WRITING

REGULAR: FIRST DRAFT ASSESSMENT

ALL LEVELS
INTENSIVE W. 1 - 2
FULL NAME: Arias Julcamoro Vanessa Jannet INT. 7
COURSE:
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LAST NAMES FIRST NAME M.I. 7:45 pm
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TEACHER’S Jean Espinoza 17/08/2023

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I. PRE-WRITING

Fear:
Fear is a natural emotion that is characterized by experiencing an unpleasant and intense sensation when
faced with the perception of a real or imaginary danger.

Examples:
I’m very afraid of being alone, generally my house is full of people during the day, be it my family or visitors,
there are always people in my house, but when everyone goes out and I have to stay alone it’s a bit difficult
because I feel fear, I feel that something bad is going to happen to me.

On the other hand, I’m also afraid of insects, but cockroaches, spiders, grasshoppers, hearing or seeing them
disgust me, I really want to scream and run away.

Techniques I use to overcome my fears:

For my first fear, I try not to be alone and if that happens, I relax, I listen to a lot of music, since for me music
is something very relaxing and valuable, music has saved me from many anxieties attacks several times, so
this is a very doable technique for me.
For the second, happily in my house there aren’t many insects, but sometimes it’s difficult to avoid them when
I’m in the street, so I just try to get some air, relax and avoid the insect at all costs, but when I’m at home, I
usually have a repellent in every corner of my house, just in case one appears I'm ready.

II. WRITING:
Overleaf, write your paragraph, letter or essay using the ideas you brainstormed above.
 Cont. / 6 Org. / 6 Gram. / 5 Vocab. / 5 Mech. / 3 Total: 25
Basic &

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Intermediate

Cont. / 20 Org. / 10 Gram-Voc. / 10 Eff. on Read. / 5 Mech. / 5 Total: 25

Advanced
 REGULAR: SECOND WRITING
ASSESSMENT
DRAFT ALL LEVELS

INTENSIVE W. 1 - 2
For me, fear is an innate defense mechanism that is activated by the perception of danger, which may or may
not be real, but which causes very intense and unpleasant sensations, for example, being alone at home is a
very unpleasant sensation. and the insects are doubly unpleasant and dangerous, on the other hand, getting
low grades is also a very big fear for me, since my parents are probably not happy with it and I’m afraid of
what they say to me so I try not to neglect my studies, but I don't dedicate myself so much since that is also
mental wear and tear, just like living in fear is also.
I remember once I studied hard for a bimonthly exam when I was a child, but I failed in one subject, which
was science, I was so scared on the way home that I remember I didn't even want to go home, no matter how
many laps I had to be home at any moment. when I got there and my mom She asked me about my grades, I
had to tell her the truth, despite feeling that my hands were shaking and I had palpitations, she punished me
in a not very nice way and that was constantly marked in my memory, that's why now I developed a little fear
of exams too and now I understand that no matter how much I study, if I'm afraid, I completely block myself
and I can even get the minimum grade.

One of the alternatives that my teachers have advised me over time is to go to a psychologist, sometimes this
type of trauma is so strong that it’s recommended to be analyzed by a specialist in behavior or human actions
so don't let it get you down everything can be solved with the right help.

On the other hand, I did go to a specialist, but unfortunately not for long, so I had to find my own alternatives,
one of them is the simplest, take a breath, calm down and try everything possible, giving myself
encouragement and strength, for that I can do everything if I have confidence in myself and I don’t let my
fears overcome me, as I said before, the music has helped me a lot, the melody, the lyrics and everything that
composes it makes me find a peace that no matter how do many breaths a day I will achieve, I use music
technically for everything, I prefer to do everything with music since this helps me to have a better
concentration.

Finally, from my life experience, I can say that any fear is surmountable, with a lot of effort and dedication,
perhaps my fear won’t completely disappear yet, but I know that every day I overcome myself and manage to
move forward with myself so don't give up!