Professional Documents
Culture Documents
by PETER ALKEMA
PREVIEW
I want you to complete your dissertation and finish your
postgraduate degree. This document will determine if you
pass or fail. Its also called a thesis, or final report for a re-
search degree, and its often the one thing that students
don’t complete or leave too late and it. It might feel like
you have a mountain ahead of you but in this course I will
teach you how to climb that mountain and get to the top.
Are you busy with your final report for a masters or a PHD?
Or are you at another stage in your study but aware that
you will have to write such a document in order to grad-
uate. Maybe you’ve already started but you aren’t under
pressure to hand in yet. Whatever stage of your postgrad-
uate study, you will need to be thinking about your final
report.
In this course you will learn how to complete your final re-
port because I’ll show you exactly how I planned and wrote
my own document, for my PHD. When you are in the mid-
dle of your studies its difficult to have the clear thinking
that you need, and I was grateful to have useful guidance
when I wrote mine, but only after I graduated did I look
back and realise how much I wished I had someone ex-
plain it to me in practical terms.
Introduction 07
Literature Review 10
Methodology 12
Results 15
Useful Links 21
Background
I run a postgraduate writing workshop at my university every year. I always ask
how many students are busy with their final report and few hands go up. Then
I ask how many of them wich they had started writing their final report earlier
than they actually did. Every time, all of them put up their hands. This is the
crux of this whole course; start writing your final report as early as possible,
work on all the sections in parallel, as and when you have something ready.
In this course I take you through the sections of with it at any stage of your study. If you are at the
the final report, and how you should approach very end and you are delayed and stressed, then
each one so that you don’t leave it too late and you don’t panic, take it section by section and I will
don’t sit down to try and write it from start to fin- help you get through it. But you have to see your
ish, this is basically setting yourself up for failure, final report as a structure, each with its compo-
or at least a lot of stress, which you want to avoid. nents, that you build up and put them all together.
I’ll teach you what needs to go in each section, I’ll
show you in my own final report what I did, and I also teach you how to plan out the final stage of
what I learned about how you want to present the completing your final report. I give you the steps I
relevant aspect of your study, for each section. took when I had about 6 months left to hand in. Ev-
erything needs to come together and there’s a very
This course then builds up your confidence about specific planning process that I will teach you to
the final report so that you can really get cracking get this right and hand in your final report on time.
In the case of a final report, your readers are your examiners, they are the people that you have to satisfy with
your writing projct. But unless you are doing a 2nd phd or 2nd masters then you’ve probably never tackled a
writing project of this size. I will teach you everything you need to know. I’ll also talk about using an editor
and I’ll share the resources and experts that I also used to help me get through.
I really want you to succeed in getting your final report completed, submitted, passed and ultimately for you
to get your degree. I look forward to helping you do that, and please remember to leave a rating and a review
on the course.
In the introduction of your final report you create some important context for
your reader. Even though your examiners will be experts in your field, you need
to assume that a broader audience will pick up your work. This first section
creates a link between the world of the reader and the more detailed, specific
world of your study and its findings. This is an important balance to get right:
on one hand you can’t assume your reader has too little knowledge about your
field or your introduction will be too long as you have to explain too much.
On the other hand, you can’t assume they know tion, but then you can always edit that down if you
too much otherwise you won’t need to do too need to.
much introduction. This is something you can test
with your proposal . Presumably you would have So what are the key elements of your introduction?
presented your proposal or at least got some feed- In any sections of your final report you may be
back on it at the first stage of your study and this asked to do more than what I teach in this course,
will give you an idea of the level at which you need but what I teach you is what I included and I was
to pitch it. My advice would be to assume less successful with my document. So I suggest you
knowledge in your average reader which means use what I teach you as a framework, and then take
you might need to do a more extensive introduc- your supervisor’s feedback as additional guidance
Lastly in your introduction you should state any anticipated limitations of your study, as well as assumptions
and then as the last few paragraphs you should give overviews of the rest of the sections of your final report.
I found this to be a very important part of the introduction. Its almost like an abstract of each upcoming
section, so the reader feels they’ve had a very brief overview of the rest of your document, even before they
have read it in detail.
Be sure to watch the demonstration lesson where I take you through the introduction section of my own final
report and illustrate a real example of what you’ve learned in this lesson. You’ll see exactly how I’ve tackled
what I described in this lesson and that will make it real for you. I’ll see you in another lesson!
The literature review is where you sketch the overall landscape of related work
in the field. You will have done a lot of reading of the literature when you did
your proposal and selected your topic, so now you need to provide an updated
version of that in the final report. Your examiner won’t have read your propos-
al so they won’t have the context of the relevant literature at all and you can
re-use much of what you did for your proposal, but you may also have missed
some relevant work that you should add in and make sure you cover as well.
Another important point about writing your litera- quote. Its highly likely that you will even reference
ture review in the final report is that once you get one of your external examiners, even though you
to the end of your study, you have become an ex- might not be aware of it.
pert in that very specific area. So your academic
writing voice should be a lot more confident than The way to approach your literature review is to
at the beginning, when you were just starting out have some lines of inquiry that ultimately converge
and exploring existing research. Also from an ex- on your exact topic. Think about it like a venn dia-
aminer’s point of view they will be an expert in the gram of a number of circles that overlap in the mid-
field and they will know the other experts and who dle. In order to fully understand the narrow, spe-
is respected in terms of which other studies you cific topic you have researched, your reader needs
The methodology section of your final report is where you outline exactly how
you are going to perform your research. Remember that you will have already
completed your study by this point so on one hand you are describing it before
the results section, but its technically in the past. Just check with your faculty
whether or not you should write this section in the past tense. Remember that
in your proposal you would also have been required to discuss your methodol-
ogy so once again you can reuse some of that, but it should be vastly improved
because you now have the benefit of going through it and actually using it.
An important aspect of your methodology section, which many students miss, is the importance of posi-
tioning yourself philosophically. I used a model for doing this in my phd which I found very helpful and many
of the postgrad students which I coach have also found it very useful. Its basically an onion that says you
need to work through some layers before you get to the specific techniques and procedures of your study. A
research philosophy is a set of beliefs about how knowledge is created. Remember that working at a post-
graduate level is advancing our knowledge of the world. You’ve found a gap in the literature and its likely that
the work you are doing on the precise topic you have described, has actually not been done yet.
A lot of students jump into whether they are doing mixed methods, or case study, or qualitative or quan-
titative etc. Often we’ve seen the application of these types of methods in other papers and we are drawn
The results chapter of your final report presents the outcome of your work to
the reader. So far you have created some context about your work in the real
world with your introduction, then you positioned your work in the academic
literature and in the chapter before this one you have explained the method
you used and how you used it in your study. Now its all about what your pro-
duced in your study, the results, or often called, the findings.
Remember in the methodology section we spoke will feel extremely different to that of a human-
about two main research approaches, either you ities, or a sciences thesis.
are testing an existing theory, which is called de-
ductive research. Or you could be producing a new Its important at the beginning of the results chap-
theory and this is called inductive research. So ter to just quickly link back to the journey you have
your results really need to proceed on this basis. taken the reader on so that even if they jumped to
The results of your research must be the scaffold- the results they still have sufficient context. A good
ing of your work. This is also the chapter of a thesis practice in all sections is also to briefly introduce
that will be the most divergent across faculties and what you are going to present to the reader and
disciplines. The results section of a medical thesis in the results section this is even more important.
You really are getting into the heart of your work
The content of your results will also differ a lot, based on anoth-
er difference in methods, qualitative or quantitative. A qualitative
study will have a lot more text and descriptive results, while a quan-
titative study will have a lot more tables and numerical content.
Qualitative studies are generally associated with humanities relat-
ed fields while quantitiative studies are more common in the sci-
ences. There are exceptions however, and a lot of cross disciplinary
studies shows this mix quite effectively
The one important approach you must have in your results section
is to have some sort of framework that you use to present your
results. Your reader must be able to orientate themselves in your
study. Maybe you have adopted a framework or perhaps you have
developed one, its important to always explain to the reader where
you are in that framework and how the results you are presenting
relate back to it. For example in my thesis I presented a range and
my results section broke down this range into 5 different parts, and
each part had 3, so on the range I went from minus 7 to plus 7 and
that’s literally how I numbered the sub sections. If you were reading
it you could always work out where you were on the range.
In this last part of your thesis, you will discuss your results and conclude your
study. Sometimes these are 2 different chapters and sometimes they are com-
bined as sub sections of one main section. BY now you have presented your
results, you have been through the detail of what all your efforts over many
years have actually produced. And interesting this is an area that I find stu-
dents really struggling. I coach a number of postgrads and they often find it
hard to make this transition. Especially during your actual study, how do you
know if you have gathered and analysed enough data? No one else has done
this exact study so there is nothing to compare it to. Then in the actual write
up, students often go on presenting their results in their discussion.
Here’s a technique that I used in my own study to help me make this transition. Your results are all about the
what? What did you find? What did you analyse? What is your study all about. However your discussion
and conclusion is all about SO WHAT. You need to tell your reader – your examiner – why your work matters,
you need to link it back to the problem statement and the research questions you asked at the beginning.
Then you need to link it to the future value that can be derived from applying your results in the world so that
your study makes its contribution.
Linked to the applications you also want to talk about he contribution your work makes. Especially if you use
an inductive method, you will be developing a new theory and that must come through very strongly here.
Whereas your results describe something, and the application is how those results are used, the contribu-
tion is an explanation of something using your work.
And finally you will conclude your thesis. I found it difficult to write this section as it felt like I was bringing a
few years of my life to a close. but for your reader its just like the last chapter of reading a book. They haven’t
invested years of their life in your study, just a few hours in reading your thesis. So don’t be scared about
wrapping up your thesis like I was. Step back from it and just be objective about looking back on it and con-
cluding it all. You will need to briefly summarise why you did the study, what was the gap in the literature,
how you completed, what you found and why that matters. And usually the very last paragraphs are going
to be your recommendations for future work. Building from your thesis, what do you recommend other re-
searchers might want to investigate further. Isaac Newton said that he could see further because he stood
on the shoulders of giants. This symbolises scientific progress, because all research builds on other research.
So how do you want to see other work building on yours. Suggest a new angle, or research questions you
couldn’t answer. If you developed a theory, offer someone to use it and test it.
Once again I have included a walk through of my own discussion and conclusion sections so you can see an
example of how I’ve applied what I taught you in this lesson.
A final report will also have extensive front matter and back
matter. At the front you will have the abstract, declaration,
contents, figures, tables etc and then at the back you will
have your list of references as well as appendices. Students
often overlook the importance of appendices and how im-
portant they can be. I was on a coaching call with a student
the other day and they had finished their proposal and want-
ed to know how best they could anticipate their final report.
This is a great attitude, ie to start your final report straight
after your proposal, but she didn’t know what to do.