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Make the sentences below better by using the show, not tell strategy. Use your notes from you writing
journal to assist you with this homework activity.
1. There was an old man walking slowly.
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Make the sentences below better by using the show, not tell strategy. Use your notes from you writing
journal to assist you with this homework activity.
5. There was an old man walking slowly.
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