Hi Tomek,

I didn’t feel good in the last four days because of my horrible headache. My mom
told me it had to be migraine. I hope to get better ASAP and to camp with you
shortly.

I can see why you’re worried and unhappy and I’m so sorry about it. Mums are
always bothered about their children, so if I were you I’d talk to her calmly. Try to
explain that this trip is incredibly important to you. You can’t just stay home and
forget about it! You totally have to go with us. I promise, it’ll be great. You should
also tell her that you’ll immediately call her after we reach our destination, and let’s
say, every two days! I think it would be a great deal for both of you. She would
know that you’re safe and sound. If she disagrees, you can ask her to go with us!
Have you thought about it? Your mum is hilarious and we all love her! So I think it
will be fun! If she doesn’t agree to such a solution, maybe it’s a good idea to go
camping just for one day and come back in the same evening. I think it can work. If
we go just for one day, it will be great anyway.

I’m sure things will work out ne, so don’t worry! By the way, I'm having a party
soon, and I was wondering if you would be able to come. Drinks and snacks are
free!

I hope everything will be OK. I’m looking forward to hearing from you!

Kisses,

XYZ

Avoid simple sentences that do not describe anything interesting

I am sick. It is terrible- DO NOT
I have been feeling sick recently and it was terrible.
Combine sentences and try to make one longer.

Worried instead of worrying

Worried- zmartwiony
Worrying- martwiący się

Try not to repeat same word over and over „worried” nd better synonyms
Worried- bothered

Add some adjectives such as: calmly, quietly, clearly, badly etc. it makes your e-
mail richer.

Just say that you really want to go- too simple

Avoid „U” instead of You. It’s too much sometimes. 1 time- it’s ok 2 times- a little
too much
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