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Persuasive Essay
INTRODUCTION
“Punishment is not for revenge, but to lessen crime and reform the criminal,” said
Elizabeth Fry, an English prison reform activist during the 1800s. In her quote, Fry is suggesting
that those who have wronged society deserve to be reshaped in order to exhibit remorse as their
retribution. However, the punishment that is currently being carried out in prisons across
America is not in a humane manner whatsoever and strips the current prisoners of their
humanity. Over the past decade, unsolved issues regarding the prison system in the United States
have been an ongoing concern. The incarcerated are severely mistreated while imprisoned, and
experience excessive abuse from the guards running throughout the prison. Oftentimes, the basic
rights of inmates are violated in the prisons of the United States, whether it is through the lack of
mental health care, prisoner safety, or strong restoration programs. The organization responsible
for solving and overseeing these issues is the Bureau of Prisons. The Bureau of Prisons’s liability
is to ensure the protection of society by incarcerating criminals, but also refining these
individuals so they can re-enter society. Since the primary purpose of prisons is to reform the
criminals in order for them to become functioning members of society, it is illogical to mistreat
and dehumanize the incarcerated if the goal is for them to be rehabilitated. In addition to this, the
guards who work in prisons are not being held accountable for their acts of mistreatment towards
prisoners and by not ensuring their safety overall. Therefore, the Bureau of Prisons should
implement fair treatment guidelines for U.S. prisons in order to ensure a better future for the
incarcerated. These issues must be recognized in order to maintain safety for the prisoners by
holding those in power accountable, providing these individuals with proper medical attention,
The current state of United States prisons lacks decent instruction and holding
accountability for the prison guards and staff. It is outstandingly common for prison guards to get
away with acts of violence and severe disrespect towards prisoners. It can be understood that it is
very hard to provide sympathy for one who has committed a serious crime, yet there are specific
situations where individuals are regretful for what they had done and might’ve had to commit the
act for a specific reason. In addition to this, prisoners are still human, who should not have their
rights taken away from them just because they are placed in a special institution. The prisoners
incarcerated are eventually going to be presented with the chance to return to society after
spending their time in prison. Unfortunately, a majority of those who reenter society struggle, as
they were not treated properly by the guards during their time in prison. By implementing
specific guidelines for the prison guards, the prison systems can be improved. For example, the
union contract for prison guards makes it extremely easy for guards to get away with an abuse of
power. Prison guards can easily be protected from prosecution in a situation where they are being
accused of abusing one of the inmates. This union contract removes any responsibility for these
prison guards, as it is clear that they can easily get away with abuse and violence towards others.
As said in Prisoners’ Rights, “Instances where authority is not held accountable, violent
punishment is inevitable” (Hermann and Haft). The Bureau of Prisons purpose is to ensure the
safety for not only the staff, but for the prisoners as well. An instance where this was completely
disregarded was when a prisoner, Kevin Moore, was being beaten by the guards in 2013. The
guards beat him repeatedly, and the supervising officer did nothing about it besides mock him
Unfortunately, the union contract made it extremely difficult to remove these officers
from their positions, which does not give justice to Kevin Moore who suffered greatly from this
experience. Therefore, as it is the Bureau of Prisons job, they must establish a stronger view on
discipline of their staff. The Bureau of Prisons can do this by reviewing the cameras throughout
the incarceration institutions, ensuring that those who have clearly wronged an individual in
prison are being held accountable, and by reminding the staff of what their purpose is as a guard
of the prisons. It is crucial for the prisons to have these standards in order to prevent future issues
and damage done to the prisoners. With these changes to the treatment of prisoners, the overall
experience can be improved and help the prisoners gain respect for the guards, as they will not be
MEDICAL ATTENTION
disadvantaged within the mental health or other medical attention aspect. Unfortunately, a lot of
these individuals in prisons who struggle are denied their requirement for medical attention,
unless they plead insanity, which is difficult in itself to prove in the courts. Therefore, the Bureau
of Prisons must ensure the safety of prisoners by implementing proper medical care and attention
for the prisoners. Oftentimes, citizens are imprisoned for drug related issues or harming others
due to psychiatric illness that has gone untreated. Multiple psychologists conducted studies that
revolved around understanding how treating those suffering from drug abuse can reduce the
number of people being placed into prisons. In the article, it highlights three studies done, one
done by Dr. Harry K. Wexler in San Diego, California, another by Steven S. Martin at the
Delaware Correctional System, and another by D. Dwayne Simpson at the Institute of Behavioral
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Research at Texas Christian University (Inmate Drug Abuse Treatment Slows Prison’s Revolving
Door). Each of these studies proved that providing attention to those who struggle with drug
abuse during and after their time in prison, significantly decreases the chances of them returning
back to prison for drug related crimes. This further proves the importance of implementing
proper health care attention for those who struggle with such issues, as addressing the concerns
Another health concern that is not being addressed in prisons is the mental health aspect
of those who are incarcerated. There are significant benefits for prison inmates that result from
providing proper mental health attention. As stated by NAMI (National Alliance on Mental
Illness), the number of those who suffer from mental illness are prominent in American prisons.
Approximately 63% of those who have a history with mental health are not receiving the crucial
care that they need while incarcerated (Mental Health Treatment While Incarcerated). There are
numerous different mental health organizations that can be used as a resource for the individuals
who require necessary mental health attention. Providing people with the correct care and
treatment, those who are incarcerated can pursue a better life in prison and when they are
released. There are so many benefits to encouraging the proper mental health treatment for those
in prison. The Bureau of Prisons can implement this by incorporating local mental health
organizations within the prisons to support these individuals who are incarcerated and struggling
with mental health. Pairing with NAMI can be an extremely beneficial association, as it displays
sincere care for making mental health care accessible. In addition, it will bring about a stronger
connection within the communities that hold prisons and encourage awareness. With these
mandates, a better experience for the incarcerated will be guaranteed and prepare the inmates for
PROPER REHABILITATION
The final aspect of prisoner experience reformation that is crucial for the overall well
being of the inmates in U.S. prisons is the rehabilitation programs that must be implemented
correctly. Currently, there are rehabilitation programs offered for those who are incarcerated, but
only in a few locations. These present rehabilitation programs are not effective, as recidivism
still is prevalent. Offenders continuing to commit crimes after they are released from prison, is
not good for society overall and shows that specific aspects of rehabilitation programs clearly
needs to be reformed or implemented properly (Peterson and Lee). The Bureau of Prisons must
require a strong program throughout all prisons that can support the incarcerated individuals with
a better future. A beneficial program should include allowing for outside citizens to spend time
with the inmates and teach them proper skills for when they reenter society. This can benefit
inmates significantly, as they have the opportunity to work with people who do not have any
intention of committing a crime and are part of society. Furthermore, the specialists in certain
areas of study can come in with their knowledge to share with the inmates and educate them. The
overall program can allow for incarcerated individuals and outsiders to have the ability to
connect with others that they don’t see on a day to day basis. It benefits people in numerous
different aspects, which can further advance society as a whole in America, and hopefully reduce
crime. In a New York Times article it mentions that there already are prison systems that allow
for “outsiders” to spend time and teach the current prisoners fundamental skills, yet this is not
prevalent everywhere (Barsky). The Bureau of Prisons must ensure that the prisons are set up
with these special programs, as this can help the incarcerated socially and intellectually. It will
not only support the incarcerated, but it can bring about a new perspective for the outsiders who
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come to visit. Sadly, according to Prisoners’ Rights, “what happened to the convicted after
sentencing was not a matter of judicial or, indeed, public concern” (Hermann and Haft). These
interactions will allow for the public to have more awareness about the ins and out of prison
systems. With this change, the incarcerated can be equipped with crucial knowledge and tools
that will benefit them when they are reintegrated into society.
CONCLUSION
rehabilitated in order to actively abide by the law when returning to society. Prisoners are
deprived of their constitutional rights while imprisoned, as they are brutally and illogically
mistreated. The inhumane treatment and exposure to violence the prisoners in the United States
experience prohibits them from being reformed into lawful citizens. Prisoners cannot be
reformed if they continuously remain under these poor, careless living conditions. The use of
incarceration is to reform the criminals into law-abiding citizens when they are released, which
evidently, the U.S. prisons are unsuccessful in achieving. Through prison reforms in the aspects
of holding guards responsible, providing proper care, and implementing strong rehabilitation
programs, the confinement situation for prisoners can be improved significantly. Prisoners are
often likely to commit crimes again when returning to society if they are not being rehabilitated
and are put into an environment of constant substandard treatment while confined. Incarceration
is not supposed to be pleasurable, of course, however rehabilitation would give the prisoner a
chance to understand their wrongdoings and change their behavior. Between the treatment and
the behavior, it is a vicious cycle of the prisoners being treated disturbingly for their poor actions
and then being expected to behave once they are released. Therefore, the Bureau of Prisons must
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put an end to this cycle and implement strong reforms in order to support the incarcerated
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“Inmate Drug Abuse Treatment Slows Prison's Revolving Door.” American Psychological
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Peterson, Jonathan, and Anita Lee. “Improving In-Prison Rehabilitation Programs.” Legislation
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