TOK essay example C: Student work

Introduction
Para-1
Unpacking

Introduction
Para-2
Putting the
assumptions

Intro of
AOK
in context
to Title

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Thesis
statement
for
example/
Putting up
the claim for
example

Linking the
example with
the title/
explanation
of example and
how it answers
the title

Evaluation:
limitations of
the example
to the AOK

Implication of
the example:
impact on the
society/
community
Putting another
perspective,
another
point of view
as well as
thesis
statement for
the
next example
which gives
another
point of view/
counterclaim

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Linking the
example with
the title/
explanation
of example
and
how it answers
the title

Implications
of
arguments/
The
candidate is
explaining
how the
human
sciences
impacts the
society. This
could also
have some
overlaps
with
evaluation of
the example

Thesis statement

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Explanation
of the
example/
linking with
the title

Compare
and
contrast HS
and NS as
well as
evaluation
of the
example by
comparing
with the HS

Implication
of the
example/
how this
impacts
the society
Thesis
statement
for putting
the
counterclaim
example

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Explanation
of the
example

Evaluation of
the example

Evaluation of
the example

Implication
of the
example to
the society

Continued
implication

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Conclusion:
summarising
the entire
essay and
taken a
stand that
both the
AOKs have
their strength
and
weakness.

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