A student wrote a short story (80-100) words about a boy who got lost in a forest.

How can you make it better?

A walk down the stream

Khalid and Waleed were walking quietly alongside a small stream that was surrounded with thick green
grass. You could hear the sounds of the birds chirping early in the cool morning.

Out of nowhere, came the loud sound of barking dogs. The boys ran towards the frightening sound.
They saw dogs fighting and men shouting. They did not like what was happening. They left.