2021 IYF Oline English Speech Contest - High School

2021. 10. 30
NO Name Name Title Overseas Experience

1 이재현 LEE JAE HYUN 5 second challenge

2 차신영 CHA SHIN YOUNG The competitiveness of my heart

3 박진우 PARK JIN WOO The reason why we protect the Earth

4 김다희 KIM DA HEE Inside the Mask

5 황근영 HWANG GEUN YEONG Harmony with AI, Connection

6 변성현 BYUN SEONG HYEON From Jeju To USA

7 김시은 KIM SI EUN How I Enjoy Failure

8 김민성 KIM MIN SEONG Minister Lonely

9 안성은 AN SEONG EUN I am because you are

10 박경진 PARK KYOUNG JIN I would love to be your neighbor

11 박준우 PARK JUN WOO The third miner

 2021 IYF Oline English Speech Contest - High School
2021. 10. 30
NO Name Name Title Overseas Experience

12 김가은 KIM GA EUN It’s okay to have shortcomings

13 손주한 SON JU HAN pingpong game

14 노지운 NOH JI UN My thankful people

15 조민성 CHO MIN SEONG Are you ready?

16 이혜진 LEE HYE JIN Jigsaw Puzzle

17 주은성 JU EN SUNG Galapagos Islands

18 변지혜 BYUN JI HYE For the Earth and Us

19 배은호 BAE EUN HO English Speech Contest Phobia

20 임온유 LIM ON YU The Courage of Getting Help

21 오영민 OH YOUNG MIN Fall Forward

22 장은영 JANG EUN YOUNG It's okay for winter to come

 2021 IYF Oline English Speech Contest - High School
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NO Name Name Title Overseas Experience

23 김어진 KIM EO JIN The Importance of Mentors

24 전주은 JEON JU EUN Power of Faith

25 김현우 KIM HYUN WOO my first one peak challenge

26 방소희 BANG SO HUI All of us are Masterpiece in itself

27 육지성 YUK JI SEONG My special supporter

28 고은혜 GO EUN HYE The longest time in the world

29 오가현 OH GA HYEON Power of Yes

30 한주애 HAN JU AE The Interpreter of mind

31 배진모 BAE JIN MO Courage to step in first

32 안병찬 AHN BYEONG CHAN Problem becomes easy when exchanged

33 임경민 LIM KYUNG MIN Labelling Theory

 2021 IYF Oline English Speech Contest - High School
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NO Name Name Title Overseas Experience

34 전주경 JEON JU GEOUNG Playing a Hero

35 황우찬 HWANG WOO CHAN LIke the wright brothers did

36 김미현 KIM MI HYUN The earth we live in right now, is it healthy?

37 이윤지 LEE YOON JI father, another name of a politician

38 김소희 KIM SO HEE A Great Invisible Strength

39 안성욱 AHN SUNG WOOK Parallelist

40 전주은 JOEN JU EUN When we face the truth

41 정지훈 JEONG JI HUN A bite worth than

42 배종은 BAE JONG EUN Eureka! discovered

43 노수지 NOH SOO JI A Butterfly Effect of an Unread Email

44 박지빈 PARK JI BIN Heart that beats together

 2021 IYF Oline English Speech Contest Judging Criteria - High School
   2021.10.30.(Sat.)                       Judge : Jonathan Signature: JO
          Judging Criteria
NO.  Speaker
Manuscript content (50) Presentation skills (50) Total Memo
You’re never is really good. A few of the parts in
the beginning you stumble over your words. If
1 LEE JAE HYUN 43 44 87 you’re recording you just try to redo it if you
Good useGood
stumble. of English expressions. Very naturally
gestures.
written but at times your speech is a little
2 CHA SHIN YOUNG 43 42 83 bulleted. "I tried to connect the process of
preparation properly." Your tone change at the
end was a little awkward.
3 PARK JIN WOO 25 25 50 Reading
“What are you afraid of" the part you-afraid was
to melded together. You should make sure to
make the distinct annunciation differences. Add
4 KIM DA HEE 36 36 72 some gestures perhaps, your posture seems a
little uncomfortable.
You sound "Heart"
pretty good. Goodpronunciation.
natural speed of
"MakingYour
speech. a fake smile"
finger is not a natural
continuous use is English
a little
5 HWANG GEUN YEONG 42 45 expression.
87 awkward but when u talk about impulses that is
very good. ‘Tion". Pronunciation should be
cleaned up. Well written, natural. Well done.
Your expression of language seems very
6 BYUN SEONG HYEON 35 35 70 practiced and not too natural. Too exagerated.
Good use of a simple and often used object in
order to relate it to your life. I wish you were a
7 KIM SI EUN 41 38 79 little more energetic with your expression of
your speech. At the end you stuttered. You’re
When you are
recording, youreading
shouldn’tyou struggle
send to continue
that in.
your speech a bunch of times and it seems like
8 KIM MIN SEONG 35 35 70 your speech isn’t memorized perfectly. Because
that is the case there is a loss in delivery.
Well done. You should express your emotions a
9 AN SEONG EUN 40 42 82
bit more.
Your audio and camera are not very good. Good
10 PARK KYOUNG JIN 47 45 92 natural tone and expression. Good speed and
natural pauses.
You are speaking with the upper part of your
11 PARK JUN WOO 37 38 75 mouth and it sounds a bit tense. You should
loosen your mouth when speaking. Many
unnatural expressions.
 2021 IYF Oline English Speech Contest Judging Criteria - High School
   2021.10.30.(Sat.)                       Judge : Jonathan Signature: JO
          Judging Criteria
NO.  Speaker
Manuscript content (50) Presentation skills (50) Total “Screwed" is too strong of word. Look at some of
Memo
your WC in your script. "Soothed" was clear.
Well done expressing the script. I wish the
12 KIM GA EUN 42 42 84 positive parts of teh script you smiled a bit
more. At the end ur expression was a little
unnatural
The speechthough.
is a bit Good job overall.
unnatural in terms of how
13 SON JU HAN $40 38 78
you’re expressing it.

14 NOH JI UN 38 38 76 There is little to no expression as you’re

speaking.
The word before teh pausing always goes
downwards in a very unnatural way. Billeted
15 CHO MIN SEONG 41 38 79 tones. Otherwise the delivery was pretty good.
Try to showwork
“Spotlight" someon more
thatemotion. You looked
pronunciation. Gooda
littleinteresting
and angry sometimes.
script. And very good expression
16 LEE HYE JIN 48 46 94 of it. Hahaha Is it your friend above who got the
main role? YOru analogy of the puzzle piece is
If you mess
really good. up
Lifeyou
is ashould
puzzle.record
Wow. again,
NICE. don’t
send in those kind of tapes. Good job powering
17 JU EN SUNG 37 25 62 through. But you struggled too much. You
should try memorizing it a little better. Reading?
I believe you are reading it. And the script is
18 BYUN JI HYE 33 25 58 very long to really be able to get good
expression.
“English speech contest" pronunciation is not
very good. Good expression. Not "first grade"
19 BAE EUN HO 43 44 87 but "first year of middle school." Well written
script.
You are too intense. Everything you’re saying
20 LIM ON YU 39 41 80 sounds intense. You need to vary your speed of
speech.
Your delivery is a little stale. There’s not much
wrong with your presentation but it just seems a
21 OH YOUNG MIN 43 42 85
bit bland. As ifare
Expresssions you’re
goodjust
andgiving
I like the
thatspeech. Not
you said
feeling it.and not atopy. Wow, powerful ending.
Eczema
22 JANG EUN YOUNG 45 43 88 Good presentation. Maybe towards the end you
want to get less intesne and reduce volume a
little bit. Some English is unnatural. Check your
script again.
 2021 IYF Oline English Speech Contest Judging Criteria - High School
   2021.10.30.(Sat.)                       Judge : Jonathan Signature: JO
          Judging Criteria
NO.  Speaker
Manuscript content (50) Presentation skills (50) Total Memo

Not expelled but suspended. You expression is

23 KIM EO JIN 30 30 60 very flat.
It is not Jengis but you should make a clear ‘G’
sound. Not huk but HAWK. Your script is a bit
24 JEON JU EUN 36 35 71
simple. Good job trying to connect with an
analoy. You gestures are a bit strange.
25 KIM HYUN WOO 35 35 70 I wish there was some emotion. Your speed, and
tone and overall presentation is bland.
Very natural expression but some of the energy
is a little random. Your pauses were sometimes
26 BANG SO HUI 42 42 84 a little long. Good writing though. Somtimes i
could tell uofforgot
The usage some
gestures words
was because
unnatural. the
Your
pauses were
sentence endinga little awkward.a little too much. It
is elongated
27 YUK JI SEONG 35 38 73 seems the ending of ur sentences are not
connected and every pause is a little awkward .
There was noisemotion.
Your camera not veryItgood.
all sounded the same.
Your script seems
28 GO EUN HYE 35 25 60 like it would be good but u seem like you’re
reading your script.
You are trying to show emotion by increase and
29 OH GA HYEON 35 41 76 decrease of your volume but that isn’t
necessarily the best way to show emotion.

30 HAN JU AE 40 41 81 Your gestures don’t fit at all. They’re awkward.

31 BAE JIN MO 38 38 76 No expression of emotion.

Ur pronunciation on many words is too weak.
You are running out of breath as you speak. YOu
32 AHN BYEONG CHAN 40 38 78 need to find the right places to pause. This
means where you speak slow and where you
You didn’t
speak seem tobehave
fast should memorized your script
studied.
33 LIM KYUNG MIN 25 25 50 very well. So you are struggling. I’m not sure if
you’re reading it or not. I think you are because I
saw the paper in the camera.
 2021 IYF Oline English Speech Contest Judging Criteria - High School
   2021.10.30.(Sat.)                       Judge : Jonathan Signature: JO
          Judging Criteria
NO.  Speaker Good analogy. Very good presentation. Make
Manuscript content (50) Presentation skills (50) Total Memo
your gestures a little less awkward. I really like
your lesson where you are very honest with
34 JEON JU GEOUNG 47 46 93 yourself but give a lesson that you are still trying
to learn. You should work on making your
ending
Very a big
little strong though.
emotion. Where isYour
yourscript is good
energy? You
35 HWANG WOO CHAN 37 37 but it falls
74 sound goodflat
buttowards the end.
I wish you let go a bit more of
your inhibition.

36 KIM MI HYUN 25 25 50 Reading?

Very strong start. Good transitions. There are
not female politicians? Very weak phrasing.
37 LEE YOON JI 41 39 80 Good strong writnig. Show some emotion. Are
you happy about your father. NoT reall
understanding your ending.
38 KIM SO HEE 35 35 70 Your speech acting is a little unnatural. Too
Iintense the entire
really like time. "I punched him in the
your script.
face" You gotta be a little more varied with your
delivery though. Your tone is too similar the
39 AHN SUNG WOOK 45 45 90 entire time. Jackie Robinson part is too
randomly inserted into your speech. You need a
betterbilleted
Very transition.
speech. No emotion. You say roof
40 JOEN JU EUN 35 35 70 too much.

Little awkward expressiveness. EL expressions

41 JEONG JI HUN 35 33 68 are weak and misused.
“He was having a headache" These kind of
expressions are not natural english. I like the "no
body applied to it." You need to understand how
42 BAE JONG EUN 43 42 85
your tongue is moving because you’re using it
too much so it makes ur speech sound not as
Unnatural speech. Interesting idea and concept
clear as it could.
43 NOH SOO JI 41 38 79 for your sccript. Very unique. Anecdote about
unread emails is very good.

44 PARK JI BIN 35 35 70 Unnatural