PARALLELISM
WHAT IS PARALLELISM?
- Words or group of words that are similar in thought and in expression
- noun + noun: fingers and toes
- verb + verb: running and jumping; walked and skipped
- adjective + adjective: soft and warm
- adverb + adverb: lovingly, graciously, and generously
Faulty Parallelism: Students capped their pens, were closing their notebooks,
and zipped their book bags.
Parallelism: Students capped their pens, closed their notebooks, and zipped their
book bags.
✘ Every morning, we make our bed, eating breakfast and feed the dog.
✓ Every morning, we make our bed, eat breakfast and feed the dog.
✘ Ashley likes to ski, to swim and jump ropes.
✓ Ashley likes to ski, to swim and to jump rope.
✘ Grandpa walked carefully, in a slow way, and halted a lot.
✓ Grandpa walked carefully, slowly, and haltingly.
✘ They argued not only about the article, but they argued also about the review.
✓ They argued not only about the article, but also about the review.
✘ Either she likes to see him or doesn’t like seeing him.
✓ Either she likes to see him or she doesn’t like to see him.
✘ We enjoy relaxing and like to sit out in the sun.
✓ We enjoy relaxing and sitting out in the sun.
✘ In class, work, and on field, Martin strives for excellence.
✓ In class, at work, and on field, Martin strives for excellence.
✘ We must be firm, fair, and be consistent.
✓ We must be firm, be fair, and be consistent.
✓ We must be firm, fair, and consistent.