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Bro just wanted to say thank you for the value you provide G. | know it's not that much but everyone starts from elt) et Rel RD om OTL g as ee Ornate Po i) a $300.00 oe Z_ 300 dollars coming tomorrow too. 600$ retain WEEE a Raa Roeder oo Raa Rae 01K ae ClBT te Rae aoc RO a ON Se dodg Onna is Taylor Bleistein 12:50 AM » Tyson, you are a G, thanks for this! You have helped gain over 90% open rates and over 10% reply rates, even had clients confess they never reply to cold emails but they replied to mine because it stood out so much more than the rest, | am currently using the copywriting comedian email template which has been great for me. Thanks again! Brom) (oes -40' 1 Lo) Ree VAAL GI'll have my first sales call on Wednesday because of you! | really appreciate your help! MIM Icien elem aaloyny YESTERDAY 5: Some MCR VaR Oa CCE TA Eee eC ona) Dec M ees g Conn eoe CE enue tos Pea ea na cach) COOMA UM Rech CRTC! sure I'm not missing out on any more ORRIN a Ostg Cee etec) on oaPart 2: The problem with Main Issues: - They're boring, robotic, and void of substance. _ Prospects can tell it took you literally O effort. ~ They sound ungenuine and clear you don't care about them or their product. - They usually offer a free email sequence (which is not a arias » Prospects may not even know what an "email sequence" CTs So we'll make outreaches that are... y Interesting, entertaining, or funny. ¥ Obvious you worked hard on it. ¥ Genuine and shows that you care. ¥ About them and what THEY want. Y Offering something beneficial to them. ¥% Coming from a place of authority instead of neediness. OUTREACH - PART 2 PAGE 4Method 1: The Drastic Disrupt Come up with a disrupting opening that will stop your prospect dead in their tracks. For example: “Don't shoot the messenger but, | have some bad news | feel obligated to bring to your attention. Cant Rta os ace Cua Rane saan nr sy Nae a TT aCe RVCUta eC ORO CSE a tn Cae y It's over the top and hijacks their attention. (Much more than a shitty compliment) v Give them a taste of how good you can actually write a copy. ¥ Can be playful and actually show your personality. ¥ Has the ability to make them laugh.Tee eae ere ee ROC Re LC Rava RCo Bees ueh cencacarc ual slcs “I'll will work for you for free until | can make you at least $5,000" Or: TU eR eRe ee nea has “You will meet a lot less resistance. WYou can easily get on calls with people. vPossibility of inbound leads If you post your low-risk offer on your page. VYou can easily get a client even if you have now prior experience. ViThe knowledge and experience from working with someone is usually more valuable than the money anyway. Especially at first.The Irresistible Offer in Action: Hey , I know you're probably busy building your SaaS empire right now, But | thought I'd run this by you because, I's a pretty ridiculous proposal | think you'll be interested in. | was looking at (Company) and had a few marketing ideas I'm confident could help you guys scale. So to show how confident | am, I wanted to offer you a 2-week trial period where | work with you to see if we can't add some extra revenue to your bottom line. If at the end of the two weeks it seems like a good fit, We could figure out some more ways | could bring value to what you're doing But, if not then I'll deliver you the project and I'll be out of your hair. :) In this 2-week trial period, I'd gather data from your automation, sales funnels, etc and make a report which will go over what is doing well and where may be able to improve. This report should give you a better idea of where to double down and where to quadruple down. If you're open to the idea, let me know and we can have a quick chat about it Kind regards, Hamza Amir BY Bie Do you want to see more examples of this? Join our discord server o 2>>>> (Link is in your email inbox) au elas PAGE 7i Method 3: The Copy Comedian Throw professionalism out the window. Come up with something completely out of left field that they genuinely have never seen Lolo e Seen a cs ee ee eee eT Rie kta COMIC RAS UR aCeenn mcr n eR Cina eins @ It makes you stand out. @ Shows you have a sense of humor. @ Will make them like you. @ Come off as more of a genuine human being. @ Highly personalized. Ream aan olaThe Copy Comedian in Action: ind Hey (Name) | received your recent email entitled {Their subject line} and this happened: The devil on my shoulder told me to save my time and leave you alone. Even though | noticed something in your email But the angel reminded me ofall the times | previously helped businesses increase sales from ‘email by over 15% with some small tweaks. So, I thought I'd share with you my “temperature-matching” strategy. Unlike sending every subscriber the exact same email lke the majority of businesses do. Itworks by taking advantage of the low-hanging fruit and quickly converting your warm leads, And then builds trust with your ice-cold leads and warms them up so they can be converted ithin a couple weeks. Itonly takes days to see increased sales and although it sounds stupidly simple, Itbrings in a few thousand dollars more per month in email revenue every time I've tried it. ‘Should | send it over to you? Tyson 4D COPY COMEDIAN PAGE 9Method 4: The bait and switch at Tea leek Nae) Ask your prospect if they offer X / ask them about their product. They will answer SM CCIE Nain Chee mn Ccc Rin TOT emu Ree a Cae) sla) lead magnet or something that pertains to their email list etc. From there you can slowly and smoothly move into the pitch. You: Hey, | had a quick question about your free dropshipping cheatsheet. Them: Hey! Thanks for reaching out! What's up? You; | noticed when | gave you my email | actually didn't receive any emails or newsletters in my inbox. Just curious. Are you running any email marketing campaigns? Them: No I'm not actually. | haven't been able to find anyone to write them and I'm too busy. SUM Te NER Nic ee R Csi eink) carci) sample package that | put together for your course? BUN Ce no Mo) asijhe Bait and) Switch is effective because: Y They almost always reply thinking you're an interested customer. ee ca Na eae Rta oR lt ace y 't creates dialogue and back and forth. Pcl Rela Reel oie aCe PARSER an Cir une Dene Pe etn ag Pore Meee) Cre ener eee tu ee enter Ce ee Sra ee ee eae ae we: Qe Pac Fe eee ee Lace Rae PN ols eo Gee Coe eae eee) ee it eerie Cee ues Fees eee eae Se dre Sean mas for Peet eras eee Terecc eas pec epeekirein Meta ered eet ra Sees Berea eee ree Eon) Pere a freee ec) Cones ce PAGE 11Pre EAE Seer ne Rae Eee CE tee a Cetra fora Pe aS) Puc Pree) ae) Ce Pee) Cao) Not normally but I'm up for a chat ents Mtg eee tec personaly tho and are still up for talks SN ter ear aun Pena ed TL) eR Roe TE] aL) Pee CO Et arts Cee ee eee cued ee ican tis %B8Ba ree setae a Tel ear ar as (Don't just say hey | noticed this "thing", you will come up as super Nee Mattel itp s Pe Ree Nae Mal Tt wala: B Pe eee Nae RW Tt waclar:B + Come up with a UM (Unique Mechanism), or tangible plan. Seam PeeNT Cris Cee RCA et teem CB MeeVee ORL) clans oka aaa aoe CCM RNa: Ces uem ea at Creat Show personality and charm, be articulate Give genuine value ( NO 3 EMAIL SEQUENCES BS) CMe Garten ee SetThe Loom Outreach in Action: THE OFFER EXAMPLE: Hey {Name} | was on your {landing page} | noticed that something was missing that could be costing you a small fortune. I've done some work With other similar brands in the {niche} and I've come up With a 3 part system called the "Flip Script, and Ship" method. Without getting too much into it, basically it works by structuring the page in a way that triggers the reader's dopamine into making them impulsively buy now and ask questions later. | know, it sounds kinda gimmicky, but If you're open toit, | could send you a quick message explaining how it works and you can try it out for yourself. Hope this helps. THE FOLLOW-UP EXAMPLE: Hey {Name} So | was going to send you an email With the steps init, but everyone knows videos are better than a wall of text. So | went ahead and recorded a quick 3 minute video tailored to you on how you can implement this system. On average it's been able to increase conversions on every sales page I've tried it on which resulted in a few thousand dollars more in sales every month. | would love to know if this would have the same effect on your business. Here it is: {Link} If you have any questions of course, feel free to send me a quick message. Talk soon, THE LOOM OUTREACH PAGE 14The Loom Outreach in Action: VIDEO SCRIPT EXAMPLE: Hey {Name} Congratulations on the blue check mark you just got on Instagram! Is about time they put some. respect on your name. But I didn’t send this email just to natter you, | actually just wanted to show you this system | came up With that will increase your conversion rate. This is something | realy wish that | knew earlier so I figured | you. ‘So how it works is that it starts With highly relatable copy that either challenges their current held beliefs or strongly relates to a problem they have (inferring that your product is the solution), ‘The second part that is going to make them buy now and ask questions later is coming up With a juicy and out ofthis world guarantee. This me THE FOLLOW-UP EXAMPLE: Hey {Name} ‘So | was going to send you an email With the steps init, but everyone knows vi than a wall of text ‘So | went ahead and recorded a quick 3 minute video tailored to you on how you can implement this system, On average i's been able to increase conversions on every sales page I've tried it on which resulted in a few thousand dollars more in sales every month, | would love to know if this would have the same effect on your business. Here it is: {Link} Ifyou have any questions of course, feel free to send me a quick message. Talk soon. 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