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TỔNG HỢP BÀI MẪU CHỦ ĐỀ TOURISM by NGOCBACH

1. (30/05/2015) Many people believe that international tourism is a bad


thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative
attitudes.
ANSWER: widely argued: if something has been
widely argued, it means that lots of
It is widely argued that global tourism
people have said the same thing about
has a negative impact on destination something
resorts and countries. While there is a to have a negative impact on: this
strong case for this view, solutions means that it is not good for you
must be applied to resolve some of the
serious issues which have arisen. destination: a place where tourists like
to visit on vacation

There are two primary reasons why a cause of serious problems: the
local residents often consider reason why something terrible happens
international tourism as a cause of
serious problems in their countries. to have an adverse impact on: to have
One reason is that it may have an a negative/bad effect on something
adverse impact on traditional customs
indigenous practices: indigenous
and indigenous practices, because
refers to the people who are native to a
tourists may be insensitive towards the local area; practices are the traditions
feelings of local residents. For and customs of a culture; the things
example, some western holidaymakers they do
visiting developing Southeast Asian
countries may be rowdy or wear insensitive: it means that you don’t
unsuitable clothes, which might have notice what you are doing and the
an undesirable influence on local effect that it is having on a person or a
young people who copy immodest or place
provocative behaviour and fashions.
Another reason is that tourists often rowdy: noisy, loud, rough
pollute or litter beauty spots and
unsuitable clothing: not suitable,
several famous beaches in Vietnam,
inappropriate, not the correct or

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such as Cua Lo and Sam Son, have acceptable type of thing
been spoiled by this lack of respect
for the local environment. to have an undesirable influence on:
to do something so that it influences
someone in a way that is not wanted by
Measures must be taken by somebody else
governments and international bodies
provocative behaviour and fashions:
to change negative attitudes. Firstly,
provocative means to cause annoyance,
the undoubted economic benefits of
anger, or another strong reaction on
international tourism for local purpose; fashion refers to the clothing
economies ought to be more widely that you wear
promoted through the official media.
International tourists spend money in to be spoiled by: to be ruined by
shops and restaurants and create jobs in
service industries and this aspect must lack of respect for: to have no respect
be publicised. At the same time, tourist for someone or something; to not pay
agencies should urge visitors to attention to agreed upon rules or
respect the local customs and culture customs
of their hosts. Secondly, bodies such
as the World Tourism Organisation widely promoted: promoted in a big
way; thoroughly or broadly; when you
must enforce strict regulations on the
promote something widely you let a lot
tourism industry, ensuring that local of people know about it
operators are responsible for clearing
litter and disposing of waste in ways urge visitors to respect: to try to get
that do not harm the environment, and someone to do something; you urge
issuing international Blue Flags to someone to do or not do something
indicate clean beaches.
to enforce strict regulations on: to
In conclusion, only by addressing the
make sure an punish people if they do
concerns of local people will negative something against the regulation
attitudes to international tourism be
changed. disposing of waste: to get rid of the
295 words waste or garbage, usually by taking it
to the dump or landfill

addressing the concerns of local

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people: to listen to what the people are
concerned about and then do something
about it
2. (03/12/2016) International travel has many advantages to both travellers
and the country that they visited. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Amended Essay:
It is true that the growth of the
international travel industry has host nation [noun]: a country to which
brought many benefits to both a visitor or immigrant has come.
travellers and the host nations which
receive them. While there are serious
negative consequences of this
development, I would argue that these
grossly [adverb]: extremely – used to
are outweighed by the advantages. describe something unpleasant or
untrue.

On the one hand, there are some


aspects of international travel – inflated [adjective]: higher than is
principally the tourist trade – which reasonable or acceptable.
raise cause for concern. In terms of the
tourists themselves, they often arrive at
an overseas destination only to find overcharge [verb]: make somebody
that the prices of everything are pay too much for something.
grossly inflated. They may be
overcharged for everything from a
unregulated [adjective]: not
taxi, a meal in a restaurant or buying a
controlled by laws or rules.
souvenir. In terms of the host country,
the problems of waste disposal,
pollution and unregulated construction concrete jungle [noun]: an area that is
of hotels and tourist attractions often unpleasant because it has large modern
result in permanent damage to the buildings and no trees or natural
environment. Many beach resorts in beauty.
Thailand and Malaysia, for example,

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have become ‘concrete jungles’ of
high-rise hotels and apartments to high-rise [adjective]: very tall, used to
accommodate mass tourism from describe a building.
Europe.

accommodate [verb]: change a policy


On the other hand, despite such grave or idea in order to deal with a new
issues, these are not insurmountable situation.
and must be considered against the
advantages of the growing international
travel industry. Firstly, there is ever- grave [adjective]: serious
greater competition among tour
operators to provide value for money
insurmountable [adjective]: that
holidays, so that holiday-makers can
cannot be dealt with successfully.
enjoy their experience of a foreign
country and culture to the full.
Secondly, the influx of foreign tourists
brings money to the host country
through the provision of jobs and to the full [expression]: fully, to the
greatest possible degree.
services for the developing hotel and
construction industries. Employees in
these sectors generally benefit from influx [noun]: the fact of a lot of
higher wages and improved living people, things or money arriving
standards. somewhere.

In conclusion, I believe that the


advantages of international travel for
both travellers and host countries are
greater than the drawbacks, serious
though these are.
277 words

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3. (24/12/2016) Today, more people are travelling than ever before. Why is
this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?

Amended Essay:
It is true that in many countries the
number of people travelling has
increased over recent years. There are
reasons which can be identified to
account for this trend and travellers
undoubtedly benefit from the chance to
travel more frequently and to visit even
the most far-flung destinations. far-flung [adjective]: distant

At least two important factors help to


explain why more and more people are
now able to enjoy domestic and
prosperity [noun]: the state of being
international travel. Firstly, growing
successful, especially in making money
prosperity and a rise in living
standards in many countries has
enabled people to enjoy things which living standards [noun]: the amount of
they could never have before. With money and level of comfort that a
greater disposable income, family person/people has/have
luxuries such as holidays have now
become affordable. Secondly,
competition among tour operators has disposable income [noun]: money that
reduced the cost of travelling. Only a a person is free to spend after paying
few decades ago, for example, budget taxes and bills
airlines did not exist, but now they are
used by millions of passengers each
affordable [adjective]: cheap enough
year. for people to be able to buy it or pay
for it

In my view, in the case of both

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domestic and international travel, there
are clear advantages for travellers. budget airline [noun]: an airline which
People now have a wide choice of offers cheaper tickets
places to go and things to see and do.
They are now able to experience other exotic [adjective]: exciting and unusual
parts of their own countries or to enjoy because it is connected with other
countries
the richness of unfamiliar and,
sometimes, exotic destinations.
Thailand, for instance, is immensely immensely [adverb]: very much,
popular with tourists from all over the extremely
world, including Vietnam. Visitors
enjoy not only the unique cuisine but
also the rich historical heritage of Thai cuisine [noun] a style of cooking
temples and traditions. Another
advantage for many people, now that
travel is less costly, is the chance to be
reunited with family members who costly [adjective]: costing a lot of
have moved abroad because of work, money
study or simply in search of a better
life. Family ties can be maintained and
strengthened thanks to the greater family ties [noun]: family links or
opportunities to travel. connections

In conclusion, there are clear reasons


why more people are travelling and
there are obvious advantages for
travellers.
299 words

4. (22/06/2019): Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by


tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to
attract more local people to visit these places?

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Essay:
It is true that tourists from many parts
of the world pay more visits to
museums and historical places than
local inhabitants. Resulting from a historical sites: an official location
number of reasons, this situation where pieces of political, military,
should be solved by attracting the cultural, or social history have been
locals in some practical ways. preserved due to their cultural heritage
value.

There are two main reasons why


museums and historical sites are local residents/ inhabitants/people:
preferred more by tourists than by local the inhabitants of a place are the
residents. One reason is that museums people who live there.
are too familiar to nearby inhabitants.
If museums do not change anything,
there will be nothing new for the locals
to discover. Like eating the same dish attractions: a place which draws
every single day, they feel bored with visitors by providing something of
visiting the same places. Furthermore, interest or pleasure.
entrance tickets at some historical sites
are expensive for the local inhabitants
to afford. For example, in Dien Bien, a to discover: to find information, a
province in northwestern Vietnam, it is place, or an object, especially for the
rather hard for the residents to make first time
ends meet, let alone to spend money
on visiting some famous historical
attractions there. spend money on sth/doing sth: to
use money to pay for things

The governments should take some


measures/steps to tackle this issue relic: an object from the past that has
effectively. Firstly, museums ought to been kept
be invested in more by the authorities
to refresh the exhibits. The fresher the to take measures/steps:

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museums are, the more local residents to take action; do things to accomplish
are interested in them. Secondly, a purpose.
historical relics need to be free for all
to tackle: to make a determined effort
the local people. Without worrying
to deal with a difficult problem or
about additional expenditure, those
situation
residents will pay more and more visits
to historical sites in order to broaden invest in: to put money, effort, time,
their knowledge about their home etc. into something to make a profit or
towns. get an advantage
exhibit: an object or collection of
objects on public display in an art
In conclusion, there are some evident
gallery or museum or at a trade fair.
reasons that bring about this trend.
However, something should be done to expenditure:
attract more visits of the locals by the an amount of money, time,
authorities. or effort that is spent

260 words to broaden knowledge: to increase


your knowledge

5. (24/07/2019): International travel is becoming cheaper and cheaper, and


more countries are now opening their doors to foreign visitors. Do you think
that the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Essay:
It is true that it is now less expensive to brochure: a small magazine or book
travel to other countries than it was in containing pictures and information
the past. New travel destinations about something or advertising
appear in tourist brochures to attract something
visitors from abroad. While there are
advantages, I believe that these are
outweighed by the disadvantages of to experience phenomenal growth: to

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these trends. experience an extremely successful or
special development, especially in a
surprising way
On the one hand, international travel
has experienced phenomenal growth,
and many people can now enjoy to have a thirst for something: to
exploring places which in the past only have a strong desire for something
the rich could visit. After all, many far-off: a long distance away
people on limited incomes have a thirst
for seeing far-off destinations, and this privilege: a special right or advantage
should not only be the privilege of that a person or a group of people has
wealthy people. For example, many to book: to reserve something, such as
Asian countries now welcome foreign a hotel room or a ticket
visitors who can book an affordable
package holiday to experience the a package holiday: a holiday that is
holiday of a lifetime. More and more organized by a company at a fixed
price, including the cost of a hotel,
people are able to go sightseeing along
travel etc.
the Great Wall of China, discover the
temples of Angkor Wat in Cambodia or the holiday of a lifetime: a special
simply to get away from it all on a holiday that you are unlikely to repeat
beach in Malaysia. So, now the many
can enjoy experiences that in past only
to go sightseeing: to look around the
a few could afford.
places that tourists like to visit

On the other hand, there are two to get away from it all: to have a
major disadvantages associated with holiday in a very quiet place where you
these developments. Firstly, the green can relax.
movement argues convincingly that
the green movement: all the
there are environmental costs of the
organisations concerned with the
growth in international travel. It is
protection of the environment
necessary to fight climate change, but
air travel pollutes the atmosphere, and to fight climate change: to try to
the construction of new airports and prevent changes in climate patterns,
tourist facilities such as hotels and such as rainfall, temperature and winds.

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roads inevitably results in habitat habitat destruction: the process that
destruction. Secondly, international occurs when a natural habitat, like a
travel destinations are increasingly forest or wetland, is changed so
crowded. At the height of the tourist dramatically by humans that plants and
season, even remote beaches now animals which live there.
swarm with tourists. The beauty of
such places is now destroyed in the
the height of the tourist season: time
interests of moneymaking.
of year when the greatest number of
In conclusion, I would argue that the people visit a place and when the prices
drawbacks of environmental are at their highest level
degradation and overcrowding to swarm with tourists: when people
outweigh the benefits of these trends. swarm somewhere, they move there in
a large group or in large numbers.

289 words moneymaking: producing or making a


large profit

environmental degradation: the


process or fact of the environment
becoming worse

6. (14/09/2019): Some people think that cultural traditions will be


destroyed if they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists.
Others, however, believe that is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss
both these views and give your own opinion.

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Essay:
It is true that many people argue that
cultural traditions will only survive if
they are commercially packaged for the
tourist market. While this may be the
case, I agree with the opposing view
that such packaging inevitably leads to
the death of those traditions.

On the one hand, globalisation is


resulting in socio-economic changes socio-economic changes: changes
which are destroying traditional ways relating to the society and economy of
of life. It is not always possible to a country
preserve cultural traditions in the face
in the face of: despite problems,
of these changes. The changes affect
traditional cultures in many ways. For difficulties
example, folk songs and other genres folk songs: songs in the traditional
of music such as American blues style of a country or community
reflect a way of life which is
disappearing, based on agricultural genres of music: particular types or
work in the fields. Without the styles of music
organisation of music concerts aimed at
tourists, this artistic musical heritage
will almost certainly be lost, and there literary and artistic heritage: the
will be nobody to perform the traditon of writing or painting that a
traditional music and dances associated country, city or town has had for many
with it. years, distinguishing it as an important
part of its character

On the other hand, I agree with those


who believe that the commercialisation meaningless: without any reason or
of traditional cultures aimed at tourists
purpose, and therefore not worth doing
will not save those cultures. Firstly,
culture becomes meaningless when it is
something which is presented to

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visitors simply to make money.
Tourists, for instance, may want to try
Chinese cuisine: A type of food that is
local cuisine in a restaurant which
follows a traditional recipe, but it will traditional in China – you can write
not be eaten in the authentic ‘Italian cuisine/Vietnamese cuisine’ in
surroundings of the home or served to the same way
accompany a traditional ceremony. to follow a recipe: to cook a meal
Secondly, many traditional cultures using instructions
retain their vitality despite
globalisation. Carnival in Brazil, for authentic: known to be real and
instance, is performed and watched genuine
mainly by local people, even though
vitality: energy and enthusiasm
television and the tourist industry
exploit it as a source of revenue.
revenue: the money that a government
In conclusion, I agree with the view receives from taxes or which a
that when a culture can only survive by company receives from its business
turning itself into a money-making
attraction, then that culture is already spectacle: a performance or event that
destroyed. All that remains is spectacle is impressive to look at
for tourists.

294 words

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