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COLLEGE OF EDUCATION
WESTERN PHILIPPINES UNIVERSITY
JUNE 2022
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ABSTRACT
BOROT, JENNY ANN AVANCEÑA, College of Education, Western Philippines
University, Aborlan, Palawan, June 2020. DIFFICULTIES OF GRADE 8
LEARNERS IN BASIC WRITING SKILLS
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TABLE OF CONTENTS
Content Page
TITLE PAGE i
ABSTRACT ii
TABLE OF CONTENTS iii
CHAPTER
I. Introduction 1
Background of the Study 2
Statement of the Problem 2
Objectives of the Study 2
Significance of the Study 3
Hypotheses of the Study 3
Scope and Delimitation 3
Scope and Limitation of the Study 3
Definition of Terms
III. Methodology 9
Locale of the Study 9
Research Design 9
Respondents of the Study 9
Sampling Procedure 9
Instrumentation 9
Data Collection Procedure 10
Treatment of Data 10
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REFERENCES 18
APPENDICES
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Chapter I
INTRODUCTION
Writing is an important life skill that a person must be able to master, that is why
it purposely taught in schools and enhanced throughout the time of a person’s studies.
Aside from being a form of communication and an avenue to express oneself, it is often
used in assessing a person’s learning and depth of understanding. Thus, mastering basic
writing skill is a must to excel in other aspects of one’s academic endeavour. Reading and
writing are two closely linked skills that are imperative to be considered literate.
Regardless of the undeniable link between the two skills, there still instances where they
Stotsky (1983) suggests that students who read well are not guaranteed to be
good writers, but almost all students who write well can read well. Writing requires more
mental energy than reading for it is dependent on how well a student understand a topic
and how fluent he/she in expressing his/her thoughts in a certain language. For this,
skills in writing for them to excel academically at this level. Writing is an important skill
to achieve a successful language development. However, there are reports of senior high
school students who are still struggling to write in English (Magsambol, 2020). Filipino
students lag behind its neighbouring countries from Southeast Asia when it comes to
reading and writing skills (Balinbin, 2020). Understanding the difficulties of students in
writing at a level they are expected to, helps in developing a proper approach to address
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Statement of the Problem
Philippines University in Basic writing skills. Specifically, the study aims to answer the
following questions:
The study seeks to establish the importance of mastering basic writing skills for
high school student and to understand the correlation of attitude towards writing and
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Significance of the Study
This study gives more emphasis on the importance of mastering basic writing
skills especially for high school students. Furthermore, it highlights the status of
acquiring basic writing skills. The findings of this study will give way to a deeper
understanding of the relationship between students’ attitude towards writing and their
Attitudes towards school and learning are associated with academic achievement.
ABC model of attitudes explains that attitude towards school and learning is indicative of
the tendency to behave in accordance with favourable and unfavourable experiences with
school and learning. Hence, attitude of students towards writing reflects on their ability
Agricultural Science High School, Aborlan, Palawan on June 2022, through an online
assessment. The respondents of the study was subjected to an assessment that tested
their wiring skills specifically in spelling, punctuation, capitalization and grammar. The
test also contains a survey on the first part to understand their attitude towards writing.
Definition of Terms
Basic writing skills – Basic writing skills are the fundamental writing skills
needed to be able to write in a satisfactory level. The basic writing skills studied in this
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Writing Performance – The achievement level of students in writing studies. In
this study, it specifically refers to the knowledge of students regarding the proper use of
something, typically one that is reflected in a person's behavior. Specifically, this study
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Chapter II
related to their performance, Mathewson (1994) and Masgoret & Gardner (2003).
Karahan (2007) postulated that when students have positive attitudes towards a
language, the gain positive orientations towards that language and increases their
that such positive orientations increase learners’ self confidence and self-esteem.
learning a foreign language easily; it facilitates the process while negative attitude
hinders learning and; consequently, acts as an obstacle against it. Therefore, attitudes,
negative, natural, and/or positive, decide, to a large extent, students’ success or failure in
their endeavors to learn not only a language but also other topics. This means that
positive attitude plays a vital role and determines the learners’ attitudes towards the
The connection between students’ attitude and writing has gained little attention.
either enhances it or hinders it. Graham et al. (2005) stated that writing attitude is an
affective disposition involving how the act of writing makes the author feels, ranging
from happy to unhappy. Yet, not all students incline to have positive attitudes towards
writing; they may show negative ones. Putting it another way, some students refrain
from writing and show unwillingness towards the skill. Daly and Miller (1975) defined
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potential for evaluation of that writing." Such apprehension results mainly from a writer
between writing apprehension and a focus on the form rather than on the content. They
also examined the relationship between writing attitudes and students’ willingness to
register in other advanced writing courses. They found negative attitudes towards
studying other advanced writing course, but the researchers did not find any relationship
between the students’ attitudes and content of their writing. Masny and Foxall (1992)
academic achievement. They found that students with high academic achievement have
positive attitudes towards writing than those with low achievement. Furthermore, the
researchers found that students were interested in form rather than content, and that
students with writing apprehension were unlikely to take other advanced writing
courses.
mainly translation. The feedback that students normally get from instructors has a
significant role on their attitudes towards writing not only in their first language but also
in the second language (Silva and Brice, 2004; Hedgcock, 2005; Lee, 2008). Ferris
(1995) and Montgomery and Baker (2007) stated that learners get tremendous insights
about the feedback they receive from instructors; these learners are usually looked at, by
teachers, as active contributors according to Hyland and Hyland (2006) and Lantolf and
Pavlenko (2001). That is, of course, because they review their teachers’ notes about the
writing. These notes are mostly considered helpful and useful in identifying their
mistakes and points of weakness. The impact of such feedback depends greatly on its
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forms and objectives, let alone its source. Students who give their peers feedback were
found to develop more in writing skills than those who receive it (Lundstrom and Baker,
2009).
Students' attitudes and their ability to read and write are inextricably linked
(Cunningham, 2008). A student with a positive attitude toward writing, on the other
hand, is more likely to organize writing activities, be more meticulous, persevere in the
face of problems, set demanding goals, and believe in his or her own abilities (Bandura &
Graham, 2006). Students with a positive perspective are pro to writing than students
who have a bad writing mindset. Furthermore, students with a positive attitude may
choose to write even if it is not required. Students with negative attitudes may avoid
Scholarly data recommends a few strategies that can help learners overcome their
fear of writing, according to Ali and Kassem (2017). Non-graded writing assignments, for
example, should be offered to students to assist them to overcome their fear of negative
alternative to teacher feedback: the idea of writing as a process should be taken into
creative performance dislike writing and only write when asked. Ayachi (2017), stated
result, bad grades on writing papers are frequently observed. Thus, writing, as a skill,
Conceptual Framework
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In the Philippines, literacy is the primary drive for education deliverd according
to the principle of Quality education that promotes Filipino citizens' acquired literacy,
specifically reading and writing literacy. High school students are already expected to
have mastered basic writing skills for this is a significant skill needed in this level.
According to Mosha (2014), the level of mastery in terms of attitudes, production and
mediator variables were favorable, the higher the performance; otherwise, the
performance would suffer. These skills seem common among students as these are
fundamental skills that are to be enhanced as they go along. However, not all students
are able to deliver the expected learning outcome for some are still struggling to write in
address students’ difficulty in writing that help learners achieve high academic
Writing attitude:
Perceived relevance
Perceived difficulty
Writing
Performance
Basic Writing Skills:
Grammar
Subject Verb Agreement
Modifiers
Antecedent
Prepositions
Mechanics
Spelling
Punctuation
Capitalization
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Chapter III
METHODOLOGY
Locale of the Study
Research Design
performance of the learners and their attitude towards writing. The study dealt with the
descriptive method where the students underwent an objective writing test that contains
basic writing skills activity to gauge their knowledge about the proper use of each. A
survey questionnaire was also used to identify students’ attitudes towards writing.
University Agricultural Science High School. The participants were Grade 8 high school
students.
Sampling procedure
Instrumentation
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To gather the data for the study, a one hundred–item objective test, and a
checklist writing attitude were used. The outputs were assessed through a researcher-
made rubric. The Attitude Survey was drafted from the study of Jabali (2018) regarding
the attitude of students towards writing. Students estimated how they feel about writing
and writing activities using a 5-point scale ranging from 1 (Strongly agree) to 4 (Strongly
disagree).
The primary goal of this research was to evaluate the respondents' writing
performance. The test was administered through an online assessment using google
forms. The students underwent a 100-item writing test that are expected to be answered
in one and a half hours. The writing attitude survey questionnaires were also
administered to the respondents in first part of the google forms questionnaire. The
generated link for the assessment was sent through Facebook messenger app to the
randomly selected participants. Since google forms were used, the answers were
automatically checked upon the submission of the form. The scores were recorded and
Treatment of Data
Frequency counts, percentage scores, and the arithmetic mean, were used to
describe and analyze the study's data. A researcher-made rubric was used. The rubric
Punctuations. Results from the survey were manually checked and counted. Afterwards
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Chapter IV
Results and Discussion
Item 1 2 3 4 5
1. I enjoy writing in 4 7 16 8 2
English.
2. I feel that I can be a 2 4 7 21 3
good writer if I
practice writing
regularly.
3. The English writing 1 29 7 0 0
class is useful for my
academic study.
4. Learning to write in 16 18 3 0 0
English is a very
important skill for
my academic study
in college.
5. I need to learn to 3 12 19 3 0
write in English
because it is a very
important skill for
my future job.
6. I would like to learn 0 0 2 21 14
all language skills
except writing
7. I do not enjoy 6 4 5 14 8
writing in English
because it is a very
difficult skill for me.
8. I do not feel 16 12 6 1 2
confident during a
writing activity.
9. I expect to do poorly 9 15 9 4 1
in composition
classes even before I
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enter them.
10. When I hand in a 11 18 1 5 2
composition, I know
I am going to do
poorly.
Table 1. Frequency distribution of student’s attitude towards writing
1-Strongly agree 3-Neutral
2-Agree 4- Disagree
5-Strongly disagree
The first part of the survey leans more on the positive attitudes towards writing
and learning how to write. 16 0ut of 4 respondents said they are not sure whether or not
they enjoy writing in English. In the next item, it was revealed that most of the students
are not confident about their capacity for improvement. Out of the 40 participants, 21
indicated that they disagree on feeling they can be good writers if they practice. On the
other hand, results from items 3 and 4, show that students acknowledge the importance
of Writing and Learning to write in their studies. This indicates awareness of the
importance of the skill. However, item 5 earned more neutral responses from students
showing that students are still not sure whether or not writing skills will help them in
their future careers. Item number 6 leans more on negative feeling about writing but
learning to write. In the next item, number 7, most of the students disagree on admitting
that writing in English is difficult for me. Furthermore, it is alarming to note that more
than half of the participants are not confident with their writing skills. Similarly, item
numbers,
writing skills, it is undeniable that confidence for learning and learning capacity yield
low scores.
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Writing Performance Level f %
Total 37 100
based on the result of the online assessment conducted. Results revealed that most of the
students are on Instructional Level with scores 59-79 garnering a percentage of 70%.
Participants who scored 80-100 (advanced) got 17.5%, however, 12.5% of the
participants got very low scores 60 and below and did not meet expectation.
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Indicators f
Grammar
Preposition 237
Modifier 393
Antecedent 127
Mechanics
Spelling 248
Punctuation 21
Capitalization 17
Results showed that students failed to retain the distinction between subject and
verb in terms of singularity and plurality. Most of them still do not understand how verbs
relate to topics. Grammar and structure, on the other hand, are critical in academic
writing. Therefore, it is to make sure that subjects and verbs always agree. In
grammatically accurate English writing, the relationship between subjects and verbs is
important.
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The Filipino context appears to have affected students’ use of redundant
modifiers. Afrin (2016) concluded that articles were sometimes used to over-correct
written outputs among students. The improper use of articles was also observed.
Students had confusion about the proper use of prepositions. They misused the function
(2012) claim that prepositions are barriers to L2 learners due to their vast number and
and omission are the most prevalent syntactic errors. It is useless and incomplete
without the antecedent. In short, it intensifies the authors' writing style. Below are Like
other errors, capitalization should also be addressed. Siddiqui (2015) underlined that
and ending the sentences with a period. Aksoy (2014) stressed the need to maintain
structural defect that can affect even the shortest sentences, and it should be avoided in
Many students continue to make spelling mistakes in their written work. This
could be due to the students' insufficient exposure to the vocabulary terms. They make
"intrepreneur," "desission," and "expirience" are some of the words. On the other hand,
Botley and Dillah (2007) emphasized that regular reading practice on the part of
language learners would be a highly effective way of exposing students to a large number
spelling errors. Among all the indicators, the study revealed that Subject-Verb
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Agreement had the most errors committed in writing and it was followed by use of
modifiers. The proper use of preposition and spelling yield a result close to each other.
The result of the study which focused mainly on grammar and mechanics,
concurs with the findings from the study conducted by Bui Thi Tram (2010). The study
revealed six types of common written errors of the students, namely, grammar, style,
general items (in particular, language style and expression), syntax, mechanics, and
lexical elements. Grammatical errors were the most prevalent errors found which was
surprising.
Chapter V
SUMMARY, CONCLUSION AND RECOMMENDATIONS
Summary
The study entitled “Difficulties of Grade 8 Learners in Basic Writing
Agricultural Science High School on June 2022. The study aims to identify the
and to understand the correlation of attitude towards writing and writing performance.
margin of error.
The study was conducted through an online assessment using google forms
containing a survey for the assessment on attitude towards writing and a 100-item
writing test. The test highlights two indicators: Grammar such as Subject Verb
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Results of the assessment on attitude towards writing indicate that students
acknowledge the importance or writing and learning to write on their academic endeavor
and their future career/jobs. However, it also revealed negative attitudes on their
negative perception on writing reflected on their writing performance. Only 18.9% of the
respondents were able to reach the excellent level with scores 80 to 100 on the writing
test. Although majority of the respondents were able to reach satisfactory (61-79) with
64.9%, there is still a 16.2% of the respondents who did not meet the expected writing
performance.
Subject-Verb Agreement particularly yield the highest errors from the writing test
with total errors of 425. This revealed that grade 8 students are still struggling more on
this area, and are therefore, still lacking skills on grammar. The overall results revealed
that the common mistakes in the writing test are on the grammar area. On the third
Conclusion
Results of the study indicated a perceived importance of the basic writing skill in
both academics and possible career in the future. However, it also revealed a negative
attitude towards learning how to write which becomes evident on their writing
performance. It shows that low confidence in writing and the capacity to master this skill
is results to poorer performance in the actual writing process. Additionally, students who
perceive writing to be difficult even before the learning process begins tends to be less
receptive of the knowledge. This conforms to the findings of Daly and Miller (1975),
learning apprehension results mainly from a writer having low self-esteem affecting the
Recommendations
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Based from the findings of the study the researcher recommends the following:
writing less intimidating tasks that are more receptive of student participation
3. Further study about other factors affecting the learning capacities of high school
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APPENDIX
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