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ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. IThe diagrams show the stages and equipment used in the cement- jaking process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building urposes. \Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, land make comparisons where relevant. Cement Production Concrete Production ae (ho) “Gravel = small stones Write at least 150 words. Script 1- Academic Task 1 ‘According to the diagrams, It demonstrates how the cement produce and how to prodece concrete for architectures. After we read the diagram of cement production, we can know that there are four steps to make cement. At the first stage, limestone and clay are crushed by the crusher into powder is then delivered to the mixer, where it is mixed. The mixture is subsequently sent to the rotating heater, after which it is heated and rotated. In the next step, the rotated power is placed on the conveyor belt, before being ground by the grinder into cement. This final product is packed in bags. In the process of the concreteproduction, gravel accounts for 50 % of materials, whilecement, water and sand represent 15%.,10% and 25%respectively. These materials are placed in the concrete mixer, which rotates clockwise until cencrete is produced. To summarise, cenment production consists of 4 steps, starting from crushing materials into power and ending at bagging cement. In contrast, concrete production is simple, mixing four materials. Script 2 - Academic Task 1 The graphs above illustrate the production process of two different products: cement and concrete. While the progress of making cement appears to be complicated with various steps, the concrete production remain fairly simple with two main stages. In order to produce cement, it will require the producer to go through six separate steps. First of all, the powder as cement raw materials is created by crushing limestone and clay. After that, the combination of the mix above will go through a mixer which leads to a rotating heater. At this stage, the mixed powder will be heated under the flame of heating machine in order to be transferred to.a grinder and be processed to become cement. Finally, the freshly made cement will be put into separate bags and ready to be transferred to inventory or deliver directly to the manufacturer clients. On the other hand, the concrete production is simply made by mixing a combination of four different materials: 15% of cement, 10% of water, 235% of sand and 50% of gravel. The concrete is completely done when the mixture above enter the concrete mixer and be mixed until the requirement level of the producer. Script 3 - Academic Task 1 The two diagrams show how cement and concrete are produced with different materials and facilities used. At the first stage, limestone and clay are crushed by the crusher into powder. The powder is then delivered to the mixer, where it is mixed. The mixture is subsequently sent to the rotating heater, after which it is heated and rotated, In the next step, the rotated powder is placed on the conveyor belt, before being ground by the grinder into cement. This final product is packed in bags. In the process of the concrete production, gravel accounts for 50% of materials, while cement, water, and sand represent 15%, 10%, and 25% respectively. These materials are placed in the concrete mixer, which rotates clockwise until concrete is produced. To summarize, cement production consists of 4 stages, starting from crushing materials into powder and ending at bagging cement. In contrast, concrete production is simple, mixing four materials. Script 4 - Academic Task 1 The pictures illustrate how the cement's indestry produce it from the beganing untill the end. Overall it can be clearly seen that cement production has more steps than concrete production Cement production has ten steps. Whereas, concrete production has the half of this number. Cement starts with limestons and caly were crashed, after that maixed with powder. Than, heated all these things together. Finally, it is caused cement. Concrete production began with four steps in the sametime, so water 10%, cement 15%, sand 25% and gravel 50%. After that, these ingredients were mixed. Than, the concrete mixcer will mix it before it changed to cement. Script 5 - Academic Task 1 There are two diagrams showing the different stages in which cement is made and then used to produce concrete. Overall it can be seen that the production of cement is a more complex process consisting of 4 clear stages, whereas concrete production is much more simple. Cement production goes through 4 steps before reaching the end product. First of all a mix of limesone and clay is crushed. It is then mixed in a heated mixing machine before being ground to form cement. The ground cement is then packed into bags, ready to be used as a raw material to make concrete. Concrete production is rather simple where 4 materials are added to a concrete mixer. Half of the mixture is made up of gravel, consisting of small stones and then sand (25%) and finally cement (15%) and water (10%). The materials are rotated in a concrete mixer drum to form concrete. GENERAL TRAINING WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter + describe the problem with the equipment + explain what happened when you phoned the shop * say what you would like the manager to do. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, Script 6 - General Training Task 1 Dear Sir, am writing this letter, because of the past week, | visited your store to buy a microwave, but unfortunately when | try to turn on it is impossible. Moreover, it shows up a message with a red light that | had never been it before. When | bought it, the manager told me that it had a guarantee. But when | try to call your store customer service told me that it was bought in the sale and it could not be changed. My number sell is 1234 and my complete name is Adriana Correa, in addition, the number of my complaint that was done in your service is 2380. | hope that you resolve my issue immediately and you also need to refund my money as soon as possible. You might refund it, in my number account 456878 of ANZ bank. I hope to hear you soon about my case. Word count ~ 154 Script 7 - General Training Task 1 Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Adela Drozdibob and | am regular costumer of your store at Chadstone Shopping Center. Ihave recently bought a toaster from that store, the one you are frequently advertising lately — model SPEED TOAST 311. As you are aware, this toaster is not on the list of a budget ones, it expensive. Therefore, | have expecxted great performance and good value for my money. However, when I came home and tried to test it out, it did not work at all. | have tried pushing several buttons and turning it off and on multiple times, but nothing happened. Then | decided to call the store and to request exchange of the toaster. They promissed to call me back duriung the same day in order to get my address, so they can ship new toaster and collect the one with failure. However, nobody called for five days! is quite In order to solve this issue as soon as possible | am contacting you. It would be perfect if the procedure we agreed on could be proliferated. | still want exchange of the toaster, but my parience is on the test. Please resolve this with the shop and contact me as soon as you can. Best Regards and with hope we will resolve this very soon. Word count - 220 Script 8 - General Training Task 1 This letter is in relation to a complaint regarding a microwave oven purchased by me from your shop. The equipment bearing item number A765 was purchased last week on 9 October 2011 and the same was delivered by your staff at my home. Upon delivery, | tried to operate it; however, the moment | plugged it in to the socket a big short circuit occurred. | immediately called your customer service department and informed them about this problem. They took all the necessary details and assured me that they will send a personnel to survey the same and based on his survey an appropriate action would be taken. However, a week has passed now and no action has been taken yet, in spite of the fact that I called your department numerous times. | would appreciate if you could kindly look in to the matter and expedite the process. Further, since the item is under warranty, | would prefer it being replaced rather than being repaired. | hope to hear from you soon and expect that my matter would be resolved on an urgent basis. Yours. i an Word count ~ 187 General Training Task 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You saw an advertisement asking for people to help with a project to clean up the local. environment. Write a letter to the project organiser. In your letter “Say where you saw the advertisement *Explain how you can help *Give details about when you are available Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, Script 9 - General Training Task 1 Dear Sir or Madam, How are you? My name is Akiko I saw your advertisement on the news paper yesterday. I really interested the advertisement of a project to clean up. | used to join the same project before | joined to clean up the beach before this summer. | met some people that they were really friendly and kind. They were teaching me for a lot of things of clean up the beach. | learned that | use the material and clothes. So | know how to clean up the beach, and I can be a leader for a project to clean up. | have some experience for these projects. | hope that | will be a leader for the projects. Could you think about it, please? I wish that I can help to clean up the beach. If you chose me, | will do my best for cleaning up. 1am looking forward to see you soon. Thank you very much. ‘Word count - 164

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