415923, 529.AM sous SCL5 Total points e ‘Answer all questions. Proof of completion must be submitted via PutraBlast. Email * 209093@student.upm.edu.my Name * SERI IRDINA, Matric No * 209093 Class * e.g. Group 1 Group 26 Applying cohesiveness in directive email A. Consider the following extracts from business documents. Link the sentences together to make the extracts more cohesive -ntps:ifdocs.google.coniormsid/"FAlpQLScOAIGIcANKBFCaOY2JeZplsRLFEjyecgp_82LSmg Bq9ksROiviewscore?viewscore=AEDZAGC_9QQGi... 1/10415923, 529.AM sous. x 1) 7 n - Inferior steel was used in the manufacturing of the component. - The corrosion was extensive - The corrosion led to the failure. Inferior steel was used in the manufacture of the component, so the corrosion was extensive which led to the failure. x Feedback Inferior steel was used in the manufacturing of the component. Consequently, the corrosion was extensive, and it led to failure. x 2 * n - There was an unexpected increase in production costs last year. - We propose maintaining our present price level. - It is important at this stage to remain competitive. There was an unexpected increase in production costs last year and thus we propose maintaining our present price level as it is important at this stage to remain competitive Feedback There was an unexpected increase in production costs last year. Nevertheless, we propose maintaining our present price level as itis important at this stage to remain competitive. Avoiding muddling words and phrases JB: Choose the correct answer, -ntps:ifdocs.google.coniormsid/e"FAlpQLScOAIGIcANKBFCaOY2JeZplxRLFEjyecgp_82LSmg Bq9ksRAiviewscore?viewscore=AEDZAGC_9QQGi... 2/10415923, 529.AM sels Y 1) The schedule is _ with me. * 22 © allright v © alright Y 2) The printer is the desk. * " ©@ beside v © besides v3 Mr Khan, who else would not be attending? * " © Beside @ Besides v VY 4)Is your car adequately. 2 " O ensured @ insured v -ntps:ifdocs.google.coniormsid/"FAlpQLScOA|GIcANKBFCaOY2JeZplsRLFEjyecgp_82LSmg Bq9ksROiviewscore?viewscore=AEDZAGC_9QQGi... 3/10415923, 529.AM sels 5) The added step will__ success. * Mm © ensure v © insure Y 6) Our Kota Bahru office is___north than the one at Jertih. * " © further © farther v VY 7)Doyouneed __ information? * " © further v O farther 8) Our supervisor should__what he preaches. * " O practice © practise v -ntps:ifdocs.google.coniormsid/e"FAlpQLScOA|GIcANKBFCaOY2JeZplsRLFEjyecgp_82LSmg Bq9ksROiviewscore?viewscore=AEDZAGC_9QQGi... 4/10415923, 529.AM sels Y_ 9) Itis time to put this idea into__.* Mm © practice v © practise Y 10) itisamatterof__.* " © principal ©@ principle v Y 11) The. cause was unemployment. * " © principal v CO principle Y 12) The staff welcomed the new candidates. * " © principal v CO principle -ntps:ifdocs.google.coniormsid/*FAlpQLScOA|GIcANKBFCaOY2JeZplxRLFEjyecgp_82LSmg BqoksROiviewscore?viewscore=AEDZAGC_9QQGi... 5/10415923, 529.AM X13) | plan to visit our South Africa plant © some time © sometime O sometimes Correct answer © sometime Y 14) ____I wish Iwas an entrepreneur. * © Sometime CO Sometime ©@ Sometimes KM some time sometime o°o® sometimes. Reviewing and revising sentences -ntps:ifdocs.google conviomsid/!FAlpQL ScOAIGICANSBFCAOY2JoZptxRLFE\yecgp_82L5mgJBqSk4RQiviowscore?viowscore=AEOZAgC_SQQGi 15) | will need to complete this project. * seis this year. * on " wn 60415923, 529.AM sous C. Identify and correct the errors (grammar, spelling, punctuation, and mechanics) in the sentences. X_ 1) Thank you for your interest in our firm, this letter will summarise the *»/1 services we provide. Thank you for your interest in our firm, this letter summarise the services we provide. Feedback Thank you for your interest in our firm. This letter will summarise the services we provide. XX 2) Ameeting will be held on Friday, 18 July, at 3 p.m., in the regional we managers office. ‘A meeting will be held on Friday, 18th July, at 3 p.m., in the regional managers office. Feedback ‘A meeting will be held on Friday, 18 July, at 3 p.m,, in the regional manager's office. X_ 3) 1am surely that we can accommodate your request. * n lam sure that we can accommodate your request. x Feedback Jam sure that we can accommodate your request. -ntps:ifdocs.google.coniormsid/*FAlpQLScOA|GIcANKBFCaOY2JeZplsRLFEjyecgp_82LSmg Bq9ksRAiviewscore?viewscore=AEDZAGC_9QQGi... 7/10415923, 529.AM sous XX 4) We have scheduled a conference for next month, and these figures will *-/1 be discuss at that time. We have scheduled a conference for next month, and these figures will be discussed at that time. x Feedback We have scheduled a conference for next month, and these figures will be discussed at that time. X 5) Your information is consistant with our findings * n Your information is consistent with our findings x Feedback Your information is consistent with our findings. X__ 6) We can provide a complete financial analysis to determine if its mn beneficial to incorporate your idea. We can provide a complete financial analysis to determine if it's beneficial to incorporate your idea. Feedback We can provide a complete financial analysis to determine if itis beneficial to incorporate your idea, -ntps:ifdocs.google.coniormsid/e"FAlpQLScOA|GIcANKBFCaOY2JeZplxRLFEjyecgp_82LSmg Bq9ksRAiviewscore?viewscore=AEDZAGC_9QQGi... 8/104115723, 520M seus 7) What we are offering you is a very unique investment opportunity. * n We are offering you a very unique investment opportunity. x Feedback What we are offering you is a unique investment opportunity. This form was created inside of Universiti Putra Malaysia Google Forms -ntps:ifdocs.google.convormsid/"FAlpQLScOAIGIcANKBFCaOY2JeZplxRLFEjyecgp_82LSmg Bq9ksRAiviewscore?viewscore=AEDZAGC_9QQGi... $/10415923, 529.AM sous hips docs. google. comiformsida/FAIpQLSeDAVSIcANxBF CaOY2JeZpIxRLFElyecgp_82LSmgJBqok4RANiewscore?viewscot OzAgC_8QQGi... 10/10