Spider-Man No Way Home is a movie about Spider-Man, played by Tom Holland, who

asks for help from Doctor Strange to make people forget his true identity. But the
magic spell goes wrong and brings villains from other Spider-Man movies and other
versions of Spider-Man into his world.

Now Spider-Man must team up with other versions of himself, played by Tobey
Maguire and Andrew Garfield, to stop the villains and fix the spell before it destroys
their worlds. The movie promises to be full of action and humor, while also exploring
the consequences of Spider-Man's actions.

I recommend this movie because I liked it a lot when I went to see it, it was very
interesting and there are many people who wanted the 3 spiderman(Peter Parker) of
different universes to come together and the movie is very good.

Content (3/5)- All content is relevant and the target reader is on the whole informed.

Organisation(3/5): Text is generally well organised using a variety of linking words

and split into paragraphs.

Communicative Achievement(3/5): Uses conventions of the task to communicate

straightforward ideas and hold the target reader’s attention.

Language (3/5): Simple grammatical forms and everyday vocabulary used.

Occasional errors which do not impede communication.

Total (12/20)

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I liked it a lot when I went to see it.It was very interesting

and there were many people who wanted the 3 spiderman(Peter Parker) from
different universes