Expository Plan (Mock Test) Trio Group: H
Question No. 1
Essay Title: ~~
Animals should not be kept in captivity.\What are your views?
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is is what some animals have to go through every day. Animals in
captivity ave been a topic of discussion and debate for many years, with many
having their own views and opinions on this topic. Many people claim that it is
inhumane, while others feel it is necessary to preserve their species and for
research purposes.(in my opinion, keeping animals in captivity is nothing but a
cruel and thoughtléss act that only results in adverse negative effects towards
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Point:
Keeping animals in captivity is inhumane,
Subpoints:
1. Animals in captivity go through many negative emotions
2. 70% of animals die in captivity, and less than 30% survive after being released
into the wild.
3. Zoos are unable to replicate the animal's natural habitats. 7
Conclusion
In conclusion, keeping animals in captivity has many negative effects such as
causing them to have many negative emotions, going on a hunger strike, lowering
their chances of survival, increasing the chance of them falling ill and lastly limiting
their chances of having social interactions. These are some of the many negative
effects of keeping animals in captivity. Thus, this is why keeping animals in
captivity is inhumane
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