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Thesis

My point of view of vape is by school


children has become popular not only
popular, but it is also becoming a habit
that many school children are getting
addicted to. When people carry a vape
in cafes or in public, they frequently
appear confident doing so; they appear
unconcerned and believe that as long as
their parents are unaware of their
behavior, there is no need for concern.
They also believe that vaping is a
healthy alternative to smoking when in
reality it carries a risk of disease and is
only appropriate for people who are at
least 18 years old.
Recommendation
To assist them choose the appropriate soci
al environment, keep in mind that adolesce
nts have a high level of interest and will th
us participate in activities that are seen coo
l.
Reminding they to have a healthy lifestyle:
one that includes 
engaging in activities likeexercise, meditati
on, hobbies, getting enough sleep, eating a 
balanced diet, and
can also help you curb they desire to use e-
cigarettes.
Argument
According to data from the United States from
2015, the use of e-cigarettes among high school
kids had surged by 900%, and up to 40% of these
young people had never smoked traditional
tobacco. Young people are drawn to e-cigarettes
for a variety of reasons, including:
Firstly a lot of teenagers think vaping is less
dangerous than smoking.
Secondly vaping is thought to be less expensive
than smoking.
Thirdly vape refill packs are typically attractive
and feature flavors that young people find
appealing, such as menthol and fruits.
In fact use a vape has consequence.
Dr. Erlina Burhan, Perhimpunan Dokter Paru
Indonesia
(PDPI), claimed that using it would result in infla
mmationor inflammation in the lungs, airways, wh
ich might subsequently impact the function of the 
heart, harm cells, and release carcinogens.

HORTATORY
EXPOSITION
TEXT
THE IMPORTANCE OF
HEALTH BY AVOIDING
VAPING

Recommendation
To assist them choose the appropriate social e
nvironment, keep in mind that adolescents hav
e a high level of interest and will thus participa
te in activities that are seen cool. 
Reminding him to have a healthy lifestyle
one that includes engaging in activities like ex
ercise, meditation, hobbies, getting enough sle
ep, eating a balanced diet, and so on
can also help you curb his desire to use e-
cigarettes.

The title we use is include by


persuasive text, is a type of text that is
intended to explain the listeners or readers
that something should or should not
happen or be done.
Our purpose to persuade the readers that
something should or should not be the
case.

"My point of view" is one of the stance


expressions available. Expressions of
stance have meaning in and of themselves;
specifically, they convey a position or opinion
that highlights the significance of the topic at
hand.

The language features in our Hortatory


Text include:
1. Use simple present tense
2. Expression of think
3. Use internal conjunctions/connecting verbs

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