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II. Comprehension Checking Quest
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Why do you think the man who tells the co Salou
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more than ever”? h?
What is the connection between Dante and deat! ? me
Which of Dante’s words are being recalled in the text? Try tc
interpret them. : Bean
Why does the narrator imagine the universe of Dante like a
watch”?
Whar kind of “voice” does the dying person have?
What clements or, as the narrator calls them, “omens”,
“portents”, “messages of the outer darkness” foreshadow the
old woman's imminent death?
Describe the light of the moon. In what way does it create a
certain atmosphere?
At what moment of the day does the woman Pass away? Why
do you find it meaningful? <
What is pathetic and pitiful about death, in the writers view?
The man who tells the story experiences feelings of loss,
isolation, strangeness, sadness and Pity. What are the causes of
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reveal as envisioned by the narrator’s mind? Make use of some
relevant instances such as:
> “he was so cold and numb” (paragraph 7)
> “the street outside was empty of people and traffic. ‘There was
no one alive in the world but himself.” (paragraph 4)
> “he was shaken as if by an earthquake of pathos and pity”
(paragraph 10)
~ “St was this which more than anything made him cry, to think of
what the log once had been, a suffering body, a girl growing up
and marrying and bearing children. It was so strange that the log
could have been that. It was so strange that the log had once
wore dresses chequered like a draughtsboard, that it had called
him into dinner, that it had been sleepless at nights thinking of
the future.” (paragraph 9) Can you find out in the text any
instances similar to those quoted here?
11. Is he ‘a character-narrator or is there a split difference between
the two roles? Give reasons.
12. Comment upon the implications, the connotations and the
closural impetus of the sentences:
- “Death was not dignified” (paragraph 6)
- “There was no one alive in the world but himself” (paragraph 4)
- “At this time, poetry is powerless (...). ‘The copy of Dante
seemed to have fallen into an abyss.” (paragraph 7)
_ >. “The landscape outside the window was not a human landscape.
The body on the bed was not human.” (paragraph 7)
- “The log was concerned only with itself.” (paragraph 10)
- What connection is there between the ewortslion Outside and
Dante’s work?
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Interpretation oe
ee following Poctic images and metaphors in terms of
Cee i What is their symbolism? What mental
ae une { ney Suggest? In what way are they relevant to
ying? (Vehicle - the literal meaning of a word used
Serene Tenor - the subject to which a metaphor refers).
he unintelligible pattern woven by the complex snow flakes in
the moonlight” (paragraph 12)
“the other light” (paragraph 6)
Solien as thar from a dead planet” (paragraph 2)
a sick glare”, “a hollow glarc” (paragraph 2)
“an almost abstract light” (paragraph 2)
“he felt as if he were in a boat and she were in the dark water
around it” (paragraph 3)
(the dead body is) a “log”, “blank as a stone” (paragraph 6)
the clectric fire was deep and raw red” (paragraph 5)
“a visored head” (at the workshop outside) (paragraph 11)
(the workshop outside) “He walked over the window and saw
men with helmets bending over pure white flame. The blue
flashes were cold and quecr as if they came from another
world” (paragraph 11) :
“And in front of it he saw the drifting flakes of snow, He
looked down at the Dante with his bruised face and felt the
hammer blows slamming the lincs together making a universe, 4
holding a world together where people shouted out of a blue
light.” (paragraph 11) :
“And the hammer scemed to be beating the log into a vase, into
of blue rock, into the hardest of me :
metaphors.” (paragraph 11) aS oe
According to Sigmund ffreud, the “uncanny and the seu a
ious repressions. The uncanny
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meaning, though apparently ignored,
well-known. Most people feel as “uncanny” anything connected
to death (bodies, furerals ctc,). ‘The uncanny makes the familiar
look strange and alien, bringing to light what we have so
carefully buried in our minds, in order to be able to live. The
double, which appears in many fantastic and “oneiric” writings,
is the uncanny “messenger” of death. We carry death (the
“double”) in our bodies, we are a strange union of immortal and
mortal, of soul and body.
In the following paragrap!
“double” and after having identi
h, pursue the implication of the
fied the uncanny elements in the
character’s dream, try to interpret them by using free associations
they bring to your mind. (Bear in mind that the personal symbolism
of a writer is always integrated consciously or subconsciously into
the larger, archetypal symbolism of the culture to which he
):
“He seemed to be on a space ship hanging upside down and
seeing coming towards him another space ship shaped like a
medieval helmet in all that azure. On board the space ship there was
at least one man encased in a black rubber suit, but he could not see
the face. The man was busy either with the rope which he would
fling to him or with a gun which he might fire at him. ‘The figure
seemed squat and alien like that of an Eskimo.” (paragraph 5)
3, The critic Eileen Baldeshwiler upholds that there are.two basic
kinds of short story: “the epical” and “the lyrical.” Read the two
definitions and give. reasons for your including this story in one
“class” or another:
co Bpical short-stories are marked by “external action
developed syllogistically through characters fabricated mainly to
8.fonverd plot, culminating in a decisive ending that sometitnes
affords an universal insight, and expressed in the setviceably
language of prose realism.”
Tjrica’_ short-stories “concentrate on internal changes,
mood and feelings, ut ing a variety of structural patterns
depending on the shape of the emotion itself, they rely for the
Most part on the open ending and are expressed in the
condensed, evocative, often figured language of the poem.”
Ifyou agree that “Lyrical writing absorbs action altogether and
refashions it as a Pattern of imagery”, support the statement
with examples in the text.
Some writers are “mitror-writers”, others tend to be “window-
writers.” In which category would you include Ian Crichton
Smith in The Dying? Or does he see his own face reflected in the
window-pane?
Do you find any moments of revelation in The Dying? Is there
any religious strain in the final revelation?
According to Susan Lohafer, “the ending may jolt us into
Pereciving something fundamental about what we have been
reading.” Such endings are also emblematic: “the reader may be
brought to an awareness of ramified implications. We do not
feel that the obscure has been made plain. Mystery is not
confusion; it is the outline of wonder.” Do you consider the
ending of the short-story emblematic in Susan Loh
not? Is it an open ending? Is it well foreshadowed? Try to
decipher its symbolism. Is it archetypal? Comment on your
feasons,
IV. Topics for Optional Activity and Writing
1. Read and compare descriptions of a dying episode i
other literary works, such as Katherine Anne Pere
Jilting of Granny Weatherall or Leon Tolstoy's The Death of
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Susan Lohater says: “readers of short fiction are the most
end-conscious of readers, And short fiction is the most
end-conscious of forms.” Do you apres with hes? Why
(not)?
The same critic upholds that “the paradigmatic time-span
of a short-story is the twenty-four hours” (unlike the
novel which may last indefinitely). Has this “time-span”
got anything to do with the inner intensity of living of the
characters or with the importance of a Ptoper ending for
the short-story?
What other differences do you find between a novel and a
short-story?
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