For and Against

Going to work abroad: an exciting opportunity or a scary one?

In today’s world, nearly everybody has to go to another country to work, even for a
short period of time. Therefore, the upsides and downsides of working abroad will be
discussed in this essay.*

Firstly, it is clear that travelling around the world **you might learn new languages
and experience new cultures, religions, habits***… that’s the main advantage. In
addition you may enhance your skills and **you will have more self-esteem and
**you T: * will be meeting new goals and T: * leaving your comfort zone.
BETTER LINKER: Also **you are going to have a **CV more prestigious future.

INCORRECT LINKER: Furthermore, **you are going to be away from **your family
so maybe **you will feel homesick. However, there are things that can be different
from than in**your own country like the medical system so **you have to be very
responsible. In addition, at the beginning **you are highly likely to struggle with a
communication problem as** it’s a new language which **you **haven’t overcome
yet.

To sum up, working abroad has both pros and cons. **you may enjoy like the
experience more or less, it depends on**your enthusiasm for doing new things and
seeing more of the world.

GOOD ideas but you need to avoid all informal language:

* you must make a mention of the survey
** avoid personal pronouns , contractions & abbreviations
*** Inappropriate punctuation ….