Grammar + cohesion + context

I’m keen on working long hours because I hate money.

Grammar is right.

Cohesion: There’s no common sense.

Context: No

I love working at Cineplanet cinema because I can get free tickets to see lots of films.

I’m into working long hours since it means more money at the end of the month to pay my
expenses.

I can’t stand working with little kids since I’m not patient enough.

I love eating sweets. My favourite one is chocolate cake since it makes me really happy.