B1 Extreme Activities ESS008

Red Bull, a well-known Austrian-based company, sponsors extreme activities. As young people are
their target group, they would like to know how they feel about the topic.

Therefore, they have organized an international essay competition. The first prize is a day with a
world-class BASE jumper.

In your essay you should

 define what you think extreme activities are.

 discuss why people take part in such activities.
 point out whether adventurous people have special characteristics.

Write an essay of about 300 words and give your essay a title.

DEBERÍAS EMPEZAR CON UN TÍTULO PARA ENCABEZAR EL TEXTO, MIRA LO QUE TE PONE EN

LAS INSTRUCCIONES: give your essay a title

A CONTINUACIÓN ESTARÍA BIEN QUE PUSIERAS UNA FRASE QUE PUEDA SER ATRACTIVA

Y QUE HAGA QUE LOS LECTORES SE INTERESEN.

YO EMPEZARÍA CON “ADVENTURE SPORTS ARE THOSE WHERE THE RISK” It s adventured sports

that the risk is controlated because this activity should be supervisated BY for a profesionality. I MADE

maked ESTO DE CLIBJUMPING NO SE LO QUÉ ES clibjumping in a cala of Mallorca, when you can give

a acrobatic jump I was exciting, very good. This sensation is very difficult TO EXPLAIN of explainted. You

can see with your friends applaud and they make the similar jump and not make.

I Belive that this type of sports aren t for EVERYONE (EN VEZ DE the all people) the all people
because there is ESTA FRASE ESTÁ SIN TERMINAR, ME CUESTA ENTENDERLA
A good corporal (CUIDADO CON LA PALABRA ESQUEM, NO EXISTE Y NO SE PARECE A
NINGUNA OTRA QUE PUEDA SER SIMILAR) esquem, but there is a people that make a
somersault
Just is extreme activites, this activity can make than (SELF CONFIDENCE O SELF ESTEEM EN
VEZ DE AUTOESTIM) autoestim of a people
Is better

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The specialist characters of this personality is a physically is a person very
Athletics such as very good jump, sprint etc and mentality they can not
getting carried away by emotions and they sould was very quiet ESTE PÁRRAFO, EN GENERAL,
NO ESTÁ MUY CLARO. INTENTA HACER FRASES MÁS CORTAS PARA QUE SE ENTIENDAN
MEJOR.

ADEMÁS, AL FINAL DEL TEXTO DEBERÍAS PONER ALGO PARA DAR TU CONCLUSIÓN. EN
ESTE PUNTO DEBERÍAS INCLUIR ALGUNA FRASE DEL TIPO “TO SUM UP”.
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