Dàn ý

DOL sẽ trình bày quan điểm qua 1 đoạn mở bài (introduction), 2 đoạn thân bài (body
paragraph), và 1 đoạn kết bài (conclusion)

 Mở bài: Sau khi paraphrase lại đề bài, DOL sẽ đưa ra một Thesis Statement (luận
điểm)

Body 1: DOL chỉ ra những bất lợi của việc công chiếu những vụ phạm tội trên các
phương tiện truyền thông
Body 2: DOL chỉ ra những thuận lợi của việc công chiếu những vụ phạm tội trên các
phương tiện truyền thông

 Kết bài: Cuối cùng, DOL sẽ tổng kết lại những ý chính đã nêu trên và nhấn mạnh
lại quan điểm của mình

From my perspective, I would express my strong opposition to that

suggestion as broadcasting criminal cases through multimedia sites is
beneficial in terms of educating citizens and exercising caution in
dealing with serious offenses.

Body paragraph 1:
Disadvantages
People would commit the same criminal acts

 showing the wrongdoings of criminals publicly provides individuals with

understanding of how the infringement was conducted => learn and follow =>
become potential offenders in the future

People would display anxiety toward the unsafe society

 citizens are prone to develop anxiety toward an unsecured society => mental
health problems would experience a drastic increase

Body paragraph 2:
Advantages
A means of education
  broadcasting more violations of crimes & their severe punishment => eradicating
the intention of future offenders => reduce the increasing rate of the number of to-
be-culprits

A means of caution

 exemplifying in detail the procedure of a breach, individuals would be more well-

aware of a criminal case => prepare for approaches to avoid being victims of
wrongdoings

Bài mẫu
The restriction of legal violation scenes shown via media channels should be introduced
by the related authorities due to their detrimental impacts. From my perspective, I would
express my strong opposition to that suggestion as broadcasting criminal cases
through multimedia sites is beneficial in terms of educating citizens and exercising
caution in dealing with serious offenses.
On the one hand, the detailed description of crimes in newspapers and on TV
would be disadvantageous due to the possibility that people would commit the same
criminal acts and display anxiety toward the unsafe society. Regarding the former
drawback, showing the wrongdoings of criminals publicly on media networks provides
individuals with a clear understanding of how the infringement was conducted, from
which they may learn and follow. As a consequence, there are high chances that those
people, especially youngsters, would become potential offenders in the future. Not to
mention that by televising a myriad of violation occurrences, mental health problems
would experience a drastic increase since citizens are prone to develop anxiety toward an
unsecured society.
On the other hand, broadcasting more crime scenes on social media websites can
be considered a means of education and caution for people. Chief among these is that
broadcasting more violations of crimes in combination with their severe punishment
plays a pivotal role in eradicating the intention of future offenders. Therefore, the
increasing rate of the number of to-be-culprits would be significantly reduced. In
addition, by exemplifying in detail the procedure of a breach, individuals would be more
well-aware of the feasibility of a criminal case. Thus, they would have a tendency to
prepare for approaches to avoid being victims of wrongdoings.
In conclusion, although the display of criminal scenes should be limited due to
their potential impact on increasing lawbreakers' and citizens' concerns, I am of the
opinion that cases of violation of law should be shown on different media sites to
educate and inform people about the risk of those offenses.

(329 words)

Vocabulary
the restriction of legal violation scenes
/ðə rɪsˈtrɪkʃən ɒv ˈliːgəl ˌvaɪəˈleɪʃən siːnz/
(noun). hạn chế các cảnh vi phạm pháp luật
The restriction of legal violation scenes shown via media channels should be introduced by the related authorities
due to their detrimental impacts.

to broadcast criminal cases

/tuː ˈbrɔːdkɑːst ˈkrɪmɪnl ˈkeɪsɪz/
(verb). phát sóng các vụ án hình sự
From my perspective, I would express my strong opposition to that suggestion as broadcasting criminal cases
through multimedia sites is beneficial in terms of educating citizens and exercising caution in dealing with serious
offenses.

to display anxiety toward the unsafe society

/tuː dɪsˈpleɪ æŋˈzaɪəti təˈwɔːd ði ʌnˈseɪf səˈsaɪəti/
(verb). thể hiện sự lo lắng đối với xã hội không an toàn
The detailed description of crimes in newspapers and on TV would be disadvantageous due to the possibility that
people would commit the same criminal acts and display anxiety toward the unsafe society.

to show wrongdoings of criminals publicly

/tuː ʃəʊ ˈrɒŋˈdu(ː)ɪŋz ɒv ˈkrɪmɪnlz ˈpʌblɪkli/
(verb). công khai những việc làm sai trái của tội phạm
Showing the wrongdoings of criminals publicly on media networks provides individuals with a clear understanding
of how the infringement was conducted, from which they may learn and follow.

infringement
/ɪnˈfrɪnʤmənt/
(noun). sự vi phạm
Even minor infringements of the law will be severely punished.

potential offenders
/pəʊˈtɛnʃəl əˈfɛndəz/
(noun). kẻ phạm tội tiềm tàng
As a consequence, there are high chances that those people, especially youngsters, would become potential
offenders in the future.

severe punishment
/sɪˈvɪə ˈpʌnɪʃmənt/
(noun). phạt nặng
Drink-driving is one case in which severe punishment seems to work as a deterrent.
to eradicate the intention of future offenders
/tuː ɪˈrædɪkeɪt ði ɪnˈtɛnʃən ɒv ˈfjuːʧər əˈfɛndəz/
(verb). loại bỏ ý định của những người phạm tội trong tương lai
Broadcasting more violations of crimes in combination with their severe punishment plays a pivotal role in
eradicating the intention of future offenders.

the feasibility of a criminal case

/ðə ˌfiːzəˈbɪlɪti ɒv ə ˈkrɪmɪnl keɪs/
(noun). tính khả thi của một vụ án hình sự
By exemplifying in detail the procedure of a breach, individuals would be more well-aware of the feasibility of a
criminal case.