompt
reply or even acknowledgement is highly recommended.
Rule 2: Using Cc and Bcc field
To: Your actual main recipient (to whom this email is a must read)
Cc: (send a Carbon copy) of the email to the parties whom you want to inform.
Bcc: (send a Blind Carbon copy) of the email to some other party that you think
needs to know about the subject, without letting other parties (i.e. the To and Cc
recipients) know about this person’s knowledge.
Every screen of information on the Internet has an address, called its URL or universal
resource locator. The “http” (hypertext transfer protocol) is the protocol or computer
scheme used to access information. This protocol allows computers to move
information (text, graphics, audio and video) around the Web. It allows a person to
click on words to find another document residing in another computer. The “www”
is part of the host computer’s name. But keep in mind, that not every address on the
World Wide Web has “www” as its prefix.
Some of the Web browsers currently available for personal computers (PC) include
Internet Explorer (with several versions; the latest IE8), Mozilla Firefox (also with
several versions, Safari (developed by the Apple and used in the iphone), Netscape
and Opera etc. The latest to join them is the Chrome, developed by Google. It has
unleashed a browser war. Browers do not get talked about much. A lot of people
simply click on the “icon” on their computer that take them to the Internet—and
that is as far as it goes. And in a way that is enough. Most of us just get into a car and
turn the key. We do not know what kind of engine we have or what features we
have. We are just happy that it takes us where we have to go.
Search engines are not thinking people. Unlike librarians, they cannot ask a journalist
to tell them more about the topic or ascertain what way the journalist is using a
keyword. The search engine identifies all web sites containing that keyword, no
matter the definition or context. It then lists the Web sites containing the keyword,
according to how pertinent the Web site is to the journalist’s keyword search. This
is called relevancy ranking.
But do not forget the Wikipedia, the biggest single mine of information on any
subject or prominent individual. However, the web space does not only contain a
mine of information but it is also full of misinformation. The internet users are
expected to use their discretion while navigating the web world in search of
information.
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3.7 BLOGS
Blog term is a mash up or blend of website-logging. It is a shortened term of Weblog.
It is not something new. Comments are what make blogs really different from a
web site as interaction is unique with blogs. Jorn Barger coined the term Weblog on
Dec. 17, 1997. It entered into lexicon – Webster’s word of the year -2004. The entry
says “Blog noun (1999, a web site that contains an online personal journal with
reflections, comments, and other hyperlinks provided by the writer”. It was in 1999
that Peter Merholz shortened it to blog.
BLOG HOSTS: Starting a basic blog is no more difficult than registering for an
email address. Within a few minutes you can start blogging. All you have to do is to
sign up with a blog host, pick a name and you are ready to start posting. If you are
new to blogging or not particularly computer-savvy, the best way to start blogging
is to begin simply- and that means signing up with a blog host. The host will provide
a web address for your blog, various ready-made page templates and easy-to-use
online tools for adding or updating posts. You won’t have to worry about anything
vaguely technical such as registering and managing a domain name, learning HTML,
or installing special software. Blogger allows you to use your own domain name.
Blogger was started in August 1999. It was acquired by Google in 2003.
WHY BLOGGING?
1) Exploring a hobby or passion
2) Sharing information
3) Making money (Advertising on blogs reached $283 millions in 2007)
4) To fight injustice
5) As a substitute for therapy
6) To know you are not alone
7) To tap the creative inner spirit
BUT
A) Choose a subject that genuinely interests you
B) Decide whether any topics are off limits.
C) Think about your potential readers. (Choosing what to blog about when you
start)
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• Writing Well
• Posting frequently
• Interacting with comments
Bloggers speak truth to powers that be, and are starting to fill the checks and balances
role formerly performed by the conventional press. The best in blogging pursues
the truth, with fact-checking comparable to the best of the press. Phile Meyer, a
journalism professor claims in “The Vanishing Newspaper: Saving Journalism in
the Information Age” that the last print edition of a newspaper will be published
some morning in April 2043. MSM (Mainstream Media, like newspapers, news
channels) have been described as dinosaur media by some of the Web enthusiasts.
But its extinction is not imminent. Lots of bloggers comment on MSM stories. If
the dinosaur media disappears like the giant lizards after an asteroid strike, bloggers
could be bound for a similar fate. Fascinating hybrid of old-style news and blogging,
newspapers are picking up on blogs. Everyone can be a reporter. It is a sort of
“court of appeals in news judgements
At the same time, the Internet is something which everyone has access to these
days. It is a crucial part of our society. It has changed how we communicate and
interact with each other. In fact it has become the vital medium. People visit websites
for information, entertainment and news.
Blogging, the new avtar of media known as the New Media or participatory
journalism permits anyone to establish a real-time, on-line personal platform, for
use as a public diary or pulpit to the world. But blogging is a gem which takes a
minute to learn and a lifetime to master.
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Cyber Media UNIT 4 IMPACT OF SOCIAL AND CYBER
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Structure
4.0 Objectives
4.1 Introduction
4.2 Social and Cyber Media
4.2.1 Social Networking Sites
4.3 Characteristics of Cyber Media
4.4 Impact of Social & Cyber Media
4.4.1 Impact on Education
4.4.2 Impact on Youth
4.4.3 Impact on Society
4.4.4 Impact on Politics
4.4.5 Impact on Business
4.5 Cyber Crime and its Prevention
4.6 Let Us Sum Up
4.7 Answers to Check Your Progress
4.0 OBJECTIVES
Our aim through this Unit is familiarize you with the characteristics of social and
cyber media as well as talk about the impact that it has had on our lives. By the end
of this Unit you will be able to judge for yourselves, the great impact that cyber
media has had on our society. You will also be able to see the positive as well as
negative effects of cyber media. Finally you will also be able to take general
precautions to protect yourself from cyber crimes.
4.1 INTRODUCTION
The very definition of communication and social interaction has changed in today’s
world by the rise and evolution of social and cyber media. Social media platforms
like facebook and twitter have revolutionized the way we communicate with each
other. In the previous unit we saw the impact that the internet had on journalism. In
this unit we will see the tremendous impact that cyber media has had on our social,
personal and professional lives. However, where there are plus points of any new
invention—there are bound to be some misuses too. Pros and cons, use and misuse
always go hand in hand. It is up to each individual as well as institution to see that
they do not get conned by cyber criminals. A number of people in today’s’ world
have been duped and have had to pay a heavy price both in terms of finances and
violation of their privacy. They have realized only too late that they have fallen prey
to cyber predators, and there is nothing they can do about it apart from deactivating
their social media accounts. However, some small precautions go a long way in
preventing such crimes. We will be taking about them in details in this Unit.
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4.2 WHAT IS SOCIAL AND CYBER MEDIA? Media
To understand how the social and cyber media has impacted today’s world, we first
need to know what exactly Social and Cyber media means.
Cyber media is, thus, the Internet-based form of communication that allows the
Web-users to converse with each other or share and exchange information, ideas
opinions, feelings, pictures etc. through a particular network or web. Cyber media
comprises blogs, micro-blogs, instant messaging, wikis, photo-sharing and video-
sharing sites, podcasts, widgets, virtual worlds and social networking sites.
Out of these Facebook, Twitter, and You Tube are perhaps the most frequently
visited networking sites.
Facebook is a socializing networking site that allows people all over the world to
relate with friends, relatives, companies and organizations. Twitter is an informative
micro-blogging website that allows people to post updates in 140 characters or
less. You Tube is the world’s largest video-sharing site. Some other Social networking
sites are the LinkedIn which is a business related site used mainly for professional
networking; Instagram enables users to share pictures and short videos using their
mobile device; Pinterest is a website that offers inspirational and creative content
such as fashions, recipes, event-planning and the likes, and draws a large female
audience.
The benefits of using Social and Cyber media can be seen at many levels. On a
personal level, it helps people to interact with family and friends, to learn new
things, to develop their interests, share information and be entertained. Facebook,
Twitter and You Tube carry a lot of entertaining content shared by billions of people
around the world. On a professional level, networking sites help to add to people’s
knowledge in a particular field and build their professional network by connecting
with other professionals in their field. Cyber media is also of great help to the
corporate companies. Thus at the Corporate level, it helps the companies to converse
with their customers and clients, gain their confidence, get a feedback from them
and promote and elevate the company’s brand and services accordingly.
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Note: a) Space given below the question is for writing your answer.
b) Check your answer with the one given at the end of this unit.
i) Name some networking sites that are commonly in use these days.
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• Online readers have the option to interact with Cyber writers in any and every
website in the World Wide Web. Online readers can give their views and receive
replies from the Cyber writers instantly.
• Cyber media is multimedia as one can supplement ones content with video
footage, images, pictures etc.
• Cyber media is accessible twenty-four hours a day. A web page can be accessed
by anyone though the Internet at anytime. It is, therefore, not time-bound and
has no time limitation.
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• Cyber media also has no space limitation as it is borderless. Users of this Impact of Social and Cyber
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media in any part of the world can access information or communicate with
anyone without restrictions of borders that divide countries.
• The new media is much more difficult to regulate and censor, unlike the old or
the traditional media. It is difficult to censor or silence Cyber media as
governments cannot easily prosecute someone for posting links on a social
networking site or intercept emails, or close down websites or take legal action
against Internet service providers. The governments also do not have the
infrastructure to control the vast amounts of information flowing constantly
through the wide spread networking sites and websites.
• New media, that is Cyber media, is often audience-created and user-driven.
• Cyber media uses digital, online and mobile technology.
On the negative side, all the information available on the Internet may not be a
hundred percent reliable and needs to be cross-checked before one downloads it.
Also children can access any type of reading material on social sites, including
explicit pornographic material that may harm them in the long run. Some of the
games children access on these sites are extremely violent in nature and can influence
their minds and social behavior adversely. Plagiarism is another bane of the internet.
The information on any topic under the sun offered by the Internet is so vast that
students are easily tempted to copy some of it and pass it off as their own. Sometimes,
they use it to do their assignments and homework, thereby killing the initiative to
think for themselves.
On the negative side, however, the impact of cyber media on the youth does not
appear to be all rosy. Accessing social platforms with their computers, tablets, or
cell phones and chatting for hours together with cyber friends not only makes them
lose many hours of productive work but may also make them incapable of face-to-
face interaction. Young ones with a Facebook, Twitter, or Instagram account are
logged in all the time which curbs their physical movement. Eye strain and backaches
are a common complaint of the cyber addicts. Cyber addiction can also lead to
social isolation which in turn, may impair their emotional and mental health resulting
in conditions like anxiety and depression.
Sharing of their personal details online by the young users can increase the risk of
identity theft, and of exposing them to outside predators and to Cyber bullying.
Hackers have been known to have emotionally blackmailed young web users leading
to disastrous results like mental agony and even suicides in some cases. A lot of
sexually explicit content is easily available online which leads to its gross misuse
by the youth.
Sites like You Tube are a constant source of entertainment and offer a platform to
users to upload and share videos with one another. The You Tube is also a great
platform for film producers and musicians as their fans can easily access their music
videos. My Space and other such sites enable easy access to a variety of videos like
movies, music, sports and documentaries. News can reach the farthest corner of
the world in no time. Some social networking sites are slowly replacing television
because they can provide news at a faster rate. In fact most of the news channels
and newspapers also have Facebook and Twitter accounts that provide news stories
as they are unfolding.
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Social networking sites have been instrumental in providing a voice to segments of Impact of Social and Cyber
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society whose voices might otherwise not be heard. For instance, in the UK a site
called Mumsnet’s forced politicians to address parents as equals. In Libya civil
society members along with disabled persons’ organizations, launched an innovative
multimedia compaign called Zaykum Zayna (“As You are, We Are”). Through
messages on social media, this conveyed democratic values of equality and
highlighted the rights of persons with disabilities.
Although the advent of Cyber and Social media has offered us numerous advantages,
yet there are still groups around the world, such as the elderly the illiterate and the
poor who have limited or no access to social sites. Also, like the young, other age-
groups too in society are becoming addicted to social sites resulting in the same
ailments that afflict the youth. Similarly, people have also become vulnerable to
cyber crimes as hackers are breaking into their accounts and accessing crucial
information like bank account details etc. to con them.
The social sites also play an indispensable role in the proper functioning and
strengthening of democracy. They act like a “watch dog” to oversee the election
processes. By using text messages, they gather and relay information on irregularities
that political parties and contesting candidates commit during elections, thereby
bringing transparency in the election processes.
Social and Cyber media also educates the voters on how to exercise their democratic
rights. They provide a platform both to the political parties and candidates for
communicating their manifestos to the electorate; and to the people to air their
views and needs, and interact with leaders to debate key election issues.
Social media has also been instrumental in bringing about political change in world
governments. The Arab Spring uprisings, since 2011, are an example of how digital
media enabled communities to unite around shared grievances and mobilize against
dictatorial rules in their respective countries. Social protests against unjust rulers in
the Arab world spread from country to country because social sites carried
documented evidence of the tragedies being suffered by people at the hands of
dictators in the Arab countries. The new information technologies and social media
networks, not easily controlled by the States, helped the activists, to come together
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countries after the Arab Spring revolutions.
But social media can also play a negative role in the election processes.
Dissemination of misinformation, relayed easily and very fast by the cyber media,
can at times lead to civil unrest and rioting etc. and at other times endanger the
freedoms of speech and the press. Sometimes, social media poses risks for the
contesting candidates when their comments posted on social sites backfire. At other
times, the predictions on social sites, regarding election results, can go terribly
wrong as the number of twitter mentions received by a candidate may not translate
into electoral success.
Networks can, at times, play spoilsports for some business ventures. An online user
may post a negative comment about a business organization which can snowball
into adverse publicity for it, leading to its shut down. Hackers are known to have
diverted companies of their investment and profits by entering into their personal
accounts on social sites. Sometimes a wrong online brand strategy can also destroy
a company.
ii) At a personal level, networking sites help people to interact with family and
friends, learn new things, develop their interests, share information and be
entertained. Professionally, these sites provide knowledge to people and help
them to connect to other professionals.
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