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What do you think is the positive and negative of this in the Recent Lessons
development of children? IELTS Essay Questions April-June 2019
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Negative Effects
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promoting companies such as fast food restaurants encourages a poor diet IELTS Book List
poor diets, which include high quantities of salt and sugar, can be harmful
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to a child’s health
this sets children up to be unhealthy adults which can be expensive for the Useful Websites for IELTS
state in the long run
advertising and promoting to children can be exploitative and unethical
they are easily influenced
they are not able to criticise or form their own opinion
this form of advertising is aimed at the parents through their children
children are unable to distinguish what is promotional and what is
educational
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Rati says
October 12, 2018 at 5:38 am
Hi Liz…
You are an amazing educator. I truly consider you as an extremely supportive person.I
learned an organized and well structured language with the help of your informative
website.Hope to get the required band soon as my exam is on 13th October.
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August 10, 2018 at 6:00 pm
Hi Liz.
I just wanted to show appreciation and say thank you a lot for this amazing efforts and
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Pramila says
September 4, 2017 at 12:34 pm
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Soledad says
February 12, 2017 at 4:02 pm
Liz, Hi!!!.
I want to ask you about this essay (when the question contains “……. is the positive and
negative……….”.
it would be posible, if you give us an example of the essay???
Thank you!!..
Soledad
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Liz says
February 12, 2017 at 5:05 pm
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Nurana says
January 27, 2017 at 11:34 am
Hi dear Liz,
Thanks for your site. You are so kind to help us.
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I have a question regarding to “positive and negative” questions.
I have read 2 essays in your site which answer to this type of question and have
understood that if the instruction says ” Is this a positive or negative development?” we
choose one side (positive) and write about it throughout the essay as well as giving our
opinion without mentioning the second side (negative)
However, If the instruction says ” What do you think is the positive and negative of this
in the development of children” then we write about both positive and negative impacts
of this on the development of children.
Please, can you correct my understanding if I am mistaken.
Thanks in advance.
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Liz says
January 28, 2017 at 10:24 pm
If it says “what is X and Y”, you write both because there is the word “and”.
If it says “do you think X or Y”, it is asking you to choose one. Just follow the
instructions.
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There is my wri en. You cann corret and comment for my wri en.
Nowadays, there are so many food restaurants and companies. They always expand their
products to all sector, included school children. They give money to shool provided it.
There are some positive argument for the topic. The schools can to get money from the
restaurants and companies. Those money can be used to schools program development
for the children. Beside that, the cooperation between school and the restaurants or
companies will be be er for the next other activities. In addition, the children easier to get
all products from the restaurants and companies, don’t need go out from their schools.
On the contrary, there are so many negative argument for those topic. The children can
always use and consume the products. This is on of the risk factor for children health.
Because the fast food is not very good for consumed every time. Moreover, the
collaboration from the schools and the restaurants or companies can abused by both to
get more advantages only, without pay a ention to the children.
In summary, the restaurants or companies must not only promote their products, but also
give other useful for the children. The schools must be proffesional on the network
linking with other site.
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Liz says
January 22, 2017 at 4:50 pm
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Violet says
January 4, 2017 at 2:33 am
Dear Liz,
I’m wondering for this type of essay question, should we take it as advantage and
disadvantage essay? I purchased the advanced lesson for task 2, but this type of question
is not included.
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Liz says
January 4, 2017 at 11:39 am
This question requires you to choose. It doesn’t say “what are the positive
AND negative developments”. It says “is this positive OR negative”. You choose,
present your opinion and support your opinion. I will make an advanced lessons for
this type of essay later this year.
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Liz says
January 22, 2017 at 4:53 pm
I think you need to be very careful about trying to make rules for
writing task 2. See my free video on this page which explains the main types of
essays: h p://subscriptions.viddler.com/IELTSLizStore and then see my main
writing task 2 page which contains model answers and more tips:
h ps://ieltsliz.com/ielts-writing-task-2/
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Roop says
March 29, 2018 at 10:38 am
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Prabh says
August 8, 2016 at 10:35 pm
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shohra says
August 4, 2016 at 5:51 am
hi dear liz
I am pleasure to become familiar with you .
thank you most kindly
shohra
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sumon says
February 4, 2016 at 2:32 pm
I think we have to write both positive and negative as the word is “and” not an
“or”.
We have to write what are the positives we think and what are negatives we think.
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I’m still looking for a be er explanation!
Thanks
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Liz says
February 22, 2016 at 6:41 pm
h ps://ieltsliz.com/liz-notice-2015-2016/
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sandeep says
January 29, 2016 at 1:27 pm
hello
liz
i never try to make my prah a ractive i never use too complicated words
i want to know from u this is wrong way to write the passage or not will i not able to get
good band score when i write in a simple way
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Liz says
February 2, 2016 at 2:05 pm
h ps://ieltsliz.com/liz-notice-2015-2016/
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jez says
December 6, 2015 at 3:06 am
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Hey Liz,
Lets say I coudn’t find any positive points. In this kind of question do I NEED to describe
positive and negatives or can I just describe negatives and why I dont think theres any
positive side?
Thanks!
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Liz says
November 25, 2015 at 11:04 am
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Muna says
October 26, 2015 at 12:11 pm
dear Liz,
Why did you write a child’s health , health is not a countable name , I’m a li le bit
confused.
regards,
Muna
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Liz says
October 26, 2015 at 1:40 pm
The noun relating to the article is child. It means the health of a child.
Liz
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Hi Liz
Recently only I noticed your link related to ielts. It’s very useful for me. Thank you very
much
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Liz says
July 6, 2015 at 9:03 pm
You’re welcome. I’m sure you’ll find some useful pages and don’t forget to
check my youtube channel as well.
Liz
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Hi liz….
I have wri en essay here. Can you please review it n help me to know that at what level
am now. Thank u so much.
In some countries, fast food restaurants and companies give money to schools provided
that the schools promote their products to school children.
What do you think is the positive and negative of this in the development of children?
Answer:
In today’s competitive world, each and every business keeps try to maintain their position
at first level by advertising or by making promotions of their products. for that, some of
them funding money to schools and likewise, every coin has two sides, there are some
advantages and also disadvantages of doing this.
On the one hand , the money provided to the schools can be used for improving
educational standards, in other meanings, more equipment and necessary study materials
can be granted to children. Moreover, children understands the value of money. Also,
some of the children who are financially not able to afford essential things required for
study that can be fulfilled by these types of organization.
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On the other hand, the way which is implemented by many companies, which involves
children is unethical. For example, children are very younger at their age that they have
not sufficient knowledge to distinguish between right and wrong. So they just follow the
actions which are being told to them to do. And it might happen that it provokes them
towards bad impacts unknowingly. Furthermore, foods which are provided to them that
may leads to poor health as they have lost quality while preparing them very tasty by
adding more salt and spices that can be scathing for nation in a long run.
To conclude, I believe that it is good that fast-food restaurants and companies provide
money to schools but they should not insist children to promote their products too.
children are very innocent and one should not use them for their own benefits.
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Liz says
June 19, 2015 at 9:21 am
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Hi Liz…
My name is Hetal n I have recently started to read watch your tutorials. They are really
very helpful in improving my english language..
Thank you so much….
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