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To what extent do you agree or disagree

INTRODUCTION
Sentence 1: Write a 'General Statement' based on prompt
Sentence 2: Rewrite the question prompt in your own words.
Sentence 3: "This essay will argue that/why.

PARAGRAPH 1
Sentence 1: Restate "Side 1"
Sentence 2: Give reason/s
Sentence 3: Give example/s
Sentence 4: Conclude Side 1

Paragraph 2
Sentence 1: Restate "Side 2"
Sentence 2: Give reason/s
Sentence 3: Give example/s
Sentence 4: Conclude Side 2

Conclusion
Sentence 1: "This essay argued that/why
Sentence 2: Give your opinion (extent)
Vaccinating children has become increasingly unpopular among certain demographics of
society. These people claim that vaccinations are hazardous to children's health and as such
are not needed. This essay will argue why vaccinating against spreadable diseases is entirely
necessary despite some potential risks.
Parents have always been wary of vaccinating their children. They are justifiably worried
about injecting their children with unfamiliar substances that could potentially make them
sick. Parents naturally feel protective of their children. Indeed, there have been some recorded
instances of children unfortunately reacting adversely to their injections. These few instances
have bolstered existing fears in parents that vaccinations are not necessary and potentially
more dangerous than the possibility of contracting the communicable disease itself.
Despite the minor risks associated with vaccinating children, the idea that they are
unnecessary and dangerous is completely preposterous. Vaccines have prevented vast
numbers of deaths over hundreds of years in countries around the world. The number of
deaths so far prevented far outweighs the number of children who have been adversely
affected by the immunisations themselves. Some diseases have actually been completely
eradicated through vaccination campaigs. Overall, the idea that vaccinations are unnecessary
and dangerous is ill-informed and dangerous in itself and could potentially lead to a far
worse outcome for society.
This essay argued that people who are against vaccination have a flawed understanding
of vaccinations and underestimate the affects of what they believe. In my opinion, vaccinating
children is an absolute imperative that is entirely justified despite the small and occasional
risk

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