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What does the word voice mean to you? Is it simply the way you sound to
others, or is it more than that? Is it the most essential ideas you would like
to express? Is it the unique way you express your ideas? In this theme, you’ll
explore some possible answers to these questions as you read the works of
two writers who express their unique voices through poetry. One tells of the
people and places around him—of war, suffering, and hard work. The other
looks inward, expressing deeply personal thoughts and feelings.
THEME PROJECTS
Listening and Speaking 3. Put on a one-person show in which you play the
A Voice Like Your Own As you read the poems in poet. Use props, costumes, and makeup to help
this theme, try to decide which writer’s poems create the image of the poet. As the poet, tell
express ideas that are closest to your own. about each event you chose and explain how
1. Choose three poems from this theme that most the event might have influenced the writing of
closely express your own views. Then choose that poem.
three poems that express ideas most unlike
your own.
2. Read each poem to a small group of class-
mates. Read expressively. Explain why you feel
the poems express ideas similar to or unlike
your own. Invite group members to give their
opinions.
Investigate and Report
You Be the Poet Choose one of the two poets
in this theme to role-play in a one-person show.
1. Review the biographical information about
the poet in Before You Read. Then do further
research on the poet’s life. As you research,
take notes and write an outline of the
poet’s life.
2. From your outline, list three major parts of the
poet’s life. For each item on your list, choose a
poem that was clearly influenced by an event
from the poet’s life.
Blockade on Broadway,
c. 1880s. Taylor and Meeker.
Hand-colored woodcut.
Speaker
Every poem has a speaker, or voice, that talks to the The speaker in “The Raven” is a man
reader. Like a narrator in prose, the speaker of a poem who has just lost his beloved Lenore.
is not necessarily the author. The speaker can be a
fictional person, an animal, or even a thing.
Rhythm
Rhythm is the pattern of sound created by the arrange- F
or the r r
are and m
adiant whom
aiden the
ment of stressed and unstressed syllables in a line.
angels
n ame L
enore—
Rhythm can be regular or irregular. Meter is a regular
from “The Raven” by Edgar Allan Poe
pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables that sets
the overall rhythm of certain poems. The basic unit of
meter is the foot, which typically is made up of at least
one stressed and one unstressed syllable. Stressed
syllables are marked with () and unstressed syllables
with ( ). Rhythm gives poetry a musical quality and
may help convey a poem’s meaning.
Rhyme
Rhyme is the repetition of similar sounds in words Judge Tenderly—of Me internal
rhyme
that appear close to each other in a poem. from “This is my letter to the World”
• Internal rhyme occurs within a line of poetry. by Emily Dickinson
• End rhyme occurs at the ends of lines. How statue-like I see thee stand, end
• Slant rhyme refers to words that almost rhyme, but The agate lamp within thy hand! rhyme
not quite. from “To Helen” by Edgar Allan Poe
• Rhyme scheme, the pattern of rhyme formed by Who took the Flag today
end rhyme, is identified by assigning a different slant
Can tell the definition
letter of the alphabet to each new rhyme. rhyme
So clear of Victory
from “Success is counted sweetest” by Emily Dickinson
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Other Sound Devices
Sound devices contribute to the musical nature of a While I nodded, nearly
alliteration
poem and help emphasize certain words. napping
• Alliteration is the repetition of similar sounds, most
often consonant sounds, at the beginning of words. And the Raven, never
• Assonance is the repetition of similar vowel flitting, still is sitting, still assonance
sounds. is sitting
• Consonance is the repetition of similar consonant Some late visitor entreating
sounds within words or at the ends of words.
entrance at my chamber consonance
• Onomatopoeia is the use of a word or phrase that door.
imitates or suggests the sound it describes.
tapping, rapping
onomatopoeia
from “The Raven”
Imagery
Imagery is descriptive language that evokes an And the silken, sad, (appeals to the
emotional response in readers and appeals to the uncertain rustling of senses of touch,
hearing, and sight)
senses—sight, hearing, touch, taste, or smell. Some each purple curtain
images appeal to more than one sense at the from “The Raven”
same time.
Figurative Language
Figurative language is language that is used for Helen, thy beauty is to me
descriptive effect and is not meant to be read literally. Like those Nicean barks simile
Usually, figurative language expresses meaning of yore
beyond the literal level. from “To Helen”
Analyzing Media
1. Why, in your opinion, would the
notebooks of a nineteenth-
century poet be so valuable?
2. What more would you like to
know about this story? Why?
Before You Read
Whitman’s Poetry
Reading Focus
What kind of spirit do you see in the people you know? For example, do you think
they feel mostly optimistic or pessimistic? Why?
Think-Pair-Share Think about these questions on your own for a few minutes.
Then discuss your responses with a partner. Finally, share your responses with your
classmates and briefly discuss whether people in the United States seem generally
optimistic or pessimistic.
Setting a Purpose Read to find out how Whitman views the spirit of his
country and its citizens.
Building Background
Whitman and the War
In 1862 Whitman’s brother was wounded in the first
battle of Fredericksburg, and Whitman traveled to the
battlefront in Virginia to care for him. Deeply moved
by the suffering he encountered and finding his
brother’s condition stable, Whitman went on to
Washington, D.C., to work as a volunteer nurse in
army hospitals. There he comforted and cared for
both Union and Confederate soldiers, dressing their
wounds, writing letters for them, and bringing them
items they needed, such as apples, oranges, and
books. Writing about this experience, Whitman
noted, “I supply often to some of these dear
suffering boys . . . that which doctors nor medicines
nor skill nor any routine assistance can give. . . . There
is something in . . . the magnetic flood of sympathy
that does, in its way, more good than all the medicine
in the world.”
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Wa l t W h i t m a n
I hear America singing, the varied carols I hear,
Those of mechanics, each one singing his as it should be blithe° and strong,
The carpenter singing his as he measures his plank or beam,
The mason singing his as he makes ready for work, or leaves off work,
5 The boatman singing what belongs to him in his boat,
the deckhand singing on the steamboat deck,
The shoemaker singing as he sits on his bench, the hatter singing as he stands,
The wood-cutter’s song, the ploughboy’s on his way in the morning,
or at noon intermission or at sundown,
The delicious singing of the mother, or of the young wife at work,
or of the girl sewing or washing,
Each singing what belongs to him or her and to none else,
10 The day what belongs to the day—at night the party of young fellows,
robust, friendly,
Singing with open mouths their strong melodious songs.
Wa l t W h i t m a n
When I heard the learn’d astronomer,
When the proofs, the figures, were ranged in columns before me,
When I was shown the charts and diagrams, to add, divide, and measure them,
When I sitting heard the astronomer where he lectured with much applause
in the lecture-room,
How soon unaccountable I became tired and sick,
Till rising and gliding out I wander’d off by myself,
In the mystical moist night-air, and from time to time,
Look’d up in perfect silence at the stars.
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Active Reading and Critical Thinking
Responding to Literature
Personal Response
Which of these poems by Walt Whitman did you prefer? Why? Jot down your response in your
journal and then share your thoughts with a classmate.
Analyzing Literature
Recall and Interpret
1. What occupations does the speaker say represent America? What do these occupations tell
you about Whitman’s view of his country?
2. According to line 9, what does each laborer sing about? What do the laborers’ “songs”
suggest about the work they do?
3. What does the speaker suggest happens at night? Why do you think the poem ends the
way it does?
Evaluate and Connect
4. What catalog, or list of images and details, is included in this poem? What effect does the
catalog have on your reading of the poem?
5. Look back at your responses to the Reading Focus on page 402. On the basis of this
poem, do you think Walt Whitman would agree or disagree with your ideas and with the
conclusions drawn by your classmates? Explain.
Then to the second I step—and who are you my child and darling?
Who are you sweet boy with cheeks yet blooming?
Then to the third—a face nor child nor old, very calm, as of beautiful yellow-white ivory;
Young man I think I know you—I think this face is the face of the Christ himself,
15 Dead and divine and brother of all, and here again he lies.
11 Speculators are people who engage in risky business ventures hoping to make quick or large profits.
16 A parley is a conference between enemies to discuss terms of a truce or an agreement. Expostulation is the act of reasoning
with a person to correct or dissuade him or her.
20 Trestles are structures in which a beam is supported by four diverging legs.
Responding to Literature
Personal Response
Which image or idea from these two poems stands out in your mind? Why do you find that
image or idea distinctive?
Analyzing Literature
Recall and Interpret
1. According to the first stanza, what does the speaker see at daybreak? What item does the
speaker describe in lines 5–6? Why do you suppose the speaker might have focused on
this item?
2. Describe the first two soldiers. What do the speaker’s questions imply about his feelings
toward the soldiers?
3. To whom does the speaker compare the third soldier? What does this tell you about the
speaker’s emotional reaction to what he sees?
Evaluate and Connect
4. What does each soldier add to your understanding of the poem’s message?
5. How do you think you might have reacted to the situation described in the poem?
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Before You Read
from Song of Myself
Reading Focus
Have you ever felt “connected” to nature or to all of humankind? What would it take
for you to have such feelings?
Discuss As a class, have a brief discussion of what it might mean to feel
“connected” to nature or to all of humankind and about what might make someone
feel that way.
Setting a Purpose Read to learn of the speaker’s feelings of connection to
the natural world and to all of humankind.
Building Background
Literary Influences Authors Among Ourselves
When Whitman was young, he read Homer’s classic epic In the 1840s and 1850s, the most popular novelists among
poem the Iliad while “in a shelter’d hollow of rocks and readers in the United States were the Scottish writer Sir
sand, with the sea on each side.” He felt that only the Walter Scott and the English novelist Charles Dickens.
“presence of Nature” prevented him from being completely Although Whitman admired these two authors, he deplored
overwhelmed by the experience of reading this poem. For what he described as the “tinsel sentimentality” of much of
that reason, he preferred a natural setting whenever he read European writing at that time. He asked in one of his essays,
great works of world literature. “Shall [Nathaniel] Hawthorne get a paltry seventy-five dollars
Several years later Whitman would create his own epic for a two-volume work—shall real American genius shiver
poem—Song of Myself. As in the Iliad, this poem describes with neglect—while the public run after this foreign trash?”
the journey of a hero. The hero in this poem, however, is the He urged his fellow citizens to cast aside the “unwhole-
poet himself, not a fictional or historic character, and his some reading from abroad” and look for authors among
journey is in part a spiritual one. As the poem progresses, “ourselves.”
the poet attempts to connect with the spirit of the reader, of
the American landscape, of
the American people, and,
finally, of the universe itself.
Song of Myself encour-
ages each reader to share
the poet’s journey and to cel-
ebrate his or her own heroic
spirit. In writing this work,
Whitman tries to show that
his fellow citizens are as
heroic as the “god-like or
lordly born characters” of
ancient Greece.
Eaton’s Neck, Long Island, 1872. John Frederick Kensett. Oil on canvas, 18 x 36 in. The Metropolitan Museum
of Art, New York.
My tongue, every atom of my blood, form’d from this soil, this air,
Born here of parents born here from parents the same, and their parents the same,
I, now thirty-seven years old in perfect health begin,
Hoping to cease not till death.
I guess it must be the flag of my disposition, out of hopeful green stuff woven.
20 What do you think has become of the young and old men?
And what do you think has become of the women and children?
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Haymaking, 1864. Winslow Homer. Oil on canvas, 16 x 11 in. The Columbus Museum of Art, Columbus, OH.
Viewing the painting: In what ways does this painting capture the mood of the poem? Explain, using
details from both the painting and the poem.
They are alive and well somewhere,
The smallest sprout shows there is really no death,
And if ever there was it led forward life, and does not wait at the end to arrest it,
25 And ceas’d the moment life appear’d.
16
33 Nonchalant means “showing a lack of interest or enthusiasm.” The Oconee is a river in Georgia.
36 Hoosier, Badger, and Buckeye are nicknames for natives or residents of Indiana, Wisconsin, and Ohio, respectively.
46 A rowdy is a rough, disorderly person.
52 Palpable means “able to be touched or felt.”
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17
These are really the thoughts of all men in all ages and lands, they
are not original with me,
If they are not yours as much as mine they are nothing, or next to nothing,
55 If they are not the riddle and the untying of the riddle they are nothing,
If they are not just as close as they are distant they are nothing.
This is the grass that grows wherever the land is and the water is,
This is the common air that bathes the globe.
46
I know I have the best of time and space, and was never measured and
never will be measured.
Not I, not any one else can travel that road for you,
You must travel it for yourself.
Shoulder your duds° dear son, and I will mine, and let us hasten forth,
Wonderful cities and free nations we shall fetch as we go.
75 If you tire, give me both burdens, and rest the chuff of your hand° on my hip,
And in due time you shall repay the same service to me,
For after we start we never lie by again.
This day before dawn I ascended a hill and look’d at the crowded heaven,
And I said to my spirit When we become the enfolders of those orbs, and the pleasure and
knowledge of every thing in them, shall we be fill’d and satisfied then?
80 And my spirit said No, we but level that lift to pass and continue beyond.
The Sand Team, 1917. George Bellows. Oil on canvas, 30¹⁄₂ x 44¹⁄₄ in. The Brooklyn Museum, New York.
Viewing the painting: In your opinion, what spirit of America does this painting convey? How is it similar to or
different from Whitman’s view of the American spirit?
51
The past and present wilt—I have fill’d them, emptied them,
And proceed to fill my next fold of the future.
Do I contradict myself?
Very well then I contradict myself,
(I am large, I contain multitudes.)
100 I concentrate toward them that are nigh,° I wait on the door-slab.
Who has done his day’s work? who will soonest be through with his supper?
Who wishes to walk with me?
Will you speak before I am gone? will you prove already too late?
52
The spotted hawk swoops by and accuses me, he complains of my gab and my loitering.
95 Snuff the sidle of evening means “to put out the last light of the day, which is moving sideways across the sky.”
100 Nigh means “near.”
106 A yawp is a loud, sharp cry.
107 Scud refers to wind-driven clouds or rain.
111 Effuse means “to pour out or forth.”
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Active Reading and Critical Thinking
Responding to Literature
Personal Response 13. An epic poem recounts the adventures of a hero. In
How did you react to the speaker in the poem? Explain your opinion, is the speaker of Song of Myself a hero?
your answer. Explain your answer with details from the poem.
14. Think back to the ideas you discussed for the Reading
Focus on page 409. Then use a chart to compare
Analyzing Literature Whitman’s ideas about being connected to nature and
humankind with yours.
Recall 15. What would you like to say to the speaker after reading
1. What is the main topic of section 1? What is the speaker this poem?
saying in lines 10–13 about his past learning and his
future?
2. What does the speaker say about death in lines 20–27? Literary Criticism
3. A paradox is a statement that seems to contradict itself,
One of Whitman’s contemporaries writes the following about
but may actually be true. What paradoxes does Whitman
Leaves of Grass: “What we thought ridiculous in the title is
list in section 16?
eclipsed in the pages of this . . . mass of egotism . . . .” Do
4. Summarize the speaker’s advice to his “son” in lines
you think the reviewer’s comment applies to this excerpt
73–91.
from “Song of Myself”? Write a brief critical review
5. Briefly state what the speaker is saying in sections 51
explaining your answer. Use details from the poem for
and 52.
support.
Interpret
6. How does the speaker seem to view himself in relation
to nature and to the rest of the world?
7. What do lines 20–27 suggest about the speaker’s ideas Literary ELEMENTS
of life and death?
8. What, in your opinion, do the paradoxes in section 16 Free Verse
reveal about the speaker’s feelings toward humankind? Whitman is famous for using free verse—a type of
What do these lines suggest about Whitman’s attitude poetry that has no set meter, line length, stanza
toward himself? arrangement, or rhyme. Though free verse lacks a
9. In your opinion, what is the deeper meaning of the regular pattern of stressed and unstressed syllables, it
advice the speaker gives? Explain your answer using does not lack rhythm. Whitman used free verse
details from the poem. because it echoes the rising and falling cadences of
10. What do sections 51 and 52 suggest to you about the everyday speech.
speaker’s attitude toward the relationship between his
1. With a partner, read one of Whitman’s poems
physical body and his spirit? between humankind and
aloud, paying close attention to its rhythm. Do you
nature?
find the rhythm of the poem similar to everyday
Evaluate and Connect speech? Explain.
11. How does Whitman’s use of catalogs in this selection 2. In what ways might Song of Myself have a different
help get across his message? (See Literary Terms effect if it were written in a regular rhythm pattern?
Handbook, page R3.)
12. Which of Whitman’s ideas about nature, death, or • See Literary Terms Handbook,
people do you find most interesting? Explain, using p. R7.
details from the poem.
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Literature and Writing
Writing About Literature Creative Writing
Details, Details In Song of Myself and other poems, Celebrate! Write a short poem celebrating your America.
Whitman uses specific details to enrich his poetry. Choose Use free verse and other devices Whitman used to create
one of Whitman’s poems and list the details in that poem rhythm in his work, such as repetition and parallelism (see
that you find most powerful. Then write a few paragraphs pages R11 and R13). Begin the poem with one of the
explaining the effect those details have on the poem. For following lines:
example: Do they bring out the meaning more clearly? Do “I celebrate myself, and sing myself.”
they make the images more memorable? Be specific in “I hear America singing.”
supporting your explanations.
VOCABULARY
SkillMinilesson
• The Latin Root pos
Latin roots form the basis of many English words. The PRACTICE Define each word below, using a
root is usually combined with a prefix, a suffix, or both. dictionary if necessary. Then discuss with a partner how
The meaning of the English word is usually related to the meaning of the Latin root pos contributes to the
the meaning of the root it contains. For example, the meaning of each word.
words disposition (line 16) and supposed (line 27), from 1. deposit 4. position
Song of Myself, contain the Latin root pos, meaning “to
2. oppose 5. expose
put” or “to place.” Disposition can be interpreted as “the
3. transpose
way a person’s temperament or mood is arranged or
placed”; suppose can mean “to place under belief.”
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WORLD LITERATURE
Chuang Tzu
Tr a n s l a t e d b y M a r t i n P a l m e r
Hui Tzu said to Chuang Tzu:
“All your teaching is centered on what has no use.”
Chuang replied:
“If you have no appreciation for what has no use
You cannot begin to talk about what can be used.
The earth, for example, is broad and vast
But of all this expanse a man uses only a few inches
Upon which he happens to be standing.
Now suppose you suddenly take away
All that he is not actually using
So that, all around his feet a gulf
Yawns, and he stands in the Void,
With nowhere solid except right under each foot:
How long will he be able to use what he is using?”
Chuang Tzu
Tr a n s l a t e d b y M a r t i n P a l m e r
ONCE UPON A TIME, I, Chuang Tzu, dreamt that I was a butterfly,
flitting around and enjoying myself. I had no idea I was Chuang Tzu.
Then suddenly I woke up and was Chuang Tzu again. But I could not
tell, had I been Chuang Tzu dreaming I was a butterfly, or a butterfly
dreaming I was now Chuang Tzu?
Responding to Literature
Personal Response
What do “The Useless” and “The Butterfly Dream” leave you thinking about? Share your thoughts
with a classmate.
Analyzing Literature
Recall and Interpret
1. What statement does Hui Tzu first make to Chuang Tzu? What do you think the
statement means?
2. How does Chuang reply to Hui? What example does Chuang use to support his reply? Is
the example, in your opinion, an appropriate response to Hui’s statement? Explain.
3. What is Chuang’s final conclusion? Restate this conclusion in your own words and explain
what Chuang seems to be saying.
Evaluate and Connect
4. Did Chuang’s argument convince you? Why or why not?
5. A paradox is a statement that seems to contradict itself but may actually be true. What
effect does paradox have on your reading of the selection?
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Critical Thinking
COMPARING
selections
and and
COMPARE IDEAS
Imagine Walt Whitman and Chuang Tzu in conversation. In a group, discuss questions
such as the following. Support your discussion with details from the selections.
1. What questions might each want to ask the other? What answers might they get?
2. What else might they talk about?
3. About what might they agree? About what might they disagree?
4. Do you think the two of them could become friends? Why or why not?
Have two group members improvise a discussion between the writers
for the class.
COMPARE IMPRESSIONS
ex postulat ion
The word expostulation means “the act of reasoning with someone to correct or dis-
suade”—that is, the act of trying to talk someone out of an idea. Although a word’s parts usually
add up to its meaning, it is a good idea to confirm your interpretation with a dictionary.
Adding a prefix or a suffix to a root word creates a new word with a new meaning. For
example, some prefixes reverse the meaning of a root word; suffixes may change a word’s part
of speech. Here are some frequently used prefixes and suffixes and their meanings:
Meaning Examples
Prefixes
il-, im-, in-, ir- without, not illegal, incomplete
trans- across translate, transport
Suffixes
-able, -ible capable of laughable, visible
-ical related to symmetrical, geological
EXERCISE
Use prefixes and suffixes from the lists to help you complete the following sentences.
1. A transcontinental airline flight would fly 2. A hierarchy can be a classification of people based on
a. across a continent. their status. So, in a hierarchical society, people would
b. between more than two continents. a. all have the same status.
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Before You Read
Dickinson’s Poetry
Reading Focus
How important are your friends to you? What are your views of death? What is
success? What is wisdom?
Freewrite Spend three or four minutes freewriting to explore your response to
one of the questions above.
Setting a Purpose Read to learn one poet’s views of relationships, death,
success, and other topics.
Building Background
Dickinson’s Dashes Dickinson was also innovative in her use of capitalization.
and Capitalization Like most poets of her day, she capitalized the first letter of
Much of Dickinson’s poetry features her characteristic use of each line of a poem and all proper nouns. Additionally,
dashes. The dashes serve as interrupters. They signal pauses, however, she capitalized many common nouns, thereby
but more than that, they call attention to the words they calling attention to them and emphasizing their importance.
enclose. They may break off a line or thought suddenly; they
may call attention to a shift in meaning or action; they may Literary Influences
interrupt the rhythm; or they may draw attention to the Books, Dickinson once said, were her “enthralling friends.”
moment of silence they create in an oral reading of the She particularly enjoyed reading William Shakespeare, Ralph
poems. To understand these poems, you need to think about Waldo Emerson, and women writers of her day, including
not only the words but also the dashes. Each one is carefully George Eliot, Charlotte and Emily Brontë, and Elizabeth
placed, and each one affects the reading of the poem. Barrett Browning. Dickinson’s interest in the complexity and
turmoil of the human soul and in humankind’s relationship
to nature drew her to these writers. Dickinson also steeped
herself in the Bible, particularly the Book of Revelation. Her
poems refer to various religious concepts, such as heaven,
hell, sin, and immortality.
Technically, Dickinson’s poems owe much to the hymns
she heard in childhood, whose rhythms she adapted to her
poetry. Many of her poems consist of alternating six- and
eight-syllable lines. This is the most popular form of rhythm
in old Protestant hymns.
Research
Use library resources or the Internet to research Emily
Dickinson’s life. For starters, try the links related to Dickinson
on the lit.glencoe.com Web site. What makes her such a
unique and compelling figure in American literature? As you
read Dickinson’s poems, consider how your appreciation for
them is enhanced by your knowledge about her life.
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Emily Dickinson
If you were coming in the Fall, If certain, when this life was out—
I’d brush the Summer by That yours and mine, should be
With half a smile, and half a spurn, 15 I’d toss it yonder, like a Rind,
As Housewives do, a Fly. And take Eternity—
Waiting, 1885. Clement Rollins Grant. Oil on canvas, 20 x 30 in. Private collection.
Emily Dickinson
Emily Dickinson
The Soul selects her own Society—
Then—shuts the Door—
To her divine Majority—
Present no more—
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Active Reading and Critical Thinking
Responding to Literature
Personal Response
What questions would you like to ask the speakers of these poems? Make a list of these questions
in your journal.
Analyzing Literature
Recall and Interpret
1. What periods of time does the speaker suggest in each of the first four stanzas? What
action does the speaker take in the first four stanzas? Why, in your opinion, do the periods
of time change from stanza to stanza?
2. According to the fifth stanza, what is the speaker uncertain about? Why might she com-
pare this uncertainty to a bee’s sting?
Evaluate and Connect
3. Would you call this a love poem? Why or why not?
4. In this poem, what might Dickinson be saying about the nature of waiting? Do you agree?
Explain.
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Success is counted sweetest
By those who ne’er succeed.
To comprehend a nectar°
Requires sorest need.
As he defeated—dying—
10 On whose forbidden ear
The distant strains of triumph
Burst agonized and clear!
Emily Dickinson 3 Nectar is a sweet liquid secreted by plants and used by bees
in the making of honey. In Greek mythology, nectar is the
drink of the gods that makes all who drink it immortal.
5 Purple Host means “winning army.”
Taps, c. 1907–1909. William Gilbert Gaul. Oil on canvas, 32³⁄₄ x 43 in. The Birmingham Museum of Art, Birmingham, AL.
How does this painting enhance your understanding of Dickinson’s message in this poem?
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Active Reading and Critical Thinking
Responding to Literature
Personal Response
What new insights or ideas did the poems give you? Share your thoughts in a discussion
with classmates.
Analyzing Literature
Recall and Interpret
1. According to the speaker, in lines 1–3, what is sense often confused with? Who does the
speaker say knows the difference?
2. What or who determines what “Sense” of the third line is? What might the difference be
between the “Sense” in line 1 and the “Sense” in line 3?
3. According to the poem, what does a person have to do to be considered “sane”? How
would you describe the poet’s attitude toward this concept of sanity?
4. How is a person regarded who disagrees with accepted ideas? What does the last word of
the poem, chain, suggest about what happens to such a person?
Evaluate and Connect
5. This poem is filled with dashes. What effect, in your opinion, do they have on the poem?
What words and ideas do they seem to emphasize?
Recall and Interpret
6. According to the first stanza, who most values success? What analogy does Dickinson use
to further her point? Why do you think she makes her point this way?
7. What example of success is given in the second stanza? How well do those who succeed
in this manner understand success?
8. According to the speaker, who understands success better than the “purple Host”? How
does this person react to hearing the “strains of triumph”?
Evaluate and Connect
9. In your own words, state Dickinson’s viewpoint on success as expressed in this poem. Do
you agree or disagree with this view? Explain your reasons.
10. Why, in your opinion, did Dickinson choose war imagery (see page R8)? If you were
writing a poem about success, what kind of imagery might you include? Explain why you
think this imagery would be effective.
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I heard a Fly buzz—when I died—
The Stillness in the Room
Was like the Stillness in the Air—
Between the Heaves of Storm—
We passed the School, where Children strove Since then—’tis Centuries—and yet
10 At Recess—in the Ring— Feels shorter than the Day
We passed the Fields of Gazing Grain— I first surmised the Horses’ Heads
We passed the Setting Sun— Were toward Eternity—
Responding to Literature
Personal Response
Which images from these poems did you find the most surprising and memorable? Why? In
your journal, jot down the most striking words and phrases from the poems.
Analyzing Literature
Recall and Interpret
1. According to the first stanza, what is the atmosphere in the room like? What effect does
the buzzing fly seem to have on the speaker?
2. In lines 5 and 6, what are the “eyes” and “breaths” doing? What do the “eyes” and
“breaths” await? Explain your answer.
3. According to stanzas three and four, what does the fly come between? What happens
next? In your opinion, what point about dying does the speaker make in this poem?
Evaluate and Connect
4. How does Dickinson’s account of someone dying compare with other representations you
have read or seen?
The kind of writing you do determines how you will elaborate. To prove a point, you might
elaborate by using facts and quotations. For example, in a letter to protest the loss of a
neighborhood park you might include
• the results of a poll showing that 150 preschool children use the playground equipment
several times a week.
• a quote from the former mayor: “Without Poplar Park, many community families will have
to travel several miles to get to a picnic area or sports fields.”
In your writing, be sure to use the type of elaboration that will best support your purpose.
ACTIVITIES
1. Use facts and expert opinions to elaborate for your parents on the reasons you need a laptop
computer (or some other item you desire).
2. Use examples and an anecdote to describe one friend to another.
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Active Reading and Critical Thinking
Responding to Literature
Personal Response
What reactions did you have while reading these poems?
Analyzing Literature
Recall and Interpret
1. When does the speaker observe the “certain Slant of light”? What effect does the light
have on the speaker?
2. In the third stanza, what words or phrases does the speaker use to name the slant of light?
What can you infer about the speaker’s feelings toward the light?
3. What happens when the light comes, and what happens when it goes? What might the
light symbolize, or represent?
Evaluate and Connect
4. Have you ever experienced the kind of winter afternoon light the speaker describes? What
might be different about the light or a person’s mood on a winter afternoon than at other
times of year or day?
5. What feelings does Dickinson evoke as she describes that “certain Slant of light”? Does she
bring out these feelings effectively? Use details from the poem to explain your answer.
6. Personification is the giving of human qualities or characteristics to an object, an idea, or
an animal. Identify two or more examples of personification in this poem. Explain how
they affect the poem’s meaning.
Literary Criticism
“Anything transient, particular, or small,” argues scholar imagination in “There’s a certain Slant of light”? What
Ruth Miller, “enlivens [Dickinson’s] imagination and ideas or emotions does the small thing seem to
leads to an intuition of a profound truth—regeneration, suggest to Dickinson? Discuss your answers with a
immortality.” What small thing enlivens Dickinson’s partner.
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Web Page
Imitation, people say, is the highest
form of flattery. Does that statement
include humorous imitation, or par-
ody? The poems below placed first and
second in an on-line Emily Dickinson
Parody Poetry Contest.
Address: http://lal.cs.byu.edu/mlists/emweb/
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Expository Writing: Analyzing a Poem E VALUATION R UBRIC
By the time you complete this Writing
U sing relatively few words, poets can communicate vast meanings and evoke Workshop, you will have
deep emotions. How do they do it? They use rhythm, sound, form, figurative • clearly stated your interpretation of
language, and numerous other methods to get the most out of their words. a poem
As a reader, you try to understand the poem, and one of the best ways to • analyzed how the poet’s use of
understand a poem is to write an analysis of it. In this workshop, you will techniques helps convey the
analyze a poem by identifying its meaning and then writing an essay that message of a poem
explains how various techniques help create that meaning. You may choose • cited quotations from the poem to
a poem from this theme or any other poem that appeals to you. support your analysis
• presented an analysis that is free
of errors in grammar, usage, and
• As you write your analysis, refer to the Writing Handbook, pp. R62—R77. mechanics
Choose an audience
You can write your poetry analysis for other high school students. Perhaps your class can even put
together a literary magazine with articles on favorite poems.
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Make a plan
In the introduction to your essay, state your interpretation of the poem’s meaning. You will also
want to summarize the techniques that the poet uses to convey the meaning. Then, in the body
of your essay, you will devote a separate paragraph to each technique. The chart below will help
you plan the content of your essay.
STUDENT MODEL
Meaning Does the poem focus on an idea? Does it focus Song of Myself focuses on Whitman’s
on a feeling? ideas of freedom, diversity, and energy—
What message is the poet trying to convey? qualities that Whitman believes are
truly American. He makes me feel
enthusiasm for the country.
Form Do the poem’s form and content seem related? The flow of Whitman’s lines and his use
Has the poet done anything unusual with of alliteration and assonance create a
punctuation or capitalization? If so, how does rhythm and energy that reflect
that help communicate the poet’s message? Whitman’s beliefs about the American
character. His punctuation and
capitalization are pretty normal, which
makes his meaning clearer because they
don’t distract readers from his basic
intentions.
Meter Does the poem have regular meter, or is it Whitman uses mostly free verse, which
written in free verse? helps convey his ideas about America’s
Why might the poet have chosen one free, enterprising spirit.
pattern instead of another?
Language What images does the poet create? To what Imagery reflects his wish to be in
senses do the images appeal? harmony with Earth. Figures of speech
Does the poet use figurative language, such reinforce his connections with the
as metaphors or similes? natural world. For example, he uses
Does the poem contain any symbols? personification when he speaks of the
Do the imagery and figurative language help hawk’s accusing him. He also uses
you see new connections between ideas? metaphor to emphasize his connection
How do the imagery and figurative language to Americans from many regions.
help bring out the poem’s meaning?
Speaker Is there a definite speaker? If so, does the The speaker is a bold, individualistic
speaker’s identity affect the poem’s meaning? person—Whitman himself—who sees
himself relating fully to American
Remember you don’t need to discuss all the techniques mentioned in experience.
the chart. Focus on the ones that contribute to the meaning of the
poem you are writing about and discuss them in order of importance. Complete Student Model on p. R99.
DRAFTING
DRAFTING TIP
Keep your plan in mind, Draft openings STUDENT MODEL
but don’t be afraid to When drafting, you can
change it if you discover experiment with differ- FIRST OPENING SECOND OPENING
new ideas about the ent openings until you In Song of Myself, Walt Walt Whitman’s Song of
poem as you draft. Whitman attempts to write Myself is a truly American
find the best way to get
your readers’ attention. a poem celebrating those poem. Almost every aspect
One approach is to qualities he feels are truly of the poem—including the
begin your essay with a American. He employs a flowing lines, its imagery
provocative question. variety of techniques to and figurative language,
illustrate his belief that and its speaker’s voice—
Write your draft
America is a unique contribute to its
Elaborate on each point
country, characterized by celebration of American
you make by giving
freedom, diversity, qualities such as freedom,
examples from the
poem. For more help and energy. diversity, and energy.
with elaboration, refer to
Complete Student Model on p. R99.
Writing Skills page 434.
REVISING
REVISING TIP
Make sure the lines you Evaluate your work
cite from the poem are Let your draft sit for at least a few hours before you begin revising it. Then look for places where
stated correctly. you could have expressed your ideas more clearly. Using the Rubric for Revising as a guide,
TECHNOLOGY TIP
make revisions to your draft.
Use the cut-and- Talk it over R UBRIC FOR R EVISING
paste function
Read your essay aloud to a partner. Take notes on Your revised analysis of a poem
on your computer
to be sure your sen-
your partner’s comments and questions, and should have
tences and paragraphs consider his or her responses as you revise. an opening that clearly states
are concise. Cut out your interpretation
all words, phrases, a discussion of the poet’s techniques
and sentences that STUDENT MODEL
as they relate to your interpretation
are redundant or eve n p art i cu larl y quotations and examples from the
unnecessary. But without the really American poem to support your analysis
figu rat i ve
meter and the use of language, this a conclusion that summarizes your
poem’s truly American spirit would
main points
jus t Your revised essay should be free of
come through only from the
unsupported claims about the
speaker’s powerful voice. poem’s meaning or content
i n cre di bl y s t ro ng
grammatical errors or illogical
Complete Student Model on p. R99. thoughts that make the meaning
unclear
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EDITING/PROOFREADING
PROOFREADING TIP
When you are satisfied with the content and flow of your essay, proofread it carefully for errors in Use the Proofreading
grammar, usage, mechanics, and spelling. Checklist on the inside
back cover of this book
to help you mark errors
that you find.
Grammar Hint
Nonessential appositives should be preceded and followed
by commas.
To see if an appositive is nonessential, ask yourself, “Does
the sentence still make sense without the appositive?”
Song of Myself, a poem first published in 1855, is a truly American
poem.
The appositive phrase, a poem first published in 1855, is
not essential to the meaning of the sentence and therefore
is set off by commas.
• For more on using commas, see Language Handbook, p. R53.
STUDENT MODEL
Complete Student Model
Leaves of Grass one of the greatest books in American For a complete version of the model
Literature is admired around the world. developed in this workshop, see Writing
Workshop Models, p. R99.
PUBLISHING/PRESENTING
PRESENTING TIP
If you are planning to put together a class literary magazine, agree on ways to make the essays Giving your essay an
look similar. For example, you might decide to use the same lettering and the same size head- intriguing title will help
ings. If you are presenting your essay to teachers or classmates, make the copy as attractive as focus your readers’
you can. Remember to check it one final time for mistakes. attention on what you
want to say.
Reflecting
Think about the writing experience you have just had. In your journal, reflect on other ways you
might use the analyzing skills you developed while writing this essay. What would you do dif-
ferently in your next analysis of a literary work?
Unit Assessment
Personal Response Evaluate and Set Goals
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UNIT ASSESSMENT
1. Despite the community’s urgent appeal, 4. The doctor omitted from his article any
A A
the city government decided to build a mention of subjects who had experienced
B B
new highway through the park and close adverse reactions to the medication
C C
the park for an indecisive period. No error prescribed for them. No error
D E D E
of one company, and so having no sense 6. Many scholars have written about the
B A
of the process in its entirety. No error Renaissance, but never before has the
C D E B C
contributions of the painters been
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Standardized Test Practice
1. Jean Louis David’s art depicts classical 3. For many a talented writer, being free to
figures and they were both historically create is more important than being highly
and stylistically accurate for the neo- paid.
classical period. (A) being free to create is more important
(A) figures and they were (B) having freedom to create is more
(B) figures that were important
(C) figures, being that they were (C) there is more importance in the
(D) figures, and making them freedom to create
(E) figures, they (D) freedom to create has more
importance
2. The community center, once about to (E) to have the freedom to create is more
close due to lack of funds, is now a busy, important
fun place to visit.
(A) The community center, once about 4. In most offices, employees keep copies of
to close due to lack of funds, is all documents, a focus on detail that is
(B) The community center was once important.
about to close due to lack of funds, (A) a focus on detail that is important
it is (B) inasmuch as they show a focus on
(C) The community center that once detail, it is important
having been about to close due to (C) this makes it important in showing
lack of funds is their focus on detail
(D) The community center, because it (D) an idea that is important in showing
was once about to close due to lack their focus on detail
of funds, is (E) which is important and it shows a
(E) The community center was once focus on detail
about to close due to lack of funds,
and it is