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Fictional narrative

David Santiago Castiblanco González


santiagogon8@gmail.com
10th
Dawere USA 18 UC, S2
English ELA
The door to the unknown world: The story of a young adopted
boy who discovers his true identity.
Can you imagine going to a strange world, finding new creatures, and
realizing that you belong to them? Join me to watch this story:

I am a young adopted boy, I have always known that but when it came to
researching where I came from I found nothing but simple paperwork with no
hard information, until one day I found a door under my bed that magically
only opened if I placed my right hand on the knob....
Three days after discovering the door under my bed I took the time to open it
as soon as I entered.
The first thing I saw was a theater full of mythological beings, at first sight
terrifying creatures... But my curiosity went beyond that...
In that theater after an entertaining tour I met two creatures one of them
Rhyme very similar to Chalchiuhtlicue but with striking red hair and a blue-
eyed pet rat, she took me to one of her favorite places in this new world for
me, a city that could perfectly be a reef, the colors, the structures that
resembled corals and every corner was more amazing than the previous one
including the giant buildings in the shape of anemones that simply floated
around us.
I was so confused looking for a reasonable way for all this to happen and just
at that moment the second creature brought me out of my thoughts because
ironically it can do something like mind reading I don't even understand it well
it has a human body with robotic features but too intellectual to be of our race
and obviously it is not, This is definitely not earth, Lowhix the second creature
instead of taking me to a place showed me the inhabitants amazing beings
and extremely different from each other they understood me but I was unable
to decipher their dialect only with Rhyme and Lowhix I was able to speak
fluently, After going through all this mentally exhausting I decided to ask them
to return, it was a lot to process so we made a promise that when I was ready
I would return to meet their wonderful world, the moment I arrived at the door
that would take me back to my room they gave me news that changed every
aspect of my life, I am a creature from their world, They have no political or
social order like ours but they have families in charge of sustaining new cities
and mine was one that was involved in conflict of which I was the only
survivor and brought to this place by my parents to grow away from that war
and someday complete that function and contribution of my family to the
unknown world, I do not know when but I have to return and they will be
waiting for me to guide me.

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