Composição de inglês

I think that national and international news about events should be

followed by everyone.
Firstly, National and International news about big events are very
important because events have always a purpose, it can be a goal to
improve the social life and coexistence of individuals or simply wanting to
promote something like a brand or a product. This last one is very
important because behind one brand and one product are very hours of
work and many workers, which work should be recognised.
Secondly, News aren´t just about events but also about famous people.
This news have a very important role because some of that people live off
social media and news about them, that make users of Instagram and
other social media follow them. When they have a lot of followers, some
brands work with them to develop their business. However, polemic news
are not very necessary because they don´t promote social and individual
well-being.
In addition, news are wrote by journalists. Journalists take time to look
into the news and to write about them and this is a reason why people
should follow them. If they don´t, journalist´s work will be extinct and
many people will lose their work.
In conclusion, I think that national and international news should be
followed by everyone, despite that some news shouldn´t be written, like
polemic things, because they are devaluing interesting and important
news and they can destroy famous people´s life.