amples / Band 6.5 048 eat > ‘Young people are often influenced by their peers. This is called peer pressure. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? ‘To introduce, presently in the society we are ‘observing youngsters getting easily convinced by the known people around them, who are of the same age group. Though it has a good ‘effect on them, there are an equal number of bad effects. In the below paragraph, we will discuss both sides of the statement and my opinion, FFifstly, advantages include, a new generation ‘all get to gain knowledge much faster than they would on their own. Which will reduce the ‘time to learn a particular activity. MOFe6ver, with the advent of the internet, teenagers are ‘exposed to wider things and if they have good friends, they can get to know it before everyone others in the same group. FOFINSESRES, my kids aged 15 and 13 know more things, than I knew at their life stage, like language vocabulary and. Insights into technology. They gained most of their knowledge from their friends. Therefore, it Is very Important we let youth spend more time with friends of the same maturity ‘S€6RAIY, with excessive exposure to peers, disadvantages include, youngsters needs get Increased, Which sometimes may be beyand the capabilities of parents. This need Unfulfillment of Ht generations may lead them to bad habits. For‘example, influenced by others, some young kids ask for Apple phone, which Is expensive and out of reach of buying to some parents. Which may make them do Incorrect activities like robbery or theft ‘Therefore, Its very important we keep youngsters not be influenced by thelr peers. To conclude, alt6Ughi we have a high amount of advantages, there are an equal amount of disadvantages. But to move on in the modern ‘generation kids need to be left around with ‘generations of thelr age with some monitoring from grownups. The only thing parents need to do Is continuously monitor them and balance their activities, More and more people around the world are learning English a= second or foreign language, oven In countries where it fs not used im dally Ife What are the advantages and disadvantages to this? English fe now seen a2 an international dialect, and a@'aeeult, the study of it ae both a schoo! Subject and a hobby has become increasingly common in many countries in the world. There are advantages to studying the speech, specifically to one’s learning and potential for career growth. Conversely, there are drawbacks: IRs time-consuming for some people who ‘The potential rewarde of leaming and being able to communicate in Englich are undeniable, Firstly, understanding English givee people S0ce8s to a vast wealth of knowledge in books, Brticies, webpages or videos which have not been translated to other languages For example, artictes published only in Engitsh Professionals wha need them for research, Secondly, being able to communica proficiency may mean a big promotion for Someone working in businesses, or help Jobseekers to find employment in their Rete, onithetotherhand. 1 could be argued that Investing time in studying English 1s disadvantageous. For one, millions of people who are forced to learn It at school—and whose parents pay large sums of money for extra Sutzice the classroom. Farinatanes, 19 2 country lke China, where hundreds oF thousands of hours are spent across 9 lifetime Studying the language, ihe average person will likely never get the opportunity 10.g0 abroad, or work for a multinational company. The Investment of time and money does not have a ‘concomitant payoff in such cases. Additionally. a5 English becomes the language of choice for young people, rarer local languages do not get Used as much and Eonsequently are not passed fon to the next generation. As lens-used people learning English as a second language. fis the individual's circumstances which | believe determine whether this investment of, time, eneray and money ts worthwhile.wong Samples / Band @.5 Iie important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you ‘agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort Of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children? ts of paramount importance for the young tones to be able to differentiate between correct and incorrect. although some people recommend that penalty is essential for the kids to understand this. I disagree with them. Nevertheless, the elders should punish them in ways that will benefit the children. ‘There are two important reasons to substantiate my support with the given statement. FESY, the young pupils are too Innocent to be punished at sich a tender age because their mistakes are purely unintentional To be precise, if a child has seribbled on the walle of the school, he/she should be explained ‘about the unnecessary expenses that woul Ineur to reetify the concerned well. Sean, they are punished severely for their faults, not l60 consider that the big people can easily torment small ones. ForexamMple, my nephew who was scolded in his schoo! for mischief started bullying other younger kids nthe building \Well,the teachers and parents should punish these children, for them to just understand, not to leave a permanent scar on their mind. Tolbegin with, they should ask them to wash the pick up rubbish, withdraw privileges or rewards, so ae to know that their deeds were Incorrect and will not be tolerated if repeated ‘again, Moreover, the parents should also take active efforts to consider the actions of theit Iitle ones. Forlinstanice, my teachers and parents never resorted to any violence but to Certain funny penalties that helped me in the long run, ‘explanation, | truly fee! that a simple Punishment is a good trick to maintain digeipline and It works well for everyone. tis recommended to consider having in-depth knowledge of child psychology before taking ‘ony farthet step. 27 ee welling Samples / Band 8 018 = at oD ‘Some people think government should tax Unhealthy food to encourage people to begin to ‘eat more healthy foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree Processed food has become increasingly unpopular among certain demographic of society. These people claim that fast foods are hazardous to individual health and as SUCH hefty tax should be charged for them, This essay wil argue why the tax on unhealthy foods are entirely necessary despite some financial burdens. Health conscious individual has always been wary of unhealthy eating habits, They are justifiably worried about having highly processed and chemicalized substances that ‘could potentially make them sick in'adltion, these people naturally feel protective of their health. FOrIMStaRc®, A study published in the ‘American General of Clinical Nutrition stated that people who ate junk food performed poorly on cognitive tests. These few instances have bolstered existing fears in certain groups of individual that unhealthy foods are not necessary and potentially more dangerous to oneself. Despite the risk associated with the junk food the dea of having ft stil common, Moreover, the vast majority ofthe people ae claiming the various health benefits of eating junk foods Decause they feel I contains all the nutrients ‘that the body needs and the taste that contain forexarnple, calcium Is one of the nuvlents that found in unhealthy foods which helps inthe greater development of healthy bones and teeth. Overall, unhealthy foods are healthier in contributing to nutrions that body realy need and nothing can replace the taste of those foods fone cannot avoid it eas In conclusion, this essay argued that people who are in favour of taxes on unhealthy diets, they are well aware of the future outcomes. In ‘my opinion, implementing higher taxes Is an absolute imperative thats entirely justified despite the small and occasional benefits.218 00 Writing Samples / Band 7.5 088 Fata “Subjects such as drama and music are just as Important as maths and languages.” Do you agree? Schools provide a wide range of subjects for students to learn, though the academic result focuses more on mathematics and languages Classes like drama and music become extracurricular activities as hobby development. agree that they are as just essential as those ‘major subjects, in relation to the history of the great success of composers and playwriters, and the importance of social diversity in global, trends, FiFSt of all, musicians have a great history in the old days and the songs of famous composers are still influencing the world. Forexample, Austrian are still commemorating Mozart nowadays, and people from around the world would travel to Vienna to visit their homes of his, contributing millions of income to the ‘tourism industry of the country; Popular singers and bands would be famous around the world While itis not common to recall a name of the mathematician. Music is important in our daily lives in terms of public acceptance. ‘S8EOHAIY, in the current society that promotes diversity, the old-fashioned concept of ‘emphasising languages and maths in schools is becoming obsolete. FOFINStANEE, parents welcome the school which provides full coverage on learning for their children to develop a comprehensive personality and enjoy a happy childhood. The era of concentration on academic results has passed. AS/@FeSUlt, other lessons SUiGh as drawing, and instrumental playing are as important as the major courses. In summary, | agree that classes like drama and music have been always as important as the lessons on language and math, from the historical background of humans through the new generation of public advocation, woiting Samples / Band 7.5 Nowadays a large number of wild animals are Under the threat of extinction. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem? ‘These days, numerous f wild animals are pushed to the brink of extinction. In this essay, 1 ‘will name some factors that partly contribute to this problem and suggest several feasible ‘solutions that help tackle the fesue. ‘There are many reasons why many animal ‘species are on the verge of extinction. The ‘major factor thet causes this problem Is the ‘rapid expansion of human activities, which te destroying the natural habitats of wild animals In many Asian countries, ¢ large area of prime factories and industrial zones, This leade to a variety of environmental problems and the ‘lgruption in the ecosystem, which threatens the survival of indigenous animale, Invadaition to the loss of natural habitats, many rare {animals have to face the probiern of illegal hunting, Wild animals Such as chino oF ‘elephant have been killed or captured as thel body parts ike horns oF ivory tusk are highly valuable items in black markets. If there are no strict policies to protect these species, their populations will dwindle sharply because of poachers, who only care about their own benefit ‘There are some practical measures thet could bbe taken to fight for the survival of animals. Firstly, the government should allocate more funding to the establishment and maintenance of wildlife sanctuaries. By this way wildlife ‘animals could be protected from poachers and their living environment could be preserved, Another approach could be limiting the consumption of animal products by educating of over-exploiting rare animale. In fact, many affluent people associate owning @ genuine alligator wallet with being in high social status. Ifthese people change their attitude toward the consumption of animal producte and stop using them, the chance of survival of wild animals wil increase significantly as there ig no motive for In conclusion, the danger of wildlife stems from {hls situation, Government Intervention I= necessary to preserve endangered species’ living environment and raise the awareness of220 @@ 0280 Sat oD IELTS waiting Comection Service / iting Samples / Band 8.5 Iie important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early ‘age. Punishment ia necessary to help them learn this distinction. ‘To what extend do you agree or disagree? Its believed that during the formative years, parents should punish their daughters and sons to bring up them. In this essay, | strongly disagree with the approach because minors are ‘able to learn rapidly at an early age with proper teaching methods, and physical discipline might have @ negative Impact on a chiles growth. Mothers and fathers can teach thelr Infants patiently without viotence. If ehildren are repetitively reminded about a scenerio or ® lesson together with suficlent explanations, they are able to remember quickly as their cognitive processes are growing during ti period. GoASEqUENTIY, these minors can apply {his knowledge to ther life thus parents will nt be stressed out to use physical punishment in teaching them. Forexample, i is common for authoritarian parents to punish their children in Vietnam, but ever since the authority encouraged families to apply modem teaching methods from westem countries, more parents have abandoned punishment in chile-rearing Physical discipline might potentially be dangerous for the minors’ health. During the Formative years, infants need proper nutrition and a healthy living environment for their ‘growth. Sich punishments can create injuries that slow down children’s developing processes ‘or can be fatal in some cases. Forexample, in Vietnam, because there are many casualties that happened to children by caretakers disciplining, the government has applied the child protection law to protect miners from this In conclusion, | strongly disagree with punishing minors because children can be educated ‘about good behaviour with the effort of parents ‘and hitting children for discipline might have @ detrimental impact on their health, wuting Samples / Band 2.5 Nowadays many people choose to be self ‘employed, rather than to work for a company or Why might this be the caze? What could be the disadvantages of being ‘sellf-employed? ‘Today, a majonty of the population would rather run their own business than work for others. ‘The young people whe graduate from high- those who prefer to be freelancers. it might have its own difficulties, but ifthe impact of hiring experts had been recognised, companies ‘would be more successful today. Youngsters who are inspired by successful and ‘croative professors, expect to be hired after they graduated. in a recent survey, 1t1s iustrated that only two in ten af this population fre able to seek 2 job thats well-paid and Ughtly linked to theie expertise. Adaitienally, after a while working, they eventually fee! dissatisfied by a wide range of responsibilities ‘ond taske which are aeeigned to them. Thats ot necessarily the case. Not only will they not receive their ealary on time, but alg they wil not be insured by the company where they are ‘employed. Above all else, knowledgeable Individuals expect to be respected by managers. itis aurprising to know haw many bosses do neglect these pivot points. All these reasons that | have already mentioned ‘encourage the young to be selfemployed Instead. This way might result in much more money without any struggles at their workplace with the management team. They may benefit from Mexible work hours with ne orders Despite all these contributing factors to running their own businesses, it includes ite own disadvantages. Forexample, they would be successful in thelr line of work. Moreover, they might be faced with a large number of Unpredictable obstacles which may not be easy ‘work hours. Thats pivotal why they may ‘radually have challenges in immaculate timekeoping snd meeting their deadlines. ‘To eum up, sitheUgh the fraction of people whe wants to work for themselves is growing these days, tic estimated that this trend will not last Jong because of its risks and challenges. It means that its disadvantages outweigh the ‘Sdvantages. If companies hed found eut the Impact of hiring expert individuats on thelr demands as perfectly as possible and keep up ‘with what they expectaa ee ‘out Sal OD IELTS Waiting Correction Service / Wilting Samples / Band 8 With ail the troubles in the world today, money spent on space exploration is a complete Waste. The money could be better spent on other things. ‘To what extent do you agree or disagree? It's undeniable that space investigation has become an essential part of human if. However, there is no absolute agreement, whether the funding this kind of research is squandering and should be allocated to ‘therwise things or not. Personally, | tend to think that itis more acceptable to continue financing the examination of the cosmos. Fist and foremost. it is well known that finding ‘as much as possible about the universe outside of Earth may extend humans’ opportunities. What! mean here is that if scientists manifest ‘more inhabitable locations which ae consist of water, food and other required resources, the state authorities will be able to transfer the half quantity of dwellers to other planets in the case of prohibitive overpopulation and batties for food and weter. The explanation tls in the fact that currently scholars are providing the myriad of available data about thelr discoveries and explorations related to celestial bodes sch as stars, asteroids, meteors and als about planets, which stil have been examined by ‘academics and colonists e.g. Since 2002 in M Onitheletheriand, can be als6 argued that calamities caused by the fall of asteroids or ‘meteors are likely to be prevented by experts \who thoroughly studied about celestial objects or just to notify where this disaster will probably ‘cour. If there Is not sufficent funding of cosmic research due to the fact that people decided to spend money either on averting famine in poor countries, which are clear evidence that a catastrophe Is coming, or Invention of unnecessary weapons, ft might peril the safety of every inhabitant of Earth including flora and fauna, and nobody wil ‘to be fed. MOFEOVEF, the development of technology ie partially owing tothe immense curiosity of mankind which is ailing to comprehend everything In conclusion, taking everthing mentioned above into account, | completely disagree that financing the cosmic examination is outlay, and ‘the money ought to be sllotted for tis es usual Writing Samples / Band 8.5 ota = atom ‘Some people think that children should be ‘taught to competitive in school. Others however, think cooperation and team working ‘kills are more Important. Discuss both views/sides/points. focus to make a kid competitive, while some others believe academy should focus to develop cooperative and working experience. This essay will discuss on both views, ‘To. commence with, kid ate like a plant if we ‘care them, they will be frultful but if they dont the university should teach them to be frienclly and cooperative. If they are developed prowess, they can easily adjust in every time of ‘environment and kill their self centred and selfishness habit. FOFINStAne®, « recent study conchided that 90 % scholar ean adjust with ‘every type of people only If they have friendly habit and calmness. Furthermore, If the tutor makes them indulged to trial with peer, then they can easily develop their company working, Intelligence which is obligatory for thelr future oul In every eector. Fer example, if the junior has to Job in a related field as a doctor, enaineer, to get success In their target. Therefore, ‘educator should give prominence on moulding the students more friendly and ameliorating the ‘organization working proficiency, However, some people believe pupils should be ‘competitive to grab the thrive in their life 50. seademy should focus on this things. If they are ‘competitive in nature, they will never like to lose ‘anything in their soul so they task hard to achieve #t. To exemplify, a survey conducted in 2012 concluded that 50% famous people lke football player, celebrities and so on have got the fruitful success in an activity because they ‘are more focus on their achievements and they don't want to lose anything they want. Moreover {competitive type of behaviour alwaye motivates them to be by themselves so they don't care others and just do their tasks. Inisdaition, it will make scholar more strong to struggle with any sort of struggle which might ‘appear in thelr way. That's why, many people the competitive behaviour among the kida. To sum up, on one hand competitive aids offeprings to become to get success with the target goal by making them strong mentally, white onithelother hand the company working skill and cooperation succour kids to work in an organization very successfully to grab the thrive.1223 ©@ Samples / Band 6.5 More and more people want to buy famous brands of clothes, car and other items. Why is this trend? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Nowadays, a large number of people prefer to spend their money on famous brands of car, ‘mobile phones, clothes, jewellery and other tems. We all know, that If a person wants to be cool and fashion, he or she needs to buy high quality products, In thig essay, | will explain why thi trend and my own point of view. Fitst and foremost, this trend is present, especially in young people. They want to have the latest clothes or accessories in their closet. This happens because young people want to be accepted by thelr friends. | really believe that {this behaviour to spend so much money Is a very negative development. | think that everyone can spend their own money on what ‘they want, but aithe’other hand, | think, is unbelievable that people buy high quality stuff only to be part of a group. SEEORALY, girls and boys follow their favourite famous idol and they pursue them in whatever ‘they wear or buy or do. This is a good thing, that famous people inspire other people in order to follow what they buy, but they cen 8186 Influence normal people in a bad way. Forexample, to spend too much money buying famous stuff SUGh shoes, Tshirts, dresses or technologies. In my own experience, | believe that every single person is free to buy what they want. HOWEVer, ‘think that sad when people buy things only because they want to be accepted from their friends. To conclude, I think people who want to spend money on famous brands is a negative development. ‘Submitted by Alena on Frum 122020, 1228 e@ Oe eto Writing Samples / Band 7.5 ‘some people say that science and technology subjects are important while other say history subjects,what do you think? “There ae ample emnounts of evidence thatthe word ie moving toward the technological era “Tre techotogieloxvaroernata nthe conomy have proved the fecte without heenatton. Henbe, some may beleve that vale ada STEM aubjects tthe cueulum, vile others are prefered to learn about historical events. When considering the curent tren, arly agro th te BB pet ofthe argument, This essay will further elaborate on both aes ofthe etetement wth some relevant examples ‘TobESIA with, the importance of science can be twofold. Fifét of al itis essential for a child to learn scientific applications at an early stage of life to survive in this contemporary society Nowadays, It is hard to complete work ‘manually, and all most all the tasks that we are engaging in our day-to-day life is computerised, ‘A study conducted by Oxford University depicted that people need ta have at least more than 70% information technology literacy rate 10, be productive in the workplace, S@eondly, the recent labour market data illustrated that the ‘majority of organisations are looking for fresh Graduates who are in the field of medicine, engineering, physics and many other science: based subjects. To cite an example, data analysts and software engineers have a higher demand compared to occupations in the art and literature field. On the fp side, some flocks are willing 10 ‘master latory. According to their perspective, It is important to investigate historical events to lunderatand how people live in the past. Furthermore, such subjects provide adequate ‘amounts of information to preserve the culture land traditions for thelr future generation, Furthermore, past data Is helpful in building new knowledge. Forinstanee, ancient home remedies significantly contribute to the development of new medicines ‘To sum up, in my viewpoint, if someone wants to 90 Up in career ladder, they should select high-tech subjects,24 08 0288 & at Wwnting Somples / Band & Nowadays, more and more children play ‘computer games. Why do you think this is the case? Is ita positive or negative development? Entertainments UGH as computer games are getting popular among offspring these days. This essay will discuss the reason that causes 1thi8 tendency and will provide my opinion on. hy this trend has @ harmful impact on children, itis interesting to note that over recent years there was a huge variety of games that were invented based on computer technologies. ‘Moreover. gong to a computer shop or even an cnline store you can buy almost any type of {game starting from war games and ending up with strategle games. Foriistane, my friend ‘made his mind just to try to spend his leisure playing electronic Games on his laptop and obtained a war game for thiS reason but one week later he realized that he was obsessed with doing this entertainment and he wanted to get another type of game to continue enjoying gaming ‘THis type of obsession, playing Computer games, can bring a detrimental impact on children long the way. Unfortunately. a young rman is not capable of noticing how much time fone spends doing sich kind of activity meanwhile one starts depriving himself of real conversations with fiends and doing less physical activities that might cause diferent diseases and a sleep disorder, or exaMplé. To provide a real case, my friend has got sleep deprivation being addicted to playing a war game, and 86/8 reBUlt, caused an iecue with blood pressure that required medical treatment. In conclusion, the upwards trend of gaming ‘on a computer comes from innovative ‘approaches of the electronic industry that crafts new games more realistic and interesting dday by day. In my opinion, this trend can bring a detrimental consequence on a youth's health 1225 08 08 F wl CED Writing Samples / Band 7 ‘These days many people live or work overseas in a different country than they were born in, Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this and then give your own opinion. Nowadays, some living or working in another nation which is not thelr nationality. This essay will suggest having chances in the development career is the biggest advantage of job over sea, {and the cultural shock will be the primary disadvantage when living there. On the one hand, having a job and aboard to work is an opportunity to develop yourself in your career. You can work, study and know the way foreign companies working. It is the chance for you to challenge yourself and if you passed it, you will self-confidence if not, you will not regret you missed a chance to prove yourself. FOPIAStaREE, my cousin has a chance to study and have a job in Europe, but she decided to continue studying and work in my country. Now, rarely she regrets her decision. ‘Ontheletherhaid, getting shocked will be ‘2 worthy thing which you will receive for the fist time living in another land. You will see ‘many different things with your familiar. The food you cannot eat, the laws, the music you listen to or anything other, everything so strange. A lonely feeling hems around you which makes you are sad and cry. Take my brother as an example, he used to labour in Taiwan. He usually felt alone and missed family after his tasks because he was unfamiliar with that culture and could not understand them. In conclusion, | believe that working abroad is an opportunity in your career development, which overshadows the difficulties that cultural ‘shock brings to you when you Iii live in ‘nother area.1228 08 ows Writing Samples / Band 2.5 at ‘There is a disagreement on the impact of Increased business and culture contact, between countries on a countrys Identity. What is your opinion? Many believe that the more businesses a nation has globally the more its identity will be Impacted. Even though the exchange of trades and goods among the world Is of extreme Importance for global development and human survival, when it comes to cultural identity 1 believe that there can be a negative impact on the latter. Additionally, | have the strong opinion that the more a country interacts financially with other nations, the more flexible It needs to be to be diplomatic and that can have an effect fon the nations Identity this can bring positive and negative results overall FFL, the positive aspect of engaging in negotiations between countries are numerous ‘With this, a nation is able to graw and develop Its markets internally and externally FFerinstanee, they are able to export goods and services that they have in excess and al66 Import other things that they have a demand for. THUS, the quality of life for the population is. ‘greatly increased and many economic issues ‘can be avoided in the long term. Adaitionally, the mbcture of languages and cultures creates ‘many, thrills, but for others harm and grlef. 'S8GOnAI, coming to the negative side, many studies have shown that an increase In relations among counterparties can impact negatively the social aspect of the community. Many people lose their sense of belonging and many times cannot relate with the people that live in the same place as them. FOF example, in some countries we see communities with various backgrounds, but they are forced to speak the local language in order to survive. As a consequence, many individuals struggle to ‘communicate properly and find themselves left out of the system, and sometimes even marginalised. In summary, although | truly understand the Importance and benefits of the interaction between nations, senversely | hold 2 strong ‘opinion that this can have a negative social Impact on some populations. 227 0@ Wong Samples / Band 7.5 oe et aD Itis important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Its true that large public facilities SUCH as parks and other open spaces have beneficial ‘effects on living conditions. Hewaver, | disagree with the idea that every urban area should have ‘sUCh spaces; some cities are obliged to tend to ‘other much-needed infrastructure and service improvement “The presence of squares are pars certainly produces many benefits. EID, these places promote exercise among eity dwellers, bringing 8 postive change to thelr sedentary lifestyle. HISHEGHEE EH green SBSE89 regulate ar temperature and absorb atmospheric pollutants, which helps reduce health risks inherent in many cities and towns. Secondly. public venues can be used for important events and holidays, or as touriat attractions that help generate incomes and boost locel economies ‘Times Square in New York City, foFeamBle, attracts millions of visitors a year, and its Considered one of the major economic drivers for the ety Nevertheless, t would be impractical to make Public spaces an absolute necessity because some cities are faced with more urgent issues which should be prioritised. As people move to tities for jobs, there is an urgent need for living ‘spaces. Therefore, instead of using lands for huge public spaces, city officials may use them to provide accommodation for the increasing population. Al8@, constructing and maintaining public facilities can take up a significant portion of a city budget, which otherwise can be used ‘for more pressing needs of urban residents. For instance, itis more important for some titles to bulld more hospitals or combat unemployment rather than create recreational places for the public. In conclusion, | do not believe that al cities need to invest in building public places as some have to allocate their space and financial resources for weightler matters.122 ©@ one. Samples / Ba writing ‘More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses for communities in poorer countries. Why young people choose to do so? Who will benefit more: young people or the communities? Itis true that the number of youngsters who do voluntary work in developing countries is Increasing recently. This essay will discuss ‘about the reasons for thié phenomenon and {eH address the question of that community or young people benefits more. The simple reason can be easily seen that the youth will gain valuable experience and improve practical skills. During the time in these countries, they not only could experience some facts of culture and behaviour, but al86 have the ability to adapt the changed environment and live by the way citizens do, The experiences ‘added to CVs and make them easier to find Jobs In the future. MOréOver, being mature and broaden knowledge are necessary and worthy thanks to many desires and aspirations. Like some students, paying money to go there but do the unpaid job, just want to get more earnings and happiness to their lives. ‘Itls clear that the communities usually receive ‘more than giving, but youngsters stil feel it too. ‘Some poorer people need to be helped and have the chance to improve the quality of life so they are taught and encouraged to access the wish of becoming less difficult to meet their needs and know more ways to develop themselves. Besides, the youth definitely gets broader outlook thanks to life-changing challenge and that would make them mature, respect everything around them and live better since then. In conclusion, youngsters coming to do workin ‘communities in less wealthy countries for free hhas thelr reasons and not only them, but the residents in there al benefit from this. ‘Therefore, itis encouraged for the youth to do ‘more in our society in order to gain a brighter future. vs ae Writing Samples / Band @ O88 Fat ‘Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percent of these positions to women. do you agree? In amale dominated society, females have to fight for their rights. AlthoUgh more than fifty person of the employees are women, the highest posts are mainly occupied by men in the in the developed countries. There should be a justifiable way to distribute these positions equally in both genders. | strongly agree with this statement. In the developed countries, ROWEVEE the women are equally competent as men, due to gender discrimination, they are not motivated and appreciated for their work. MOFB6Ver, take an ‘example of any field, more than 50% of thelr lower staff consists of females. FOF Instance, the hospitals are run by a male administrator, ‘Grithelcontrary, the working doctors and nurses. are mostly women. Thefefore, the females are not considered suitable for leading positions. In todays world of revelution, it ie an utmost Important to change the typical mindset. The ‘companies should be held responsible to allocate the fixed percentage of positions to females only, because if they are capable ‘enough to work on lower positions, they can take over the responsibilty of higher posts as well. Forinstance, my mother was a schoo! ‘teacher for fifteen years, after that she was offered a post of Principal which she managed properly and is considered as the best principal Up to date, To conclude, more women work on junior levels than men because they are not promoted to senior posts. | agree with the aforementioned ‘suggestion that certain percentage should be kept reserved for women in leading positions, in all the companies.Wating Samples / Band 8 “The role of education is to prepare children for the modem world. Schools should cut art and ‘music out of the curriculum 20 that children can focus on useful subjects such ae Information technology. To what extent do you ‘Many individuals think thatthe aim of education should be preparing children for the ‘modern world. THUS. music and art should be removed from the curriculum in order to focus fon more beneficial subjecta sh a= Information technology. In my opinion, aft and Imusie are equally important as other subjects Inte modern world which is hy they should bbe in the curriculum. The aim of this essay 1s to disagree with the argument and it will explain ‘the debate by using examples. ‘TOEGIN with 111s important to bear in ming that art and musi¢ has a unique lace ‘throughout history. By learning forms of at, students would nave a chance to express their ‘thoughts and feelings better. Furthermere. the ‘bilty of lateral thinking can be Increased by learning arts and students would have the potential for combining the upward trends UeR ‘3s mobile application and the internet with art Forexample. there are many applications that Include musie and the power ot technology ‘together. Consequently music and arts should ot he seen ae outmoded and Included in the curriculum ‘Secondly, cutting aft anc musie out of te Ccurricukim can cause a lors of the behemoth potential of students. 1s noticeable that every Child has unique skile and ability Therefore especialy n fundamental education, many aifferent subjects should be taught to ehildren, In this way, students can discover their personal Interests and it olves a more clear vision of the ‘modern world, Instead of teaching a particular subject. comprehensive education indifferent ‘reas, including aft and Muse, would be more beneticial in order to prepare children for the Industrial and technology age. To summarize. aithOUBH some individuals opinions about art and musie should be cut out of the curriculum in the school, this essay ‘demonstrated that the currant technological development might be combined with art and as a S€cond argument education should be Wellrounded ina different subject for better preparation. For this reason, there is no doubt ‘hat art and music should be included inthe curriculum, 123 200 10380 Saal 2D Whling Samples / Band 6.5 Nowadays , with the advancement of technology, people can work and live anywhere they want . Do it's advantages outweigh disadvantages ? ele an undeniable fact that” in this scientifically ‘advanced era , technological advancement and mechanisation have completely transformed the lives of individuals in every sphere.” Owing to thls, Individuals can perform their tasks and ‘can reside in the places they desire currently . In {this ,essay both the positive and negative Impacts of this phenomenon will be highlighted before deriving a meaningful conclusion, ‘To commence with, there are a plethora of merits of technology. The most prominent one Is that the masses can access any information and can work from any place. To elaborate, as presently Internet ia available in every comer of the globe , it becomes easy for employees to ‘work from their abode . Foriinstaniee , during the time of COVID-19 pandemic, it was almost Impossible for people to get out of their homes whereas mobile - data has helped them a lot to ‘continue their work . Consequently, t declined the unemployment rate, Another worth mentioning advantage is that individuals can ‘get knowledge about the things happening ‘check the news feed by sitting anywhere and remain up-to-date . Resultantly , tt enhances their knowledge, On the paradoxical side , despite the given pros of jacience there are various dleadvantages that ‘can not be overlocked . The moat pertinent one Is the increase in fraud cases . To be more: specific, nowadays the masses post numerous fraud news anonymously to increase their views and gain money. Ergo It sometimes leads to disputes among people . Last but not the least,, various folks write bad comments on distinct social sites . Categorically discussing, folks especially haters write bad words on YouTube and other social apps which ultimately discourages the hard work of other masses: ‘Thus, influencers feel demotivated and sometimes they stop thelr work To recapitulate, after sifting through both the views thoroughly it can be stated that technology is increasing at an alarming pace whereas its demerits cannot be overlooked . No doubt science has made people's lives easter howbeit they must use it for 2 good purpose.wiiting Samples / Band 8 ‘some people think that environmental Problems should be solved on a global scale ‘while other believe it iz better to deal with them hationally. Diseuse both sides and give your opinion, “There hae been an everincreasing concern tackled at a global level while others boliove 1s better to deal with them locally. hla essay wil Giecuse both perspectives in detall ‘The majority of the population belleves that the Issues pertaining to the environment should be ved on a national ecale for multipie reasons. Furst, ic important that all countries must Individually contribute to the lasues regarding, the environment. Only than there willbe fows dilemmas on a worldwide sosle. FOREKaMBe, 0 the 19th century, Japan, India 98 well as the Into the atmosphere. Consequently. was ‘observed that the overall pollution acrose the world significantly decreased. Secondly, different nations are responsible fer specific complications, To ilustrate, China ts known for tho electronic waste and the plastic "t produces, Ifthe Chinese government device a strategy for using aktematives most of the prevalent concerns in the northern region will eventually bbe resolved. Its Important for 9 country to look. after their own affair. Onitherotherhand, 1s necessary to fine regions which are not native to @ country ‘As-avresult. tnere shouts be an international ‘organisation that should deal with global ‘fairs. Exernpli Gratis, due to the release of lot of aquatic lite Ie endangered. Henee fe important to consider fixing this problem fromm a global standpoint. Fufthemiare, the ozone layer country should not be responsible for the same, ‘As an example, the ozone layer in the western ‘eas ie getting depleted. This becomes obligatory fer non-profit international bodies to ‘make use of advanced technology. Its Inevitable for provinces to deal with these environmental issues at both levels, | strongly ‘argue that It Is much more significant If nations: Unanimously deat with them from e worldwide standpoint aince moat of the problems lie in fora single nation to do se. anewoe waiting Samples / Band 6. ‘Write about the following tople: ‘Some people think that the amount of noise ‘one makes should be strictly controlled. Others believe one should be free to make ae much noise as one wishes: Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or Write at least 250 words. Some societies believe that one should have control over the amount of flee thet he/ ahe makes In the surroundings while others argue with thig matter and believe that every Individual has the freedom to make their own wishes and there Is no need te control how. much noise they make. in this essay, | wall discuss both scenarios and thf twill give some reasons with some relevant examples (On the on€ sido, Some people believe that it te ‘ne should control the explosion that he/she makes. Nowadays, there Is a lot of sound pollution around the world which is leading to health problems. Forinstanice, n incie, most public celebrate their festivals, marriages, ete with 9 J sound system which is disturbing the Surrounding areas. Anather good example ta, ‘one of my neighbours, she Is 60 years old and she died of @ heart attack due ta uncontralled sound coming from the Dil system, So, society because these sounds may load them to death, Forinstanee, nowadays, In the Telangana istrict, the government Implemented a rule to not use the Du system after 10 p.m during marriages, ete rights to live with thelr own freedom. People have their own choice to make their own Nala but it should not disturb others! freedom, Forinstance, Most people at weekends go to pubs to enjoy themselves by making loud olses and dancing. Because, these pubs are ‘well managed and there will be no disturbances In their surrounding areas. In thie way, an Individual can enjoy his/her right and alse dort disturb others’ freedom. Everybody has the right to make noise and it should affect others’ freedom To sum up, In my view, every Individual has the right to make thelr own voice but they should not disturb others’ freedom.22 @woo 9.Samples / Band 7 Advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world. English became the most widely spoken language in all the nations due to advancements in tourism. It is sometimes thought that English will become the single language practised on an international scale. With English as the only language, there will be 2 free flow of information and people between different countries, but there are @I86 some drawbacks to be taken into account. On the one hand, countries can enjoy a number of advantages with English spoken at a larger scale, Fifstly, there will be no communication barriers as people will practise this language from a very young age. IjGther WAFS, the conversation will become easier and without any hesitations. S@GOndly, this will ease the process of immigration, particularly, for students and skilled unemployed workers. To further explain, English will no longer be a criterion for learners and job searchers, ‘URGES, employment could be shared between various nations at an International level Onithelother hand, one problem with a global Tanguage is that it can harm the beliefs of some ethnic and cultural groups. Forexample, some communities prefer their language over any other because they feel easier to communicate, and it is related to their traditions or religious beliefs. Another possible issue is that it can lead to unemployment for natives of a country. [This will create a negative atmosphere of Violence among natives towards their governments regarding language no longer a eriterion for immigrant workers. MOFeOVer, it could 86 increase discrimination against Immigrants. In conclusion, while international market benefits from a single practised language, it can £186 lead to exploltation of ethnicity or job security of natives. 2 ewes Woiting Samples / Band & ON ata Having different languages makes It difficult {or people of different nationalities 10 ‘communicate with each other. It would be better if there was only one language in the world What are the advantages and disadvantages of everyone in the world ‘speaking the same language? ‘Communication among the populations of various nations has become dificult as they have different forms of speech if all the people Con the earth had a single way of interaction, theft it would have been better The following paragraphs would discuss the pros and cons of the situation where all the individuals on the th use the same way of speaking [TOIBEGIA with, there are two main benefits if crowds around the world use the same medium for interaction Fifsly, they can express thei ‘emotions and thus develop a friendship removing the country barriers. Aeltionaily. many individuals do net leave thelr countty for ‘more job opportunities to other countries only because they are afraid of foreign mother tongues.if there is no speaking barrier, the more people step out and grab jobs around the world, Therefore, unemployment gets ruled out ‘ll places. For instance, developed countries lke electronics and technology. So people in developing nations can move there and apply for jobs. n'theotherhand, despite the above-soid benefits there are some disadvantages of using a similar speaking style by al the folks on the planet Figs of all, numerous languages ‘around the world are’ centuries ald and large ‘number of ancient text has been engraved using those forms of speech Hence, If crowds shift towards a new language , there Is @ possibility that future generations may forget their local means of communication. ASTIFESUR important messages in that mythological texts {90 In vain. Mlor@over, studies have shown that the brains ability gets doubled by tearing different languages. FoFINstaNee, by using only ‘ single language, the minds of the individuals {get constrained and its ability 10 accept various dialacta of interaction gets closed Ine nutshell, populations of several nations on the globe face difficulty in expressing thelr words as they use different speaking forms. [Alg6, using the same form of communication hhas both ups and downs as discussed above.2s ewne Wating Samples / Band 6 ‘some people feel that entertainers ( 9 film stars, pop musicians, sports stars) are paid too ‘much money. do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid? 11s often sald that public persons earn a lot of ‘money and at the same time there are many Jobs who are not so well paid despite that are very important for our society. From my point of View I think we have to maintain a balance and do not forget to invest in others activities who ‘are Important too. Nowadays, we live In @ century whe looks up for the models.children are very influenced by influencing people Forexample, on the intemet, there are many iconic persons who promote trips, clothes, games and so on.Adolosconts want to become like thie persons In arder ta be known on the market, many companies’ appeals to the influence people for advertising ‘and pay # lot of money for thi! think that in & way they deserve that money because It is a hard work to maintain you on the top . Another ‘example is footballers who gain a lot of money. but they deserve this because it is a sport who needs more physical effort, this people are always away from their family.Pop musie, film ‘stars is in the same position, they have a lot of ‘money, but they particulary Ife has to suffer. ‘Onithelotherhand, we do not have to forget that, are many sports who deserve attention ‘and money, like handball, volleyball, gymnastics ‘and so on Iniadaltion to this, many sportsmen who represent us at a high level at the Olympics Games, they do not gain a lot of money and ‘sometimes they are forced to do thelr exercises in unpropiate halls without adequate ‘equipment. The government should spend ‘money too in the medical area, in many countries, there are doctors who gain less ‘money that a public person, although they save peoples lives and learn a lot during the university years, ‘Taking everything into consideration, entertainers have their own place in our life, we reed them in some way and, but at the same time we do not have to forget that other activities should be equally paid for thelr jobs, Whiting Samples / Band 8.5 ‘many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people however think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion Its true that the development of a country can be showed through many ways. While most ‘governments believe that economic progress ie the major mark of success, I would argue that there are other important areas to be developed ‘that will demonstrate, in the long-term, how a society is wealthy and progressed. “There Is growing evidence that the economy has become pivotal to measure success In a society. Terms SUGH as GDP (gross domestic product) and interest rates are part of people's lives. Far instance, when GDP rises and interest rates go down, individuals begin to consume more, which increases, therefore, the GDP. However, when there Is an economic erisis, people stop to consume, leading to a substantial fall in the local GOP, which will discourage even more the consumption. ‘As/aFesult, local economies will shrink with a trend to evolve to the deficit. This is something highly desired by any country. (On the other side, there are a number of ‘aspects that should be taken into consideration when thinking about society progress, atch as public health and childrer's education. Those topics are extremely important to measure people's wellbeing in the long-term. To Iustrate this point, Japan is a good example to be cited: Japan was in a deep financial crisis, five decades ago, when the government had decided to invest in child education: nowadays, Japan is one of the most developed countries In the world and iliteracy rates are almost zero. By investing in these areas, authorities are thinking of an improvement for the future ‘generations, In conetuston, alth@ugh the financial system plays an important role to make a country ‘wealth, itis not the only aspect that should be taken into consideration. In my view, education ‘and public health are as essential as economy ‘and, they are responsible for our next ‘generations’ well-being and development,2% @woe Writing Samples / Band 7 08S at ‘Some people think that the only way to relax is rest or sleep, while others say people need to do exercise or sport to relax. Discuss both view points and give your own opinion. Nowadays people work around the clock; @S.EFESUIt , they become tired by the end of the day . Some people believe that taking a rest and having 8 sound sleep is the best way to relax ‘our body and mind, others opine that doing some exercise and playing sports is a better way . In my opinion | completely agree with the ‘S@C0Rd view , and | will discuss both sides in. the forthcoming paragraphs ‘TO BEGIN with , taking a nap in the middle of the day is the best way to have some rest and relax ‘This is because the human body needs a break and sleeps at least 7 hours per day to can focus and work effectively . FOPEXamiple, there is a huge difference between someone who sleeps 8 hours and another who just sleep for 4 hours .and we can see the difference in their life, FORIRSEEREE , some researchers from. Oxford University found that people who used to take some rest and sleep for just 40 minutes after Work are more delighted and effective rather than whom they work all day and the result was without value and they tend to retire early OfelStheF HANA, doing exercise every day and ‘even Just walking for one hour per day make a difference and helps to treat the mood to feel ‘900d The reason behind thig is people who play sports regularly UGH as football and swimming are happier and they have the energy to Work entire the day . FOFEXaMIpIe , spending ‘one hour per day doing some activity to move your body and your blood makes a huge {iffetence in our Way of thinking and makes life better, ReneS we can appreciate what we have In conclusion , aith@’gh having a nap and meditation will help a lot to relax. The best way. to feel better is by doing regular exercise as7 ew no Wiiting Samples / Band 8.5 oe ‘With many problems of transport and accommodation in cities, some governments re encouraging businesses to move to rural ‘areas. Do you think the advantages of this ‘outweigh the disadvantages? tia argued that due to the issues regarding means of transport and éwellings in metropolitan areas, authority figures should encourage corporations to operate in the countryside. in my view, this phenomenon brings both positive and negative impacts that On the one hand, the effort of companies to local society as @ whole. Firstly, by expanding ‘their production, enterprises can create new job opportunities fer local inhabitants. Landing @ stable Job, they can earn a living for daily expenses and crime rates are likely to decrease In the poor villages. S8eONdIY. the higher the profit reaped by glant corporations, the more ‘taxes pald to the government. AS a Fesult, governing bodies may use that budget to invest In education and madieal infrastructure that leads to a substantial improvement in the quality of life. Moreover, not only making money, but companies alee contribute to bettering society through philanthropic actions. Vinamilk- the top-tier company in Vietnam, forexample, has provided a great number of Scholarships and given charitable donations for building schools, onithelother Hand, businesses should have responsibilities to environmental degradation, fand the social labor force, The horrors of the induate in the ata of madernization may cause air pollution in tranquil places. Without installing the ventilation system, factories produced a significant amount of carbon footprint. Thus, locs! people are prone 10 suffer from respiratory lines. IN/BGdItIOn, huge firma de net have the tendency the outsourcing staff, albeit ganversely, local employees are pad starvation wages and under Unhealthy working conditions. It ig alert that the recruiters have to ensure the importance of health, safety, and payment. In conclusion, the policy of encouraging companies to move out of the urban area can be double-edged eword. Even though it helps promote rural development, businesses can exploit the legal loophole to cut down on payment and make/ create enviconmental problems.Waiting Samples / BandZ ‘Social media has amassed large user bases. Do the advantage of being a part of social media site outweighs the disadvantage? Nowadays, social media is one of the major parts of living. People can receive and gain any Information from anywhere in the world via the Internet, this Is really convenient. In my notion, being a part of social media have more advantages than disadvantages and | am going 10 explain in the following paragraphs. FF, in the previous era before the world has the internet we use different types of ‘communication systems 8UGH as pigeons, that carry letters hen I think this method is tardy ‘and complicated. HoweVer, today in the world of technology we have various sorts of social networks SUGH as Facebook, Skype, Discord and Whatappe ete, and these all can bring the world ‘smaller than ever, Forexample, some families do not live together in the same mansion or ‘apartment maybe their parents live in thelr homeland but thelr offspring are living abroad, ‘Vertheless, they can keep in touch with each other by using social media. ‘and data from untrustable ‘sources can be easy to be tracked and checked. Back in the day, we can only consume news from television and newspaper. These kinds of, information sources can be simply contr by the government and it means citizens have no right and no freedom to receive the facts, Forinstanee, if you are in a country, thats strict with their citizens to consume only the from government mass media and disallow their residents to reach the internet, this means the politicians can do anything that they want. But Ifyou are in a nation where you are free to audit any sources of data that you can opt what staff you are going to believe, will it be better? In conclusion, the internet and technology do not have only advantages because the coin slways has two sides. So thls is our responsibilty to choose the better way to use them: ote Saat “The number of advertisements for charities on television and the Internet seems to be Increasing. What is causing this? Is this a positive of negative development? Give Feasone for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. ‘with the rapid development of internet technology, our society has been benefited greatly as 8 whole. Nowadays, even the philanthropy industry has alge joined in the benefited group enormously. Various reasons can be related to this phenomenon including the hi-tech advancement and individual's Increased financial capability. strongly think {hig Is a positive trend with proper regulation. Let us have a glance at the reasons contributing to this phenomenon. Tolbegin with, compared with previous ages, today, folke can learn all kinds of information from thelr fingertips. For example, » piece of fundraising news for a leukaemia kid can be knwn evernight simply by releasing the need on the internet. Besides the unavoidable contribution of the website, the ‘ity people almost possess a relative abundant living condition, se that they have the ability to donate the spared money for the children who fre living in a remote and poverty place to continue their education. With the mentioned ‘two reasons, the charity has now become a reachable topic for everybody to know. With the folowing two aspects in mind, | truly believe the more crowd concern about, the better for the endowment industry to develop healthily. Firstly, more people can easily get Involved in the business which used to be for Just a small amount of crowd to do. Actually, ‘most people willingly help with those who are in need, but the practical problem for them ts that, they do not know where they can help and how they can do it, Secondly. with the supervision of ‘the public, the fund organization can be run supervising from the community, many corruptions occurred sadly in institutions like orphanages, which bring out # very negative Influence on our nation, In conclusion, a8 I mentioned above, thanks to the technology development and the growth of citizens’ living standard, the publicity of the donation business Is unavoidable. With the right guidance and regulation, | believe allowing the Individual ae wall as the whole society.Waiting Samples / Band 8.5 Some people belleve that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of erime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances ofan civil cima, and the motivating of “when deciding on the punishment Discuss both of these views and give your opinion. tla commonly auggested that criminals should be punished based on the type of crime they commit which have a certain form of penalty, Sdministered according to the nature of break the lave In my viewpoint, both of these ‘views Bla6 have benefits and drawbacks in the spect of the legal process system as a whol FiFst of all, mposing @ fixed punishment on the Indivicual category af violation can be beneficial in terma of time aaving and effective cost. This le because It would expedite the due process reach a verdict quicker which can save time for prosecutors as well ae defendants MrSGVEE 1 can reduce the expense occurring stlomneys who has a significant rate In legal Consequence. The key reazon ts there is Despite administering a certain penalty have convenience for two parties, In some cases, It should be ineffective for the offender as well 88 prosecutor which ean lead to unjust convict. ‘Therefore, considering the individual circumstance of misdeed and finding out the truth would be fairer for bath of them. Furthermore, it will give the opportunity fer the defendant to prove themself even if # has been Jaw. Itshould be taken account into extenuating offence under the condition of fist wrongdoing For example, n the case of the murder crime, ‘the suspect might take that action in order to protect him or herself or i probably some. Caused behind It, Another example le the cat accident which can get people to injure or pase away . Some cituation, it could occur from the malfunction of engines, In conclusion, even though having the instant of sentence can bring advantageous for two parties In sn aspect of time-consuming and reducing the legal fee. From my perspective on this Issue, the legal process should be factored Ineach case of crime in order to provide more Justice for both of them due to the fact that ‘there are many prisoners who received unjustly verdict, Giving lectures in auditorium to large number of students ie an old way of teaching, with the technology available today there is no Justification for i; and everything should be done online. Do you agree or disagree with this statement land give your opinion. ie true that in these ere, the traditional way of teaching students in huge classroom halls started to lessened. Many opted that educating the atucenta should be done through anline for Ite convenience especially at this period of advanced technology. Ip My opinion, 1 do not agree with this form of learning because of the Online teachiing decreases or sometimes other. The communication between them fe limited because the lossons are presented through computers. Normally, pupils are encouraged to participate in the discussion of the lessons, which allows exchanged of ideas. Forexamplé, students are urged to ask questions after the lectures. naddition to thls, {thi allows pupils to a chance to asked clarifications from there Inetructore regarding parts of the topic, In which they did not Understand. Furthermore, online teaching Prevent learners to enhanced their socializetion skills with other people. ‘Another point is, it has drawbacks tn the students level of learning. Online courses that cen be bought in the internet is already recorded. his means that, if errors of Information ts noticed by the student. It can not be corrected of verification of the ideas is Impossible, Incontraist with the classroom concerns. Matis why, schools that stil used this method of educating has the best results of exams. Moreover, it also shows thet in some, study conducted, few students ore able to complete and finished the whole course. TIS ‘can be correlated with the substandard technique of teaching, lacked of motivation to. learned by the studenta, and diasatistied feelings In conclusion, AIKHGUBN technology had made ‘great contributions on different sectors in Society suah ae In education, it can not replaced, the benefits of conducting # one-on-one lectures. Therefore, learning of students te highly effective when it ie done through thi strategy than in online teaching,20 ewne wating Samples / Band 8.5 O18 at aD {tis a fact that people nowadays are under a lot of pressure and thelr lives are becoming Increasingly stressful, what could be the possible reasons for this? What are the some solutions to adress this Issue? These days, 65s isan irefutable part of our life, and people for cferent reasons have alot of sess. This essay will mention some of the reasons and solutions forthe sites Issue. TOIbEGIA with, stI8SS could have different reasons. Fitstly, people because of their situation need more money, so they try to have two or even three works to increase thelr avenues. In’other Words, having multiple jobs ‘causes more tasks and duties, which all of them make individuals nervous about doing all duties in @ good way and on time. AS'@IFESult, the stress level of the population will increase noticeably. Seeondly, people do not spend enough time relaxing. In fact, they do not care: ‘about themself, FOF iNStaNe®, in Iran, due to the bbad economic condition people have to do at least wo jobs, go not only do multisle jobs makes them nervous, but a6 they de not have time for doing some activities like travelling hich makes them relax Of theotheriand, due to alot of research which has been done inthis field, scientists recommend some useful ways to get away from stt@ss. The most important one is going to nature and remote places because in these places you can benefit from the fresh alr and silence surrounding which makes you relax and free your mind. Moreover, experts recommend comedy films, an snather solution for getting over stress. Henee, they belleve laughing helps our body releases negative energies SUCH as stress and makes us fet ‘9004. ThetefoFe, laughing could bea cheap solution rather than the former, In conclusion, having multiple tasks and do not ‘spend enough time doing our favourite activities could cause stress. nIGOntraSt, laughing and going to nature could decrease our level of stress. zn ewno Writing Samples / Band 7.5 one In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are stil students, Do you think this is a ‘good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details. ‘There is no doubt that the adolescence stage takes place of changes among youths. [Although all workplaces could be beneficial to teens, believe that adolescent jobs could be disadvantageous to them. In this is say will delineate both notions, and then come up with ‘my opinion. ‘To commence with, the biggest important part of adolescence band is the education. While children are rising up, they should learn more ‘and more, The onus of education is on their families first, then it ies on schools, societies as well. The early earning phase of children starts simultaneously with their biological, psychological, and cognitive development. All of these interactions prevent them from focusing hardly on one more subject, Forinstanée. if adolescents work beside their schools, they wil Inevitably get low marks on whatever course. So that, their living expenses should be likely taken by their parents ‘The poor extenxls rapidly across the world. The financial burdens of families become more difficult every day. To get the matter worse, ‘Tuition fees are costly for many families. For that reason, many parents have to orient their offspring to help them by getting jobs. Furthermore, some households immerse their teens in workplaces, justifying that the more Connections with people the more development of their social sills In conclusion, though a quest to inculcate and develop precious skills for adolescents plays @ ‘major role in their personalities, the negative aspects that SUH working environments bring to teenage students do not well worth the cost.20 ew oe O88 Fat BD ing Samples / Bi Economie progress is one way to measure the success of a country. Some people believe there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Which ene do you think is more important than the others? In our thriving economic democracy, the ‘economic background is an important problem which creates the development and existence of each nation. Some people assert that there are other factors which ean lead to the success of @ country. From my perspective, there are several ways to evaluate the progress of a ‘ation, everthele38, the economy Is stil an Lunalternative means in current society. On the one hand, there are some other criteria which are essential for human needs and alge play an integral part in calculating the success of @ stete. Forinstanee, having smiles, happiness, and the peace that everyone needs to reduce worries and stress in life is al8@ significant. Taking Bhutan as an illustration, they were used specially measure to aesess their development by the * Happiness index" Happily, peace is large concern of private people in this country and in general citizens of other countries because it can improve together with economy, culture, and keep old age. Onitheotherhanel there Is no denying nancial status is always the prime necessity. the nation does not have enough ability in_ economy, they will become weak in comparison vnth other nations and even will have outbreaks happen in their country. FOF@X@MpIe: Burund! is the poorest area in the world whereas their lvelinood relies on major agriculture. Therefore the economy quite slowly develops and attacks together steal because metropolitan lack of knowledge background and law is stil loose Following, every nation needs to hove a self economyeconomy to help ther develop. In conclusion, the economy is important to Improve peace, education, health, and the lives of people, This factor helps balance ability and keep a huge role in a nation. Js natural for teenagers to ch: older people say. Discuss both views and give ypur opinion. {ls often thought by some that youngsters ‘should emulate the actions of the society. Some people, however, di argue that the youth can question the sayings of adults. In my opinion, | hold that the children ‘ought to copy the ways of the elders as they are wiser and more experienced inlfe. ‘one reason why some individuals argue that the young ones can challenge the sayings of {grownups is because, It I perceived that elders have archaic ideas which are majorly notin line with todaye dynamic world. Besides, the older {generation is known to be too comfortable with the old ways of doing things which make them not evolve with the ongoing technological Innovations and so youngsters find their contributions and actions old-fashioned thls a reason to always question them. As an lilustration, used to be at loggerhead with my ‘grandmother when she was stil alive because, she always wanted me to do her washings by hand meanwhile, | preferred to use the washing machine, Cnithe-eontrary, believe children ought to copy the actions of adults since they are more knowledgeable and full of wisdom. THIS particularly Is true as grown ups have the ‘natural responsibilty to tutor the younger ones ‘morally, academically and socially. More 80, Colder people are the only ones inthe society who are experienced enough ta teach and hurture growing children tothe right path so they can be useful for themaeives and the community, H@f68, the more reason teenagers have 10 follow the postive ways of thelr elders. Forlinstanes, | was raised by parents who | consistently imitated as they brought me up to become a responsible adult In conclusion, in spite of the argument of a few Individuals that children can be confrontational with older people as their ways are old fashioned, | stronaly hold that kids ought to ook up to the elders so a6 to gain pract knowledge and learn about the positive ways in ie,24 woe Writing Samples / Band & One ‘The growth of multinational companies and the resulting rise of globalization creates positive effects for all ‘To what extent do you agree or disagree? ‘The success of international organizations and the consequent hike in worldwide development generate benefits for all. Working in a number of nations by companies helps In declining the unemployment ratio of the countries. | totally agree with the statement. In the following Paragraphs we will discuss all the views of the essay. TobEIA with, First of all, nowadays, the unemployment rate increasing rapidly which is the main concern forall world governments and if companies do work on a global level they will be provide numerous employment to the region ‘as ares, the unemployment rate will decrease. For example, As per indian labour law, f any organization start their project in India they have to give the ffs preference to local people for job recruitment. Seeondly, t develops a strong political as well as the business relationship among not only governance but al86 businessmen. FUHERMOF, growth in international employers by the inauguration of their startup worldwide helps in rising the economy of the community FOP IRStHEE, many countries have law's that all associations have to pay a particular amount of tax from a part of their income on the behalf of thelr business and from a part of their employee's salary. Therefore, the administration received a huge collection of taxes which helps to become economically secure ‘To conclude, multinational associations provide plenty of advantages to the origin as well as to the local society by investing in globalization despite spending domestic level and enhancing the market value of the worker by offering them a reasonable package. Tower prices. Some fo that the change Is harnaful. Discuss both views and give your own opinions hlaher numbers atreducee amounts. quite a humber of persone opine this ae an upside trend, howaver some people thinke that Palit thot technological advancement ie foods, which te helptul for ariving derlation. 1 16 agreed that utilising modern technology in the commercialization of su6h production may ‘Sauna severe health problems in the long-term, This essay will explore both sides and give a [TSIGEGIN with, the major advantage of {the use of machineries Is for the purpose of Curbing inflation. This ie because machines manufacturing process, which in turn will cause, {the prices of aueh Hteme to be cheaper andl wi masses positively. FOpinstanes, a recent study Concluded that the bullding af five new proceseing plants in Germany have caused a 50% drop in foodetut! prices, which hos blleviated poverty, and has helped to bridge the ‘9p between the rich and the poor in thelr Society. AB aaBUI OF this, more people are able On AH SINERNSRE, the danger of BURR mame be health problema Because of this, th process of making them with machine involves moving metal parts and the use of Hekof people taking ito life-threatening Bicknesses like cancer. Farexample, 9 recent Fansonable amount of natural reals, EBB I= problematic bocause even though the Commercially produced onea are cheaper, they thereby cauloing @ plethora of people who eat them to become unhealthy with time. In conclusion, while the positive trend of producing foode for commercial purpose with Btate-of the art systems Is to drive deflation, it te agreed that sueh an approach to food making is perhepe detrimental to the health ef people because of the possibility of ingesting Incontrast with natural foods. ltseem= Cuisines to stay healthy.2s @ wae Writing Samples / Band 5.5 owe. Nowadays more and more teenagers take a ‘gap year before entering university. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages? Inecent years, taking # year off has become a prevalent and publicly recognised phenomenon. ‘Whether the advantages of thi§ outweigh the drawbacks is stil a debatable question and in my opinion, the answer depends onthe activities students get involved in Incase high schoo! graduates spend tg tiie troveling and working, the benefits would be fer more important. By taking tps to other counties and having part jobs these young adults can be exposed o diferent cultures and Ifestyes and earn thei own livelihood. Thanks to 8UGh social understanding and source of income, they would be more mature, more financially Independent and more confident, which may give them a competitive advantage wen competing fora job Inthe future. A case n points that candidates having wider social knowledge and more confidence ate mere kel to be employed by big tmutinatonal corporates than those who do not ‘Nevertheless, these gappere waste the year on meaningless activites, the negative implications will be greater IBREEUof spending this time travelling, working, or attending social clubs, many of those are reported tobe buried in video games and addlcted drugs. TS Assoive lifestyle might lead to other knock-on effets when high school leavers return to education, one of which is thatthe lack the ‘otivtion to study. Consequently, they ei soon lag behind peers and have a tendency to drop out of university which can be detrimental to their future employabilty/ career prospects. In conclusion, SItHOUGH it is disadvantageous to ‘spend time on unhealthy hobbies during the 9p year, the disadvantages will be surpassed by the advantages if gappers use this time to travel andwork, 24s owoo Writing Samples / Band 8 oes. Environmental problems cannot be solved by fone or a few countries. Instead, they should be solved with international effort. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In recent years, environmental problems have ong been a concern for many countries and no ‘one can deny the importance of environmental protection. Personally | firmly agree that International cooperation Is a feasible and effective way. One of the main reasons is that some environmental problems cover the whole planet, ranging from climate change to the energy crisis. THUS, only through joint efforts of every nation, can those terrible situations be reversed. Forexample, America can not address global warming, as itis caused by Carbon dioxide emitted by all ations all over the world, No matter how developed and advanced technology it has, the fact has proved that it is impossible to be solved without Intemational coordination. ‘TheFeFeFe, countries should cooperate to deal with environmental problems. Particularly, developed should shoulder the responsibility, since they possess both funds ‘and technology. At the same time, other countries should als0 organize related persons to study startof-the-art technology and actively put it into practice with the help of developed nations, contributing to environmental improvement, So if ll ations could master the ‘method of exploiting and using clean energy ‘and reduce carbon dioxide emissions substantially, | think global warming would be coped with. In conclusion, due to the fact that environmental problems are not limited by borders, itis necessary for all nations to work together closely, which will be the most efficient and effective approach. And during thi process, every country can make its contributions to environmental preservation, rather than regardless of some nations.2 ewne oe St oD Wetting Samples / Band 8.5 "Prisons are an expensive way of making bad people worse’ ~ To what extent do you agree or disagree? Punishment is often imposed as a consequence of wrongdoings. Locking criminals behind bars is one of the common approaches, HeWeVer, many people consider this practice as an expensive way of making ‘things worse. | atally diaagree with thls statement and will provide fUFtH@t details 10 substantiate the same in the course of the eeay, ‘TolBegin with, confinement is one of the major reasons that stops several people to commit any crime due to thelr fear of spending year confinement. This will have a negative impact fon thelr life as it puts them away from their loved ones. When they experience prison time Ing alone and miserable environment, they tend to strive towards better prospecte after their release. FOrexamBll, there are numerous Convicts who learn the value of thelr Independence and seok a stable life. FFUFtHERMOFE, it is known that the convicts are from a disturbing social background and lack basic ethical values, such as integrity, hard work, and individual responsibility. Having to pend time In all might give ther the ‘opportunities to reflect upon themselves. {njaddltion to this, they earn their food and basic needs by physical labour, resulting in a better understanding of responsibility, particularly n juveniles. Moreover, there are a few prisons that offer education in order to attain the skis required in the future. Forlistanies, prisons in various developing countries have initiated education for juveniles Interms of skis, SUeh as arts and crafts which ‘might be beneficial to lead a normal ie. ‘To conclude, JItHOUGH itis believed that the capital dedicated to locking conviets behind bars is an unnecessary way and will result in deteriorating the situation by increasing criminal activity it appears the individuals who commit crimes are offered this opportunity to ‘value thelr freedom and learn akilla encouraging ‘them to live and provide social mobility. After a thorough analysis of the topic, believe that prison time is an effective way to control criminal activity. 247 ow ao Waiting Samples / Band 6.5 our at oD Government should spend money on rail way rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Its argued that funds shouldbe epent bythe euthorty on fall rack rather than on roads. n my own opinion, Totally agree to fl point of view because of the present focus on rail transportation es well asthe coot implication forthe users First and foremost, recently, the most important reason why the rail track should be considered ‘or more allocations by the government i that there has been a recent increase in the number cof people who use the rail mode of passage Forinstance, recently, most trains leaving the station now carry passengers to their fullest capacity, something which was not so in the past decades, This making ral way a present focus of travel for most citizens. Therefore, any amount spent on it would not be considered a waste ‘Secondly, another reason why more funds should be budgeted for rail track construction cother than roads ie that it is cheaper to journey within and outside the metropolis with trains. ‘o illustrate, in Nigeria, the cost of traveling from Lagos to Osogbo by road is almost thrice the price of conveyance to the same destination by train, This by implication makes people spend less to move from one place to the other everyday. ThUS making rain transportation the best choice for commuters. [AS'aTeSUL, allocating more funds to building {his means is very essential In conclusion, itis agreed that the budget made by the authority for building ral path should be more than the fund disbursed for road construction given the recent increase in the population that plies the Fall as opposed to that of the road and the less expensive outlay of train transportationSubjects, like philosophy and history, and only Offer practical degre courses that maximise, chances of employment tution fous snd more narran Job oppertunities JAimough | concur that practice! eubjecte are Jn the fist place, its of paramount importance Subjects at univereities. Pit and foremost with Fogards to Individuata, university graduates would be equipped with not only fundamental But alae necessary knowledge Matis practicable n real ite situations, particularly in {he warling environments, Bane ts bkety brighter enreer paths as in ia era, employers st universities, Secondly, a larger number of Colleges. In@thier words, trom the perspective be enhanced, consequently. boosting the ‘ontiaretnatnai | rely believe that artbased Eupjecta ara By no means excluded trams the Curricula of higher education. A noticeabie these subjects, students might setain a mora factors in society. Forexampla, vis phiiosophy histoncel background, Torinatanee, oF tele ations and of their ancestors, wih thi fraction! susjacte are of equal importance in Waiting Samples / Band 8.5 Itis too expensive to look after and repair old building .The money should spend on building new modern buildings instead .To what extent do you agree or disagree. Its argued that redoing the old structures are 100 costly to maintain int@ad the new ones ‘should be bullt, This testament disagrees with {hig statement. | believe that historic bulldings ‘should be protected as it mirrors the image of ‘ancient heritage. The forthcoming paragraphs ‘would shed light on my standpoint with apt specimens and justifications, ‘Tabeain with, maintenance of ancient architecture a significant because serves the economic aspect of a country and earns a nation a huge sum on yearly basis, as @ huge fhumber of tourists turn up every year to vist Buch places. Foriexample, Telmohol ts Considered one of the oldest structures of India And i one of seven wonders of the world. is estimated that around 7 to 8 milion travellers Visit to see suich a wonderful place throughout the year. Adaitonaly, this indian wonder vaguely employs around 5,000 workers to ‘maintain 8Ueh # place, soit serves a lueratve purpose for the government. Hee, Its clear that why 8UGh properties should be taken care of Furthermore, another important reason to repal them is that SUCH places are considered to be the landmark of history which depicts a specific. time of history. SUGh palaces provide a learning curve to archaeologists as wel as to the students of arts and society. FOFINSTaRC, a ‘study depicts the reason behind the extinction of Maya civilization and helped to learn the world-famous Maya calendar, a few remains of Maya structures are still protected. Therefore, the existence of history books that teaches a fot about humans was written withthe help of ‘Uh bulldings, 20, ile apparent that how Important itis for society to preserve BUCH establishments ‘To conclude, ancient buildings not only provides economic growth but alS6 helps us to learn a lot about our ancestors and how ‘everything around us has evolved. So, it becomes the responsibility of both government ‘and its citizens to put their best foot forward to preserve SUGh valuable places.