A3 Part 2 Updated.

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by Westley Wibowo

Submission date: 06-May-2020 01:48AM (UTC+1000)

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also developing the marketing
objectives
 subang Jaya is too
limited

does it come
in pieces?

ok

which relevant
pricing
strategy used?

justification ok

as i said earlier, focusing Subang Jaya is

insufficient
before giving discount or other sorts of promo, must create awareness first, hence advertise
them

like
who?

so
long?

using which
pricing
strategy?

must focus in broader

market
facebook alone is
insufficient
3
cannot do this as the main author is not Mr Alvin Fong, dont use lecture notes as
ref

page?
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FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

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Text Comment. also developing the marketing objectives

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 Text Comment. subang Jaya is too limited

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Text Comment. does it come in pieces?

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Text Comment. which relevant pricing strategy used?

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Comment 1
says who? citation?

Text Comment. as i said earlier, focusing Subang Jaya is insufficient

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Text Comment. before giving discount or other sorts of promo, must create awareness first,
hence advertise them

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dont use your in formal business reports

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Text Comment. like who?

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Text Comment. so long?

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Text Comment. using which pricing strategy?

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Text Comment. must focus in broader market

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Text Comment. facebook alone is insufficient

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 main conclusion should be on this, hence need to expand more

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Text Comment. cannot do this as the main author is not Mr Alvin Fong, dont use lecture notes
as ref

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