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Subject: Writing

Water Changes Everything


Comparative essay

Last week, I read a text about ...... . This made


me realize that ..... . Now, I feel ...... . Anyways, it is
funny how we can share many things in common
with kids from quite different realities.
It is evident that Shabanu, the girl in the text,
and I ...................... . To begin with, she ............ . This
means that ................... . Conversely, I ............ .
Another salient difference between us is that this
Pakistani girl ..................................., whereas I
.................... . Moreover, for what I've learn about kids
in that situation I suppose that unlike me, Shabanu
..................................................... . For these reasons, in
contrast to her, I consider myself .................... .
However crazy it sounds, this girl and I................. .
In the first place, we .................................. . She ............
and I ........................... . On another note, Shabanu
............................................ . Likewise, I .............................. .
We are also alike in that ................................................. .
All of this makes me think that ..................................... .

All in all, I think that I should be grateful for


........... ............ because .................... . Sometimes we don't
know ..................................... . It makes me feel
.................. that ............................ but I hope that in the
future ...............
............................................................................. .

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