Read the following text!

A Trip to the Zoo

Yesterday, my family and I went to the zoo to see the elephant. There are

me, my sister, father, mother and my uncle. Before we go there, we buy some
snacks and drinks. When we got to the zoo, we go to the shop to buy some
food to give to the animals. After getting the food we went to the nocturnal
house where we see some birds and reptiles which only come out at night.
Before lunch we went to see the rhinoceros. During lunch we fed some birds
in the park. In the afternoon we saw some animals being fed. At around 3
p.m. we go home.

1. Analyze the text, and find the errors on:

a. Orientation
b. Events
c. Conclusion
2. Rewrite the text based on your findings
3. Compose a recount text of YOUR PERSONAL PAST EXPERIENCE, consists of minimum
5 events.