Exhibition example J: Examiner’s comments

TOK exhibition examiner‘s comments

Example J
This is an example of an extremely weak exhibition. It was awarded a mark of 1/10.

A key issue is that the three objects included in this exhibition are not specific objects, but instead are highly generic images,
for example, “food”. The commentary on each of the three objects is also highly descriptive and has very little relevance to
TOK. This exhibition demonstrates barely any engagement with the TOK prompt and demonstrates minimal understanding
of how TOK manifests in the world around us.

Theory of knowledge assessed student work 1