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O Level Essay Writing Models

This document provides guidance on writing different types of opinion-based essay responses. It outlines five categories of essay questions - opinion/discussion, opinion/personal viewpoint, ideas/problems and solutions, ideas/evaluate, and ideas/cause and effect. For each category, it describes the expected structure of the response, including whether an opinion is required and how opposing views should be addressed. Examples of essay prompts are also provided for the first two categories to illustrate the expectations. The document aims to help writers understand how to approach different types of opinion essays.

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O Level Essay Writing Models

This document provides guidance on writing different types of opinion-based essay responses. It outlines five categories of essay questions - opinion/discussion, opinion/personal viewpoint, ideas/problems and solutions, ideas/evaluate, and ideas/cause and effect. For each category, it describes the expected structure of the response, including whether an opinion is required and how opposing views should be addressed. Examples of essay prompts are also provided for the first two categories to illustrate the expectations. The document aims to help writers understand how to approach different types of opinion essays.

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TASK 2 ESSAY

OPINION IDEAS

DISCUSSION PERSONAL VIEW PROBLEMS/SOLUTIONS


POINT

EVALUATE
CAUSE/EFFECT

1. OPINION " DISCUSSION

You need to consider both sides of an argument and present your opinion. Discuss both sides
only objectively incorporating two or three points on each side, and then present your
personal view. Objective presentation is important.

2. OPINION " PERSONAL VIEW POINT

Here you need to say how much you agree with an idea. You should state your opinion at the
start, and then explain why you have this opinion, giving several logical reasons. You should
briefly mention the opposing view as well. The conclusion should be a summary of your
viewpoint.

3. IDEAS " PROBLEMS/SOLUTIONS

This type of question does not ask for your opinion about a topic, such as whether you think
cybercrime is good or bad, or if you think it is important or not. It asks you to think of some
problems in a situation, and suggest some solutions to these problems. In tasks such as this,
you should introduce the topic, describe two or three problems, then offer two or three
solutions, and then summarize in the final paragraph. Remember, this is not an OPINION
type task. You will lose marks if you give a strong personal opinion in this essay.

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4. IDEAS " EVALUATE

This type of essay does not ask you to give an opinion about a statement. You may have to
evaluate the effectiveness of the topical statement and suggest a few alternatives. You then
need to summarize your points.

5. IDEAS " CAUSE/EFFECT

This is an IDEAS " CAUSE/EFFECT type essay. It asks you to think of some causes of the
situation, and also some effects. It does not ask for your opinion about whether something is
good or bad. You should introduce the topic, then describe two or three causes, then two or
three effects. There should be a short summary at the end.

1.
OPINION " DISCUSSION

Some people believe that sports must be included in the school curriculum and should
be mandatory part of school life; however, others feel it should be an optional activity
for school children.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your
own knowledge and experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Inclusion of sports in school curriculum has been a topic that attracts varied opinion just as
sports itself is considered to be an industry that evokes strong opposing views. There are
valid opinions on both sides, which I will try to illustrate.
On the one hand, some people feel that sports uses up valuable time that could be better spent
on academic activities such as exam preparation. In addition, it might be said that it is unwise
to force children to indulge in activities that they show least interest in. After all, not all
children enjoy physical activities and it is important that they be allowed to pursue what they
enjoy like reading or crafts-work or hobbies. Finally, with rampant corruption reported in
sports of that of illegal gratification of money and more serious incidents of drug abuse by
sportspersons, the reputation of sports itself is called into question. Some people believe that
this lack of morals sets a poor example to young people to follow.
On the other hand, though, one major benefit of sports is that it helps children’s physical
development at an important stage. If all their time is spent studying, they would become
physically unfit and consequently there would be atrophy in their minds. Furthermore,
supporters of school sports emphasize the importance of team building in sports such as

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football or hockey, which is often felt to be an excellent preparation for adulthood. Finally,
many people feel that a competitive spirit, so important today, is fostered by sports at an early
age. It is notable that many successful business people, like Satya Nadella of Microsoft,
excelled in sports at school.
Overall, I feel that sports should be compulsory for school children because the positive
effect on their mental and physical development outweighs the negatives. This is as long as
children are given a wide range sports activities to choose from to ensure their interest is
sustained and that the sports industry maintains to uphold the highest standards of conduct.
[333 words]

The topic is introduced and an adequate number of examples are presented on each side of
the discussion. The conclusion is clear and presents a relevant opinion.

Similar questions.
i) Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to by things.
Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

ii) Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job
or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

iii) Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular
species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental
problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

iv) Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think
that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

2. OPINION " PERSONAL VIEW POINT

It is better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? Is
saving more important than spending in today’s world? Give reasons for your answer,
and provide ideas and examples from your own experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Personally, I feel that saving is preferable to being a spendthrift, and I will strive to explain
why. Firstly, saving money is a sensible precaution in a world where the future is uncertain. It
is possible, for example, that a person might become unemployed or face ill health or other
crises at some point in life. It is essential to have contingency funds for these situations, and
saving is for most people the only bulwark they can create. Furthermore, I believe that saving
is itself a good discipline for people to develop as it builds skills of planning and reaching
targets. We can see this in the way that disciplined people build up quite large sums through
Systematic Investment Plans (SIPs). In many cases this meets important objectives in their

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lives, including large purchases such as cars or property. Finally, we have to look into the
reasons for most economic problems besetting the world. Usually a crisis is caused by
excessive spending and insufficient saving—not just by individuals, but by corporations and
even governments themselves. I feel that an emphasis on sensible saving should be a
universal strategy now.
I do appreciate that some people think differently, emphasizing that it is better to live for the
moment and spend accordingly. They uphold the view that consumerism fuels economy and
that in turn brings prosperity. This argument, however, hides a potential pitfall that in the
quest for fuelling economy, financially incapable individuals sacrifice themselves. I feel this
is a potentially unwise viewpoint, especially considering recent global events.
To conclude, I believe that saving is the wiser course, not just for financial but also for
personal and political reasons. Sensible saving is an invaluable skill and a buffer against
uncertainty.
[289 words]

The writer introduces the topic briefly, and then states his/her viewpoint in the introduction.
There are then three clear and logical reasons to justify the viewpoint, with some simple
examples that can be understood by anyone with a general awareness of the world. The
opposing view is mentioned briefly, and then rejected, so the essay is not completely one-
sided. The conclusion re-states the writer’s opinion and summarizes without repeating
details.

Similar question.

Tourism is always a force for good that enables people of different countries to
understand each other.
To what extent do you agree with this idea?
You should give reasons for your answer and include ideas and examples from your
own knowledge and experience.

This is another OPINION > PERSONAL VIEWPOINT type task. ‘To what extent do you
agree . . .?’ is the key phrase that tells you this. You should start by saying how much you
agree with the statement, and then explain why you think this. You should briefly consider the
opposing view, even though you then reject it.

The role of tourism in the world today is widely debated, with some people claiming that it
gives impetus to fostering international understanding. However, I personally do not entirely
accept this, and I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, we must consider the potential negatives of contact between cultures. For example,
when western tourists visit untouched parts of the world, their stay potentially causes
environmental and cultural pollution in local societies. We see this in the litter left at Machu
Picchu in Peru, and in the damage to ecology caused by safari tourism in Africa.
Furthermore, there are numerous examples of tension between tourists and local cultures,
ranging from drunken British tourists in Europe to vandalism by Chinese tourists in pyramids
of Egypt or desecration of sacred spaces of aboriginal people in Australia. In these cases,
tourism actually leads to resentment and distrust between nationalities, not better
understanding. A further reason to be wary of this idea is the economic aspect. It is
sometimes said that tourism improves international relations because it encourages the flow
of money from wealthy to less developed countries. In reality, however, the wealth generated
usually stays in the hands of private companies or local officials, and rarely percolates down

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into the population. Many of us have visited less developed nations as tourists, and have
witnessed at first hand the poverty that exists outside the confines of the resort hotels. We
leave with the impression that our stay has contributed nothing to the lives of those we have
observed.
This is not to say that tourism is entirely bad, of course. There are benefits in terms of
improving local infrastructure such as roads and airports. But to say that it is ‘always a force
for good’ is to ignore the various problems it causes.
[299 words]

“Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals
from society.” To what extent do you support this view? You should give reasons for
your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Write at least 250 words.

This is another OPINION > PERSONAL VIEWPOINT essay. The task may be phrased as
‘How far do you support x/ To what extent do you support x/ In what ways do you agree with
x’ or any similar wording. Be alert to the different possible ways that this can be expressed,
and remember the difference between this type and the OPINION > DISCUSSION type task.

There is no doubt that we need to find effective forms of punishment for criminals and also
find ways to shield citizens from any impending threat of crime. I personally feel that prison
is only one of a range of options we should use, and it is not always the most effective.
Firstly, I do not accept that all criminals need to be separated from society because the
intensity of their crime does not warrant that. Juvenile and minor offenders can be punished
through fines, community service, or other non-custodial means. This is cheaper than prison
for the exchequer and prevents the damage to the criminal’s family as hurt psyche could
potentially spawn further social problems. Furthermore, by keeping these small-time
criminals in society, we can try to rehabilitate them through training or education programs.
One of the objectives of punishment is to reform criminals. Further, this may help incidences
of recidivism.
Besides this, if offenders are believed to be threat to their fellow citizens, there are ways of
containing them using measure such as electronic tagging, curfews, or regular reporting to the
police. Such methods have been shown to be effective in reducing criminal behaviour and are
themselves quite a strong punishment as they restrict an offender’s freedom greatly. Finally,
we should remember that prisons are to some extent “cradles of crime,” and in many cases
prisoners end their jail terms as more capable and determined criminals than when they were
incarcerated.
Of course, it is true that in certain cases we need to both punish criminals and isolate them
from others. I recognize that violent or dangerous people need to be imprisoned—yet I
believe this applies to a small minority of instances.
To conclude, I feel that prison is a last resort in cases where there is no alternative. This does
not make it the only effective punishment, but rather the most severe among a variety of
possibilities.
[321 words]

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3. IDEAS " PROBLEMS/SOLUTIONS

Many people today are worried about 'cybercrime' such as hacking and identity theft.
What problems does 'cyber-crime' cause, and what solutions can you suggest for
ordinary people and businesses to take?
Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own
experience.
You should write at least 250 words.

Cybercrime is a cause of widespread concern today as crooks adept in sophisticated


technology are able to jeopardize highly sensitive data stored in digital format or transmitted
through digital modules. However, there are adequate measures available for one to protect
oneself from such intrusions.
One can envisage two potential threats from cybercrime. One is the loss of financial assets
and the second is the exposure of one’s personal data leading to identity theft. The former can
wreak destruction of the edifice of one’s financial framework. The potential loss is not
merely limited to that individual; it can also have a repercussion on society. For example, if
the money siphoned off from an unsuspecting victim lands in the hands of criminals involved
in drugs or terrorism, the huge impact on society of their actions cannot easily be mitigated.
Apart from the loss of money, the victim may also be subjected to untold misery in the form
of anxiety and stress that can sometimes get compounded by legal wrangling the victim is
dragged into.
Identity theft is another major threat. It is not easy to fathom the misery one can get into if
one’s identity is misused. There will be financial loss. Sometime the loss can run much
deeper if the offenders choose to avail loans etc. in the victim’s name. The obligation of
closing the loan squarely sits on the victim. The identity theft can also lead to situation where
the victim loses benefits of social security because the offender can easily usurp them. Stolen
identity can also tear asunder the social connections a victim has when the offender
publicizes manipulated information.
In order to secure oneself from such disasters, probably the most effective measure is to
improve digital security, ranging from strong passwords to erecting firewalls in the digital
world. This denies the criminals the raw materials to work with. Secondly, we should raise
awareness of the risks among the most vulnerable, the elderly and the very young. Since most
technical measures involve huge investments, the financial companies should bear the cost so
that the benefits accrue to both the company and the individual.
Overall, the problems caused are both financial and social, and the solutions should involve
coordinated action by individuals, corporations and the state.
[376 words]

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4. IDEAS " EVALUATE

This type of essay does not ask you to give an opinion about a statement. You may have to
evaluate the effectiveness of the topical statement and suggest a few alternatives. You then
need to summarize your points.

Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of
technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?

Write at least 250 words.

Connecting people has become the motto of emerging technologies. Foraying into redefining
industrial landscape was the primary motive of technologies, and then they quintessentially
transformed into to catalysts for revolutionizing communication technologies because the
idea of connecting people superceded the mechanical aspects of industrialization.
Communication is the bedrock on which relationships of people are built. Ever since written
words became vogue, people found methods to reach others who are physically away. The
postman trudging along mazes of roads is an enduring picture that has etched in the memory
of most seniors today because that postman symbolized the power of communication, albeit
painfully slow. Even though the letters delivered by such postmen built and sustained
relationships among people, the scope of creating new connections with new people often
eluded many because of its crawling speed and questionable efficiency.
The biggest revolution in the field of communication was wrought by internet. It swept like
wildfire consuming millions in its wake, turning them ardent adherents of the marvel it
presented. Touching new people and creating relationships became so instantaneous that
many found the newfound opportunity mind boggling because there was a surfeit of options
that had never been thought of earlier to create a new relationship. You can be part of a group
that cares for wildlife in another part of the globe or you can celebrate the victory of your
favourite team along with joyous fans in another country instantaneously. The possibilities of
connecting with one another is only limited by the lack of imagination.
As with any tool that has the potential to become a double-edged weapon, creating new
relationships can be sometime fraught with danger. Without knowing the antecedents of
others in a common group, there are potential dangers of being dragged into unsavoury
situations if that group is alleged to be part of a criminal activity. This is not to say that all
that technology offers can be negative. There are scores of instances where someone in
distress in a far off land is quickly reached out to offer succour. With adequate precaution,
technology can play a pivotal role in creating positive outcome and the positives definitely
outweigh the negatives.
[361 words]

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5. IDEAS " CAUSE/EFFECT

This is an IDEAS CAUSEEFFECT type essay. It asks you to think of some causes of the
situation, and also some effects. It does not ask for your opinion about whether something is
good or bad. You should introduce the topic, then describe two or three causes, then two or
three effects. There should be a short summary at the end.

Many countries today are experiencing high levels of migration from rural areas to
cities. What are the causes of this trend, and what effects does it have on the existing
city dwellers? Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your
own experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

Migration from the countryside to cities is certainly a topical issue as so many nations are
seeing this pattern today. There are three main causes, and two key impacts, which I will
outline now.
The main cause is probably the lack of employment available to rural people. Rural
industries, ranging from agriculture to food production and animal husbandry, have all been
rationalized and made far more efficient in recent years, meaning that fewer people are
needed to man them. Furthermore, the growth of employment opportunities in the cities
means that people, especially youngsters, are tempted to move there by the lure of higher
wages and the prospect of reliable work. Finally, many countries still have a weak
infrastructure in rural areas, especially in terms of transport and economic activity. For
example, if a country dweller is unable to find public transport to get to work locally, that
person will inevitably consider moving to a city where the infrastructure is far better
established.
Regarding the effects felt by the urban residents, perhaps the main impact is on
accommodation. An increased urban population drives up the cost of buying or renting a
home, leading to possible hardship for people who had assumed that prices would remain
stable. We can see this clearly in major conurbations such as London, Sao Paolo or Delhi,
where property prices are extremely high and continue to rise. The other main effect on the
existing city population is the vastly increased competition for job opportunities, especially at
a less skilled level. For instance, drivers, shop workers and hospitality staff find themselves
competing for work with new arrivals who are often prepared to work for less. This can lead
to a reduction in wages and consequent decline in standard of living, especially when
combined with the increased cost of housing.
To sum up, the causes of this trend are primarily to do with employment, and the effects are
felt in terms of wages and accommodation.

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