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Expository Plan (Mock Test) Trio Group: H Question No. 1 Essay Title: ~~ Animals should not be kept in captivity.\What are your views? Introductiog (ff humen ban: ‘ad--- ef in a cage, forced to dance and do tficks for the entertainment of is is what some animals have to go through every day. Animals in captivity ave been a topic of discussion and debate for many years, with many having their own views and opinions on this topic. Many people claim that it is inhumane, while others feel it is necessary to preserve their species and for research purposes.(in my opinion, keeping animals in captivity is nothing but a cruel and thoughtléss act that only results in adverse negative effects towards these mn Point: Keeping animals in captivity is inhumane, Subpoints: 1. Animals in captivity go through many negative emotions 2. 70% of animals die in captivity, and less than 30% survive after being released into the wild. 3. Zoos are unable to replicate the animal's natural habitats. 7 Conclusion In conclusion, keeping animals in captivity has many negative effects such as causing them to have many negative emotions, going on a hunger strike, lowering their chances of survival, increasing the chance of them falling ill and lastly limiting their chances of having social interactions. These are some of the many negative effects of keeping animals in captivity. Thus, this is why keeping animals in captivity is inhumane Tess uncleer.

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