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If you have 20 million yuan, what will you choose to invest between exploring space

and humanitarian causes?Ernst Stuhlinger, Associate Director for Science, gives an


official opinion that by working for the space program he can make some contribution
to the relief and eventual solution of such grave problems as poverty and hunger on

Earth. Therefore, in the long run , ,it's more worthwhile to explore space than
humanitarian causes.
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